hey I am gonna do some fight scenes here think movies, anti gravity, and
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Capture Chapter Four:Survival
'wow',Kagome thought as the a blur of boy... '6ft, 170lb , handsome, muscular bad kagome your fighting', charged at her.
"Give up girly and I gotcha."grunted the attacker with full confidence. That said he punched at the air where she should of been, that is, if she hadnt of side stepped leaving his side totally exposed.
"I think not."She said cooly while tugging the outstretched arm with one hand pulling him to an off balance diagonalish stance and coming down with her other arm's elbow, straight into his exposed back. The hit on the floor usually would have knocked the opponent out cold but this guy was running on pure adreniline (A.N. is that how u spell it?) and disbelief that a girl was beating him, !him! up. He ,knocked to the ground, spared no time in rolling unexpectedly to the side doing a very movie like jump up to his feet and kicking behind her knees making her fall on her back.
'Damn this guy is still coming. Plan B.' The guys next moves were fully expected, while kagome was on the ground he attempted to pin her legs and arms, sigh'Guys always try to do the whole "pin down kagome" thing.' Kagome, knowing of the 170 pounds preparing to be on top of her quickly kicked his lowering form in the stomach, then, supporting his unstable toppling weight with both legs she pushed of the ground with her arms "urgh" pushing both their weight from the ground was not easy and required a"little" miko energy.
She landed both feet on the sides of his body; he landed on his back wide eyed looking up at the raven haired girl. 'No mistakes this time', she chided herself proceeding to straddle his upper torso pinning his arms palm up with her knees and pressed her crossed forearms to his neck daring him to try to get up. "And the names Kagome not girly."she said with a smile.
"Enough", came the call of Kaede from her seat next to the training ring, "Kagome is the victor. Next challenger-make that challengers this time, Kagome be ye prepared for another combatent." A couple of half hearted cheers answered the ancient miko as Kagome got off of the pink faced boy.
"Aww Kaede, do I have to keep doing combat? I took down every fighter so far today isnt that enough?"she said with a whine aided by a pout, "I wanna do herbs!" her mood changing completely into that of a cheerful little girl.
"Kagome ye have taken down every fighter, but you have made simple mistake in every one that could defeat thou if ye were fighting a demon; besides, child ye know all the herb remedies I know and some that I dont. Why do ye want to learn what is already known?"
"I just wanna pick the herbs we are running low on burn and fever remedies. O and Kaede I have to tell you about my dream." She stretched her muscles and went into a defensive stance ,"Ready", she announced.
But no one was ready to fight the fighting star of the famous Kaede's training school. "Sum," Kaede pointed to a humungous guy who looked like a sumo wrestler,"....And ye are the next fighters," indicating a particularily sneaky looking lean guy that could have fit into the "sumo" 4 times, "We shall continue these fights outside it is considered to be a beautiful day, and child," she turned to her favorite miko in training,"If ye tell me about the dream while succeding to defeat these fighters thou may have the rest of the day off to collect herbs, but if ye dont we shall be returning our lesson on Pain training for the rest of the day, is that fair to thee child?" Kagome grimaced Pain training, it was when Kaede would basicaly have you stand still while people hit you, you couldnt cry or even flinch, but old news, she had mastered that technique, but -if you were a miko- you could learn to stop bleeding alltogether if they cut you "a very valuable skill",a direct quote from Kaede herself, but not her idea of a fun afternoon.
"Alright fair." Kagome felt like she just sealed her fate but all feelings of doubt left her as the summers delicious rays beat down on her. Squinting to get used to the light she couldn't help sighing at the sight of flowering trees and beautiful exotic gardens. They walked up the short steps to the old, but well kept wood platform for fighting. 'Ahh so many fond memories of beating up guys here', thought the careless 17yr old before she noticed a sort of dangerous glint in the weasly guys eyes. Kagome shivered, those eyes they were feral, dangerous, a killer's bloodthirsty ones. But the glint was gone and she convinced herself it was just the sun's glare.
