Thank you to everyone! If I know all you reviewers, the next lemon will probably be in Chapter Eighteen. Just to let you all know, the wedding is in the next chapter. They will get married in secret and it will be in the gardens! Her ring is the necklace Achilles gave her, not to be suspicious about a ring. No one knows they are getting married (not even Gabrielle) but when they get back home, Helena will cause more trouble and Achilles will be called off to the war in Chapter Nineteen. Not the Trojan war but the one in the very beginning of the movie. He will also not sleep with 2 girls, Briseis is coming with him.
Note: Can someone please tell me where the first war took place! Also, I am going to fix chapter 13 or 14, the one where Briseis was raped. As I thought about it, if Paris did rape Briseis, it would make the whole ending of the movie (and partly my story) be very awkward. Her rapist will be changed to Agamemnon because Achilles hates him anyways and it will give him more reason too. And the whole movie thing between Achilles/Briseis will be the same (Agamemnon taking her, she going back to Troy for 12 days for Hectors' funeral). I hope you all review!
Here is…
Chapter Sixteen
The people danced and the children played while soft music filled the night air. Achilles and Briseis had just finished eating in their quarters when they came above to join the nights' events. Achilles smiled as he saw the little girl from before run up to Briseis instantly. She turned to look at him and said, "Achilles, this is Reyna. She's six." Achilles nodded and kneeled to the girl's level and she looked stunned. "Hello Reyna, I am…" the little girl stopped when she said, "I know who you are. My father says you're the best warrior the world and the gods have ever known. He said yous was a good man." Reyna said as she backed away from Achilles and back to her parents.
Reyna's father looked at Achilles when she told him about the man in the corner with the pretty lady. The man had dusty hair, colored with brown with a few gray hairs. His mouth seemed to drop when his little girl spoke of him. He walked over, with his wife in tow. "Are you really Achilles? The greatest warrior?" The man spoke as he kneeled down on the ground and stared up at him. Achilles nodded and the man kissed his hand. "You saved my wife and I during that war, back 5 years or so. You saved my village from burning. I thank you sir." The man said as he looked to Briseis and nodded. "You have a good man." He said to her and went back to the other side of the ship. Briseis giggled and took a hold of Achilles' hand who seemed stunned by the situation in it's entirety. Briseis giggled again.
"You saved a village from being burned to the ground. That deserves a reward. Even if it was 5 years ago." she said as she gave Achilles a kiss in the corner of the ship, in the darker parts. She felt his tongue slip in and massage hers. He took her bottom lip in his mouth and sucked lightly which caused Briseis to moan. "How about we continue this in our quarters and in the bed." Achilles said as he let his hand ride up her toga skirt. Briseis pulled away abruptly, her eyes rimmed with tears. Achilles felt a breath catch in his throat. Her rape; he could have done that to her. "Oh god, baby, I'm sorry. I didn't know." Achilles said as he tried to explain himself. He took her face in his hands and kissed away her tears as they fell from her dark eyes.
"Just ask me before you do it." Briseis said as she took his hand and brought it to her thigh again. She met his eyes again and kissed his nose. "Erase those memories. Give me the satisfaction of knowing I'm safe with you and when you make love to me, you truly do love me. Please." Briseis said as she watched his expression. Achilles stared at her, his blue eyes searching hers. He leaned in and kissed her tenderly and took her hand. He led her back downstairs to their quarters. The bed was neatly made, the sheets looked soft and inviting. Briseis walked from behind Achilles and sat on the bed, looking innocently seductive.
"Make love to me, Achilles." She said as he seemed to pounce on her gently and kiss her with compassion as his hands searched her hair. This made her want to cry, not because her rapist did this, no, but because he loved her more than any war or any sort of sexual satisfaction she gave him. His small acts of love towards her showed her the true difference between a monster and the man that was Achilles. His soft caresses and small kisses on her face made her hot. Achilles' eyes met hers as he placed his hand under the thin sleeve of her dress.
Briseis nodded and sighed as he let the sleeve fall from her shoulder and he kissed the newly exposed skin which caused her to moan. Achilles smiled as he listened to Briseis as she whimpered from passion as he spread kisses over her chest. He pulled away and pulled off his breastplate to reveal his taut muscles that drove Briseis wild. His strong arms wrapped tightly around her, bringing her petite body under his. His kisses continued and he took the hem of her dress and slipped it over her head. She was under him, completely naked and vulnerable to him. She loved every second of it. Achilles' warm hands searched her skin, brushing at her intimates and one threading itself in her hair.
