Thank you everyone for all the reviews you've given me! It's really helped
me write this! Thank you so much! Hope you like the story so far!
Sorry this story took so long, but it's because I've been studying for
finals like the good student that I am.
(some extra info, glomp is a verb that is when a person hugs you very
tightly and this can be accompanied with a sprint, jumping into the
victim's arms, and then hugging tightly. It's actually quite fun even
though it sounds weird. )
Dragon King
She heard people talking around her. There were so many voices. She tried to pretend that she was still unconscious, but this was hard because she felt two people poking her arms from both sides.
"I hope you haven't killed her, Van," said a masculine voice.
She heard Van cry indignantly, "I didn't! Why do you keep on saying that?"
"Don't worry Van-sama," said a cat-like voice. "Hitomi can handle more than this."
"How do they know my name? This is way too weird. I guess I can't pretend that I'm unconscious forever so might as well wake up," thought Hitomi.
Hitomi slowly opened her eyes and looked around her. She saw that she was in a clearing that was surrounded by trees from all sides. She looked to her right and saw a beautiful man of about 24 staring at her with sky blue eyes. She saw his eyes light up as he saw her awake.
"Hitomi!!" he screamed as he glomped her. She screamed and tried to drag herself away from him, but he was holding on too tightly.
Hitomi then heard "Let go of her you pervert!"
She felt the blonde haired beauty pulled off her, and opened her eyes to see the dark haired boy who had fought the dragon pull the beauty away from her and throw him.
"You are so stupid!" screamed the girl that was on her other side. Hitomi gaped in shock at this girl..er...cat. The best way to describe her was that she was half-cat and half-girl. She had pink hair and had stripes all over body. She was in a crouching position as if ready to attack. "You shouldn't touch a girl like that," hissed the girl.
Hitomi watched as the girl slowly crept towards the blonde haired man, and she saw him slowly back away into a bunch of trees.
"Nice kitty" said the blonde haired man.
"How many times have I told you not to call me that?!?!" screamed the cat girl as she launched herself into the trees where he was.
His answer was replaced with yells of pain and the furious movement of the trees.
"Are you hurt anywhere?"
Hitomi turned her head and saw the dark haired boy intently staring at her.
"Um, yes. Yes I'm fine" said Hitomi.
There was an awkward silence as they stared at each other in contemplation. Hitomi could faintly hear the yells of pain from the blonde haired man.
"It actually sounds like he is running," Hitomi thought to herself.
"Well....I guess I'll introduce all of us then" said the dark haired boy in order to replace the silence. "My name is Van. The blonde haired man who inappropriately touched you was Allen. The girl who is at the moment trying to kill him is Merle."
Before Hitomi could rely, she heard "And my name is Princess Millerna although I will allow you to call me Millerna."
Hitomi turned her head and saw a young woman of about her age, dressed in rich, red velvet clothes. The clothes fit her body perfectly and she seemed to float as she gracefully walked so that she looked like a princess...but then again, she announced herself as a princess right?
"Millerna! What are you doing here?" asked Van as he stood up in shock.
But before he could answer, Allen came bounding out of the trees with Merle right at his heels. Allen's clothes were all torn and he had lots of scratches all over his body. He desperately looked around the clearing as saw Millerna. He changed his course and started running in Millerna's direction.
"Save me!!!" he wailed as he ran behind Millerna.
Millerna closed her eyes and tilted her head towards the ground with clenched fists. She seemed to be counting to ten, and muttering something that sounded like 'Why did I ever fall in love with this guy?'
She then opened her eyes, but it still looked like she hadn't fully regained control of her emotions.
"Millerna!! Protect me!" wailed Allen again.
After this statement, Millerna totally snapped.
"Eat him Merle!!!" she screamed as she moved out of the way for Merle and pointed a finger at Allen.
"STOP IT!" yelled Van.
Four pair of eyes turned in his direction. Merle was on top of Allen with his hand partially in her mouth, while Millerna was panting next to the pair of them.
"This whole place is like a zoo" he muttered in disgust. "Merle get off of Allen. Allen, come with me. Millerna, get reacquainted with Hitomi. You'll find that she is...ah...forgot a few details about the past."
"Reacquainted?" muttered Millerna as she watched Allen and Van disappear into the forest.
"What do you think your doing?" hissed Van as he stood looking at Allen with contempt.
Allen showed no signs of fear as he coolly looked into Van's eyes.
"From what I gather, Hitomi's memory has been erased or lost?" asked Allen with raised eyebrows.
"Answer the question," hissed Van again.