"Stances," they all took either offensive of defensive stances, "And begin." Instanstly the "sumo" had yelled a war cry or something like that and ran -making kagome cringe with all the "jiggly" going on- headlong towards Kagome. They had been positioned in a kind of triangle so that the two guys facing her sides if she faced forward, slightly reluctant to show off her side to the "weasel" Kagome crouched down slightly turning only her head to face her "only" attacker.
'Hmm the smartest thing to do would be to attack me at the same time but weasel boy is just watching, Note to self, watch out for a sneak attack.' She watched the charging guy's pace and when he was close enough to attack she tried to deliver a quick kick to the side of his belly, but instead met flubber and felt her kick just sink in without the feel of hitting anything of value. "So Kaede as I was saying I had this dream last night, ergh." She gave a grunt of effort as she pulled the kick back and rolled to the side preventing the ton of blubber colliding with her frail form.
She left her back to the other guy but she wasnt concerned about him at the moment, what concerned her was the huge boulder guy that was trying to halt his charge with little success. She was now behind him, 'Please work or I will be known as pancake girl.' Kagome was for once, and to be denied later in life, thanking the God above that she had miko powers as she glowed pink for a moment before hitting the sumo in between the shoulder blades with her full body force.In a cracking stuttering voice she continued,"A..An..And you know that when miko's have drea... dreams they get that feeling I got that feeeeeeeeeli..." The sumo lost balance -Kagome still riding caboose- and teetered before, to Kagome's relief, falling forward with a moan. "Ng," Kagome finished, "But I couldnt remember what I dreamed, usually I can. The only things I can remember is..." She never got to finish as the weasel was on her back, hands forcing her to land painfully on the ground belly down. "fire, screams and gold eyes." she said with surprising calm before arching her back at an almost impossible angle and grabbing the "weasel" securely under the chin with both of her slippered feet and using the strain in her back, maybe a little boost of pink, to flip her rider off her back. Then taking advantage of his surprise rolled him onto his back.
She then sat on him grasping the back of his neck and pinning his legs under her own. Now at the Kaede training grounds you were required to wear a traditional white long sleeved "cover all skin" kimono (A.N. See Samurai Jack -) with yellow, red, or black trimming dependng on your level of combat. Kagome was of course black and she wouldnt even bother to fight the lessers, or rather none would ever be around when she wanted to fight. But when she touched the bare neck her powers went a-wall, she turned a full- blown pink eyes colored and everything. She was blasting this guy with 100% purification. Humans, unless really evil, and I mean past Attila the Hun evil, could not be hurt with miko energy so both Kaede and Kagome eyes widened as the guy started to hiss and scream fighting like an animal. Then he started to change and both mikos recognized the now present demon aura. Dark black wings came out of his back knocking Kagome off him in an instant. The wings flapped and the bird like demon cawed loudly as the purification finished its job best it could without Kagome's reinforcement. It was fully transformed now, basically a large crow.
'Finally some action.'thought Kagome excitedly as her miko power continued to corse through her making her vision tint slightly pink. "Be ye careful child, it flies speedily, and those claws are sharp as freshly sharpened blades."
"I recognize his type Kaede, So anyway any thoughts about the dream." said kagome hastily as she lunged at the rising bird demon hands glowing, but the demon was quikly healing, flapped its mighty wings knocking kagome back and itself out of range.
"Have I taught ye nothing child? Think of your training this is not a human."
'Oh ya duh.' she mentally hit herself at that stupid mistake. She concentrated on the wild energy telling it to get under control. The miko energy pulled reluctantly into useble power, readying her for offense. Kagome closed her eyes momentarily against the dizziness the fusing power always brought.
The demon was now afraid, terrified at the energy coming together in the miko, he knew she was strong but this...this was unimaginable, he was not a good fighter, magic was more his area. But he could take down a human girl easily, or thats what he repeatedly told himself while swooping down with demonic speed.
