In The End - Important points!
v(^o^)v Hey people! This is me (HoNeyZ_RiNoA( I got some reviews about some things and there were also some reviews telling me about my mistake.. AriGaTo To ThoSe PeoPle.. My English is not so good.. So, sorryyy.... Okay..
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Kaoru-chan21 You've never seen samurai X trust and Betraly have you? If you did you would know that Battousai NEVER owned a house in Kyoto and he NEVER lived with Tomoe in Kyoto, only Otsu. Also it's a pretty good story beside the fact you have the facts wrong. Anyway...I haven't had a chance to read the whole thng yet so...
~Well Kaoru-chan21, I've seen it before but I forgot most of the information.. Hehehe.. Sorry.. Thanx for the info anywayz! So, people.. since I don't remember most of the places and names, I will change the original story a bit.. Sorry! I always forget things easily!~
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Aya Kimura its good but first soujiro is younger than kaoru not the same age. Also when u said kaoru was washing her blood. the correct way to say it would be "washing her wound." u don't wash the blood itself. the part when Kaoru goes unconcious is alittle confusing. can she go back to the future or not and if so how? Keep going i like it! Just thought id point those things out for next time.
~Aya chan, I don't know but all the websites I've been through said that Soujiro was 19 years old when he fought Kenshin and Kaoru was about 17 or 18 years old at that time. So, Soujiro should be older than Kaoru. Thanks anyway! And thank you very much for the wound and blood thingie.. I'm so embarrassed.. (-_-).. Hehe and going to the future thing.. You just have to read my going-to-be-made new chapters..~
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loyanini interesting..is Kaoru alive when tomoe and kenshin are 2gether?
~Hai, loyanini! Kenshin is 10 years older than Kaoru and when Kenshin married tomoe, he was 15 years old. So, Kaoru was about 5 years old. Arigato for the reviews!~
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And also.. Thank you very very very much for the reviews.. I will update the next chappie soon.. Hope you enjoy the story and some questions:
You want Kaoru to go back to the future and be with whom? Do you want Kaoru to go back to the future? If you want Kaoru to be with Batt or maybe Rurouni.. HOW ABOUT TOMOE? Urmm guyz.. I seem to have problems with the bold and italic font.. In microsoft word, it was bold and italic but.. It didn't come out as bold and italic words!! How to make it bold and italic? Help me..
Emmm. any idea for the story? Just email me.. Okay.. Buhbyez!!
v(^o^)v Hey people! This is me (HoNeyZ_RiNoA( I got some reviews about some things and there were also some reviews telling me about my mistake.. AriGaTo To ThoSe PeoPle.. My English is not so good.. So, sorryyy.... Okay..
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Kaoru-chan21 You've never seen samurai X trust and Betraly have you? If you did you would know that Battousai NEVER owned a house in Kyoto and he NEVER lived with Tomoe in Kyoto, only Otsu. Also it's a pretty good story beside the fact you have the facts wrong. Anyway...I haven't had a chance to read the whole thng yet so...
~Well Kaoru-chan21, I've seen it before but I forgot most of the information.. Hehehe.. Sorry.. Thanx for the info anywayz! So, people.. since I don't remember most of the places and names, I will change the original story a bit.. Sorry! I always forget things easily!~
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Aya Kimura its good but first soujiro is younger than kaoru not the same age. Also when u said kaoru was washing her blood. the correct way to say it would be "washing her wound." u don't wash the blood itself. the part when Kaoru goes unconcious is alittle confusing. can she go back to the future or not and if so how? Keep going i like it! Just thought id point those things out for next time.
~Aya chan, I don't know but all the websites I've been through said that Soujiro was 19 years old when he fought Kenshin and Kaoru was about 17 or 18 years old at that time. So, Soujiro should be older than Kaoru. Thanks anyway! And thank you very much for the wound and blood thingie.. I'm so embarrassed.. (-_-).. Hehe and going to the future thing.. You just have to read my going-to-be-made new chapters..~
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loyanini interesting..is Kaoru alive when tomoe and kenshin are 2gether?
~Hai, loyanini! Kenshin is 10 years older than Kaoru and when Kenshin married tomoe, he was 15 years old. So, Kaoru was about 5 years old. Arigato for the reviews!~
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And also.. Thank you very very very much for the reviews.. I will update the next chappie soon.. Hope you enjoy the story and some questions:
You want Kaoru to go back to the future and be with whom? Do you want Kaoru to go back to the future? If you want Kaoru to be with Batt or maybe Rurouni.. HOW ABOUT TOMOE? Urmm guyz.. I seem to have problems with the bold and italic font.. In microsoft word, it was bold and italic but.. It didn't come out as bold and italic words!! How to make it bold and italic? Help me..
Emmm. any idea for the story? Just email me.. Okay.. Buhbyez!!