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Well, I'm back with chapter two of Road Trip Gone Wild! Yes, fear me...haha.
Anyways, before I start, I would like to thank my reviewers for the oh-so very encouraging tips and thoughts. Thanks to you!
High-school-girl said:
Very good. I think that your story has a lot of potential to develop into something very good. I can't wait till the next chapter! Good luck writing it!
Thank you for believing my story has potential! And you didn't have to wait very long for the next chapter, cause here it is! And look! You're even famous now cause your names in the chapter! Hehe, even though it's just in the review reply...hey! It's the thought that counts, right? Oo
Mystic-Pip said:
I like this story. It's so cute how Inu-yasha wants Kagome to stay. Aw...I'm such a romantic. I hope it will be more comedic but some inu/kagome moments in there too. They are my fave. I promise to check out your other stories and plz update soon!
Hey, I'm glad you like the story so far. I'll try and make it funnier, but if you want to put any of your idea's in, feel free to make suggestions in the reviews! I hope you enjoy my other story too! Thank you!
Fantasy-seal said:
Hey! Nice start to a story. Can you plz put like stars at the parts that ppl r thinking cuz I get a bit confused. Any way nice story!
Fantasy-seal
Thank you! And I will put stars, just for you! Whatever pleases the readers! Thanks again!
FieryDemonFox said:
This is good! I can't wait for more! I'll try and check out your other stories too! L8rz!
I'm glad you like the story! Really, I am. I wasn't sure how people would react to the fact that Miroku could go in Kagome's time in this one, since she and Inu-yasha are the only ones who really can! So thank you!
Road Trip Gone Wild! CHAPTER 2 dum dum dum...
Kagome and Miroku sat at the top of the well in the mini shrine outside her house. Miroku wasn't really sure why Kagome wanted to stay in the dark, damp shack, but he was sure it had something to do with Inu- yasha.
"Lady Kagome," Miroku said softly. "I doubt it is any good to wait for him, we both know how stubborn he is."
Kagome sighed. Perhaps he's right. We've been in here for fifteen minutes. "Okay," She said. "Let's go get some food, I'm starved."
Miroku noticed the disappointment in her voice. If he had the chance, he would clobber Inu-yasha for being such a fool. Even though Kagome would never admit it, Miroku saw in her eyes how she felt for Inu- yasha. The gleam when Inu-yasha would protect her, or even when he would just sit and talk to her. It was obvious, and Inu-yasha was a damn fool for never showing her his feelings. "Well then," He said in a fake, merry voice. "Let's go!"
He put his hand on her shoulder in a comforting manner, and led her to the door of the shrine.
"Hey!"
Miroku and Kagome jumped, startled by the sudden yell. They turned around to the well and looked at a satisfied Inu-yasha, sitting on the edge of the well, with a smirk on his face. He's so hot when he's cocky!
"You weren't going to go off with out me, were ya?" He stood and walked up the stairs to them.
Kagome smiled. She just knew Inu-yasha would come, even if it weren't for her. He wouldn't stay alone in his time. He'd get too bored without anyone to pick on.
"Of course not," Kagome said sarcastically. "What would a vacation be without you?"
Later that night, the trio sat in the kitchen. The house was empty and quiet, except for the three of them talking. Sota was staying the night at his friends house, and Kagome's mom was in the hospital with her grandpa. He had stomach poisoning, again...probably from those stupid herbs that are suppose to heal him from all illnesses. I-o-mi, what her grandfather didn't believe was beyond her.
"So," Inu-yasha half said, half burped. He put an empty soda can down. "What are you planning to do while we're here?"
Kagome finished her oden, and looked at the two. "I don't know...I know mom will be gone with grandpa for a while, and she left a credit card behind." Oh the shine in her eye! "I was going to take you clothes shopping."
Miroku looked down at his robe. It was blood stained, and in some spots, caked with grime. "What's wrong with our clothes?"
Kagome coughed up the green leaf tea she was drinking. "Y-you're joking, right?"
Inu-yasha looked offended. "No, what's wrong with what we wear?"
Kagome laughed. They were serious! "Nothing, in your time. But here, your going to need to dress more up-to-date so you won't stand out so much."
Miroku and Inu-yasha looked at each other. They had no idea whatsoever of what she was saying, but they nodded and agreed, knowing better to not argue with her when her mind was made up.
"All right then." Miroku answered.
