Disclaimer: I do not and never will own YYH or you so don't sue!!!!!
Paige: ok for though's of you who read the first chapter of my other story well. Im sorry .I am
also took it down before putting this one up. I lost my muse for that and the will 2 write it... this
however I wont loose for a long time!!
Youko: yea sure
Paige: -.- well that's real nice
Hiei: well you give up most stories
Paige: that's not true I have not given up on hardly any of them!
Hiei: ok just 2 but still
Paige: snaps fingers and Hiei flys into the wall but nothing!!
Youko: ;;; its ok paige we didn't mean anything by it
Paige: twitch do you wanna taste of the wall also?!
Youko: on with the story!!!
Your past and present
Once in a place not so far away in a time not so long ago, you were born. You were the
most beautiful girl in the whole world of course there weren't many nice looking or nice in
general people around for you were born in the makai a world of demons and murderer's. You
however were one exception. You loved all and You could pass for Human. Some demons
detested the fact that their princes looked and acted like a pathetic human but were to afraid of
your power to actually do anything about it. Others loved and revered you because of your beauty
and power. You were the one who started and ended all wars. This was a time of peace in the
makai. It did not last long . . .
Soon after your 16th birthday you were walking in a valley of wondrous flowers so
beautiful they could take your breath away. "Hello? My princes? What are you doing here? You
could get sick or worse get killed!" One of your most trusted friends says as they walk closer to
you. " don't be silly! I wouldn't catch cold out here and who would have the strength to kill me?!"
Your friend smirked evilly "well my princes . . . I would" You gasped and ran for your life. You
couldn't hurt them he had been your friend for your entire life! Then you felt something enter
your back. A sword. As you fell to the ground bleeding you turned around to face your old friend.
"I cant believe you would betray me . . . you will die one day . . . I may not be able to kill you
now but . . . soon someone will . . ." you fall to the ground seemingly dead after that sentence.
With the last bit of energy you had left you sent your soul to ningenkai so you could be reborn
and get your revenge on your friend. His name . . .Soran.
15 years later.
"Mother im going to school now! Bye!" you yell while running out the door. You slow to
a walk as you near the school. Its not that you hated school. Its just that you were a loner and
didn't really ever fit in. Not only that but you knew of your past. You had been training ever sense
your past flooded back to you two years ago. Their were some kids that you liked as sort of
friends not close but you would say hi as you passed them. One would be Yusuke Urameshi. You
had once asked him if he could train you but he flat out said no because he was to busy with his
own training. But you liked him he was nice to you and didn't bother you about stuff. You had
seen his 'punching bag' Kuwabara a few times but he stayed clear of you. You attracted a lot of
attention because, you looked almost the same as you did 15 years ago only with out the kitsune
ears and tail. Or didn't I mention it. You are a kitsune with (color) ears and a
(color) tail. You could hide your ears and tail perfectly and also mask your spirt
energy. Nobody not even your mother knew who you once were.
You saw Yusuke and decided to talk to him. 'Maybe', you thought, 'Just maybe he will
finally train me if I ask him the right way.' "Hello Yusuke . . ." you said in a polite and extremely
calm tone. "Oh hey (your name), how are you?". he had that goofy grin like he always
does when he has just done something he shouldn't have. "I am fine Yusuke now what, may I ask,
have you done this time?" "Well!" he says boastfully. "I have officially beat every fighter in
town!". 'this is your chance' your mind screamed 'show him that you can fight at least as well as
Kuwabara' "well Yusuke im afraid that's just not true" you say calmly. "W-what?! Who have I
beat?!" "You have not beaten me yet" with this you get into a fighting stance. "Oh ok fine I will
beat you then I WILL have beaten every fighter in town!" 'Cocky' your mind says. "Lets go!"You
say out loud. You lung at Yusuke only to be sidestepped. 'Ah' your mind whispers 'he has a great
amount of spirt energy' "maybe," you say to him softly as you use your great speed to get close
to his ear. "We should go somewhere else to fight I wouldn't really wish to expose my spirt
energy here". His eyes widen slightly and he nods. As you both start to leave school grounds one
of the teachers comes up to both of you. "Were are you to going exactly?" He questions. "Were
leaving" Yusuke yawns as you both continue to walk off of school grounds and away from the
teacher. Soon you both came to a small clearing in a forest. "Ok who are you may I ask?" Yusuke
asked more seriously then he had ever been with you before. "I am (your name) you know
that. But sense that is not what you were meaning then I will tell you WHAT I am. I am a kitsune
Youkai, in a ningen body. I was once the daughter of makai. I need to be stronger and in that I
need help. That is why I have been asking for you to train me. So I could get revenge on the one
that killed me . . . Soran." Yusuke didn't know who the daughter of makai was or who Soran was
the only thing he knew was that she said that she needed help and that she was a kitsune like
kurama. "Well show me what you got and then I will think about it" he got in his famous pose for
his spirt gun as you quickly picked a rose and turned it into a scythe and let out your demon form.
And you fought. You and Yusuke fought for what seemed to be an eternity. Nether giving up
nether letting up on their assaults. The eternity did not last for long in reality only for around an
hour. You, not being trained as well and being the underdog (or should I say fox lol), soon ran
out of energy and changed back to your human form. The last thing you remember before
blacking out was Yusuke's face above you. Smiling down...
Paige: has popcorn OHHH I wonder what will happen next!!
Hiei: falls anime style u don't know what's going 2 happen?!
Paige: of course I do but nobody else does!!
Hiei: oh but I can find out
Paige: oh but would you really want to go into my mind for it?
Hiei: no not really
Paige: ok then youko do the honors!
