ok, so heres chapter 7, its kinda weird, and it rushes, but thats just how i write and thats just how i am, so you can't really change tha, but hope you like it, and remember that things aren't alwayz what they seem
Annetta just stared at the man named Achilles. He took her hand and kissed it. He had a firm grip, but it didn't hurt. Annetta gave him a small curtsy.
"How about the three of us spend the day together? We can get to know each other better, and you and I can catch up. Is that okay with you Annetta? Achilles?"
They both nodded. The three of them went out into the garden. They talked and had a few good laughs. They were at ease with each other quite quickly. Annetta realized that Achilles was a good man, and she didn't have to say that about Paris, she already knew. By lunch time, they had become the best of friends.
Annetta had realized that she had completely forgotten about her duties for that day, but it didn't matter because she knew that Paris would help her out if she got into any trouble. She knew that she would die for Paris. She didn't know what she thought about Achilles. She certainly liked him, but did she love him?
'Of course not, how could I love a man I've only met a few hours ago!' she thought to herself. She decided that she only had eyes for Paris, the man she had known for most of her life, whether it was up close or far away.
During their day, Annetta had learned a lot about Achilles, and she learned some new things about Paris. It was quite interesting. Finally, the sun went down, and Achilles went to the beach, for he preferred to sleep there. Paris walked Annetta to her room. On the way they talked about their childhood memories. They had lots of laughs. When they arrived at Annetta's door, Paris turned towards her.
"Annetta, I have to tell you something..." "What is it?" "Well, I, uh......goodnight." "Goodnight Paris." With that, Annetta opened her door and started to walk in. "Uh, Annetta, do you want to hang out with me and Achilles tomorrow again?" "Of course!" Annetta thought she might've been a little too excited when she said this, but Paris looked genuinely happy at this. Annetta walked in to her room and closed the door behind her after giving Paris a smile. She changed into her night gown and she lied down on top of the covers. She wondered what Paris had tried to say to her, because it obviously wasn't goodnight. She decided to ask him about it tomorrow.
That night, she had a very sweet dream about her Paris...so, how did you like it? lol, pleas review, no flames!