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You belong to InuYasha, Kagome.
Chapter: Lord Almighty, I'm In Love!
It was almost dark, as InuYasha went into his house that quietly sat nearby a swift flowing river. The sky was still pink and purple. After a long day, fighting evil demons, and cutting wood from the forest nearby for a fire tonight, Inu wearily returned home.
As if it wasn't hard enough doing such hard activities all day long, Inu had gotten help from his friend Sango. When Kagome came to mind, he didn't really consider her as a friend. Only sometimes, when she got on his nerves. "Sit boy!" Kagome's words spun in his head. At the thought of those words, Inu fell to the ground with a loud thud. "Rrr!"
Although Inu did consider Kagome a friend when she crept up his spine, he thought more of her than a friend when she didn't cloud his brain with the words, "Sit boy!"
Inu had more deep feelings for her then. He liked her in a different kind of way. Even he didn't know what it was! To him, it was a tingly feeling. In other words, it made him feel tingly and have weird thoughts, (good) about Kagome.
He wondered if Kagome felt the same way about him. All he knew was that he couldn't tell her his feelings about her...in words.
From no where, he remembered the time earlier in the day when Kagome and Sango were making fun of his ears. They called him dog-boy. "Now those are times, when she should be considered a bug instead of a weak human!" Inu thought.
Humming her way to InuYasha's house, Sango carried a basket of flowers. She thought that Inu had taken her mean words personally. So she thought, that by giving Inu flowers, maybe he wouldn't be angry at Sango anymore. Perhaps he would reconsider.
Just as she entered Inu's front porch with a open door, she saw Inu. But Inu didn't see her. Slowly, he removed his sweaty white shirt, and revealed a well built body, and strong muscles. She was dazzled. She was getting tingly.
Sango, was very confused. She had seen Inu in ripped and without a shirt before as well, but why hadn't she felt tingly before? Why now?
She sighed heavily, staring and impressed by Inu's body. "Wow!" She said. She thought Inu hadn't heard her, but unfortunately he turned around to see her. Suddenly she stood up and cleared her throat. "Oh hi Sango. I thought it was that idiotic Kagome again. I thought she'd come to tease me some more." Inu told Sango. He had that feeling about Kagome again, but didn't want anybody to find out...even Sango.
"Ahem, here. These are for you. I gotta go!" Sango said, handing Inu the flower basket, and scrambled away.
"What's with her? I knew it! All girls are totally not from Earth. They are always lost and are totally weird!" Inu said, leaning on his door, after Sango left.
Falling onto her bed, Sango let out a heavy sigh. "I can't believe it. I'm in love with InuYasha!"
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