Oh my god! I don't update for a day and I have 400 reviews! You all get your lemon now for the reward. But every time I get 50 reviews, the longer this story becomes. But, I promise you it just won't be a lemon, it has part of the story in it. Thanks again for the great reviews! 20 for one chapter! In this chapter, Achilles returns home and tells Briseis of his decision of going to Troy. She blows up because she doesn't want him to go to war with she being pregnant. This is her answer of if she wants to go or not. Please review people! Unless I get at least ten reviews for tomorrow, I will not update. But, that won't be a problem!
One of the reviewers asked this about the last lemon, they said that they wondered why Achilles never let Briseis give him oral sex like he does to her. Achilles is extremely controlling when it comes to having sex with his wife. Briseis is becoming tougher but she still feels vulnerable in his eyes so she is a bit shy she will do something wrong. Plus, he likes to be the one who provides the pleasure. But, there might be a bit of a surprise in here!
So, here is…
Chapter Twenty Five
Achilles opened the door to his bedroom to see Briseis sitting on their bed, already dressed in her night clothes. He spent most of the day away from her, he was nervous about telling her concerning Troy. She was almost two months into her pregnancy and you could see a slight bulge in her stomach. She was looking through his notepad, he often drew her to past time during the dawning hours. She looked up and smiled when she saw him. "Well, my husband decides to join me?" Briseis said with a big smile on her face. Her eyes were bright and shining as she climbed to him. Achilles had sat on the bed and gave her a half smile. Her lips met his in a small kiss and she wrapped her arms around his neck, but felt nothing in return.
She pulled away and gave him a confused look, "Is everything okay?" Briseis asked as she tilted his chin to look at him. The first time in the entire time she knew him and married him, his blue eyes looked susceptible but became fiery as he pulled her arm away and stood up. "I'm fine," He said in a grumpy tone as he took off his shirt and ran a hand through his blonde hair. He noticed that Briseis looked sad when eh pushed her away. She shook her head and went back to the covers and slipped under them. Achilles stood in front of the water basin as he washed his face. He wet his hand and put it to his sweating neck, letting the drips of water cascade down his back. He took a deep breath while he dried his hands, he later returned to bed.
Briseis continued to look through his notepad as he laid his head on her stomach. He touched the swell lightly with his palm and kissed it through her nightgown. "I'm sorry about before. I'm under a bit of stress. I mean with you and the baby coming along with the workers…and other things." Achilles said as he looked up at her beautiful face who smiled and shook her head. "You are always stressed," Briseis said as she massaged his hair slightly with her fingertips; Achilles moaned as he basked in her affection. Briseis tilted her head slightly to look into his eyes. "What other things are you talking about, I won't be angry." She said as she continued to massage his scalp. Achilles opened his eyes and sat up from her lap. "Odysseus met with me while I worked with Patroclus on his sword fighting skills. He said, Menelaus and Agamemnon started a war between Sparta and Troy to get back Helen who was taken by Paris. They asked me to fight and I accepted," Achilles said sternly as he watched his wife's expression.
She slapped his straight across the face. 'She has a good left hook', Achilles thought as he massaged his cheek from his wife's blow. He had never seen her get so angry before in the entire time he was with her. She grunted loudly and sat on the chair in front of the dressing table. "What the hell is the matter with you Achilles? We have a baby on the way and you're going to war! What if I go into labor while you're gone? This isn't even your war! That woman is a wench for cheating on her husband. Agamemnon wants land while Menelaus wants his wife to murder her. It's his tradition Achilles. Don't go please." Briseis said as she touched her swollen belly. "I want this child to its know her father, to know what a great man he is." Briseis said as she brought his hand to her stomach, "I know you want to know this person in here too."
