Responses-
Midnight Flame- Thank you! I hope you can tell more from this chapter!
Kevin Luver- I know you don't like this kind of story's. If you don't want to, don't read it. It's ok with me.
Me- It was so sad when Johnny died! *tear* glad you like it! Here- read this update!
Bunny-luver- lol sounds like we have a lot in common. :D I'm glad you liked the beginning! Hopefully you'll like the rest too!
***A/N- Ok, first off, this chapter is dedicated to Midnight Flame, for being my first reviewer. Thank you so much! Second, I always put your name on my list of people-who-put-me-on-their-favorites-list if you review. So, here's the list:
bunny-luver
Hopefully this list gets longer soon! Hehe. This is my first POTC fic, and from what I've read, POTC reviewers are more loyal than LOTR. (That's what I also write) Please prove me right! Ok, so, in reviews, please give me reason's to dedicate chapters to you, and if you review, I can add you to the list. So, without any further interruptions, here's chapter 2!
~*Chapter 2- Twice Interrupted*~
~*One month after the movie*~
~*Elizabeth POV*~
"Are you sure this is what you want to do, Elizabeth?" my father asked me. "I mean, you could get someone better. Someone who has enough money to give you what you wanted in life." I was getting ready for a night on the town with Will.
"Yes, father. I'm sure. Will and I love each other, and that's all that matters. Besides, it's not like he's proposed yet, or anything. It's just a night out."
"Yes, but a night out can lead to anything. Marriage being high up on the list."
"Father, I would tell you if Will proposed to me. He would have to ask you first, anyway. It's the proper way, and Will knows it."
He sighed. "Yes, yes I know. But it still worries me. Will you promise to stay on the higher-class side of Port Royal?"
"Of course, father, that was our plan anyway. Dinner and a stroll on the beach."
"Good, good. Well, I will leave you to finish up. You should hurry though, Mr. Turner should be here soon."
"All right father, I'll see you down stairs."
He left the room and I sighed. I hoped Will would propose soon. I was sick of waiting. Unknown to anyone else, I had practiced writing my name as Elizabeth Turner at night, just to know what it would feel like. It looked so lovely; I couldn't wait to sign everything like that. I heard a knock on the door and father answering it. I quickly checked over my appearance in the mirror, and walked out of my room. Slowly, down to the stairs.
"Ah, Elizabeth. Look who's here."
It was not Will, it was Gavin.
"Elizabeth, you look lovely," he said. I continued down the stairs. When I reached the bottom, he kissed my hand. "May I have the honor of taking you out on the town tonight? I have just gotten back from a long journey and would like to relax for a night."
"She would be glad to," my father said, before I could get out of the door.
"But father!"
"Elizabeth, you should go with Gavin. Don't worry about a thing."
There was then a knock on the door, and father answered it.
"Greetings, Governor Swann."
"Good evening, William."
"Elizabeth," he said, coming over and kissing my hand, just as Gavin had done only seconds before. "Are you ready for our evening together?"
"Um, William," my father interrupted. "This is Gavin. He has asked for Elizabeth's company tonight as well. Perhaps you could come back tomorrow, and Elizabeth could go with Gavin."
"Don't be silly, governor," Gavin said. "William and Elizabeth already have plans for tonight, who am I to ruin them."
"Thank you, Gavin," I said. "That is very gentlemanly of you."
"Perhaps, Gavin," my father again interrupted. "You and Elizabeth may go out together tomorrow night. What do you say?"
"That sounds great to me, governor."
"All right then," my father said, clasping his hands together. "We will see you tomorrow, Gavin."
"Good bye, Governor Swann, Elizabeth, William."
"Will, please."
"Will."
Gavin turned and left, walking with a stiff back and his head held high.
"Shall we leave, Elizabeth?" Will asked, offering me his arm.
"Now is as good as any time. Good night, father."
"Good night."
I took Will's arm and we left, heading for our favorite restaurant, 'Silver Stars.'
"Who was that?" Will asked me.
"Oh, nobody, just a family friend."
"A family friend who wanted to go out with you tonight?"
"Well, he was the family's friend, but he used to be going with me."
"So, he used to be where I am now?"
"Yes, but it was so different. Will, he can't compare to you."
"Well, not many can," he said laughing.
