Well, I'm back with chapter 6! And I still only have 6 reviews!!!
(that's basically a review per chapter!) I am not posting the next chapter
till I have at least 10 reviews!!! So please, please, please review!!!!!
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Inuyasha147: I'm free of the straight jackets!! (for now at least) I miss my cushiony yellow room with the fuzzy pink ducky!
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Cristina: Here's the Sango/Miroku semi-fluff!
Disclaimer: I OWN IT ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!! MWAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! *is dragged off by asylum people* Come on, I'm not intelligent to come up w/ Inuyasha!! I just own this fic!
Whom Do You Love, Who Will You Choose
By: Gretchen
Chapter 6: Worries
Sango and Miroku sat in the forest, after leaving Kaede with some of the other village elders. Sango was waxing hirakotsu (A/N: I know, I probably spelled that wrong, but bear with me!) a clear sign to Miroku to stay away and control his wandering hands. He sat a safe distance away, leaning against a tree-trunk with his eyes half-closed, thinking.
"Sango," He said suddenly, "Do you really think we could ever catch Naraku?"
His voice startled her; it was completely devoid of hope. He was staring at his hand while he said this, and she knew that he was wondering if he would ever have anything to look forward to other than being eventually being sucked into his own hand.
"Of course we'll catch Naraku," She said, "We have to, he's caused us all too much pain to not be caught. And then he will pay!" She clenched her fists and imagined beating Naraku into a bloody pulp.
"Hey, Sango, could you please let go of my arm?" Sango realized that she had been squeezing Miroku's arm, and his fingers were swiftly turning a bluish-purple color. She let go and blushed a deep red.
"So, what do you think is up with Inuyasha and Kagome?" Sango was desperately trying to change the subject.
"Well, Inuyasha is obviously being much nicer to Kagome than usual. And they DID spend all night in the forest." Miroku was interrupted suddenly when a giant boomerang smashed into his head.
He rubbed the growing lump on his head and glanced at Sango. "What was that for?" She glared at him and crossed her arms over her chest.
"If you can't even figure out what you did, then I'm not going to tell you." She grabbed her boomerang and went back to polishing it. Miroku went back to leaning against a tree and brooding about being eventually sucked into his hand.
"Sango, I'm sorry." Sango looked up, startled.
"Sorry about what?"
"I'm sorry for everything. Sorry about being such a letch, and always upsetting you." Sango's eyes widened. Was she really hearing this? She half expected to feel his hand on her butt at any second, but he sat across from her, eyes full of sincerity, and something else, some meaning just beneath the surface that she was missing.
"Do you really mean that?" Sango was still skeptical.
"Of course I do! Do you think I'd lie to you about being sorry?" He scooted slightly closer. Sango saw the slight movement, and gripped her boomerang. Miroku held up his hands to show he wouldn't try anything.
"So back to what we were talking about earlier. You really think we can catch Naraku?" Miroku changed the subject this time. ^_^
"I told you, we WILL beat Naraku, we have to!" I won't let him keep my brother! She added silently, remembering her nightmares of her brother killing her and all her friends.
"Sango, are you alright?" She realized two things simultaneously. First, tears were pouring down her face and she was sobbing uncontrollably, and second, Miroku was holding her comfortingly and NOT being a letch! (A/N: And I just wrote a lovely run-on sentence!!!)
"I w-was just th-thinking about K-Kohaku." Sobbed Sango, "Naraku is controlling him, and made him a killer. He's caused us all so much pain!"
"Yes, he has." Miroku glanced briefly at his hand, and Sango saw the glance.
"Oh Miroku!" She gasped, appalled at herself for being so sorry for herself, "You're really worried about your hand, aren't you." It was more a statement than a question. She grabbed his hand, and smiled.
"Don't worry, if worse comes to worse, I'm sure Inuyasha will cut it off for you." She remarked in a teasing tone of voice. Miroku smiled, and was surprised at how she could make light of his dark situation. He then realized that she was still holding his hand, and his grin widened.
"Sango, I." Miroku pulled her face toward his, actually NOT trying to grope her. Sango didn't resist, and then her eyes suddenly widened. Miroku wondered what he had done this time, but it wasn't him.
"Miroku, look behind you." Miroku jumped up, prepared for an ambush. Instead he saw a small whirlwind, heading toward the village.
"Oh great, it's Kouga."
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YAY!!!!!!! Another chapter finished! MWAHAHAHA! Now Kouga's in the story. Who knows what could happen next? And how will Kouga react when he finds out that Inuyasha took "his woman"? Stick with me for the next chapter, and PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review Replies:
Inuyasha147: I'm free of the straight jackets!! (for now at least) I miss my cushiony yellow room with the fuzzy pink ducky!
