Hi everybody! Here's chapter 5, probably the last chapter for a while,
cause I'm going on vacation!! I'll be writing there, so when I'm back,there
will be a new chapter, I hope. And please let me know what you think of the
chapter!
Chapter 5
Jay was going to the Mall, he wanted to talk with Ebony. When he got there, the fences were closed. It was quite in the Mall, it looked like nobody was around.
"Is anybody here?"He called. No answer.
"Hello?" He tried again. This time Mouse walked up to the fences.
"Hello Mouse, where are the others?" "Upstairs..." She answered.
"Great, can you open these fences?" Mouse shaked her head, and said: "Salene said not to open for any Techno." "Come on Mouse, you know me." Mouse didn't listen. "Well, will you at least get Salene?" And she did.
After a few minutes Salene walked down the stairs. "What's all this?" Jay asked looking at the fences. "We can't be too carefull, why didn't you stop Ram?" Salene asked.
For a while, Jay didn't know what to say. "Do you have nothing to say for yourself?" "I'm sorry OK? If I found out sooner, I would have stopped him. Is Ebony here?" "No I guess she's at the hotel."
Apparantly Mouse told the others, cause they all walked down the stairs. "Hi Amber, Hi everyone!" Jay said. "Jack? Open the fences." Amber said. Jay walked in the Mall, and Amber took him to the cafe, so they could talk.
Jamie walked around the city. "Jay would probably be at the Mall." She thought. She was worried about Ram's plan for her, with him you never know. He might delete her. Or he would let the kids on CityNet decide what to do with her. Her thoughts were disturbed by screaming voices on the streets. There was a fight going on.
"Hey!" She tried to get everybody listening. "Listen to me......SHUT UP!!" She yelled. "What's going on?" Everybody was quite and stopped fighting. The reason for that was probably because Jay was standing behind her, holding his watch. Jamie looked satisfied, untill she heard Jay's voice: "You heard the girl, speak up!" "Ram, I'm telling you, you've got to do something about those fights!"Jamie said.
"I don't think you're in a position to tell me what to do!"
"I think she's right, Ram. There's no benefit in it for us. They get hurt and we have to give medicins." Mega said.
"Yeah, I think you've got a point." Ram admitted.
While Ram and Mega were talking, Jamie's eyes were focussed on a computer screen. She saw a girl coming towards the hotel. She knew her, it was a Mallrat. She walked out of the room. On her way to the entrance she met Java. "And where do you think you're going?" She asked.
"Non of your business, and where are you going?"
"Oh, I'm just going to discuss your punishment with Ram." She said smiling. Jamie made a fake smile and walked away.
"Why am I still with these people? No one appreciates me around here. And I've only joined this Tribe 3 weeks ago!" She thought.
When she got to the entrance, Cloe was hold back by some guards. "It's ok, you can leave." Jamie said.
"Ehmm, is Ved here?"
"No, you're one of the Mallrats right?" Cloe nodded.
"And you're Jamie right? The girl who saved us?"
"Yup. Well, I'll tell Ved you're looking for him when I see him."
"Do you really have to go?" Pride asked Amber.
"Yes, the Ecotribe needs us." Pride nodded.
"We'll be alright." Lex said.
"Of course you'll be Lex." Trudy laughed. Amber and Trudy took their baby's and said goodbye. They wanted to leave, when Cloe ran in crying. "Cloe what's wrong?" Dee asked.
"Ved broke up with me!" She said tearful.
This whas it for now. Please review, so I know if I should keep writing this story. Cause I've got some good ideas.
Chapter 5
Jay was going to the Mall, he wanted to talk with Ebony. When he got there, the fences were closed. It was quite in the Mall, it looked like nobody was around.
"Is anybody here?"He called. No answer.
"Hello?" He tried again. This time Mouse walked up to the fences.
"Hello Mouse, where are the others?" "Upstairs..." She answered.
"Great, can you open these fences?" Mouse shaked her head, and said: "Salene said not to open for any Techno." "Come on Mouse, you know me." Mouse didn't listen. "Well, will you at least get Salene?" And she did.
After a few minutes Salene walked down the stairs. "What's all this?" Jay asked looking at the fences. "We can't be too carefull, why didn't you stop Ram?" Salene asked.
For a while, Jay didn't know what to say. "Do you have nothing to say for yourself?" "I'm sorry OK? If I found out sooner, I would have stopped him. Is Ebony here?" "No I guess she's at the hotel."
Apparantly Mouse told the others, cause they all walked down the stairs. "Hi Amber, Hi everyone!" Jay said. "Jack? Open the fences." Amber said. Jay walked in the Mall, and Amber took him to the cafe, so they could talk.
Jamie walked around the city. "Jay would probably be at the Mall." She thought. She was worried about Ram's plan for her, with him you never know. He might delete her. Or he would let the kids on CityNet decide what to do with her. Her thoughts were disturbed by screaming voices on the streets. There was a fight going on.
"Hey!" She tried to get everybody listening. "Listen to me......SHUT UP!!" She yelled. "What's going on?" Everybody was quite and stopped fighting. The reason for that was probably because Jay was standing behind her, holding his watch. Jamie looked satisfied, untill she heard Jay's voice: "You heard the girl, speak up!" "Ram, I'm telling you, you've got to do something about those fights!"Jamie said.
"I don't think you're in a position to tell me what to do!"
"I think she's right, Ram. There's no benefit in it for us. They get hurt and we have to give medicins." Mega said.
"Yeah, I think you've got a point." Ram admitted.
While Ram and Mega were talking, Jamie's eyes were focussed on a computer screen. She saw a girl coming towards the hotel. She knew her, it was a Mallrat. She walked out of the room. On her way to the entrance she met Java. "And where do you think you're going?" She asked.
"Non of your business, and where are you going?"
"Oh, I'm just going to discuss your punishment with Ram." She said smiling. Jamie made a fake smile and walked away.
"Why am I still with these people? No one appreciates me around here. And I've only joined this Tribe 3 weeks ago!" She thought.
When she got to the entrance, Cloe was hold back by some guards. "It's ok, you can leave." Jamie said.
"Ehmm, is Ved here?"
"No, you're one of the Mallrats right?" Cloe nodded.
"And you're Jamie right? The girl who saved us?"
"Yup. Well, I'll tell Ved you're looking for him when I see him."
"Do you really have to go?" Pride asked Amber.
"Yes, the Ecotribe needs us." Pride nodded.
"We'll be alright." Lex said.
"Of course you'll be Lex." Trudy laughed. Amber and Trudy took their baby's and said goodbye. They wanted to leave, when Cloe ran in crying. "Cloe what's wrong?" Dee asked.
"Ved broke up with me!" She said tearful.
This whas it for now. Please review, so I know if I should keep writing this story. Cause I've got some good ideas.