"I'll go as slow as you want." He said to her as she stopped his hand from going below. Her immaculate brown eyes looked away from his and slowly, she let go of his hand. Achilles smiled and placed his hand over her very sensitive area. Briseis gasped and began to whimper as Achilles rough finger slid inside her, pumping in and out. He smiled and his pace took on a new power as it went for more speed. Under him, Briseis moaned continuously until she felt herself come. She hadn't known what an orgasm felt like, until she first time she gave herself to Achilles. Even when he was gentle with her, he made her hot.
"Now, here's the good part." Achilles whispered into Briseis' ear as she panted under him, a slight sweat on her. She smiled and watched as he sat up and slipped off his toga skirt. Her breath caught in her throat. He was a truly beautiful man; it made her wonder what she had to offer him. The way he made her feel by a look, Achilles felt the same way, except more. She hadn't known perfection of the opposite sex and he had slept with a lot of beautiful women to know what perfection was. She, in his eyes, was perfection. The way she looked under the candlelight or the way her hair framed her face, she would always look this beautiful.
He leaned back down on top of her and whispered, "Only the gods make perfection look this lovely." Briseis gripped his shoulders and sighed happily at his compliment. His face brushed against her chest as he positioned himself between her legs. Achilles kissed her chin as he pushed himself inside her. Both Achilles and Briseis let out a loud gasp as they adjusted to each other. He looked at her face, it was glowing with happiness and passion. Achilles felt Briseis' long legs wrap around his waist and they were brought closer. He rocked his hips, expecting to do a lot of the work which was alright with him and it did surprise him to feel her rock back. He liked to be in control, the power made him feel good, to know he could satisfy her.
Briseis' pleasure made him feel like a god, he was immortal but a god could do anything he pleased, that included pleasuring a woman. It was bizarre though, when he was with a whore or a random woman, he didn't try to satisfy them, but with Briseis', he felt like he was obligated too and it made him happy to know he succeeded. Her nails scraped his back and he took one of her breasts in his hand and kneaded them with pressure and she let out another whimper. Achilles' felt Briseis clench around him as she screamed out in delight as he slipped himself inside of her.
She had screamed his name, every woman screamed his name during sex, but this meant more. This was not sex, but making love and it meant more when she said his name.
It meant a lot more.
Achilles rolled off her, he was still inside of her and she now laid on his chest. Her thick hair was slightly damp with sweat and the air smelt of their lovemaking as they basked in afterglow. The sheet had been kicked to the end of the bed and Achilles leaned forward, Briseis still clinging to him and took the sheet and put it over Briseis. When they laid back down, Achilles whispered, "Was it good?" He asked attentively as he scratched her bare back lightly with his nails.
"It was better than good."
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"Oh Aphrodite! They are so sweet!"
"And extremely graphic and loud!" Zeus screamed as he appeared in his toga, an angry face plastered on his face. He had been trying to sleep when he heard Briseis' moans. Athena looked at Zeus and sighed.
"I am the God of War and I couldn't resist that!" She said as she slapped her hand over her forehead and sank into the cloud. "And the best part is," Hera started,
"They're getting married!"
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Okay everyone, there is your lemon! It was sweet so Briseis' is starting to recover from her rape now. Yes, they are getting married and the sequel will be about when they have their first child, named Sapphire for the color of her eyes (like her daddy!).
Sequel Synopsis:
The sequel will also be about another warlord that has risen and wants to take over the world (like Agamemnon), Briseis, Achilles, Sapphire and their other children that they will have later on all live in Troy and Achilles is the leader of the Trojan Army. Well, in a peace treaty between Troy and the Warlord, Briseis, Helen, Sapphire and Bryla, the daughter of Paris and Helen, are kidnapped and brought back to Greece where the warlord tries to marry Briseis and get rid of Sapphire since she is not his child. Helen and Bryla are thrown with the warlord's brother, who is more compassionate and tries to send Helen, Bryla, Sapphire and Briseis back home to Achilles and Paris. Will he succeed? Well, you'll just have to read!
Here are my thank yous for chapter fifteen:
grand admiral chelli
Beechiki
grelca
Mrs.M
madskillzpro
lady caboos
StarAngel Caelum SunSoar
HentaiStar
babyg2988
Crystal
LoOkEn4CoFfEeGoD
amber-darcy
shawnsgoddess
Lisa Midnight Oceans: Thanks for the name correction!
Also, to whoever that didn't know the names of all three daughters, here they are in order of their birth and years apart.
Sapphire: Born one year after Briseis and Achilles marriage. She will have blonde hair and brown eyes.
Jade: Born about 2 years after Sapphire and has Brown hair with blue eyes. Born three years after the beginning of Briseis and Achilles' marriage.
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Ruby: Born 1 year after Jade and has honey hair (mixture of brown and blonde) with brown eyes with specks of blue in them. She will be born about 4 years after the marriage of Achilles and Briseis.