Achilles took his hand away and brought it to his forehead. "I will not back out Briseis. Yes, you are right, I want to know the child I made. I want this baby to be as wonderful of a person as its mother but to be as strong as I. I was born for this war, I am meant to bring Agamemnon down, that is my reason to go. If I don't get him first, he will get me. I may be immortal physically, I could survive any grueling physical task but if I lost you and my child, I will die. Nothing would keep me on this earth any longer. If I don't fight, he will hurt you which will be my death." Achilles said as he stared at his wife. "You will come with me, I accept no less Briseis. I'm sorry but this is for your own good." Achilles said as he came closer to her and kissed her cheek.
"Please don't do this Achilles. The gods know your days will be numbered if you go. You are vulnerable like any human being. Losing me will not be the death of you, this love will be." Briseis said as she let her tears slip from her eyes. Losing him was the most unbearable thought.
"The best thing you can ever experience is to love and be loved in return, if I do die, I will die a happy man." Achilles said as he pulled her into a bear hug and kissed her neck. "You and this child with be the first and last thought in my mind on that battlefield. I will not die, I will come home every single night, I may have a cut or a limb cut off, but I will come home." Achilles said as he kissed Briseis deeply on the lips, he sucked on her bottom lip slightly and laid her onto the bed. Briseis pulled away to look into his eyes that were filled with emotion, some was sadness, longing, desire, anger but most of all, love. "Dry my tears, my beloved. Give me something more to remember you by." Briseis said as she took off her nightgown under him.
If this was before, her first instinct would be to cover herself. She had no thoughts of that in her mind. Some tears still ran down her cheeks and Achilles kissed them away, his kisses were soft and sweet. He touched her arm slightly and ran his hand down the soft skin. Briseis spoke, she spoke the words that would save his life. "There will be no one else. You are the only man I will ever love. No man will ever compare to you. I will love you until my last breath on earth and I will love you until eternity ends and long after." Briseis said as she kissed his lips and ran her hands up his back. Achilles had taken off his toga a long time before and continued to kiss her.
His hand ran over her chest and kneaded her breast softly which caused Briseis to moan vociferously. Achilles felt her stomach pressed up against his slightly which made him support himself above her with his arms. He kissed her one last time before he entered her which set off a pack of moans from Briseis. Ever since her pregnancy, she became more physically sensitive, especially during the sex act. She clung to him as he thrusted in and out of her with long, powerful strokes. She could feel his hot breath on her neck, his face was placed right there. Before she came, Briseis bit into her lip and tried to muffle her cries of passion. Tears of happiness began to stream down her face, she never dreamed one man, her first, would give her so much happiness. Her joy could be seen when she was in the streets, him by her side. When Achilles first met her, she never smiled but now, Briseis always had a smile on her face.
She cried out his name in ecstasy and he collapsed on top of her. Briseis' breathing was uneven as she gasped slightly. Achilles head rested on her breast as he clung to her. "We have to leave in three days, Patroclus is taking Gabrielle with him." Achilles said as he turned over so she rested on his chest. "Sleep now my beautiful angel."
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Thetis cried slightly as she clung to Hermes who comforted her as did Hades to Persephone. Aphrodite watched the well happily and smiled to Thetis. "My dear Thetis, your son was saved from his ultimate fate." Thetis looked up from Hermes arms and became bewildered. "How was he saved, we gods did nothing." She said in a confused tone. "Your daughter-in-law spoke of the only love she ever known, and she gave herself to him completely by saying she would never love another. She was completely serious when she spoke those words. Achilles was cursed, he was cursed because he never knew love, but now, she has broken that curse."
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Well, there is the lemon and that is the reason why Achilles will not die in my story. I can't believe it's been 25 chapters! I am so proud of myself, this is the longest story I have ever written. Please review and the next chapter will be Achilles/Briseis/Patroclus and Gabrielle going to Troy and Briseis being kidnapped. Ah, the angst comes! Please review!
Thanks to:
ShOrTy
Raynacch SilverMoon
Liz
HentaiStar
kiliana
Brad's bum is HOT- I like your name! I did resolve the purple stuff in Briseis soup. It was just a spice but the reason she was throwing up and became ill was because she was pregnant. Also, Achilles reacted so quickly because he knew he was meant for this war.
