Hello everybody after examining all the reviews . I decided to continue this. As you all know the first chapter was bad. That was just a test. Yes a test. Everysanity I really don't hate you. Infact I think you are great for flaming politely. I also thank the others for the support ! however I am offended (and confused ) by certian ppl. They like the story because it is a Naruten. I purposely made the first chapter bad to see how ppl would react and the results were obvious. Try to notice not the couple ! that is all and again thank you.
THE WARM FEELING
Chapter 2 : I love you...
The day had began and Uzumaki Naruto had just dropped out of his bed. His head hit the ground with a thud and an anime bump sprouted up.
After completely waking up , Naruto ate his breakfast (ramen) and walked out of his apartment.
He had completely forgotten about the other day. He planned to train hard and make Kakashi-sensei acknowledge him and teach him the chidori.
"I won't lose to you , Sasuke" muttered Naruto as he ran down the steps to the city.
Naruto was about to make his way to the training area when someone tapped his shoulder from behind.
Naruto turned around and he saw someone familiar yet he couldn't put a finger on it.
"Who are you ?" asked Naruto dumbly. "Surprised ?" the person asked. Naruto recognized that voice it was Tenten's.
"Tenten ? Is that you ?" he asked still confused.
"Yeah. Well what do you think ?" she asked as she turned around.
"But , but your hair !" he argued.
"I just let my hair down dumbass. Don't you like it ?" she asked. She seemed hurt. She had let her hair down. It looked like Sakura's short hair only with no spikes at the end.
"No , no I like it. But why did you change it ?" he asked. Tenten sighed.
"I changed it for you !" she said obviously.
Then it was at that moment that Naruto remembered the what had happened the day before. After his mind completely flashed that event his face completely went red.
"Oh...for me....that's....that's....eh....great..." he stuttered nervously.
"Where were you off to ?" she asked.
"Um....me....well....erm...I forgot...." He said stupidly
Tenten looked at his blushing face and realized what was going on.
She put his hand in hers and caressed it sweetly.
"Naruto....you don't need to be nervous around me....settle down I don't bite..." she said gently.
He stared at her and then smiled confidently.
"Ok I won't how about some ramen ?" he asked grinning.
"gee...that was fast." She said with a suspicious look in her eyes.
"hehe...I always did heal fast." He said grinning.
"Naruto..." she started looking at the ground.
"eh ?"
"Do you feel it ?" she asked.
"feel what ?" he asked cluelessly.
"This feeling...do you feel it ?....I feel a warm feeling when I think of you...It made me feel...like...well....special....complete....and it makes me feel...like I am never going to be alone....as long as I be with you." She said now meeting his eyes.
Naruto knew what she was talking about. He had the same feeling yesterday. He couldn't explain it however she described it well.
"Yes." He said bluntly after some seconds of silence.
"Naruto...I love you...." She muttered. He didn't reply he was too shocked. Yet he knew that he felt the same way about her.
"Me too." He said and grinned.
"Naruto-kun how about we skip training for a while and go for a walk." She said and he nodded.
As the two walked to the park they laughed and joked then they sat down on a bench and just looked at each other.
Their eyes met and they got closer...and closer...
"Hello Naruto." Said a pink haired girl interrupting the moment.
The two reframed from what they were doing and they faced Sakura
"Hello Sakura." Replied Naruto with his usual grin.
"Tenten...is it ?" asked Sakura facing an annoyed Tenten.
"Yes." Hissed Tenten.
"Are you all right ?" asked Sakura in concern.
"What are you doing here anyway Sakura ?" asked Naruto.
"Just had to go out. You know to escape chores." Said Sakura grinning at her team mate.
"So why are you here ?" he asked.
"Just looking for Sasuke-kun I haven't seen him in awhile." She remarked and sat next to them.
"Um...I'll say you tomorrow Naruto-kun." Said Tenten and walked off.
"Ok." Said Naruto .
"What were you doing with Tenten ?" she asked curiously.
"Nothing. Its nothing." Said Naruto walking off.
Sakura was getting a bad feeling about this but why ?
Well what do you think ? like it hate it let me know. Oh and we'll see quite alot of Sakura/ Tenten rivalry so expect it.