I am also thinking about having Gabrielle and Patroclus fall in love as well. Gabrielle is about 15 and in the movie, Patroclus is about 17 or 18 so the ages are okay.
Please review everyone, if you want that lemon!
Until we meet again,
:A N G E L:
Note: Can someone please tell me where the first war took place! Also, I am going to fix chapter 13 or 14, the one where Briseis was raped. As I thought about it, if Paris did rape Briseis, it would make the whole ending of the movie (and partly my story) be very awkward. Her rapist will be changed to Agamemnon because Achilles hates him anyways and it will give him more reason too. And the whole movie thing between Achilles/Briseis will be the same (Agamemnon taking her, she going back to Troy for 12 days for Hectors' funeral). I hope you all review!
Here is…
Chapter Sixteen
The people danced and the children played while soft music filled the night air. Achilles and Briseis had just finished eating in their quarters when they came above to join the nights' events. Achilles smiled as he saw the little girl from before run up to Briseis instantly. She turned to look at him and said, "Achilles, this is Reyna. She's six." Achilles nodded and kneeled to the girl's level and she looked stunned. "Hello Reyna, I am…" the little girl stopped when she said, "I know who you are. My father says you're the best warrior the world and the gods have ever known. He said yous was a good man." Reyna said as she backed away from Achilles and back to her parents.
Reyna's father looked at Achilles when she told him about the man in the corner with the pretty lady. The man had dusty hair, colored with brown with a few gray hairs. His mouth seemed to drop when his little girl spoke of him. He walked over, with his wife in tow. "Are you really Achilles? The greatest warrior?" The man spoke as he kneeled down on the ground and stared up at him. Achilles nodded and the man kissed his hand. "You saved my wife and I during that war, back 5 years or so. You saved my village from burning. I thank you sir." The man said as he looked to Briseis and nodded. "You have a good man." He said to her and went back to the other side of the ship. Briseis giggled and took a hold of Achilles' hand who seemed stunned by the situation in it's entirety. Briseis giggled again.
"You saved a village from being burned to the ground. That deserves a reward. Even if it was 5 years ago." she said as she gave Achilles a kiss in the corner of the ship, in the darker parts. She felt his tongue slip in and massage hers. He took her bottom lip in his mouth and sucked lightly which caused Briseis to moan. "How about we continue this in our quarters and in the bed." Achilles said as he let his hand ride up her toga skirt. Briseis pulled away abruptly, her eyes rimmed with tears. Achilles felt a breath catch in his throat. Her rape; he could have done that to her. "Oh god, baby, I'm sorry. I didn't know." Achilles said as he tried to explain himself. He took her face in his hands and kissed away her tears as they fell from her dark eyes.
"Just ask me before you do it." Briseis said as she took his hand and brought it to her thigh again. She met his eyes again and kissed his nose. "Erase those memories. Give me the satisfaction of knowing I'm safe with you and when you make love to me, you truly do love me. Please." Briseis said as she watched his expression. Achilles stared at her, his blue eyes searching hers. He leaned in and kissed her tenderly and took her hand. He led her back downstairs to their quarters. The bed was neatly made, the sheets looked soft and inviting. Briseis walked from behind Achilles and sat on the bed, looking innocently seductive.
"Make love to me, Achilles." She said as he seemed to pounce on her gently and kiss her with compassion as his hands searched her hair. This made her want to cry, not because her rapist did this, no, but because he loved her more than any war or any sort of sexual satisfaction she gave him. His small acts of love towards her showed her the true difference between a monster and the man that was Achilles. His soft caresses and small kisses on her face made her hot. Achilles' eyes met hers as he placed his hand under the thin sleeve of her dress.
Briseis nodded and sighed as he let the sleeve fall from her shoulder and he kissed the newly exposed skin which caused her to moan. Achilles smiled as he listened to Briseis as she whimpered from passion as he spread kisses over her chest. He pulled away and pulled off his breastplate to reveal his taut muscles that drove Briseis wild. His strong arms wrapped tightly around her, bringing her petite body under his. His kisses continued and he took the hem of her dress and slipped it over her head. She was under him, completely naked and vulnerable to him. She loved every second of it. Achilles' warm hands searched her skin, brushing at her intimates and one threading itself in her hair.
"I'll go as slow as you want." He said to her as she stopped his hand from going below. Her immaculate brown eyes looked away from his and slowly, she let go of his hand. Achilles smiled and placed his hand over her very sensitive area. Briseis gasped and began to whimper as Achilles rough finger slid inside her, pumping in and out. He smiled and his pace took on a new power as it went for more speed. Under him, Briseis moaned continuously until she felt herself come. She hadn't known what an orgasm felt like, until she first time she gave herself to Achilles. Even when he was gentle with her, he made her hot.
