Ok here's the second chap
But the third won't be up till I get 7 reviews. I'm not asking for much,
its not like I'm asking for a hundred or anything. So please review
I have previously stated that I hate this story but that's not true or I wouldn't be writing it. I was seriously stressed when I started it so it didn't meet any of the standards I wanted it to. But reading it know its not so bad but it is a Draco/Hermione but i'm going to try not to get them too out of character. But that's going to be hard so any help is appreciated but no flames cuz they are mean (. (Also I normally write humor but this story has a real life edge to it)
Also it's got spoilers for the 5th book in it so don't read if you don't want to know who dies and such.
Now after all the probably unnecessary babble on with chapter 2. *Acts like stage guy and holds hand up as she walks off stage*
Oh and, Andunie, your always welcome to beta this any time you like (but then you know that) *~*~*~*~*~*~* Chapter 2 Oh my god I just got shunted!
Suddenly the bus can to an abrupt stop.
"All those for Diagon ally here's your stop," Blared over the loud speakers
Hermione was jolted out of her painful memories ad stood up, grabbing her bags. She walked blindly down the aisle (makes me think of a wedding :P) and out the door.
She quickly assessed where she was and set out for the Leaky Cauldron. As she walked she wondered what she was going to do next summer. She wasn't going back to there again.
Most people when they say they hate someone they don't mean it. Like when Harry says how much he hates Malfoy. He had no idea how it was to hate someone with all their being and ever fiber of their body. Even this didn't come close to how Hermione felt towards her dad.
To put it mildly her summer was atrocious.
But she wasn't going to dwell on that. It was too fresh. The wounds needed time to heel a little before she could re-open them.
She arrived at the Leaky Cauldron and asked for a single room. The response was that there was only one single room but that it was adjoined to another (A/n ok think of a door you walk through and there's a door on the left and right and one ahead that's the bathroom. The rooms on the left and right are the bedrooms). She replied that it was fine and took the key. She walked into her room and unpacked. She went for a walk around Diagon. She had already finished her homework despite her problems, so she had a look at all the shops.
She went to the menagerie so as to get another pet because Crookshanks ran away and Hermione couldn't blame him. She could have found him during the summer but she figured he was somewhere better than she was and she actually resented him but she was happy for him too. She knew she'd see him again. She had a strange feeling he went to Sirius' old home.
But she still wanted an owl so she was looking through the shelves of animals when she saw the perfect bird. It was Caramel brown with a white star on its forehead. She rushed over and grabbed its cage before anyone else could. She took it to the counter and paid for it and as she was walking out of the shop with her new purchase she saw Harry and Ron walking towards her.
She called out to them and they looked over at her strangely as to say who the hell are you but then their faces lit up as they walked closer. Hermione looked relieved but then they walked right past her as if they hadn't even seen her.
She turned around and realized that just that had happened. They had seen their girlfriends, Lavender and Ginny and where now in the process of getting hugs and walking away talking excitedly.
*Oh my god, I just got shunted big time* she thought
She couldn't believe it. Her best friends of 7 years had just walked past her like she was dirt and treated her likewise.
"Well, well, well. Has the mudblood lost her friends?" drawled a cold voice
*Great. Perfect way to end this perfect day. * She thought sarcastically
"Shut up, Malfoy"
"Ooooh feisty"
She wheeled around on him. " My day cannot get any worse so you can say and do what you want it will have no effect whatsoever. So take your best shot"
Draco looked at her, his face trained to be emotionless but still Hermione could still read it. His eyes gave it away. He was shocked.
"Nothing more? Good I'll be going now" and she walked away with Butterscotch (What she named her owl) She went to Gringotts and got out so more of her money because Butterscotch had cost quite the pretty penny.