Youko: R&R please!!
Paige: ok for though's of you who read the first chapter of my other story well. Im sorry .I am
also took it down before putting this one up. I lost my muse for that and the will 2 write it... this
however I wont loose for a long time!!
Youko: yea sure
Paige: -.- well that's real nice
Hiei: well you give up most stories
Paige: that's not true I have not given up on hardly any of them!
Hiei: ok just 2 but still
Paige: snaps fingers and Hiei flys into the wall but nothing!!
Youko: ;;; its ok paige we didn't mean anything by it
Paige: twitch do you wanna taste of the wall also?!
Youko: on with the story!!!
Your past and present
Once in a place not so far away in a time not so long ago, you were born. You were the
most beautiful girl in the whole world of course there weren't many nice looking or nice in
general people around for you were born in the makai a world of demons and murderer's. You
however were one exception. You loved all and You could pass for Human. Some demons
detested the fact that their princes looked and acted like a pathetic human but were to afraid of
your power to actually do anything about it. Others loved and revered you because of your beauty
and power. You were the one who started and ended all wars. This was a time of peace in the
makai. It did not last long . . .
Soon after your 16th birthday you were walking in a valley of wondrous flowers so
beautiful they could take your breath away. "Hello? My princes? What are you doing here? You
could get sick or worse get killed!" One of your most trusted friends says as they walk closer to
you. " don't be silly! I wouldn't catch cold out here and who would have the strength to kill me?!"
Your friend smirked evilly "well my princes . . . I would" You gasped and ran for your life. You
couldn't hurt them he had been your friend for your entire life! Then you felt something enter
your back. A sword. As you fell to the ground bleeding you turned around to face your old friend.
"I cant believe you would betray me . . . you will die one day . . . I may not be able to kill you
now but . . . soon someone will . . ." you fall to the ground seemingly dead after that sentence.
With the last bit of energy you had left you sent your soul to ningenkai so you could be reborn
and get your revenge on your friend. His name . . .Soran.
15 years later.
"Mother im going to school now! Bye!" you yell while running out the door. You slow to
a walk as you near the school. Its not that you hated school. Its just that you were a loner and
didn't really ever fit in. Not only that but you knew of your past. You had been training ever sense
your past flooded back to you two years ago. Their were some kids that you liked as sort of
friends not close but you would say hi as you passed them. One would be Yusuke Urameshi. You
had once asked him if he could train you but he flat out said no because he was to busy with his
own training. But you liked him he was nice to you and didn't bother you about stuff. You had
seen his 'punching bag' Kuwabara a few times but he stayed clear of you. You attracted a lot of
attention because, you looked almost the same as you did 15 years ago only with out the kitsune
ears and tail. Or didn't I mention it. You are a kitsune with (color) ears and a
(color) tail. You could hide your ears and tail perfectly and also mask your spirt
energy. Nobody not even your mother knew who you once were.
You saw Yusuke and decided to talk to him. 'Maybe', you thought, 'Just maybe he will
finally train me if I ask him the right way.' "Hello Yusuke . . ." you said in a polite and extremely
calm tone. "Oh hey (your name), how are you?". he had that goofy grin like he always
does when he has just done something he shouldn't have. "I am fine Yusuke now what, may I ask,
have you done this time?" "Well!" he says boastfully. "I have officially beat every fighter in
town!". 'this is your chance' your mind screamed 'show him that you can fight at least as well as
Kuwabara' "well Yusuke im afraid that's just not true" you say calmly. "W-what?! Who have I
beat?!" "You have not beaten me yet" with this you get into a fighting stance. "Oh ok fine I will
beat you then I WILL have beaten every fighter in town!" 'Cocky' your mind says. "Lets go!"You
say out loud. You lung at Yusuke only to be sidestepped. 'Ah' your mind whispers 'he has a great
amount of spirt energy' "maybe," you say to him softly as you use your great speed to get close
to his ear. "We should go somewhere else to fight I wouldn't really wish to expose my spirt
energy here". His eyes widen slightly and he nods. As you both start to leave school grounds one
of the teachers comes up to both of you. "Were are you to going exactly?" He questions. "Were
leaving" Yusuke yawns as you both continue to walk off of school grounds and away from the
teacher. Soon you both came to a small clearing in a forest. "Ok who are you may I ask?" Yusuke
asked more seriously then he had ever been with you before. "I am (your name) you know
that. But sense that is not what you were meaning then I will tell you WHAT I am. I am a kitsune
Youkai, in a ningen body. I was once the daughter of makai. I need to be stronger and in that I
need help. That is why I have been asking for you to train me. So I could get revenge on the one
that killed me . . . Soran." Yusuke didn't know who the daughter of makai was or who Soran was
the only thing he knew was that she said that she needed help and that she was a kitsune like
kurama. "Well show me what you got and then I will think about it" he got in his famous pose for
his spirt gun as you quickly picked a rose and turned it into a scythe and let out your demon form.
And you fought. You and Yusuke fought for what seemed to be an eternity. Nether giving up
nether letting up on their assaults. The eternity did not last for long in reality only for around an
hour. You, not being trained as well and being the underdog (or should I say fox lol), soon ran
out of energy and changed back to your human form. The last thing you remember before
blacking out was Yusuke's face above you. Smiling down...
Paige: has popcorn OHHH I wonder what will happen next!!
Hiei: falls anime style u don't know what's going 2 happen?!
Paige: of course I do but nobody else does!!
Hiei: oh but I can find out
Paige: oh but would you really want to go into my mind for it?
Hiei: no not really
Paige: ok then youko do the honors!
Youko: R&R please!!