"Calm down Van," said Allen, "you're starting to look like Merle. Fine then. I'll tell you why I'm acting this way. Since I didn't get Hitomi last time, I've decided to ...ah...how shall I out it? Use a different strategy. I'm going to steal her back from you Van, just like you stole her from me. But then again, she doesn't remember, so we're both starting from scratch."
"This is no time to be playing games Allen. I don't have time for this because I need to get back to Fanelia to give my people the energist. So don't mess with me right now!" Van said as he jabbed Allen in the chest with his finger.
"Just don't get in my way," replied Allen as he sauntered out of the trees. When he saw Hitomi watching him, he put his facade back on and leapt across the clearing towards Hitomi so that he could glomp her again. Hitomi looked slightly apprehensive and slowly inched away as he came closer and closer.
Suddenly, just before Allen was going to leap onto Hitomi, Van appeared next to Hitomi hit Allen on the face with the sheath of his sword.
"What was that for?!?" screamed Allen as he felt his face.
"There was a mosquito on your face" replied Van in complete innocence. "It was going to bite you."
"Liar," muttered Allen as he climbed to his feet.
"All right." said Van. "I am going to travel to Fanelia, so I can give my people the energist to power the city. Hitomi travels with me." At this statement, he looked pointedly at Allen. "Anyone else who wants to come is welcome. Princess Millerna, you had better come with me since you have no proper escort. When we get to Fanelia, I shall arrange an appropriate escort for you."
"She does have an escort," came a voice from another side of the clearing. Out from the shadows stepped a fat little man that had on tiny glasses. The best way to describe him is that he is a cross between a mole and a man. This is why Hitomi thought it was hilarious when he introduced himself as Mr. Mole.
"What are you laughing at young lady?" he asked when he saw Hitomi sniggering into her hands. He looked slyly at her as he said, "You should be more respectful since I know how to get you back to the Mystic Moon."
Hitomi looked questioningly at him.
"Mystic Moon," said the Moleman as he pointed at the Earth.
Hitomi stopped laughing right away and went deadly still. She stared at him as she searched for the answer.
"Nope! Won't give you the answer until I get some food and shelter from you," said the Moleman as he turned away, laughing.
"But the nearest inn is at least half a day's walk!" exclaimed Millerna.
"Well then we'd better started shouldn't we?" said Van. "When we get to the inn, you tell us how to get Hitomi back to the Mystic Moon. Let's go then. After you Princess." Van stepped aside as Millerna walked past him. He then helped Hitomi get up.
"Don't worry. We're going to find a way to get you home." He looked at the ground in embarrassment. "I was being irrational and wasn't thinking at the time. For that, I apologize. It's just that I couldn't handle the situation at that moment, and so I acted without thinking. It shall never happen again. But I swear to you, I will find a way to get you back home," said Van vehemently.
"I know," said Hitomi simply as she walked away following Millerna.
Van was taken back for a moment. He stood there watching her walk away when suddenly he was jolted out of his thoughts by Allen who was looking suspiciously at him.
Allen sidled up to him and asked casually, "So...what were you talking about?'
"Oh nothing much" said Van. "She just told me that she wanted me right here and now, and that she didn't care who was watching. But I told her to wait until our wedding day."
Van smiled to himself as he walked away, but he could picture Allen's look of horror without even turning around.
Hey everyone! I bet you are all surprised with this new side of Allen, but I was randomly walking through the halls at my school, and I was thinking about doing something in the story that would totally be out of the ordinary and bizarre. But I couldn't think of anything, and then I was these people glomp each other (that sounds nasty, but it isn't) and I thought about Allen glomping someone and somehow in my crazy messed up brain, it worked. So I know I just totally changed the character of Allen, but I don't care. I hate Allen (actually I despise him...playboy), so I wanted to ruin his reputation. I'm also going to ruin his reputation in my other fanfiction called Together Forever, so make sure you read it and REVIEW it! . I have no idea why I made Van say that last sentence. Please don't think I'm some kind of pervert! That was complete randomness and ...I... I can't explain it!!
Thank you for all the reviews!! Lone Watchman runs in circles and throws confetti (As you can tell I'm a girl, even though my pen name is lone watchMAN ) Scio-chan, I hope that I have finally satisfied you, but if I didn't, I wouldn't be surprised. I have to admit, your reviews are scary and intimidating, but accurate. You sound...well...evil, but in a cool way if you get what I mean. Thank You to everyone else for all the reviews!! You guys have no idea how happy I am! lone watchman blows bubbles and then plays in them When I saw all the reviews, it inspired me again (or as Van Luver would say, "I got in the mood") and I wrote this in looks at watch about 1 hour. Hope you all like it and make sure you REVIEW, REVIEW!!