Ace
jacks-bonnie-lass-savvy
Ava
grand admiral chelli
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dizzy izzy
Mrs.M
Sailor Sagittarius
penny
Lady Skywalker
kiersten
amber-darcy
amy
Dudette2004
I'm sorry for not positing yesterday! Please review!
Until we meet again,
:angel
One of the reviewers asked this about the last lemon, they said that they wondered why Achilles never let Briseis give him oral sex like he does to her. Achilles is extremely controlling when it comes to having sex with his wife. Briseis is becoming tougher but she still feels vulnerable in his eyes so she is a bit shy she will do something wrong. Plus, he likes to be the one who provides the pleasure. But, there might be a bit of a surprise in here!
So, here is…
Chapter Twenty Five
Achilles opened the door to his bedroom to see Briseis sitting on their bed, already dressed in her night clothes. He spent most of the day away from her, he was nervous about telling her concerning Troy. She was almost two months into her pregnancy and you could see a slight bulge in her stomach. She was looking through his notepad, he often drew her to past time during the dawning hours. She looked up and smiled when she saw him. "Well, my husband decides to join me?" Briseis said with a big smile on her face. Her eyes were bright and shining as she climbed to him. Achilles had sat on the bed and gave her a half smile. Her lips met his in a small kiss and she wrapped her arms around his neck, but felt nothing in return.
She pulled away and gave him a confused look, "Is everything okay?" Briseis asked as she tilted his chin to look at him. The first time in the entire time she knew him and married him, his blue eyes looked susceptible but became fiery as he pulled her arm away and stood up. "I'm fine," He said in a grumpy tone as he took off his shirt and ran a hand through his blonde hair. He noticed that Briseis looked sad when eh pushed her away. She shook her head and went back to the covers and slipped under them. Achilles stood in front of the water basin as he washed his face. He wet his hand and put it to his sweating neck, letting the drips of water cascade down his back. He took a deep breath while he dried his hands, he later returned to bed.
Briseis continued to look through his notepad as he laid his head on her stomach. He touched the swell lightly with his palm and kissed it through her nightgown. "I'm sorry about before. I'm under a bit of stress. I mean with you and the baby coming along with the workers…and other things." Achilles said as he looked up at her beautiful face who smiled and shook her head. "You are always stressed," Briseis said as she massaged his hair slightly with her fingertips; Achilles moaned as he basked in her affection. Briseis tilted her head slightly to look into his eyes. "What other things are you talking about, I won't be angry." She said as she continued to massage his scalp. Achilles opened his eyes and sat up from her lap. "Odysseus met with me while I worked with Patroclus on his sword fighting skills. He said, Menelaus and Agamemnon started a war between Sparta and Troy to get back Helen who was taken by Paris. They asked me to fight and I accepted," Achilles said sternly as he watched his wife's expression.
She slapped his straight across the face. 'She has a good left hook', Achilles thought as he massaged his cheek from his wife's blow. He had never seen her get so angry before in the entire time he was with her. She grunted loudly and sat on the chair in front of the dressing table. "What the hell is the matter with you Achilles? We have a baby on the way and you're going to war! What if I go into labor while you're gone? This isn't even your war! That woman is a wench for cheating on her husband. Agamemnon wants land while Menelaus wants his wife to murder her. It's his tradition Achilles. Don't go please." Briseis said as she touched her swollen belly. "I want this child to its know her father, to know what a great man he is." Briseis said as she brought his hand to her stomach, "I know you want to know this person in here too."
Achilles took his hand away and brought it to his forehead. "I will not back out Briseis. Yes, you are right, I want to know the child I made. I want this baby to be as wonderful of a person as its mother but to be as strong as I. I was born for this war, I am meant to bring Agamemnon down, that is my reason to go. If I don't get him first, he will get me. I may be immortal physically, I could survive any grueling physical task but if I lost you and my child, I will die. Nothing would keep me on this earth any longer. If I don't fight, he will hurt you which will be my death." Achilles said as he stared at his wife. "You will come with me, I accept no less Briseis. I'm sorry but this is for your own good." Achilles said as he came closer to her and kissed her cheek.
