Aurora Diablo (or dawn devil) here this is my first attempt at fanfic
writing so if there's anything wrong either grammatically or other
please don't hesitate to tell me although flames will be used to
toast marshmallows so don't bother with those I should also mention
that this is set after the world Championships and if anybody is ooc
*sticks hands in ears * Nya nya nya I mean ...
"Speech" /thoughts/
Pale blue eyes glazed over in thought as a figure slowly made its way down another snow covered Russian alley way.
Tala's pov (a/n how many blue eyed Russian's are there in beyblade?)
I don't know whether to laugh or cry, I'll just settle for crying, If anyone saw me now they would probably die of shock, the great Tala crying he's eyes out, though hopefully they wouldn't recognise me straight away after all I'm not exactly the most popular of people after loosing the championships, so I just left my hair to its own devices it flops down around my face, annoying but it's the perfect shield. Anyway back to the point I'm not crying about loosing some measly championship I can't say I give a damn but I never have really cared much about anything before. Except the reason why I'm crying I'm not crying because I lost to that oaf of a blader Tyson don't insult me I couldn't care less no I'm cry because of him because he left, again might I add, The one person I've ever loved and I'd like to clarify it's not Bryan that guy just gives me the creeps he's got this weird obsession with me and after a certain incident I refused to sleep in the same room as him The reason I'm crying is because the one person who I love with all my heart, has left me in that god forsaken abbey again, well god forsaken half an abbey now thanks to him he seems to have a habit of destroy it at least this time he came and warned me before he did it, not that it matters if I could just stop crying I could pull myself together I'm supposedly train not to feel anything and most of the time it works but I look in to he's eyes and...nothing matters everything goes out the window. I only hear he's voice, I only see him,
(Normal pov) Tala cursed he's clumsy-ness as he went flying backwards ready to shout abuse at whoever he had walked in too when Tala looked up, Crimson met ice blue and Tala's eyes widened as he stumbled up ignoring the extended hand Tala held back a sob as the person he had walked in to gently brushed his fingers against Tala's cheek, "I'm sorry" At that Tala swirled round and ran as fast as he could not looking back.
Now I know it's short and don't kill me for it but I ,Wanted to leave it at a semi-cliff-hanger and Aren't the best of writers and want to decide whether to keep writing or not
So... don't harm me and REVIEW
: P
"Speech" /thoughts/
Pale blue eyes glazed over in thought as a figure slowly made its way down another snow covered Russian alley way.
Tala's pov (a/n how many blue eyed Russian's are there in beyblade?)
I don't know whether to laugh or cry, I'll just settle for crying, If anyone saw me now they would probably die of shock, the great Tala crying he's eyes out, though hopefully they wouldn't recognise me straight away after all I'm not exactly the most popular of people after loosing the championships, so I just left my hair to its own devices it flops down around my face, annoying but it's the perfect shield. Anyway back to the point I'm not crying about loosing some measly championship I can't say I give a damn but I never have really cared much about anything before. Except the reason why I'm crying I'm not crying because I lost to that oaf of a blader Tyson don't insult me I couldn't care less no I'm cry because of him because he left, again might I add, The one person I've ever loved and I'd like to clarify it's not Bryan that guy just gives me the creeps he's got this weird obsession with me and after a certain incident I refused to sleep in the same room as him The reason I'm crying is because the one person who I love with all my heart, has left me in that god forsaken abbey again, well god forsaken half an abbey now thanks to him he seems to have a habit of destroy it at least this time he came and warned me before he did it, not that it matters if I could just stop crying I could pull myself together I'm supposedly train not to feel anything and most of the time it works but I look in to he's eyes and...nothing matters everything goes out the window. I only hear he's voice, I only see him,
(Normal pov) Tala cursed he's clumsy-ness as he went flying backwards ready to shout abuse at whoever he had walked in too when Tala looked up, Crimson met ice blue and Tala's eyes widened as he stumbled up ignoring the extended hand Tala held back a sob as the person he had walked in to gently brushed his fingers against Tala's cheek, "I'm sorry" At that Tala swirled round and ran as fast as he could not looking back.
Now I know it's short and don't kill me for it but I ,Wanted to leave it at a semi-cliff-hanger and Aren't the best of writers and want to decide whether to keep writing or not
So... don't harm me and REVIEW
: P