Dragon King
She heard people talking around her. There were so many voices. She tried to pretend that she was still unconscious, but this was hard because she felt two people poking her arms from both sides.
"I hope you haven't killed her, Van," said a masculine voice.
She heard Van cry indignantly, "I didn't! Why do you keep on saying that?"
"Don't worry Van-sama," said a cat-like voice. "Hitomi can handle more than this."
"How do they know my name? This is way too weird. I guess I can't pretend that I'm unconscious forever so might as well wake up," thought Hitomi.
Hitomi slowly opened her eyes and looked around her. She saw that she was in a clearing that was surrounded by trees from all sides. She looked to her right and saw a beautiful man of about 24 staring at her with sky blue eyes. She saw his eyes light up as he saw her awake.
"Hitomi!!" he screamed as he glomped her. She screamed and tried to drag herself away from him, but he was holding on too tightly.
Hitomi then heard "Let go of her you pervert!"
She felt the blonde haired beauty pulled off her, and opened her eyes to see the dark haired boy who had fought the dragon pull the beauty away from her and throw him.
"You are so stupid!" screamed the girl that was on her other side. Hitomi gaped in shock at this girl..er...cat. The best way to describe her was that she was half-cat and half-girl. She had pink hair and had stripes all over body. She was in a crouching position as if ready to attack. "You shouldn't touch a girl like that," hissed the girl.
Hitomi watched as the girl slowly crept towards the blonde haired man, and she saw him slowly back away into a bunch of trees.
"Nice kitty" said the blonde haired man.
"How many times have I told you not to call me that?!?!" screamed the cat girl as she launched herself into the trees where he was.
His answer was replaced with yells of pain and the furious movement of the trees.
"Are you hurt anywhere?"
Hitomi turned her head and saw the dark haired boy intently staring at her.
"Um, yes. Yes I'm fine" said Hitomi.
There was an awkward silence as they stared at each other in contemplation. Hitomi could faintly hear the yells of pain from the blonde haired man.
"It actually sounds like he is running," Hitomi thought to herself.
"Well....I guess I'll introduce all of us then" said the dark haired boy in order to replace the silence. "My name is Van. The blonde haired man who inappropriately touched you was Allen. The girl who is at the moment trying to kill him is Merle."
Before Hitomi could rely, she heard "And my name is Princess Millerna although I will allow you to call me Millerna."
Hitomi turned her head and saw a young woman of about her age, dressed in rich, red velvet clothes. The clothes fit her body perfectly and she seemed to float as she gracefully walked so that she looked like a princess...but then again, she announced herself as a princess right?
"Millerna! What are you doing here?" asked Van as he stood up in shock.
But before he could answer, Allen came bounding out of the trees with Merle right at his heels. Allen's clothes were all torn and he had lots of scratches all over his body. He desperately looked around the clearing as saw Millerna. He changed his course and started running in Millerna's direction.
"Save me!!!" he wailed as he ran behind Millerna.
Millerna closed her eyes and tilted her head towards the ground with clenched fists. She seemed to be counting to ten, and muttering something that sounded like 'Why did I ever fall in love with this guy?'
She then opened her eyes, but it still looked like she hadn't fully regained control of her emotions.
"Millerna!! Protect me!" wailed Allen again.
After this statement, Millerna totally snapped.
"Eat him Merle!!!" she screamed as she moved out of the way for Merle and pointed a finger at Allen.
"STOP IT!" yelled Van.
Four pair of eyes turned in his direction. Merle was on top of Allen with his hand partially in her mouth, while Millerna was panting next to the pair of them.
"This whole place is like a zoo" he muttered in disgust. "Merle get off of Allen. Allen, come with me. Millerna, get reacquainted with Hitomi. You'll find that she is...ah...forgot a few details about the past."
"Reacquainted?" muttered Millerna as she watched Allen and Van disappear into the forest.
"What do you think your doing?" hissed Van as he stood looking at Allen with contempt.
Allen showed no signs of fear as he coolly looked into Van's eyes.
"From what I gather, Hitomi's memory has been erased or lost?" asked Allen with raised eyebrows.
"Answer the question," hissed Van again.
"Calm down Van," said Allen, "you're starting to look like Merle. Fine then. I'll tell you why I'm acting this way. Since I didn't get Hitomi last time, I've decided to ...ah...how shall I out it? Use a different strategy. I'm going to steal her back from you Van, just like you stole her from me. But then again, she doesn't remember, so we're both starting from scratch."