"Please don't do this Achilles. The gods know your days will be numbered if you go. You are vulnerable like any human being. Losing me will not be the death of you, this love will be." Briseis said as she let her tears slip from her eyes. Losing him was the most unbearable thought.
"The best thing you can ever experience is to love and be loved in return, if I do die, I will die a happy man." Achilles said as he pulled her into a bear hug and kissed her neck. "You and this child with be the first and last thought in my mind on that battlefield. I will not die, I will come home every single night, I may have a cut or a limb cut off, but I will come home." Achilles said as he kissed Briseis deeply on the lips, he sucked on her bottom lip slightly and laid her onto the bed. Briseis pulled away to look into his eyes that were filled with emotion, some was sadness, longing, desire, anger but most of all, love. "Dry my tears, my beloved. Give me something more to remember you by." Briseis said as she took off her nightgown under him.
If this was before, her first instinct would be to cover herself. She had no thoughts of that in her mind. Some tears still ran down her cheeks and Achilles kissed them away, his kisses were soft and sweet. He touched her arm slightly and ran his hand down the soft skin. Briseis spoke, she spoke the words that would save his life. "There will be no one else. You are the only man I will ever love. No man will ever compare to you. I will love you until my last breath on earth and I will love you until eternity ends and long after." Briseis said as she kissed his lips and ran her hands up his back. Achilles had taken off his toga a long time before and continued to kiss her.
His hand ran over her chest and kneaded her breast softly which caused Briseis to moan vociferously. Achilles felt her stomach pressed up against his slightly which made him support himself above her with his arms. He kissed her one last time before he entered her which set off a pack of moans from Briseis. Ever since her pregnancy, she became more physically sensitive, especially during the sex act. She clung to him as he thrusted in and out of her with long, powerful strokes. She could feel his hot breath on her neck, his face was placed right there. Before she came, Briseis bit into her lip and tried to muffle her cries of passion. Tears of happiness began to stream down her face, she never dreamed one man, her first, would give her so much happiness. Her joy could be seen when she was in the streets, him by her side. When Achilles first met her, she never smiled but now, Briseis always had a smile on her face.
She cried out his name in ecstasy and he collapsed on top of her. Briseis' breathing was uneven as she gasped slightly. Achilles head rested on her breast as he clung to her. "We have to leave in three days, Patroclus is taking Gabrielle with him." Achilles said as he turned over so she rested on his chest. "Sleep now my beautiful angel."
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Thetis cried slightly as she clung to Hermes who comforted her as did Hades to Persephone. Aphrodite watched the well happily and smiled to Thetis. "My dear Thetis, your son was saved from his ultimate fate." Thetis looked up from Hermes arms and became bewildered. "How was he saved, we gods did nothing." She said in a confused tone. "Your daughter-in-law spoke of the only love she ever known, and she gave herself to him completely by saying she would never love another. She was completely serious when she spoke those words. Achilles was cursed, he was cursed because he never knew love, but now, she has broken that curse."
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Well, there is the lemon and that is the reason why Achilles will not die in my story. I can't believe it's been 25 chapters! I am so proud of myself, this is the longest story I have ever written. Please review and the next chapter will be Achilles/Briseis/Patroclus and Gabrielle going to Troy and Briseis being kidnapped. Ah, the angst comes! Please review!
Thanks to:
ShOrTy
Raynacch SilverMoon
Liz
HentaiStar
kiliana
Brad's bum is HOT- I like your name! I did resolve the purple stuff in Briseis soup. It was just a spice but the reason she was throwing up and became ill was because she was pregnant. Also, Achilles reacted so quickly because he knew he was meant for this war.
Ace
jacks-bonnie-lass-savvy
Ava
grand admiral chelli
nap-003
dizzy izzy
Mrs.M
Sailor Sagittarius
penny
Lady Skywalker
kiersten
amber-darcy
amy
Dudette2004
I'm sorry for not positing yesterday! Please review!
Until we meet again,
:angel