Miko energy is kind of like electricity, stored in batteries, and is more powerful and precise when conducted, then shot straight out of the hosts body. (not that she has batteries in her, its just like a...metaphor or some word like that..) Kagome knew this but felt like showing off a bit. Even though she had her eyes closed she could have sensed this demons direct location from at least a mile away, plus even if she couldnt sense him; she could hear the loud beating of wings and feel the wind on her face.
'She's dead now.'Thought the foolish bird triumphantly as he was out of kicking range about to hit her fulll force with ten glinting claws, he knew his mistaken as Kagome's eye shot open and a single large pink bolt -kind of like lightening- flowed from her whole body hitting the bird square in the chest sending it flying backward threw a few branches and a tree out of sight.
After the crashing of trees had stopped silence was the only thing heard, Kagome looked around, most of the trainees were gathered at the entrance to the main buildings wide eyed not to mention the "sumo" guy still on his belly looking at Kagome like she was an alien. "umm, ya so about the dream...what do you make of it?"she inquired uncomfortably trying to break the silence.
"First of all child don't show off your power like that, it is not a toy, Second, Kagome, not all dreams are real even if thou art a (I feel all medievel saying thou art ) miko. But the event ye have seen actually might be what another is 'planning' to do and does not want it to get out; prayhaps another's dream, both of these are shaky and uncertain which would be why ye couldn't keep memory of them. Lastly girl", she indicated to the sky where the crow man from before was speeding off towards the south, "Ye did not complete the task so we must start our pain training."
"But....But...I..I.Aah," 'Damn it didnt touch the ground out of the ring...that would technically be a tie but....AHHH I said that I would defeat both...tricky old woman...' thought kagome with a frown as they pushed threw the thinning crowd into one of the meditaion rooms with a stone instead of wood floor so that the blood stains that were there already were hardly noticed. Fun!! was Kagome last thought before she committed herself to know every syllable of the directions on how not to feel the pain of the knife.
so wut u think i tried to do some good fight scenes in there but Should I keep trying or do you think I am useless and should keep to just plain writing? review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! luv yall im out cold im tired
your writer xela
Capture Chapter Four:Survival
'wow',Kagome thought as the a blur of boy... '6ft, 170lb , handsome, muscular bad kagome your fighting', charged at her.
"Give up girly and I gotcha."grunted the attacker with full confidence. That said he punched at the air where she should of been, that is, if she hadnt of side stepped leaving his side totally exposed.
"I think not."She said cooly while tugging the outstretched arm with one hand pulling him to an off balance diagonalish stance and coming down with her other arm's elbow, straight into his exposed back. The hit on the floor usually would have knocked the opponent out cold but this guy was running on pure adreniline (A.N. is that how u spell it?) and disbelief that a girl was beating him, !him! up. He ,knocked to the ground, spared no time in rolling unexpectedly to the side doing a very movie like jump up to his feet and kicking behind her knees making her fall on her back.
'Damn this guy is still coming. Plan B.' The guys next moves were fully expected, while kagome was on the ground he attempted to pin her legs and arms, sigh'Guys always try to do the whole "pin down kagome" thing.' Kagome, knowing of the 170 pounds preparing to be on top of her quickly kicked his lowering form in the stomach, then, supporting his unstable toppling weight with both legs she pushed of the ground with her arms "urgh" pushing both their weight from the ground was not easy and required a"little" miko energy.
She landed both feet on the sides of his body; he landed on his back wide eyed looking up at the raven haired girl. 'No mistakes this time', she chided herself proceeding to straddle his upper torso pinning his arms palm up with her knees and pressed her crossed forearms to his neck daring him to try to get up. "And the names Kagome not girly."she said with a smile.
"Enough", came the call of Kaede from her seat next to the training ring, "Kagome is the victor. Next challenger-make that challengers this time, Kagome be ye prepared for another combatent." A couple of half hearted cheers answered the ancient miko as Kagome got off of the pink faced boy.
"Aww Kaede, do I have to keep doing combat? I took down every fighter so far today isnt that enough?"she said with a whine aided by a pout, "I wanna do herbs!" her mood changing completely into that of a cheerful little girl.
