Are You My Brother?
AN: This is not a mary-sue. Nevertheless, believe what you want.
TO: Anonymous- HOW long did it take you to find all my mistakes? FYI I use spell check but my spell check changes words that are spelled wrong, it might not be the right word though, as for the punctuation my grammar check doesn't catch it, and I don't do good at spelling or punctuation, but I'm in Honors English so I must be doing something correct. However, thank-you anyway. (When I get time I'll correct some mistakes)
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After the pirate raid, no one seemed to notice that Star was gone yet, with the exception of Kea Jack and Caspian, Will and Elizabeth were talking.
"It was so frightening Will… It really was." Elizabeth said to Will as they sat there talking.
"I thought they had come for revenge or something… I was so scared something would happen to you…" Will said as he grabbed Elizabeth's hand.
"I was thinking I might never see you again either. I hope… Oh never mind." Said Elizabeth with a 'touch' of regret in her voice.
"Elizabeth will… Would you consent to being… My well… Will you marry me?" Will managed to ask before he got tong tided any worse.
"YES. Yes Will yes. You don't know how long I have waited to hear you say that." Elizabeth said before running around the table to kiss Will.
"I WANT YOU TO GET A CREW TOGETHER NOW TO FIND MISS. SWAN." Shouted Commodore Caspian running around on the docks giving orders. I guess somebody had noticed that Star was gone. "Piper were going to take the SS. Fuzzy."
"All right sir. THE SS. FUZZY GENTS. There you go sir, you can get on board now." Said piper and then he walked away shouting orders like 'Extra guns' 'Extra food' 'Get to work' and such.
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A.N. Should I end it here… OF CORSE NOT.
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"Bad girl Star." Conner said as he grabbed the blade of her sword and twisted it violently out of her thin hands. 'SLAP' Star had smacked him right across the fact leaving a blood red hand print and little scratches that started bleeding almost immediately. "You have the right attitude to make life on this ship fun. I might actually let you live."
"You will don't worry about that. Or I might have to kill you first." Said Star in an amused tone, and the both smirked.
"Gents put Star to work, she will be tending the animals, and I suggest you not get in a fight with he or you'll end up dead." Conner said and star was whisk away to the animals.
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"All right my lady you'll be tending to the animals. The spider food is over there-." The old caretaker was saying before being cut off.
"I'm afraid of spiders…" Star said abruptly, shivering at the thought of touching one of those, those things.
"Fine then Jessie will take care of them." He said and proceed to show Star White Tigers, hawks, dogs, and even some horses, and where there food was.
After he left Star fed the tigers and hawks, according to her schedule the doge didn't get fed till an hour later, 'I wonder why there fed so late at night?' thought Star as she watched Jessie feeding a rather large spider and shivered 'Spider ewe'.
"Star I'm suppose to take ye to where ye will be sleeping." Said Jessie and even though he was very dirty, sea salt and dirt in his hair, on his face, and cloths, his deep brown hair and puppy dog eyes made him look adorable. 'Perfect for Kea.' Thought Star as he led her to her room.
Stars room wasn't much, whitewashed walls a closet, mirror, and a trunk filled with some plain sea blue dresses and normal sailor cloths, and a bed with deep blue bed sheets. 'Guess this is home' She thought as she got into bet with her cloths on.
Elizabeth was glad she was marring Will and her little sister wasn't. She smiled at the thought that her little sister wouldn't be at her weeding, she after all had been kidnapped by pirates, after the weeding Will and Jack were going to look for her but shed be dead by then ' Oh well I never liked her any way.' Thought Elizabeth as she walked down a little alleyway to a figure who was dressed in all black and had t shat covered his face, also he was standing in a corner in the shadows.
"Thought ye wert goanna show luv," The man said in a Jack Sparrow kind of way (Jack Offstage: CAPTIN YOU DOLT FOR A WRITER. Me Eerie voice from above: WATCH IT SPARROW I HOLD YOUR LIFE IN MY HANDS.) then pushed Elizabeth up against a wall and began to make-out with her "come on let's continue this in a more private place…" and with that, they walked off together…
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"James!" Said a boy with a calico cat and a piccolo (remember them?") as he ran towards the other boy stopping in front of him and shaking his hand, they were at the port in Tortuga by the way.