"Oh, Will!" I was laughing too. "It is true though. There is no one else like you."
"Thank you. And there is no one like you either. You're one in a million."
"If it was not considered improper, I would kiss you right now."
"The same goes for me, too."
By that time, we had arrived at 'Silver Stars'.
We went in and sat down at a small table in the back. Our order was taken, and we settled down to talk. Like most times we talked, the subject of our adventure with Jack and the Black Pearl came up. Like most times we talked, more detail was added to what had been said before.
"Please excuse me," Will interrupted at one point. "I will be right back." He stood up and turned to the restrooms, in the back.
"Excuse me, miss, but I couldn't help over hearing. You were talking about Jack Sparrow, were you not?" It was one of the waitresses.
"Yes, Captain Jack Sparrow."
"He's a fine man. Had the honor of getting to know him over dinner one night."
"Jack came to town? When was this?"
"Oh no, miss. I met him in Tortuga, I've just moved back from there."
"Oh, you poor thing. How dreadful, living in Tortuga. We're you, you know."
"Oh no, not me. But I saw enough of it to scare me back here. I had only moved there because I got paid more to be a waitress there, than I did here. When I moved back, I found this lovely little joint, and here I am."
"Well, that's quite a story."
"Cathy?" It was Will having returned from the bathroom.
"Will? William Turner? Is it really you? Oh, I can't believe this! Of all the restaurants in Port Royal! I never expected to see you here, being in the richer class area. Come to think of it, why are you here?"
"Cathy, may I introduce you to my date this evening, Elizabeth Swann."
"Hello, Cathy."
"Your date?" Cathy asked, with scorn in her voice. "But Will, what about us? Don't you remember?"
"Yes, Cathy, I remember. And I have moved on. Please do not hate me for doing so."
"Hate you? I could never hate you, Will. I still love you." With that, she turned around, and marched back to the kitchen.
"Elizabeth, would you mind terribly if we left?"
"Not at all."
We left the restaurant and headed for the beach. This part of our date could not be ruined.
***A/N- there you go! Another chapter! I really hope you liked it! Well, I've got to go to dinner. Later Dayz!
-TKF
Midnight Flame- Thank you! I hope you can tell more from this chapter!
Kevin Luver- I know you don't like this kind of story's. If you don't want to, don't read it. It's ok with me.
Me- It was so sad when Johnny died! *tear* glad you like it! Here- read this update!
Bunny-luver- lol sounds like we have a lot in common. :D I'm glad you liked the beginning! Hopefully you'll like the rest too!
***A/N- Ok, first off, this chapter is dedicated to Midnight Flame, for being my first reviewer. Thank you so much! Second, I always put your name on my list of people-who-put-me-on-their-favorites-list if you review. So, here's the list:
bunny-luver
Hopefully this list gets longer soon! Hehe. This is my first POTC fic, and from what I've read, POTC reviewers are more loyal than LOTR. (That's what I also write) Please prove me right! Ok, so, in reviews, please give me reason's to dedicate chapters to you, and if you review, I can add you to the list. So, without any further interruptions, here's chapter 2!
~*Chapter 2- Twice Interrupted*~
~*One month after the movie*~
~*Elizabeth POV*~
"Are you sure this is what you want to do, Elizabeth?" my father asked me. "I mean, you could get someone better. Someone who has enough money to give you what you wanted in life." I was getting ready for a night on the town with Will.
"Yes, father. I'm sure. Will and I love each other, and that's all that matters. Besides, it's not like he's proposed yet, or anything. It's just a night out."
"Yes, but a night out can lead to anything. Marriage being high up on the list."
"Father, I would tell you if Will proposed to me. He would have to ask you first, anyway. It's the proper way, and Will knows it."
He sighed. "Yes, yes I know. But it still worries me. Will you promise to stay on the higher-class side of Port Royal?"
"Of course, father, that was our plan anyway. Dinner and a stroll on the beach."
"Good, good. Well, I will leave you to finish up. You should hurry though, Mr. Turner should be here soon."
"All right father, I'll see you down stairs."
He left the room and I sighed. I hoped Will would propose soon. I was sick of waiting. Unknown to anyone else, I had practiced writing my name as Elizabeth Turner at night, just to know what it would feel like. It looked so lovely; I couldn't wait to sign everything like that. I heard a knock on the door and father answering it. I quickly checked over my appearance in the mirror, and walked out of my room. Slowly, down to the stairs.