"Kagome ye have taken down every fighter, but you have made simple mistake in every one that could defeat thou if ye were fighting a demon; besides, child ye know all the herb remedies I know and some that I dont. Why do ye want to learn what is already known?"
"I just wanna pick the herbs we are running low on burn and fever remedies. O and Kaede I have to tell you about my dream." She stretched her muscles and went into a defensive stance ,"Ready", she announced.
But no one was ready to fight the fighting star of the famous Kaede's training school. "Sum," Kaede pointed to a humungous guy who looked like a sumo wrestler,"....And ye are the next fighters," indicating a particularily sneaky looking lean guy that could have fit into the "sumo" 4 times, "We shall continue these fights outside it is considered to be a beautiful day, and child," she turned to her favorite miko in training,"If ye tell me about the dream while succeding to defeat these fighters thou may have the rest of the day off to collect herbs, but if ye dont we shall be returning our lesson on Pain training for the rest of the day, is that fair to thee child?" Kagome grimaced Pain training, it was when Kaede would basicaly have you stand still while people hit you, you couldnt cry or even flinch, but old news, she had mastered that technique, but -if you were a miko- you could learn to stop bleeding alltogether if they cut you "a very valuable skill",a direct quote from Kaede herself, but not her idea of a fun afternoon.
"Alright fair." Kagome felt like she just sealed her fate but all feelings of doubt left her as the summers delicious rays beat down on her. Squinting to get used to the light she couldn't help sighing at the sight of flowering trees and beautiful exotic gardens. They walked up the short steps to the old, but well kept wood platform for fighting. 'Ahh so many fond memories of beating up guys here', thought the careless 17yr old before she noticed a sort of dangerous glint in the weasly guys eyes. Kagome shivered, those eyes they were feral, dangerous, a killer's bloodthirsty ones. But the glint was gone and she convinced herself it was just the sun's glare.
"Stances," they all took either offensive of defensive stances, "And begin." Instanstly the "sumo" had yelled a war cry or something like that and ran -making kagome cringe with all the "jiggly" going on- headlong towards Kagome. They had been positioned in a kind of triangle so that the two guys facing her sides if she faced forward, slightly reluctant to show off her side to the "weasel" Kagome crouched down slightly turning only her head to face her "only" attacker.
'Hmm the smartest thing to do would be to attack me at the same time but weasel boy is just watching, Note to self, watch out for a sneak attack.' She watched the charging guy's pace and when he was close enough to attack she tried to deliver a quick kick to the side of his belly, but instead met flubber and felt her kick just sink in without the feel of hitting anything of value. "So Kaede as I was saying I had this dream last night, ergh." She gave a grunt of effort as she pulled the kick back and rolled to the side preventing the ton of blubber colliding with her frail form.
She left her back to the other guy but she wasnt concerned about him at the moment, what concerned her was the huge boulder guy that was trying to halt his charge with little success. She was now behind him, 'Please work or I will be known as pancake girl.' Kagome was for once, and to be denied later in life, thanking the God above that she had miko powers as she glowed pink for a moment before hitting the sumo in between the shoulder blades with her full body force.In a cracking stuttering voice she continued,"A..An..And you know that when miko's have drea... dreams they get that feeling I got that feeeeeeeeeli..." The sumo lost balance -Kagome still riding caboose- and teetered before, to Kagome's relief, falling forward with a moan. "Ng," Kagome finished, "But I couldnt remember what I dreamed, usually I can. The only things I can remember is..." She never got to finish as the weasel was on her back, hands forcing her to land painfully on the ground belly down. "fire, screams and gold eyes." she said with surprising calm before arching her back at an almost impossible angle and grabbing the "weasel" securely under the chin with both of her slippered feet and using the strain in her back, maybe a little boost of pink, to flip her rider off her back. Then taking advantage of his surprise rolled him onto his back.