She went and bought her schoolbooks and some new robes. She also treated herself to some new dress robes one of red that brought out the highlights in her hair and a royal blue one. She also bought the most recent copy of Hogwarts; A History. It revised its self so when the book was updated her copy was also updated so it would always be new. (A/n I borrowed that idea from someone else and I don't remember who so im sorry I didn't ask if I could use your idea. Please don't hurt me * cringes *)
She then went to visit the Wealsey Twins at their joke shop. She walked in and saw her 'Friends' behind the counter talking to Fred and George. When she walked in, the Twins looked up and Fred said, "Welcome to Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes, How can I help you?"
*Even they don't remember me. I don't look that different. I mean all I did was get my ears' pierced a few more times and my nose as well as a cool hair cut (think Malcolm in the middle Reese's girlfriend). Oh and I dyed it but it doesn't look that different* she thought miserably
"I'd like two Skiving Snackboxes(can't remember the name of those getting- out-of-class boxes. You know the ones that make you throw up and get nose bleeds and such. Its all good I looked it up) and one Deflagration Deluxe
She bought a few other things like a diary that instead of encouraging homework and such, it told you to put it off and have some fun. She also got a few things that cheered her up (my imagination has gone bye, bye so I can think of anything. I'll let you do it).
While she did that George was looking at her strangely. As she got to the door with her things, He asked, "You look extremely familiar. Do we know you?"
She turned around and gave her best Well you only have yourself to blame look that she usually only uses one Harry and Ron when they get detention. What she didn't know was that her eyes had gone a bright green color suggesting that she was extremely and irreversibly pissed off. She looked directly at Harry and company
And said
"No we've never met"
Harry looked at her with wide eyes as he realized who she was but then Ginny distracted him and when he looked back she was gone.
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I think I forgot t o say at the beginning that sentences marked with * and in italics are thoughts
Ok hope you enjoyed that chap its rather long. Hope you don't expect too much from me from now on
Peace
*~*Angel Kisses*~*
A/n oh and the most inspirational people are the bike riders in the tour de France at the moment. Not the ones who are expected to win, the ones who make up the rest of the team. The amount of dedication and commitment they put in is, wow, amazing. Watch them sometime.
I have previously stated that I hate this story but that's not true or I wouldn't be writing it. I was seriously stressed when I started it so it didn't meet any of the standards I wanted it to. But reading it know its not so bad but it is a Draco/Hermione but i'm going to try not to get them too out of character. But that's going to be hard so any help is appreciated but no flames cuz they are mean (. (Also I normally write humor but this story has a real life edge to it)
Also it's got spoilers for the 5th book in it so don't read if you don't want to know who dies and such.
Now after all the probably unnecessary babble on with chapter 2. *Acts like stage guy and holds hand up as she walks off stage*
Oh and, Andunie, your always welcome to beta this any time you like (but then you know that) *~*~*~*~*~*~* Chapter 2 Oh my god I just got shunted!
Suddenly the bus can to an abrupt stop.
"All those for Diagon ally here's your stop," Blared over the loud speakers
Hermione was jolted out of her painful memories ad stood up, grabbing her bags. She walked blindly down the aisle (makes me think of a wedding :P) and out the door.
She quickly assessed where she was and set out for the Leaky Cauldron. As she walked she wondered what she was going to do next summer. She wasn't going back to there again.
Most people when they say they hate someone they don't mean it. Like when Harry says how much he hates Malfoy. He had no idea how it was to hate someone with all their being and ever fiber of their body. Even this didn't come close to how Hermione felt towards her dad.
To put it mildly her summer was atrocious.
But she wasn't going to dwell on that. It was too fresh. The wounds needed time to heel a little before she could re-open them.
She arrived at the Leaky Cauldron and asked for a single room. The response was that there was only one single room but that it was adjoined to another (A/n ok think of a door you walk through and there's a door on the left and right and one ahead that's the bathroom. The rooms on the left and right are the bedrooms). She replied that it was fine and took the key. She walked into her room and unpacked. She went for a walk around Diagon. She had already finished her homework despite her problems, so she had a look at all the shops.
