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Sakura has Syaoran's child, without him knowing because he went back to China. While he's there Eriol attempts to win over Sakura, and Sakura worries desperately about how to tell Syaoran about the child.
Oh and, don't tell me that the characters are OC or anything. Because they are NOT out of characters for MY story! It bugs me when people tell me that. ^^' So I hope you all like the re-write of this. SO much better, if I do say so myself.
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Chapter One
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It was another beautiful summer morning. The birds were chirping, the kids playing outside, and Sakura was sound asleep in her bed - as usual. She stirred a bit and opened her eyes. The rays of the morning sun illuminated the curtains, and she turned over to look at her clock.
"HOE!" The loud scream was heard down the block. Sakura stared blankly at the clock, once over the shock she began to speak, "How in the world could I have slept in until two-o-clock! That has to be a record."
She blinked a couple of times and finally pulled the covers back and lifted herself carefully out of the bed. "Luckily it's a Saturday," then the realization sunk in. It wasn't just any Saturday. It was THE Saturday. The day of Syaoran's party, the day that he was going to leave her. She sat back down on the bed.
"Well, if he's going away, I'll make this a day he'll never forget," She paused, rubbing her hand across the print on her bed spread thoughtfully, "so that he can never forget me." With a sigh she got up and headed to her bathroom and brushed her teeth.
"I haven't got a present for him yet!" She said out loud, toothbrush in mouth and toothpaste spitting onto her mirror. Hurriedly she finished up getting ready and jumped into her car, speeding off to the nearest drug store.
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"What to get . . . what to get . . ." She mumbled to herself, walking up and down the isles, nervously fiddling with her fingers. She was going to make sure she got the perfect present; after all, he was perfect. (Wow, that was CORNY!) She continued walking up and down the isles until she saw a display of picture frames. She picked up a fluffy pink one and giggled to herself. "That is totally not a Syaoran thing."
She moved on to another frame. Emerald and a light pink swirled together on the frame, and it has a topaz outline. She was drawn to the colors and had bought the present before she had even realized what was happening. Once outside the store she realized that she had nothing to put into the frame.
She bought a hotdog while thinking over the problem and her cell phone rang. The looked down at the phone and the name Tomoyo flashed across the screen.
"Hi Tomoyo!" She said cheerfully into the phone, spitting pieces of hotdog all over the table she was at.
"Hey Sakura, can you come over? I just found an awesome outfit for you to wear tonight."
Sakura giggled, that was defiantly a Tomoyo thing that she would never understand.
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As she pulled up to the mansion Sakura saw Tomoyo already standing at the door.
"Where have you been? There's SO much to do before you have to go! Come in," Tomoyo pulled Sakura through the entry way, across the living room, and up the stairs into her room where she promptly sat Sakura on the bed and ran over to her closet pulling out at outfit.
"Um, Tomoyo . . ." Sakura gawked at the outfit. She was NOT going to wear that. A low cut white shirt that had only one sleeve that was about two inches wide, and a jean miniskirt.
"But Sakura!" Tomoyo whined, dragging out Sakura's name looking totally pathetic with a puppy dogface, "I went through all this trouble, I thought you would like it! I thought . . ." She sighed, acting as if this was the most depressing this ever, "I thought you liked my clothes I pick for you!" With this she broke into a heard of fake sobbing.
"Okay! I'm so sorry Tomoyo I'll wear it! I promise," Sakura said, completely surprised it had meant that much to Tomoyo. Immediately Tomoyo jumped up smiling brightly and shoved Sakura into the bathroom with the clothes.
Ten minutes went by and Sakura was still not out of the bathroom.
"Sakura! Are you alive?" Tomoyo said jokingly, "Get out here."
Slowly the door crept open and a very shy Sakura stepped out. Tomoyo's eyes became giant stars.
"KAWAII! That is SO cute!" Tomoyo said, circling Sakura and admiring her. All the time Sakura was blushing. Tomoyo gave her a sly look, " I bet Syaoran will think the same." And Sakura's face was as red as a tomato.
"So what did you get him Sakura?"
"Well, I got this picture frame," She took the frame out of her bag, "But I have no idea what to put in it . . ."
Tomoyo swiftly grabbed the frame from her. "Ah-ha! Leave it to me! I'll put a picture in it and bring it to the party all nice and wrapped. But for now let me get working on it while you get ready more!"
An hour later, at five-o-clock, Tomoyo banged on the bathroom door.
"Sakura, we have to go now! Or we're going to be late!"
Sakura emerged from the bathroom, her hair up in a delicate bun with a few short and curled pieces falling out. She had used a few flower shaped bobbie pins. And had just the slighted bit of makeup on - lip-gloss and some blush.
They got into the car; Sakura completely engulfed in her own thoughts, and drove off to Syaoran's house . . .
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Okay, that's it for this chapter. Yes, a bit short. But WAY better then it was the first time! So cut me some slack here!
