Disclaimer: Hey guys! This is my first fanfic so please help me out a little with your reviews.. Now, to the sadness of all the world-little tear-
I do not own YHH. I do, however, own Kitsumi and this FanFic. And i do one day intend to get a leash so that I can own Hiei too. Until then,
all I have are my plushies.
A/N: Oh, this story is dedicated to my lil' sis Ivy. A.K.A GettingMAD. I love you hun! Read all of her stories after you read all of mine. -NO! READ
MINE FIRST! -*rolls eyes* Ivy, please behave yourself. Now, if you guys decide to falme us I don't really mind. But if you don't have anything to
back up your critisizm, you're opinions are worthless and only increase the number of reviews my sister and I get. So, please, only review with
helpful suggestions or comments. Thanks A Million! Now, onward to the cause of my weeks of grounding and bordem!
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"Too Close For Comfort"
Chapter one: "Never Get Too Close"
Kitsumi's feet kicked the mud up. splattering it all over her face and buring her eyes while she ran. The mud and rain pelted her body, stinging her
like a thousand bees. The thunder pounded and rang in her ears. They were getting closer. She could hear their horses whinnying as they struggled
to slosh through the mud. She could smell the gunpowder packed tightly within their firearms. But, no matter how much it hurt, she ignored everything.
The pain, the noise, the smell, everything. Kitsumi only concentrated on one thing...running. Always running. Ever since she could remember. Her parents
had died running with her. Shot to death by them. The ones so close behind her. The ones who had hunted for her all her life. The ones who
had killed everything she had once loved. Them, the demon bounty hunters.
Lightning flashed, casting shadows of the forest cedars. It made their branches look like scraggly arms that reached out and scraped her
bare limbs. In that single flash of light, Kitsumi caught a glimpse of a small collection of sharp-tipped boulders. 'Maybe I can hide.' She thought.
'There's no way i can outrun them now. Not in my ningen form.' She ran forward for a little bit more. Suddenly, she made a dash for the rocks. Kitsumi began to climb
them. Higher and higher. But Kitsumi hadn't counted on the rocks being slippery. Her feet kept sliding and slipping. The rocks slashed her feet.
Kitsumi felt her warm blood mix with the cold, pelting rain. Her feet went numb. She began to slip at first. Suddenly, she fell. Her arm went up,
protecting her head from hitting the rocks. Kitsumi heard a loud smack as she landed. Her arm had hit one of the rocks sharp points. She then
tried to move. To get up and to keep on running. A sharp searing pain went through every inch of her body. She went back down. There was no
way she could run now. Kitsumi was too exhausted and in too much pain from running for so long. She heard them getting closer. Kitsumi closed
her eyes. She heard their shouts of laughter and pride as the hunters looked down to her. Kitsumi let out a single tear as she thought about her parents.
She remembered their last words to her. 'Don't ever give up. You must always keep running.' Her father had said this before coughing up a
bloody 'I love you.' "Sorry dad." Kitsumi let a hoarse whisper escape from her. She then remembered her mother. And a small smile made its
way to her face. Her mother alwasy knew how to make her smile, even when she wasn't there. Kitsumi remembered her mother's last words.
'They will always be hunting you. So don't trust anyone. Never let anyone get too close....." Her mother had died in mid sentence. She then remembered her brother, Yoko.
'Hn,' she thought, 'Stupid fox.' (sound like anyone we know?) She would never admit to missing him after all these years. But in her heart she knew she had loved him
"Least I haven't let you guys down." She whispered, thinking of Yoko and her mom. Kitsumi began to reminice(sp?) on the fun times she and her "family" had spent together.
Kitsumi remembered the time she and Yoko were fishing when they had heard the gun shots. The bounty hunters hadn't wanted Yoko, the gingikitsune.
They wanted Kitsumi. Her blood was said to be the most fast working and powerful healer in the world. It was said it could raise those who had been dead
for centuries. Because of this, Kitsumi's parents told Yoko to run away. To make sure he wouldn't follow them and get hurt. They took Kitsumi with
them, to protect her. Kitsumi remembered the last thing she had said to Yoko before she left. "Don't get killed, stupid fox."(this so sounds like a
certain sexy shorty that we know!) Yoko had looked at her, concern and worry written all over his face. In that last moment, she found herself hugging her older
brother before she was carried away. "Never let anyone get too close......" Her mother's words rang in her head. Even as she heard the gunshot.
Even when she felt the bullet tear into her side.
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Pyslightly: OoOoOoOoOo! Dun dun dunnnnn! I think that's a very nice cliffy. What do you guys think? I hope you guys liked it. I know it's kinda
short and all, but I had to get this beginning out of the way so we could make our way to de' la frenchy french ROMANCE! LOL. Well im kinda
hyper right now so please excuse my stupidity. Now, I compell you to click the review button! Please tell me how much you liked it or how I could
make it better! Well, I love you all for reading my story! PEACE OUT HOMIE A-B-C-D-ect. DAWGS!