"This is no time to be playing games Allen. I don't have time for this because I need to get back to Fanelia to give my people the energist. So don't mess with me right now!" Van said as he jabbed Allen in the chest with his finger.
"Just don't get in my way," replied Allen as he sauntered out of the trees. When he saw Hitomi watching him, he put his facade back on and leapt across the clearing towards Hitomi so that he could glomp her again. Hitomi looked slightly apprehensive and slowly inched away as he came closer and closer.
Suddenly, just before Allen was going to leap onto Hitomi, Van appeared next to Hitomi hit Allen on the face with the sheath of his sword.
"What was that for?!?" screamed Allen as he felt his face.
"There was a mosquito on your face" replied Van in complete innocence. "It was going to bite you."
"Liar," muttered Allen as he climbed to his feet.
"All right." said Van. "I am going to travel to Fanelia, so I can give my people the energist to power the city. Hitomi travels with me." At this statement, he looked pointedly at Allen. "Anyone else who wants to come is welcome. Princess Millerna, you had better come with me since you have no proper escort. When we get to Fanelia, I shall arrange an appropriate escort for you."
"She does have an escort," came a voice from another side of the clearing. Out from the shadows stepped a fat little man that had on tiny glasses. The best way to describe him is that he is a cross between a mole and a man. This is why Hitomi thought it was hilarious when he introduced himself as Mr. Mole.
"What are you laughing at young lady?" he asked when he saw Hitomi sniggering into her hands. He looked slyly at her as he said, "You should be more respectful since I know how to get you back to the Mystic Moon."
Hitomi looked questioningly at him.
"Mystic Moon," said the Moleman as he pointed at the Earth.
Hitomi stopped laughing right away and went deadly still. She stared at him as she searched for the answer.
"Nope! Won't give you the answer until I get some food and shelter from you," said the Moleman as he turned away, laughing.
"But the nearest inn is at least half a day's walk!" exclaimed Millerna.
"Well then we'd better started shouldn't we?" said Van. "When we get to the inn, you tell us how to get Hitomi back to the Mystic Moon. Let's go then. After you Princess." Van stepped aside as Millerna walked past him. He then helped Hitomi get up.
"Don't worry. We're going to find a way to get you home." He looked at the ground in embarrassment. "I was being irrational and wasn't thinking at the time. For that, I apologize. It's just that I couldn't handle the situation at that moment, and so I acted without thinking. It shall never happen again. But I swear to you, I will find a way to get you back home," said Van vehemently.
"I know," said Hitomi simply as she walked away following Millerna.
Van was taken back for a moment. He stood there watching her walk away when suddenly he was jolted out of his thoughts by Allen who was looking suspiciously at him.
Allen sidled up to him and asked casually, "So...what were you talking about?'
"Oh nothing much" said Van. "She just told me that she wanted me right here and now, and that she didn't care who was watching. But I told her to wait until our wedding day."
Van smiled to himself as he walked away, but he could picture Allen's look of horror without even turning around.
Hey everyone! I bet you are all surprised with this new side of Allen, but I was randomly walking through the halls at my school, and I was thinking about doing something in the story that would totally be out of the ordinary and bizarre. But I couldn't think of anything, and then I was these people glomp each other (that sounds nasty, but it isn't) and I thought about Allen glomping someone and somehow in my crazy messed up brain, it worked. So I know I just totally changed the character of Allen, but I don't care. I hate Allen (actually I despise him...playboy), so I wanted to ruin his reputation. I'm also going to ruin his reputation in my other fanfiction called Together Forever, so make sure you read it and REVIEW it! . I have no idea why I made Van say that last sentence. Please don't think I'm some kind of pervert! That was complete randomness and ...I... I can't explain it!!
Thank you for all the reviews!! Lone Watchman runs in circles and throws confetti (As you can tell I'm a girl, even though my pen name is lone watchMAN ) Scio-chan, I hope that I have finally satisfied you, but if I didn't, I wouldn't be surprised. I have to admit, your reviews are scary and intimidating, but accurate. You sound...well...evil, but in a cool way if you get what I mean. Thank You to everyone else for all the reviews!! You guys have no idea how happy I am! lone watchman blows bubbles and then plays in them When I saw all the reviews, it inspired me again (or as Van Luver would say, "I got in the mood") and I wrote this in looks at watch about 1 hour. Hope you all like it and make sure you REVIEW, REVIEW!!