Mou Hitori no Boku: True Darkness
Catch-ups
Look, this isn't a chapter, more of an explanation. You know, this is the second fic I've written where someone's told me they don't quite get it? *sigh* I'll be uploading a chapter at the same time as this though. Here's a bit of explaining.
Well, the review was about the last chapter so...
Yugiou was ahead of the group to start with. Presumably, he failed the first two tests, therefore not getting the items from the first two Realms. However, he did pass the Necklace realm's test, and skipped ahead to the Fourth Realm (Eye, by the way.) That's when Yami, Yugi and the others ended up in the Third realm.
They discovered that Yugiou had beaten them to the Necklace, but the Realm Guardian, Amiy, made them stay the night with her. The group were concerned about Yugiou passing too many of the tests, but Amiy told them that the next Guardian would be asleep, so no tests can be done at night, therefore, Yugiou could get no further.
Now, a bit more complicated.
If Yami, as Master of the Shadow Realm locks something away from himself, in this case, Yugiou, it ends up in a dark little bit of the Shadow Realm. A bit like a prison. That way it doesn't clutter up his Soul Room (that place is dangerous enough already) and it's harder for it to escape (hence the seven triggers that can release Yugiou from the prison). However, throughout the Seven Realms, Yugiou can appear without a trigger (I'm not sure why. Makes the story better). But, as Yugiou can't do anything at night in the Seven Realms, he simply decided to return to the shadow prison to rest. Obviously, he didn't get much of it, because the prison is influenced by Yami's emotion. The happier he is, the brighter it becomes.
I think that clears things up!
Oh, and of course, the special mention for the two people who figured out the Guardians' names! They're all anagrams of the word 'Yami'. Imay, Maiy, Amiy... the next one's Yima. *claps* Little virtual Yugi and Yami plushies for you! *skips about handing out plushies*
Catch-ups
Look, this isn't a chapter, more of an explanation. You know, this is the second fic I've written where someone's told me they don't quite get it? *sigh* I'll be uploading a chapter at the same time as this though. Here's a bit of explaining.
Well, the review was about the last chapter so...
Yugiou was ahead of the group to start with. Presumably, he failed the first two tests, therefore not getting the items from the first two Realms. However, he did pass the Necklace realm's test, and skipped ahead to the Fourth Realm (Eye, by the way.) That's when Yami, Yugi and the others ended up in the Third realm.
They discovered that Yugiou had beaten them to the Necklace, but the Realm Guardian, Amiy, made them stay the night with her. The group were concerned about Yugiou passing too many of the tests, but Amiy told them that the next Guardian would be asleep, so no tests can be done at night, therefore, Yugiou could get no further.
Now, a bit more complicated.
If Yami, as Master of the Shadow Realm locks something away from himself, in this case, Yugiou, it ends up in a dark little bit of the Shadow Realm. A bit like a prison. That way it doesn't clutter up his Soul Room (that place is dangerous enough already) and it's harder for it to escape (hence the seven triggers that can release Yugiou from the prison). However, throughout the Seven Realms, Yugiou can appear without a trigger (I'm not sure why. Makes the story better). But, as Yugiou can't do anything at night in the Seven Realms, he simply decided to return to the shadow prison to rest. Obviously, he didn't get much of it, because the prison is influenced by Yami's emotion. The happier he is, the brighter it becomes.
I think that clears things up!
Oh, and of course, the special mention for the two people who figured out the Guardians' names! They're all anagrams of the word 'Yami'. Imay, Maiy, Amiy... the next one's Yima. *claps* Little virtual Yugi and Yami plushies for you! *skips about handing out plushies*