I do not own YHH. I do, however, own Kitsumi and this FanFic. And i do one day intend to get a leash so that I can own Hiei too. Until then,
all I have are my plushies.
A/N: Oh, this story is dedicated to my lil' sis Ivy. A.K.A GettingMAD. I love you hun! Read all of her stories after you read all of mine. -NO! READ
MINE FIRST! -*rolls eyes* Ivy, please behave yourself. Now, if you guys decide to falme us I don't really mind. But if you don't have anything to
back up your critisizm, you're opinions are worthless and only increase the number of reviews my sister and I get. So, please, only review with
helpful suggestions or comments. Thanks A Million! Now, onward to the cause of my weeks of grounding and bordem!
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"Too Close For Comfort"
Chapter one: "Never Get Too Close"
Kitsumi's feet kicked the mud up. splattering it all over her face and buring her eyes while she ran. The mud and rain pelted her body, stinging her
like a thousand bees. The thunder pounded and rang in her ears. They were getting closer. She could hear their horses whinnying as they struggled
to slosh through the mud. She could smell the gunpowder packed tightly within their firearms. But, no matter how much it hurt, she ignored everything.
The pain, the noise, the smell, everything. Kitsumi only concentrated on one thing...running. Always running. Ever since she could remember. Her parents
had died running with her. Shot to death by them. The ones so close behind her. The ones who had hunted for her all her life. The ones who
had killed everything she had once loved. Them, the demon bounty hunters.
Lightning flashed, casting shadows of the forest cedars. It made their branches look like scraggly arms that reached out and scraped her
bare limbs. In that single flash of light, Kitsumi caught a glimpse of a small collection of sharp-tipped boulders. 'Maybe I can hide.' She thought.
'There's no way i can outrun them now. Not in my ningen form.' She ran forward for a little bit more. Suddenly, she made a dash for the rocks. Kitsumi began to climb
them. Higher and higher. But Kitsumi hadn't counted on the rocks being slippery. Her feet kept sliding and slipping. The rocks slashed her feet.
Kitsumi felt her warm blood mix with the cold, pelting rain. Her feet went numb. She began to slip at first. Suddenly, she fell. Her arm went up,
protecting her head from hitting the rocks. Kitsumi heard a loud smack as she landed. Her arm had hit one of the rocks sharp points. She then
tried to move. To get up and to keep on running. A sharp searing pain went through every inch of her body. She went back down. There was no
way she could run now. Kitsumi was too exhausted and in too much pain from running for so long. She heard them getting closer. Kitsumi closed
her eyes. She heard their shouts of laughter and pride as the hunters looked down to her. Kitsumi let out a single tear as she thought about her parents.
She remembered their last words to her. 'Don't ever give up. You must always keep running.' Her father had said this before coughing up a
bloody 'I love you.' "Sorry dad." Kitsumi let a hoarse whisper escape from her. She then remembered her mother. And a small smile made its
way to her face. Her mother alwasy knew how to make her smile, even when she wasn't there. Kitsumi remembered her mother's last words.
'They will always be hunting you. So don't trust anyone. Never let anyone get too close....." Her mother had died in mid sentence. She then remembered her brother, Yoko.
'Hn,' she thought, 'Stupid fox.' (sound like anyone we know?) She would never admit to missing him after all these years. But in her heart she knew she had loved him
"Least I haven't let you guys down." She whispered, thinking of Yoko and her mom. Kitsumi began to reminice(sp?) on the fun times she and her "family" had spent together.
Kitsumi remembered the time she and Yoko were fishing when they had heard the gun shots. The bounty hunters hadn't wanted Yoko, the gingikitsune.
They wanted Kitsumi. Her blood was said to be the most fast working and powerful healer in the world. It was said it could raise those who had been dead
for centuries. Because of this, Kitsumi's parents told Yoko to run away. To make sure he wouldn't follow them and get hurt. They took Kitsumi with
them, to protect her. Kitsumi remembered the last thing she had said to Yoko before she left. "Don't get killed, stupid fox."(this so sounds like a
certain sexy shorty that we know!) Yoko had looked at her, concern and worry written all over his face. In that last moment, she found herself hugging her older
brother before she was carried away. "Never let anyone get too close......" Her mother's words rang in her head. Even as she heard the gunshot.
Even when she felt the bullet tear into her side.
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Pyslightly: OoOoOoOoOo! Dun dun dunnnnn! I think that's a very nice cliffy. What do you guys think? I hope you guys liked it. I know it's kinda
short and all, but I had to get this beginning out of the way so we could make our way to de' la frenchy french ROMANCE! LOL. Well im kinda
hyper right now so please excuse my stupidity. Now, I compell you to click the review button! Please tell me how much you liked it or how I could
make it better! Well, I love you all for reading my story! PEACE OUT HOMIE A-B-C-D-ect. DAWGS!