"Ah, Elizabeth. Look who's here."
It was not Will, it was Gavin.
"Elizabeth, you look lovely," he said. I continued down the stairs. When I reached the bottom, he kissed my hand. "May I have the honor of taking you out on the town tonight? I have just gotten back from a long journey and would like to relax for a night."
"She would be glad to," my father said, before I could get out of the door.
"But father!"
"Elizabeth, you should go with Gavin. Don't worry about a thing."
There was then a knock on the door, and father answered it.
"Greetings, Governor Swann."
"Good evening, William."
"Elizabeth," he said, coming over and kissing my hand, just as Gavin had done only seconds before. "Are you ready for our evening together?"
"Um, William," my father interrupted. "This is Gavin. He has asked for Elizabeth's company tonight as well. Perhaps you could come back tomorrow, and Elizabeth could go with Gavin."
"Don't be silly, governor," Gavin said. "William and Elizabeth already have plans for tonight, who am I to ruin them."
"Thank you, Gavin," I said. "That is very gentlemanly of you."
"Perhaps, Gavin," my father again interrupted. "You and Elizabeth may go out together tomorrow night. What do you say?"
"That sounds great to me, governor."
"All right then," my father said, clasping his hands together. "We will see you tomorrow, Gavin."
"Good bye, Governor Swann, Elizabeth, William."
"Will, please."
"Will."
Gavin turned and left, walking with a stiff back and his head held high.
"Shall we leave, Elizabeth?" Will asked, offering me his arm.
"Now is as good as any time. Good night, father."
"Good night."
I took Will's arm and we left, heading for our favorite restaurant, 'Silver Stars.'
"Who was that?" Will asked me.
"Oh, nobody, just a family friend."
"A family friend who wanted to go out with you tonight?"
"Well, he was the family's friend, but he used to be going with me."
"So, he used to be where I am now?"
"Yes, but it was so different. Will, he can't compare to you."
"Well, not many can," he said laughing.
"Oh, Will!" I was laughing too. "It is true though. There is no one else like you."
"Thank you. And there is no one like you either. You're one in a million."
"If it was not considered improper, I would kiss you right now."
"The same goes for me, too."
By that time, we had arrived at 'Silver Stars'.
We went in and sat down at a small table in the back. Our order was taken, and we settled down to talk. Like most times we talked, the subject of our adventure with Jack and the Black Pearl came up. Like most times we talked, more detail was added to what had been said before.
"Please excuse me," Will interrupted at one point. "I will be right back." He stood up and turned to the restrooms, in the back.
"Excuse me, miss, but I couldn't help over hearing. You were talking about Jack Sparrow, were you not?" It was one of the waitresses.
"Yes, Captain Jack Sparrow."
"He's a fine man. Had the honor of getting to know him over dinner one night."
"Jack came to town? When was this?"
"Oh no, miss. I met him in Tortuga, I've just moved back from there."
"Oh, you poor thing. How dreadful, living in Tortuga. We're you, you know."
"Oh no, not me. But I saw enough of it to scare me back here. I had only moved there because I got paid more to be a waitress there, than I did here. When I moved back, I found this lovely little joint, and here I am."
"Well, that's quite a story."
"Cathy?" It was Will having returned from the bathroom.
"Will? William Turner? Is it really you? Oh, I can't believe this! Of all the restaurants in Port Royal! I never expected to see you here, being in the richer class area. Come to think of it, why are you here?"
"Cathy, may I introduce you to my date this evening, Elizabeth Swann."
"Hello, Cathy."
"Your date?" Cathy asked, with scorn in her voice. "But Will, what about us? Don't you remember?"
"Yes, Cathy, I remember. And I have moved on. Please do not hate me for doing so."
"Hate you? I could never hate you, Will. I still love you." With that, she turned around, and marched back to the kitchen.
"Elizabeth, would you mind terribly if we left?"
"Not at all."
We left the restaurant and headed for the beach. This part of our date could not be ruined.
***A/N- there you go! Another chapter! I really hope you liked it! Well, I've got to go to dinner. Later Dayz!
-TKF