She went to the menagerie so as to get another pet because Crookshanks ran away and Hermione couldn't blame him. She could have found him during the summer but she figured he was somewhere better than she was and she actually resented him but she was happy for him too. She knew she'd see him again. She had a strange feeling he went to Sirius' old home.
But she still wanted an owl so she was looking through the shelves of animals when she saw the perfect bird. It was Caramel brown with a white star on its forehead. She rushed over and grabbed its cage before anyone else could. She took it to the counter and paid for it and as she was walking out of the shop with her new purchase she saw Harry and Ron walking towards her.
She called out to them and they looked over at her strangely as to say who the hell are you but then their faces lit up as they walked closer. Hermione looked relieved but then they walked right past her as if they hadn't even seen her.
She turned around and realized that just that had happened. They had seen their girlfriends, Lavender and Ginny and where now in the process of getting hugs and walking away talking excitedly.
*Oh my god, I just got shunted big time* she thought
She couldn't believe it. Her best friends of 7 years had just walked past her like she was dirt and treated her likewise.
"Well, well, well. Has the mudblood lost her friends?" drawled a cold voice
*Great. Perfect way to end this perfect day. * She thought sarcastically
"Shut up, Malfoy"
"Ooooh feisty"
She wheeled around on him. " My day cannot get any worse so you can say and do what you want it will have no effect whatsoever. So take your best shot"
Draco looked at her, his face trained to be emotionless but still Hermione could still read it. His eyes gave it away. He was shocked.
"Nothing more? Good I'll be going now" and she walked away with Butterscotch (What she named her owl) She went to Gringotts and got out so more of her money because Butterscotch had cost quite the pretty penny.
She went and bought her schoolbooks and some new robes. She also treated herself to some new dress robes one of red that brought out the highlights in her hair and a royal blue one. She also bought the most recent copy of Hogwarts; A History. It revised its self so when the book was updated her copy was also updated so it would always be new. (A/n I borrowed that idea from someone else and I don't remember who so im sorry I didn't ask if I could use your idea. Please don't hurt me * cringes *)
She then went to visit the Wealsey Twins at their joke shop. She walked in and saw her 'Friends' behind the counter talking to Fred and George. When she walked in, the Twins looked up and Fred said, "Welcome to Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes, How can I help you?"
*Even they don't remember me. I don't look that different. I mean all I did was get my ears' pierced a few more times and my nose as well as a cool hair cut (think Malcolm in the middle Reese's girlfriend). Oh and I dyed it but it doesn't look that different* she thought miserably
"I'd like two Skiving Snackboxes(can't remember the name of those getting- out-of-class boxes. You know the ones that make you throw up and get nose bleeds and such. Its all good I looked it up) and one Deflagration Deluxe
She bought a few other things like a diary that instead of encouraging homework and such, it told you to put it off and have some fun. She also got a few things that cheered her up (my imagination has gone bye, bye so I can think of anything. I'll let you do it).
While she did that George was looking at her strangely. As she got to the door with her things, He asked, "You look extremely familiar. Do we know you?"
She turned around and gave her best Well you only have yourself to blame look that she usually only uses one Harry and Ron when they get detention. What she didn't know was that her eyes had gone a bright green color suggesting that she was extremely and irreversibly pissed off. She looked directly at Harry and company
And said
"No we've never met"
Harry looked at her with wide eyes as he realized who she was but then Ginny distracted him and when he looked back she was gone.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
I think I forgot t o say at the beginning that sentences marked with * and in italics are thoughts
Ok hope you enjoyed that chap its rather long. Hope you don't expect too much from me from now on
Peace
*~*Angel Kisses*~*
A/n oh and the most inspirational people are the bike riders in the tour de France at the moment. Not the ones who are expected to win, the ones who make up the rest of the team. The amount of dedication and commitment they put in is, wow, amazing. Watch them sometime.