ok, so, heres the 5th chapter, sorry it took me so long to update, but as you probably know, i'm bloody lazy and i also couldn't think of what to do, but then i decided to make it go like this, so please, read on.....


It was true, Paris wanted to meet this Helen of Sparta. She had heard stories of her beauty, but never thought that anyone could be as beautiful as they said in the stories.

It was only about an hour after the welcoming feast, and already, Paris had begun to roam around the palace in search of Helen's room. He had finally found it after going in circles for half an hour. He knocked and her her sweet, syrupy voice, "who is it?". "It the Paris, Prince of Troy", he had said, with his deep, round voice. Paris was very nervous, but what he didn't know was that Helen was getting ready to leave her room to find Paris right when he had knocked. Helen thought that Paris as much more handsome that her husband and Paris' older brother, Hector, by far.

Paris walked in, and saw Helen, and before he knew it, she had thrown herself at him. Paris then realized that the stories of Helen's kind and modestness was false, even though the stories of her beauty were true. He pushed her off and backed away, heading for the door. "What is wrong? I thought you liked me? Why else would you come to my room. I know that I like you". Paris just glared at her, and he walked out and slammed the door behind him.

Paris thought to himself, 'Helen is not as great as the stories, she may put on a front in front of the guests, but she really isn't as great as everyone says.' Paris should have known that no one could have been that perfect. He had learned that hard lesson as a child when he was very young. 'Why would things change now?' He knew that people only showed their true colors once in a while, and thank god for him, Helen had showed hers before he had done anything that he would have regretted.


omg, that was soo weird. what a strange chapter, and pretty short, then again all my chapters are pretty short. so, like, i hope everyone likes it, and there might be a new character coming up........based on someone i know.....................and maybe a love triangle.........but you'll just have to wait and see, lol.

Thanks for all of the reviews! and yes, i know, it kinda bounces and doesn't make sense sometimes, but thats how i write, i can't keep my mind on one thing, or one idea, caue then i think it gets kinda boring, so ya, i'll probably start writing my 6th chapter right after i'm done writing and saving this one, so that one will come sooner, and, as you've probably guessed, there proably isn't going to be a war, lol, so there will be peace, but you never know............;)