Disclaimer: Read the default chapter, I'm too lazy to rewrite all of that. lol
I forgot to describe the new characters Raye and Isabel!!! –gasps- OK.
Isabel:
Ethnicity: Spanish
Hair: Turquoise (usually in a ponytail or hairclip)
Eyes: Violet
House: Ravenclaw
Quidditch position: chaser
Parents: Esteban Sanchez and Mauricia Trujillo
Family: Veronica (younger sis) and Francisco (cousin) Attitude: Calm in tight situations, Gets mad at boys easily, Does well in
quidditch, brags easily, and sticks up for friends. Education: excels in transfiguration and is surprisingly good at potions.
Raye:
Ethnicity: Chinese
Hair: violet
Eyes: blueberry
House: 2 b decided in this chapter
Quidditch position: 2 b decided later
Parents: Jian Qiao and Rin Cao (muggles)
Family: Cho Chang (cousin) Attitude: quick to get angry, makes friends easily, holds strong grudges Education: best in class in defense against the dark arts, and is good at
charms ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ------------- As the train pulled into the station Raye held her breath. She was really excited about going to Hogwarts but she was nervous about fitting in. She was behind everyone else in the whole understanding of magic thing!!! She looked at Cho who smiled reassuringly at her. She then turned to Isabel who was too busy looking outside to notice. She sighed heavily.
In the carriage
"Hey, cheer up Raye, wait till you see all the boys" "Honestly Cho, is that ALL you ever think about?"
"Chill Issi, just because you're too busy kicking their rear ends in quidditch to think or talk about them doesn't mean that I'm a freak because I do."
"Actually, I think I'm with Isabel on this one Cho. Sorry!"
"Ha!!!! In your face!!!! Even your own cousin agrees with me!!!!! –sticks out tongue-
"Ya know Isabel, I didn't mean it that way . . ."
"Sure, whatever and please, call me Issi."
-Cho sweatdrops- "Please excuse the queen of big-headedness." (I KNOW there's no such word as big-headedness!)
At the castle
"Ok Raye, since you haven't been here as long as we have . . . Professor Dumbledore –"
"That's the headmaster."
"I think she already know that Issi . . . As I was saying, Professor Dumbledore wants to see you after the ceremony so he can sort you into a house."
"Ok . . . Sure, why not?"
"What's wrong Raye?"
"DUH! Isn't it obvious Cho? She doesn't know who Dumbledore is!"
-sweatdrops- "You know . . . for a girl, you can be pretty dumb Issi. You forgot that's she's also afraid of what will happen"
"Oh, right. Oops."
After the ceremony
"Good luck Raye!"
"We have our fingers crossed!"
"Don't forget to tell us everything afterwards!"
"See ya later guys!"
-walks up to the staff table- "Urm, excuse me, but can any of you tell me who or where Professor Dumbledwee is?"
"You must mean Professor Dumbledore, I'm Professor McGonagol, and the headmaster is right over there."
"Thank you."
"Excuse me, are you Professor Dumbledore?""Yes, that would be me, and you are?"
"I'm Raye Qiao."
"Oh yes, the new student. Follow me, we'll get you sorted right away."
"thanks."
"Sit down here."
-she sits-
"Now put this on your head"
-puts the sorting hat on-
"I think this one belongs in ravenclaw, definitely smart and wise. Besides, it's where her cousin and friend are."
"Ravenclaw it is then. Ms. Qiao, you do know that you have to take classes after school just to catch up to where the others are don't you?"
"Yes sir."
"Ok, go and see Professor McGonagal after your classes tomorrow."
"Ok, thank you sir." "You're very welcome."
In the Ravenclaw common room
"I hope Raye got into Ravenclaw."
"So do I Cho."
"Hey guys!"
"How'd you get in here?"
"Duh Cho, she's in Ravenclaw. Wait! You're in Ravenclaw?"
"Yup, I'm in Ravenclaw"
-Cho and Isabel pounce on her-
"uh, guys, ya know, I can't breathe right now."
"Sorry!" Isabel and Cho say at the same time.
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I know this isn't the best place to end it but I've got writer's block right now.
Thanks for reviewing guys!
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