Jess: Thank u 4 reviewing again!!! U r my bestest friend!
Cristina: Here's the Sango/Miroku semi-fluff!
Disclaimer: I OWN IT ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!! MWAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! *is dragged off by asylum people* Come on, I'm not intelligent to come up w/ Inuyasha!! I just own this fic!
Whom Do You Love, Who Will You Choose
By: Gretchen
Chapter 6: Worries
Sango and Miroku sat in the forest, after leaving Kaede with some of the other village elders. Sango was waxing hirakotsu (A/N: I know, I probably spelled that wrong, but bear with me!) a clear sign to Miroku to stay away and control his wandering hands. He sat a safe distance away, leaning against a tree-trunk with his eyes half-closed, thinking.
"Sango," He said suddenly, "Do you really think we could ever catch Naraku?"
His voice startled her; it was completely devoid of hope. He was staring at his hand while he said this, and she knew that he was wondering if he would ever have anything to look forward to other than being eventually being sucked into his own hand.
"Of course we'll catch Naraku," She said, "We have to, he's caused us all too much pain to not be caught. And then he will pay!" She clenched her fists and imagined beating Naraku into a bloody pulp.
"Hey, Sango, could you please let go of my arm?" Sango realized that she had been squeezing Miroku's arm, and his fingers were swiftly turning a bluish-purple color. She let go and blushed a deep red.
"So, what do you think is up with Inuyasha and Kagome?" Sango was desperately trying to change the subject.
"Well, Inuyasha is obviously being much nicer to Kagome than usual. And they DID spend all night in the forest." Miroku was interrupted suddenly when a giant boomerang smashed into his head.
He rubbed the growing lump on his head and glanced at Sango. "What was that for?" She glared at him and crossed her arms over her chest.
"If you can't even figure out what you did, then I'm not going to tell you." She grabbed her boomerang and went back to polishing it. Miroku went back to leaning against a tree and brooding about being eventually sucked into his hand.
"Sango, I'm sorry." Sango looked up, startled.
"Sorry about what?"
"I'm sorry for everything. Sorry about being such a letch, and always upsetting you." Sango's eyes widened. Was she really hearing this? She half expected to feel his hand on her butt at any second, but he sat across from her, eyes full of sincerity, and something else, some meaning just beneath the surface that she was missing.
"Do you really mean that?" Sango was still skeptical.
"Of course I do! Do you think I'd lie to you about being sorry?" He scooted slightly closer. Sango saw the slight movement, and gripped her boomerang. Miroku held up his hands to show he wouldn't try anything.
"So back to what we were talking about earlier. You really think we can catch Naraku?" Miroku changed the subject this time. ^_^
"I told you, we WILL beat Naraku, we have to!" I won't let him keep my brother! She added silently, remembering her nightmares of her brother killing her and all her friends.
"Sango, are you alright?" She realized two things simultaneously. First, tears were pouring down her face and she was sobbing uncontrollably, and second, Miroku was holding her comfortingly and NOT being a letch! (A/N: And I just wrote a lovely run-on sentence!!!)
"I w-was just th-thinking about K-Kohaku." Sobbed Sango, "Naraku is controlling him, and made him a killer. He's caused us all so much pain!"
"Yes, he has." Miroku glanced briefly at his hand, and Sango saw the glance.
"Oh Miroku!" She gasped, appalled at herself for being so sorry for herself, "You're really worried about your hand, aren't you." It was more a statement than a question. She grabbed his hand, and smiled.
"Don't worry, if worse comes to worse, I'm sure Inuyasha will cut it off for you." She remarked in a teasing tone of voice. Miroku smiled, and was surprised at how she could make light of his dark situation. He then realized that she was still holding his hand, and his grin widened.
"Sango, I." Miroku pulled her face toward his, actually NOT trying to grope her. Sango didn't resist, and then her eyes suddenly widened. Miroku wondered what he had done this time, but it wasn't him.
"Miroku, look behind you." Miroku jumped up, prepared for an ambush. Instead he saw a small whirlwind, heading toward the village.
"Oh great, it's Kouga."
^_^ ^_^
^_^
YAY!!!!!!! Another chapter finished! MWAHAHAHA! Now Kouga's in the story. Who knows what could happen next? And how will Kouga react when he finds out that Inuyasha took "his woman"? Stick with me for the next chapter, and PLEASE REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