She then sat on him grasping the back of his neck and pinning his legs under her own. Now at the Kaede training grounds you were required to wear a traditional white long sleeved "cover all skin" kimono (A.N. See Samurai Jack -) with yellow, red, or black trimming dependng on your level of combat. Kagome was of course black and she wouldnt even bother to fight the lessers, or rather none would ever be around when she wanted to fight. But when she touched the bare neck her powers went a-wall, she turned a full- blown pink eyes colored and everything. She was blasting this guy with 100% purification. Humans, unless really evil, and I mean past Attila the Hun evil, could not be hurt with miko energy so both Kaede and Kagome eyes widened as the guy started to hiss and scream fighting like an animal. Then he started to change and both mikos recognized the now present demon aura. Dark black wings came out of his back knocking Kagome off him in an instant. The wings flapped and the bird like demon cawed loudly as the purification finished its job best it could without Kagome's reinforcement. It was fully transformed now, basically a large crow.
'Finally some action.'thought Kagome excitedly as her miko power continued to corse through her making her vision tint slightly pink. "Be ye careful child, it flies speedily, and those claws are sharp as freshly sharpened blades."
"I recognize his type Kaede, So anyway any thoughts about the dream." said kagome hastily as she lunged at the rising bird demon hands glowing, but the demon was quikly healing, flapped its mighty wings knocking kagome back and itself out of range.
"Have I taught ye nothing child? Think of your training this is not a human."
'Oh ya duh.' she mentally hit herself at that stupid mistake. She concentrated on the wild energy telling it to get under control. The miko energy pulled reluctantly into useble power, readying her for offense. Kagome closed her eyes momentarily against the dizziness the fusing power always brought.
The demon was now afraid, terrified at the energy coming together in the miko, he knew she was strong but this...this was unimaginable, he was not a good fighter, magic was more his area. But he could take down a human girl easily, or thats what he repeatedly told himself while swooping down with demonic speed.
Miko energy is kind of like electricity, stored in batteries, and is more powerful and precise when conducted, then shot straight out of the hosts body. (not that she has batteries in her, its just like a...metaphor or some word like that..) Kagome knew this but felt like showing off a bit. Even though she had her eyes closed she could have sensed this demons direct location from at least a mile away, plus even if she couldnt sense him; she could hear the loud beating of wings and feel the wind on her face.
'She's dead now.'Thought the foolish bird triumphantly as he was out of kicking range about to hit her fulll force with ten glinting claws, he knew his mistaken as Kagome's eye shot open and a single large pink bolt -kind of like lightening- flowed from her whole body hitting the bird square in the chest sending it flying backward threw a few branches and a tree out of sight.
After the crashing of trees had stopped silence was the only thing heard, Kagome looked around, most of the trainees were gathered at the entrance to the main buildings wide eyed not to mention the "sumo" guy still on his belly looking at Kagome like she was an alien. "umm, ya so about the dream...what do you make of it?"she inquired uncomfortably trying to break the silence.
"First of all child don't show off your power like that, it is not a toy, Second, Kagome, not all dreams are real even if thou art a (I feel all medievel saying thou art ) miko. But the event ye have seen actually might be what another is 'planning' to do and does not want it to get out; prayhaps another's dream, both of these are shaky and uncertain which would be why ye couldn't keep memory of them. Lastly girl", she indicated to the sky where the crow man from before was speeding off towards the south, "Ye did not complete the task so we must start our pain training."
"But....But...I..I.Aah," 'Damn it didnt touch the ground out of the ring...that would technically be a tie but....AHHH I said that I would defeat both...tricky old woman...' thought kagome with a frown as they pushed threw the thinning crowd into one of the meditaion rooms with a stone instead of wood floor so that the blood stains that were there already were hardly noticed. Fun!! was Kagome last thought before she committed herself to know every syllable of the directions on how not to feel the pain of the knife.
so wut u think i tried to do some good fight scenes in there but Should I keep trying or do you think I am useless and should keep to just plain writing? review!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! luv yall im out cold im tired
your writer xela