"Hey big bro how are you." Asked James after they had shook hands and he had petted the cat.
"Fine, but have you herd Will Turners bride to be is cheating on him. Poor Will and our little Star loved him all along and wouldn't have cheated on him… Oh well a bad choice on his part though." Said the boy as the sun came up behind them and the cat stretched it's self out on the cool stone walkway.
"No, did you look in your crystal?" asked James wanting to know where his bother got this information on Star's sister.
"Yes, how else do you think I got that information?" He said as they and the cat walked off towards the town…
"Conner what's the name of this ship?" Asked Star as she walked up to him as he was steering the boat, after a full nights sleep and feeding the animals, and getting something herself, she was curious to know what went on the ship and what it's name was.
"Why do you want to know?" Asked Conner looking over at her with humor in his eyes, 'What do he find so funny. If he's laughing at me I'm going to hurt him.'
"What do you find so funny?!" Star demanded of him crossed her arms and tapped her foot like she was angry.
"I asked my question first." Conner said trying to make Star angry but Star didn't fall for it.
"Yes but I asked mine second and I'm a lady." Star plainly replied to his statement trying to annoy him… It didn't work.
"Yes well, I'm smarter than you are anyways, answer my question." Conner stated thinking this would really get to her…
"You're not smarter than me. If you were you wouldn't use tricks that I use on my sister to try to make me mad." Star said laughing at Conner for using childish tricks on her.
"Laugh now. The name of this ship is Chocolate. Ok? Now might I suggest you go get out of your good dress your going to be scrubbing the decks, until time to tend to the animals again." Said Conner, receiving a scowl from Star, then she turned to go put something on to scrub the decks in.
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CRASH
"WHATCH WHERE YOU-… Jack Sparrow?" Said Kea after he had crashed head on into her and made her drop the spices she had been toting.
"Captain Jack Sparrow to you luv." Jack said as he bent down to get her spices and noticed she was a maid, jugging from her clothing. (AN: How very un Jack like…)
"You're not my captain I'm not your LOVE, pronounce it right, and thank you for picking up my spices." Kea said very fast to Jack confusing him for a second.
"Err… Your welcome I think…" Jack said after a second or two, 'This girls crazy.' He thought.
"Yes well I best be going." Kea said and grabbed her spices out of his hands and walked away at a very fast pace.
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"I hate scrubbing decks. I hate it. I hate it. Hate it. Hate it. Hare it. Hate. Hate. Hate. Hate…" Said Star scrubbing the decks (AN: duh.) when her sponge slipped and she, once again, hit the deck with her face.
"Nice way to clean the deck Star. You missed a spot." Said Conner as she pulled her face off from the deck, Star glared at him and threw her sponge at him, which hit him precisely on the nose.
"Shut up you no good, lazy, evil, make me scrub the deck, underweight jerk with an attitude problem." Muttered Star loud enough for him to hear, making him smirk in anger.
He reached down, grabbed her by the back of her neck, and pulled her up like a mother cat would do to her kittens.
"Listen you little brat, I am in charge of this ship not you and you will do what I say." He said right into her face making her, being very short-tempered, mad.
"Look you stupid dolt I am NOT scared of you I will never be. I can hurt you more than you can hurt me, don't even dream of threatening ME. It won't work NO matter what you say or do." Said Star glaring back at him if looks could kill, he would be dead… Conner threw her down and she skidded to the other side of the ship, on her well-polished floor.
"I don't think you have the whole picture, you see I don't need you at all. I could kill you, take your necklace, bring them back and let them kill the ones who killed them first. Your just an itty-bitty piece of this puzzle, and it can form a picture without you, but I will let you live. For now. Just don't get in my way…" Conner said as her turned to walk away.
"I'm a bigger piece than you think, you just don't realize it yet… Are… Are you my brother?" Star asked, Conner turned around and looked at her with wide surprised eyes, Star stared back at him with curiosity to know the truth.
"Where did that come from I was taking about killing you and you ask me that." Conner said trying to ignore the question.
"Answer the question." Star demanded.
AN: I don't think this chapter was that good… OH WELL.