"Feh, whatever." Inu-yasha snorted.
Kagome smiled. Yes! Big time make over!
"Taxi!" Kagome yelled. The cars whirred by them as they stood outside the Higurashi Shrine. She stood out on the curb, trying to wave a yellow car down.
"What is she doing?" Miroku asked. He guarded his eyes from the noon sun.
They had a restful sleep the night before. Especially Miroku. Being knocked out can do that to a body. Kagome's mother came home to make sure Kagome had everything she needed. Since Miroku had never been in Kagome's time before, she introduced him to her mom.
FLASHBACK!
"Hey! Mom! Back so soon? Is grandpa alright?" Kagome asked as her mom walked in the door.
"Oh, he's fine. He'll have to stay in the hospital for a few days, so I'm going to stay with him." Ms. Higurashi hugged Kagome. "I just wanted to make sure you had everything you needed. Enough food?"
"We're okay, don't worry about us," Kagome told her.
Just then, Miroku walked in. "Oh, sorry to interrupt!"
"Hey, Miroku, this is my mom." Kagome smiled and pulled Miroku over to her mother.
"Hello, Miroku," Her mother said. "I've heard so much about you!"
"Well, well, well," Miroku said. "Now I know where Kagome gets her great looks from..."
GROAP GROAP
SMACK!
"Dude! I can't believe you would do that to my mom!"
And that was the last thing he heard...except for the pretty little birdies singing him to nite-nite land...
And Kagome wasn't so shocked about Miroku groaping her mother, but she could not BELIEVE the whalloup her mom could pack!
END OF FLASHBACK!
"I guess she wants to stop one of those metal chariots." Inu-yasha answered.
Kagome screamed as yet another taxi passed her.
"Perhaps you can help?" Miroku suggested as he rubbed the red lump on his cheek. Ouch!
Inu-yasha smiled. Oh yeah! He ran out into the middle of the street and waited for a yellow "metal chariot". When he saw one come around the corner, he jumped up on the hood and slammed his hand into the windshield. THAT got the drivers attention.
The three got into the car and got situated.
"Where to?" The suddenly concerned cabby asked.
"To the MALL!" Kagome squealed.
End of Chapter 2! Hope you enjoyed it!
Well, I'm back with chapter two of Road Trip Gone Wild! Yes, fear me...haha.
Anyways, before I start, I would like to thank my reviewers for the oh-so very encouraging tips and thoughts. Thanks to you!
High-school-girl said:
Very good. I think that your story has a lot of potential to develop into something very good. I can't wait till the next chapter! Good luck writing it!
Thank you for believing my story has potential! And you didn't have to wait very long for the next chapter, cause here it is! And look! You're even famous now cause your names in the chapter! Hehe, even though it's just in the review reply...hey! It's the thought that counts, right? Oo
Mystic-Pip said:
I like this story. It's so cute how Inu-yasha wants Kagome to stay. Aw...I'm such a romantic. I hope it will be more comedic but some inu/kagome moments in there too. They are my fave. I promise to check out your other stories and plz update soon!
Hey, I'm glad you like the story so far. I'll try and make it funnier, but if you want to put any of your idea's in, feel free to make suggestions in the reviews! I hope you enjoy my other story too! Thank you!
Fantasy-seal said:
Hey! Nice start to a story. Can you plz put like stars at the parts that ppl r thinking cuz I get a bit confused. Any way nice story!
Fantasy-seal
Thank you! And I will put stars, just for you! Whatever pleases the readers! Thanks again!
FieryDemonFox said:
This is good! I can't wait for more! I'll try and check out your other stories too! L8rz!
I'm glad you like the story! Really, I am. I wasn't sure how people would react to the fact that Miroku could go in Kagome's time in this one, since she and Inu-yasha are the only ones who really can! So thank you!
Road Trip Gone Wild! CHAPTER 2 dum dum dum...
Kagome and Miroku sat at the top of the well in the mini shrine outside her house. Miroku wasn't really sure why Kagome wanted to stay in the dark, damp shack, but he was sure it had something to do with Inu- yasha.
"Lady Kagome," Miroku said softly. "I doubt it is any good to wait for him, we both know how stubborn he is."
Kagome sighed. Perhaps he's right. We've been in here for fifteen minutes. "Okay," She said. "Let's go get some food, I'm starved."