"Now, here's the good part." Achilles whispered into Briseis' ear as she panted under him, a slight sweat on her. She smiled and watched as he sat up and slipped off his toga skirt. Her breath caught in her throat. He was a truly beautiful man; it made her wonder what she had to offer him. The way he made her feel by a look, Achilles felt the same way, except more. She hadn't known perfection of the opposite sex and he had slept with a lot of beautiful women to know what perfection was. She, in his eyes, was perfection. The way she looked under the candlelight or the way her hair framed her face, she would always look this beautiful.
He leaned back down on top of her and whispered, "Only the gods make perfection look this lovely." Briseis gripped his shoulders and sighed happily at his compliment. His face brushed against her chest as he positioned himself between her legs. Achilles kissed her chin as he pushed himself inside her. Both Achilles and Briseis let out a loud gasp as they adjusted to each other. He looked at her face, it was glowing with happiness and passion. Achilles felt Briseis' long legs wrap around his waist and they were brought closer. He rocked his hips, expecting to do a lot of the work which was alright with him and it did surprise him to feel her rock back. He liked to be in control, the power made him feel good, to know he could satisfy her.
Briseis' pleasure made him feel like a god, he was immortal but a god could do anything he pleased, that included pleasuring a woman. It was bizarre though, when he was with a whore or a random woman, he didn't try to satisfy them, but with Briseis', he felt like he was obligated too and it made him happy to know he succeeded. Her nails scraped his back and he took one of her breasts in his hand and kneaded them with pressure and she let out another whimper. Achilles' felt Briseis clench around him as she screamed out in delight as he slipped himself inside of her.
She had screamed his name, every woman screamed his name during sex, but this meant more. This was not sex, but making love and it meant more when she said his name.
It meant a lot more.
Achilles rolled off her, he was still inside of her and she now laid on his chest. Her thick hair was slightly damp with sweat and the air smelt of their lovemaking as they basked in afterglow. The sheet had been kicked to the end of the bed and Achilles leaned forward, Briseis still clinging to him and took the sheet and put it over Briseis. When they laid back down, Achilles whispered, "Was it good?" He asked attentively as he scratched her bare back lightly with his nails.
"It was better than good."
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"Oh Aphrodite! They are so sweet!"
"And extremely graphic and loud!" Zeus screamed as he appeared in his toga, an angry face plastered on his face. He had been trying to sleep when he heard Briseis' moans. Athena looked at Zeus and sighed.
"I am the God of War and I couldn't resist that!" She said as she slapped her hand over her forehead and sank into the cloud. "And the best part is," Hera started,
"They're getting married!"
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Okay everyone, there is your lemon! It was sweet so Briseis' is starting to recover from her rape now. Yes, they are getting married and the sequel will be about when they have their first child, named Sapphire for the color of her eyes (like her daddy!).
Sequel Synopsis:
The sequel will also be about another warlord that has risen and wants to take over the world (like Agamemnon), Briseis, Achilles, Sapphire and their other children that they will have later on all live in Troy and Achilles is the leader of the Trojan Army. Well, in a peace treaty between Troy and the Warlord, Briseis, Helen, Sapphire and Bryla, the daughter of Paris and Helen, are kidnapped and brought back to Greece where the warlord tries to marry Briseis and get rid of Sapphire since she is not his child. Helen and Bryla are thrown with the warlord's brother, who is more compassionate and tries to send Helen, Bryla, Sapphire and Briseis back home to Achilles and Paris. Will he succeed? Well, you'll just have to read!
Here are my thank yous for chapter fifteen:
grand admiral chelli
Beechiki
grelca
Mrs.M
madskillzpro
lady caboos
StarAngel Caelum SunSoar
HentaiStar
babyg2988
Crystal
LoOkEn4CoFfEeGoD
amber-darcy
shawnsgoddess
Lisa Midnight Oceans: Thanks for the name correction!
Also, to whoever that didn't know the names of all three daughters, here they are in order of their birth and years apart.
Sapphire: Born one year after Briseis and Achilles marriage. She will have blonde hair and brown eyes.
Jade: Born about 2 years after Sapphire and has Brown hair with blue eyes. Born three years after the beginning of Briseis and Achilles' marriage.
-and-
Ruby: Born 1 year after Jade and has honey hair (mixture of brown and blonde) with brown eyes with specks of blue in them. She will be born about 4 years after the marriage of Achilles and Briseis.
I am also thinking about having Gabrielle and Patroclus fall in love as well. Gabrielle is about 15 and in the movie, Patroclus is about 17 or 18 so the ages are okay.
Please review everyone, if you want that lemon!
Until we meet again,
:A N G E L: