Hey, thanks everyone for reviews. They are still a bit low but it might change. But I do plead with you, if you do read this story, please review. In this chapter, Achilles and Briseis arrive in Thessaly and the first scene of the movie is shown. I'm trying to make my story long but with decent chapters and now that I think about it, this story should be about 35 chapters now. It should be done in another 15 days or so, than the sequel will be started the next day. I do hope you all like the sequel as well as this story. If you all want, I will also do an epilogue because the sequel takes place a year after Sapphire's birth. Thanks again and please, please, please, please (x3) review!
Here is…
Chapter Twenty Two
Achilles sat, like usual, and watched the sunrise. Briseis had gotten up early with him but now slept soundly in his lap, with a Cheshire grin of her face. She purred slightly as Achilles rubbed her hair and threaded his hands in the thick locks. He loved her hair; it was a deep brown that was still curly but not as out of control as before. After she said she was pregnant, everything seemed more lovely than before. There were some definite advantages and disadvantages. One good thing was her body filled out more, her stomach was definitely not fat and never would be but it seemed more womanly with a little bit of more meat, her cheeks became rosier and her breasts seem to mature. And every time she smiled, her eyes lit up and her face glowed.
But, the drawback was, she cried for weird things. During dinner the night before, they couldn't find a fork and she started to cry. The other men had brought their wives and they nodded to Achilles, they knew she was pregnant. And when they went to bed, Achilles' wrapped his arm around her form and Briseis became pissy with him and told him to leave her alone. He made a face and turned over but when he awoke in the morning, she was entwined with his limbs. He made a note to keep their intimacy at a normal pace, that included cuddling when they slept. He had a feeling that while she was pregnant, making love was out of the question. He was going to have to control his male urges and pleasure himself as the last extent.
But, Briseis seemed to be rather intimate now, so maybe making love wouldn't be a bad idea in her eyes. She moved her head slightly and it woke Achilles from his thoughts. He turned his head slightly and was surprised to see two brown eyes staring at him, they seemed tired but happy to see him. "Morning my handsome warrior," Briseis said as she sat up and stretched. Before he could respond, she gave him a kiss on the lips and straddled his lap. Achilles' hands went flying to her waist and brought her closer; he hadn't meant to do so but it was a reflex. She smiled and rubbed his face softly, slight stubble rubbed against her hands.
"Are you nervous about this little one?" Briseis said as she took his hand and pressed it to her stomach. Achilles smiled and lifted his hand to put it under her shirt and felt the skin. "Nope, because I know how perfect this child will be." He said as he kissed her neck and carried her back to the bedroom on the ship. Achilles laid her on the bed gently, in front of her was the mirror. Briseis took a strand of her hair and twirled it in her fingers, obviously ashamed of it. "I hope our child takes after you, it will be an ugly duckling if it looks like me." Briseis said sadly as she wiped the hair out of her eyes. Achilles looked back to her from the chest where he stored the weapons. She kneeled on the bed, pointing out her flaws to herself.
"I know how perfect that baby of ours we'll be," he said as he sat in front of her and massaged her face. "How perfect?" Briseis asked as she watched his stand and walk behind her. She felt the weight on the back of the bed and behind her. Achilles placed his face on the side of hers, and took her chin in his hands. "This perfect," he said as he stared at her in the mirror. Briseis smiled and looked to him, "Am I the ideal woman?" Achilles smiled to her and kissed her pouty lips. "You are the epitome of it." He said sternly as he forced her to look at him. "No matter what happens, you could be burned all over your body, and you will still be beautiful in my eyes. Don't let anyone tell you differently." Achilles said firmly as he kissed her cheek. "It all matters what is in here." He said as he touched her breast slightly, her heart.
She smiled again and dropped her head to his shoulder. "ACHILLES!" The men yelled from the top deck. Briseis lifted her head quickly and looked to him. He gave her an apologetic look and grabbed his sword and sphere. "Your fate awaits," Briseis said as she watched as he slipped on his helmet, he looked awfully dazzling. "I don't believe in fate, I believe in love. Love keeps you going." Achilles said as he stared at her through his helmet, he watched as she bit her lip. "Don't do that, you make me want to take you now!" He said, she giggled. "I will come home," Achilles said as he touched her belly and her face. "ACHILLES!"
He sighed angrily and stalked upstairs. The men all stood above in their gold war attire and gawked at Achilles, waiting for his command. The enemy arming stood at their camps, unaware of the ship with black sails. "Attack while oblivious, one thing I learned from my wife." The men laughed quietly as they understood what he had meant. The camp continued to eat and dance with the women when Achilles and his men watched from the hills. "On three,"
"1,"
"2,"
"3!"
The men ran from the hills and watched as the enemy fled in terror, only a few remained to fight. The ones that did, they were terrible, mostly because it was an unforeseen attack. But, only one man stood in the brush, he called for Achilles' to fight.
"Amazing how rumors spread. Heard that wife of yours is a real looker; when I kill you today, I may go take her for myself, let her have some real pleasure. Even if she thinks she got it from you." The man said as he tempted Achilles to kill him; his sword flew up as he chased after the man. He (Achilles) dove up and sent his sword into his collarbone and into an artery. But not before his enemy slashed his arm. The camp was empty and all the men, only two wounded with gashes, returned, all the men were dead. They let the women flee for they could do nothing. "That was easy," Achilles said arrogantly as he tended to his gash. The men nodded in agreement and they all walked back to the ship, Agamemnon's ships had just arrived.
That was the man he had to work for, the man who raped his wife. He scowled at Agamemnon when he walked back to his large ship with the black sails, "My, my, the great Achilles took out an entire camp with twenty men and a divine wife aboard." This caught Achilles' attention and he turned to Agamemnon angrily and said in a fuming voice, "Say that again and I'll kill you." Agamemnon gave him a dirty look and continued to walk the campsite. Achilles punched the ship and got weird looks from Patroclus who embraced Gabrielle. He sauntered up the stairs and onto the ship where the men patted his shoulder and he nodded to them. Briseis was still in their bedroom, she hadn't heard the racket above.
Achilles walked down the stairs leading to his bedroom. He opened the door to see Briseis combing her hair. She looked in the mirror and grinned happily when she saw he had indeed returned back to her. "Achilles," she said as she ran to him and wrapped her small arms around his large form. He winced slightly when her fingernails ran against his deep gash. Briseis pulled away from him and looked to his arm. "Oh," She said as she ran to the burrow and pulled out a needle and thread. "Sit," Briseis said as she took the thread and put it through the needle, "this might hurt,"
"I've been stitched up before." Achilles said dully as he felt the slight prick of the needle through his skin. He had known worst pain, emotional pain. It had only taken a few minutes, and Briseis bit the thread. She brushed it gently and he smiled slightly. "You're filthy," Briseis said as she touched the grime on his shoulders. Achilles smiled and tackled her to the bed. "YOu love my filth, never stopped you before." he said playfully as he kissed her fully on the lips and heard her laughter. "Oh, shut it! I'm going to draw you a bath." Briseis said as she separated herself from him and went into the bathroom (let's say they had plumbing back then). Achilles followed and watched as Briseis drew the water into the tub, it was steaming. She turned to look at him and smiled as he began to undress himself. His chest and stomach were covered his sweat which made his skin look like bronze while his chiseled arms shudders were covered in blood and dirt. He slipped of his toga skirt and Briseis trembled as she watched this godly man get into the tub in front of her and sink in. She continued to sit on the side while Briseis grabbed a washcloth.
She stroked it into his skin gently and watched as Achilles moaned in ecstasy as she ran it up and down his body, sore and beaten. He watched Briseis as she dipped the washcloth lower until it touched upon his thigh. She stroked it gently and watched as his face was plastered with elation. As she was nearing his manhood, she took the washcloth out of the water and said in a sweet voice, "You're clean,"…
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Here is…
Chapter Twenty Two
Achilles sat, like usual, and watched the sunrise. Briseis had gotten up early with him but now slept soundly in his lap, with a Cheshire grin of her face. She purred slightly as Achilles rubbed her hair and threaded his hands in the thick locks. He loved her hair; it was a deep brown that was still curly but not as out of control as before. After she said she was pregnant, everything seemed more lovely than before. There were some definite advantages and disadvantages. One good thing was her body filled out more, her stomach was definitely not fat and never would be but it seemed more womanly with a little bit of more meat, her cheeks became rosier and her breasts seem to mature. And every time she smiled, her eyes lit up and her face glowed.
But, the drawback was, she cried for weird things. During dinner the night before, they couldn't find a fork and she started to cry. The other men had brought their wives and they nodded to Achilles, they knew she was pregnant. And when they went to bed, Achilles' wrapped his arm around her form and Briseis became pissy with him and told him to leave her alone. He made a face and turned over but when he awoke in the morning, she was entwined with his limbs. He made a note to keep their intimacy at a normal pace, that included cuddling when they slept. He had a feeling that while she was pregnant, making love was out of the question. He was going to have to control his male urges and pleasure himself as the last extent.
But, Briseis seemed to be rather intimate now, so maybe making love wouldn't be a bad idea in her eyes. She moved her head slightly and it woke Achilles from his thoughts. He turned his head slightly and was surprised to see two brown eyes staring at him, they seemed tired but happy to see him. "Morning my handsome warrior," Briseis said as she sat up and stretched. Before he could respond, she gave him a kiss on the lips and straddled his lap. Achilles' hands went flying to her waist and brought her closer; he hadn't meant to do so but it was a reflex. She smiled and rubbed his face softly, slight stubble rubbed against her hands.
"Are you nervous about this little one?" Briseis said as she took his hand and pressed it to her stomach. Achilles smiled and lifted his hand to put it under her shirt and felt the skin. "Nope, because I know how perfect this child will be." He said as he kissed her neck and carried her back to the bedroom on the ship. Achilles laid her on the bed gently, in front of her was the mirror. Briseis took a strand of her hair and twirled it in her fingers, obviously ashamed of it. "I hope our child takes after you, it will be an ugly duckling if it looks like me." Briseis said sadly as she wiped the hair out of her eyes. Achilles looked back to her from the chest where he stored the weapons. She kneeled on the bed, pointing out her flaws to herself.
"I know how perfect that baby of ours we'll be," he said as he sat in front of her and massaged her face. "How perfect?" Briseis asked as she watched his stand and walk behind her. She felt the weight on the back of the bed and behind her. Achilles placed his face on the side of hers, and took her chin in his hands. "This perfect," he said as he stared at her in the mirror. Briseis smiled and looked to him, "Am I the ideal woman?" Achilles smiled to her and kissed her pouty lips. "You are the epitome of it." He said sternly as he forced her to look at him. "No matter what happens, you could be burned all over your body, and you will still be beautiful in my eyes. Don't let anyone tell you differently." Achilles said firmly as he kissed her cheek. "It all matters what is in here." He said as he touched her breast slightly, her heart.
She smiled again and dropped her head to his shoulder. "ACHILLES!" The men yelled from the top deck. Briseis lifted her head quickly and looked to him. He gave her an apologetic look and grabbed his sword and sphere. "Your fate awaits," Briseis said as she watched as he slipped on his helmet, he looked awfully dazzling. "I don't believe in fate, I believe in love. Love keeps you going." Achilles said as he stared at her through his helmet, he watched as she bit her lip. "Don't do that, you make me want to take you now!" He said, she giggled. "I will come home," Achilles said as he touched her belly and her face. "ACHILLES!"
He sighed angrily and stalked upstairs. The men all stood above in their gold war attire and gawked at Achilles, waiting for his command. The enemy arming stood at their camps, unaware of the ship with black sails. "Attack while oblivious, one thing I learned from my wife." The men laughed quietly as they understood what he had meant. The camp continued to eat and dance with the women when Achilles and his men watched from the hills. "On three,"
"1,"
"2,"
"3!"
The men ran from the hills and watched as the enemy fled in terror, only a few remained to fight. The ones that did, they were terrible, mostly because it was an unforeseen attack. But, only one man stood in the brush, he called for Achilles' to fight.
"Amazing how rumors spread. Heard that wife of yours is a real looker; when I kill you today, I may go take her for myself, let her have some real pleasure. Even if she thinks she got it from you." The man said as he tempted Achilles to kill him; his sword flew up as he chased after the man. He (Achilles) dove up and sent his sword into his collarbone and into an artery. But not before his enemy slashed his arm. The camp was empty and all the men, only two wounded with gashes, returned, all the men were dead. They let the women flee for they could do nothing. "That was easy," Achilles said arrogantly as he tended to his gash. The men nodded in agreement and they all walked back to the ship, Agamemnon's ships had just arrived.
That was the man he had to work for, the man who raped his wife. He scowled at Agamemnon when he walked back to his large ship with the black sails, "My, my, the great Achilles took out an entire camp with twenty men and a divine wife aboard." This caught Achilles' attention and he turned to Agamemnon angrily and said in a fuming voice, "Say that again and I'll kill you." Agamemnon gave him a dirty look and continued to walk the campsite. Achilles punched the ship and got weird looks from Patroclus who embraced Gabrielle. He sauntered up the stairs and onto the ship where the men patted his shoulder and he nodded to them. Briseis was still in their bedroom, she hadn't heard the racket above.
Achilles walked down the stairs leading to his bedroom. He opened the door to see Briseis combing her hair. She looked in the mirror and grinned happily when she saw he had indeed returned back to her. "Achilles," she said as she ran to him and wrapped her small arms around his large form. He winced slightly when her fingernails ran against his deep gash. Briseis pulled away from him and looked to his arm. "Oh," She said as she ran to the burrow and pulled out a needle and thread. "Sit," Briseis said as she took the thread and put it through the needle, "this might hurt,"
"I've been stitched up before." Achilles said dully as he felt the slight prick of the needle through his skin. He had known worst pain, emotional pain. It had only taken a few minutes, and Briseis bit the thread. She brushed it gently and he smiled slightly. "You're filthy," Briseis said as she touched the grime on his shoulders. Achilles smiled and tackled her to the bed. "YOu love my filth, never stopped you before." he said playfully as he kissed her fully on the lips and heard her laughter. "Oh, shut it! I'm going to draw you a bath." Briseis said as she separated herself from him and went into the bathroom (let's say they had plumbing back then). Achilles followed and watched as Briseis drew the water into the tub, it was steaming. She turned to look at him and smiled as he began to undress himself. His chest and stomach were covered his sweat which made his skin look like bronze while his chiseled arms shudders were covered in blood and dirt. He slipped of his toga skirt and Briseis trembled as she watched this godly man get into the tub in front of her and sink in. She continued to sit on the side while Briseis grabbed a washcloth.
She stroked it into his skin gently and watched as Achilles moaned in ecstasy as she ran it up and down his body, sore and beaten. He watched Briseis as she dipped the washcloth lower until it touched upon his thigh. She stroked it gently and watched as his face was plastered with elation. As she was nearing his manhood, she took the washcloth out of the water and said in a sweet voice, "You're clean,"…
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I'm a devil! So, was that almost sexual escapade good? Well, if you thought it was good, than tell me in your review! Thanks to these people who did just that!:
grelca
Fiona
mandena
anon
City Girl Rach
Mrs.M
babyg2988
dr3amlvr
Rachel Sparrow
jacks-bonnie-lass-savvy
amy
kiersten
blondie2
Lily
AVA
Thanks again everyone!
Until we meet again,
:angel