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Sakura has Syaoran's child, without him knowing because he went back to China. While he's there Eriol attempts to win over Sakura, and Sakura worries desperately about how to tell Syaoran about the child.
Oh and, don't tell me that the characters are OC or anything. Because they are NOT out of characters for MY story! It bugs me when people tell me that. ^^' So I hope you all like the re-write of this. SO much better, if I do say so myself.
~~**~*--------*~**~~
Chapter One
~~**~*--------*~**~~
It was another beautiful summer morning. The birds were chirping, the kids playing outside, and Sakura was sound asleep in her bed - as usual. She stirred a bit and opened her eyes. The rays of the morning sun illuminated the curtains, and she turned over to look at her clock.
"HOE!" The loud scream was heard down the block. Sakura stared blankly at the clock, once over the shock she began to speak, "How in the world could I have slept in until two-o-clock! That has to be a record."
She blinked a couple of times and finally pulled the covers back and lifted herself carefully out of the bed. "Luckily it's a Saturday," then the realization sunk in. It wasn't just any Saturday. It was THE Saturday. The day of Syaoran's party, the day that he was going to leave her. She sat back down on the bed.
"Well, if he's going away, I'll make this a day he'll never forget," She paused, rubbing her hand across the print on her bed spread thoughtfully, "so that he can never forget me." With a sigh she got up and headed to her bathroom and brushed her teeth.
"I haven't got a present for him yet!" She said out loud, toothbrush in mouth and toothpaste spitting onto her mirror. Hurriedly she finished up getting ready and jumped into her car, speeding off to the nearest drug store.
~~**~*--------*~**~~
"What to get . . . what to get . . ." She mumbled to herself, walking up and down the isles, nervously fiddling with her fingers. She was going to make sure she got the perfect present; after all, he was perfect. (Wow, that was CORNY!) She continued walking up and down the isles until she saw a display of picture frames. She picked up a fluffy pink one and giggled to herself. "That is totally not a Syaoran thing."
She moved on to another frame. Emerald and a light pink swirled together on the frame, and it has a topaz outline. She was drawn to the colors and had bought the present before she had even realized what was happening. Once outside the store she realized that she had nothing to put into the frame.
She bought a hotdog while thinking over the problem and her cell phone rang. The looked down at the phone and the name Tomoyo flashed across the screen.
"Hi Tomoyo!" She said cheerfully into the phone, spitting pieces of hotdog all over the table she was at.
"Hey Sakura, can you come over? I just found an awesome outfit for you to wear tonight."
Sakura giggled, that was defiantly a Tomoyo thing that she would never understand.
~~**~*--------*~**~~
As she pulled up to the mansion Sakura saw Tomoyo already standing at the door.
"Where have you been? There's SO much to do before you have to go! Come in," Tomoyo pulled Sakura through the entry way, across the living room, and up the stairs into her room where she promptly sat Sakura on the bed and ran over to her closet pulling out at outfit.
"Um, Tomoyo . . ." Sakura gawked at the outfit. She was NOT going to wear that. A low cut white shirt that had only one sleeve that was about two inches wide, and a jean miniskirt.
"But Sakura!" Tomoyo whined, dragging out Sakura's name looking totally pathetic with a puppy dogface, "I went through all this trouble, I thought you would like it! I thought . . ." She sighed, acting as if this was the most depressing this ever, "I thought you liked my clothes I pick for you!" With this she broke into a heard of fake sobbing.
"Okay! I'm so sorry Tomoyo I'll wear it! I promise," Sakura said, completely surprised it had meant that much to Tomoyo. Immediately Tomoyo jumped up smiling brightly and shoved Sakura into the bathroom with the clothes.
Ten minutes went by and Sakura was still not out of the bathroom.
"Sakura! Are you alive?" Tomoyo said jokingly, "Get out here."
Slowly the door crept open and a very shy Sakura stepped out. Tomoyo's eyes became giant stars.
"KAWAII! That is SO cute!" Tomoyo said, circling Sakura and admiring her. All the time Sakura was blushing. Tomoyo gave her a sly look, " I bet Syaoran will think the same." And Sakura's face was as red as a tomato.
"So what did you get him Sakura?"
"Well, I got this picture frame," She took the frame out of her bag, "But I have no idea what to put in it . . ."
Tomoyo swiftly grabbed the frame from her. "Ah-ha! Leave it to me! I'll put a picture in it and bring it to the party all nice and wrapped. But for now let me get working on it while you get ready more!"
An hour later, at five-o-clock, Tomoyo banged on the bathroom door.
"Sakura, we have to go now! Or we're going to be late!"
Sakura emerged from the bathroom, her hair up in a delicate bun with a few short and curled pieces falling out. She had used a few flower shaped bobbie pins. And had just the slighted bit of makeup on - lip-gloss and some blush.
They got into the car; Sakura completely engulfed in her own thoughts, and drove off to Syaoran's house . . .
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Okay, that's it for this chapter. Yes, a bit short. But WAY better then it was the first time! So cut me some slack here!
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