Miroku noticed the disappointment in her voice. If he had the chance, he would clobber Inu-yasha for being such a fool. Even though Kagome would never admit it, Miroku saw in her eyes how she felt for Inu- yasha. The gleam when Inu-yasha would protect her, or even when he would just sit and talk to her. It was obvious, and Inu-yasha was a damn fool for never showing her his feelings. "Well then," He said in a fake, merry voice. "Let's go!"
He put his hand on her shoulder in a comforting manner, and led her to the door of the shrine.
"Hey!"
Miroku and Kagome jumped, startled by the sudden yell. They turned around to the well and looked at a satisfied Inu-yasha, sitting on the edge of the well, with a smirk on his face. He's so hot when he's cocky!
"You weren't going to go off with out me, were ya?" He stood and walked up the stairs to them.
Kagome smiled. She just knew Inu-yasha would come, even if it weren't for her. He wouldn't stay alone in his time. He'd get too bored without anyone to pick on.
"Of course not," Kagome said sarcastically. "What would a vacation be without you?"
Later that night, the trio sat in the kitchen. The house was empty and quiet, except for the three of them talking. Sota was staying the night at his friends house, and Kagome's mom was in the hospital with her grandpa. He had stomach poisoning, again...probably from those stupid herbs that are suppose to heal him from all illnesses. I-o-mi, what her grandfather didn't believe was beyond her.
"So," Inu-yasha half said, half burped. He put an empty soda can down. "What are you planning to do while we're here?"
Kagome finished her oden, and looked at the two. "I don't know...I know mom will be gone with grandpa for a while, and she left a credit card behind." Oh the shine in her eye! "I was going to take you clothes shopping."
Miroku looked down at his robe. It was blood stained, and in some spots, caked with grime. "What's wrong with our clothes?"
Kagome coughed up the green leaf tea she was drinking. "Y-you're joking, right?"
Inu-yasha looked offended. "No, what's wrong with what we wear?"
Kagome laughed. They were serious! "Nothing, in your time. But here, your going to need to dress more up-to-date so you won't stand out so much."
Miroku and Inu-yasha looked at each other. They had no idea whatsoever of what she was saying, but they nodded and agreed, knowing better to not argue with her when her mind was made up.
"All right then." Miroku answered.
"Feh, whatever." Inu-yasha snorted.
Kagome smiled. Yes! Big time make over!
"Taxi!" Kagome yelled. The cars whirred by them as they stood outside the Higurashi Shrine. She stood out on the curb, trying to wave a yellow car down.
"What is she doing?" Miroku asked. He guarded his eyes from the noon sun.
They had a restful sleep the night before. Especially Miroku. Being knocked out can do that to a body. Kagome's mother came home to make sure Kagome had everything she needed. Since Miroku had never been in Kagome's time before, she introduced him to her mom.
FLASHBACK!
"Hey! Mom! Back so soon? Is grandpa alright?" Kagome asked as her mom walked in the door.
"Oh, he's fine. He'll have to stay in the hospital for a few days, so I'm going to stay with him." Ms. Higurashi hugged Kagome. "I just wanted to make sure you had everything you needed. Enough food?"
"We're okay, don't worry about us," Kagome told her.
Just then, Miroku walked in. "Oh, sorry to interrupt!"
"Hey, Miroku, this is my mom." Kagome smiled and pulled Miroku over to her mother.
"Hello, Miroku," Her mother said. "I've heard so much about you!"
"Well, well, well," Miroku said. "Now I know where Kagome gets her great looks from..."
GROAP GROAP
SMACK!
"Dude! I can't believe you would do that to my mom!"
And that was the last thing he heard...except for the pretty little birdies singing him to nite-nite land...
And Kagome wasn't so shocked about Miroku groaping her mother, but she could not BELIEVE the whalloup her mom could pack!
END OF FLASHBACK!
"I guess she wants to stop one of those metal chariots." Inu-yasha answered.
Kagome screamed as yet another taxi passed her.
"Perhaps you can help?" Miroku suggested as he rubbed the red lump on his cheek. Ouch!
Inu-yasha smiled. Oh yeah! He ran out into the middle of the street and waited for a yellow "metal chariot". When he saw one come around the corner, he jumped up on the hood and slammed his hand into the windshield. THAT got the drivers attention.
The three got into the car and got situated.
"Where to?" The suddenly concerned cabby asked.
"To the MALL!" Kagome squealed.
End of Chapter 2! Hope you enjoyed it!