Hitokiri of the Bloodless Moon: Well, I stayed up really late last night. I need a coffee and a shower. Anyway, I hope this chapter is better than the first.
Shaolin 10: I am so glad that you like this. I didn't know if it was good or not; Shaolin Kempo Karat huh? That sounds really cool! I do Tea Kwon Do myself and Bloody Akiko Nagi the Insane (my best pal) took a class or too at Enrichment Classes that we used to go to. I'm a purple belt, but it sounds as if you are a black belt or something like that. Thank you for writing that song fic, I love the song 'One Hot Mamma' b y trace Adkins.
Chapter 2: Yahiko and Tsabuma sitting in a tree K.I.S.S.I.N.G.!!
The afternoon was bright, not to mention hot. There weren't many people out and about on such a hot afternoon, well, not down by the river. But, one little boy sat by the river bank, rivulets of sweat gliding down his face and neck. His gi was almost completely covered, but the boy did not care at all. There was only one thing on his mind.
"Tsabuma," Yahiko said out loud to himself as he saw the young girl in his minds eye. It was true, he did like her, and he doubted that it was just puppy love, or so Kaoru told him, but she did say that she thought the whole thing was cute. Yahiko shook his head, if anything; he did not need advice from an ugly girl.
"Yahiko," a shy voice came to him from behind. Yahiko stood up, already knowing who it was."Hai, Tsabuma-chan?" Yahiko asked as he turned around to face the girl. His breath caught in his throat as he saw her. Tsabuma had on a dark green kimono with a off white obi, and dogwood blossoms embroidered on the sleeves and front."Um, why are you sitting out here?" she asked, she looked at the ground as she did so.
"I...was...um...thing about you," Yahiko said quickly."About me?" Tsabuma asked."Umm....yeah, about how I am glad that guy didn't grab ya or nothin'," Yahiko said to cover up his mistake."Oh, um, arigato, I have to go now," Tsabuma said with a bow and she ran up the road towards her home. Yahiko felt his cheeks getting hot, and it wasn't from the heat."Well, Yahiko-chan, I guess you have found a girlfriend," a smiling voice said from behind. Yahiko jumped and whirled around to face..."Soujiro! What the bloody hell are you doing here?" Yahiko asked."Oh, just checking up on a few things," Soujiro replied with a wave of his hand. Yahiko nodded and then a thought came to him."Umm, how good are you with girls?" Yahiko asked."Oi! I don't know, I have never really tried to get a girl before," Soujiro replied."Oh,""Cheer up," the young Tenken smiled at the boy."I'm sure you can come up with something," Soujiro said.
"Like what?" Yahiko asked.
"Well, Shishio-sama would get Yumi-sama some flowers or jewelry or a kimono if he made her mad enough to make her not talk to him," Soujiro remembered, still with that smile on his face."So, I need to get Tsabuma-chan something that she likes huh?" Yahiko asked no one in particular."It always worked for Shishio-sama," Soujiro pointed out."Great! Thanks a lot!" Yahiko yelled as he waved good by to try out the suggestion. Soujiro waved back then turned away to go someplace that he wasn't even sure he was going. It was then that he saw a dark shadow underneath a tree that was near by. The shadow took no notice of the young Tenken and so took off after Yahiko.Well, I wonder what he is doing? Soujiro asked himself before taking off after the shadow that happened to be a middle aged man with black hair.&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&&Hitokiri of the Bloodless Moon: Well, that was pretty short. But, I wanted to stop there anyway. I was at first going to have Kenshin give Yahiko the advice that Soujiro gave him in this chapter. But I changed it, besides; a reviewer was kinda disappointed that no one really writes Soujiro. That is why I put him in. I kinda like Soujiro anyway, so I didn't mind writing him into this even though I started out with another character rin mind.Now, I am just rambling and it probably does not make any sense. Oh well, Review please.