A/N: Thanks for the reviews but keep them coming and I'll keep writing
I hope you like the story so far, I could really use some suggestions
about how to continue :)
Disclaimer: I don't own any of these characters... only the storyline...
PS: Sorry it took so long to update :)
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Lorelai stormed into the kitchen of the inn 'Sookie!!!' Sookie startled and dropped a knife 'What? What's wrong? Where's the fire?' she started babbling 'There's no fire sook...' lorelai replied 'Then what's wrong??'
Lorelai sighed 'I think I'm in love...' Sookie started smiling 'you are how cute!! And with who? Do I know him???' Lorelai nodded... 'but I don't know how to tell him!!'
'Lor! Who is it?' sookie asked nervously. Lorelai shrugged and whispered 'Luke'. Sookie let out a small shriek of relieve 'FINALLY!' Lorelai was stunned 'what finally?' she asked. And sookie started to explain 'you guys are already crazy about each other for a couple of years but neither of you realised it'
Lorelai was speechless 'I wasn't crazy about him, I just fell for him!' Sookie shook her head 'think think!' Lorelai started to think about it for a moment 'euh... ow yeah... I'm starting to get your point sook...'
~At the bridge~
'Jess, I have to get to the bus-stop... for school' Rory said and kissed him sweetly and then stood up and started to walk away. Jess stopped her 'do you have to go?' she nodded 'I have a meeting about the school play... '. 'ok' he replied and walked with her to the bus-stop and kissed her goodbye.
Rory read a book while she was in the bus and got off the bus when she was at her school... she walked to her locker and put some books in it. When she wanted to close the locker Tristin was standing next to her.
'Hey Mary' he began the conversation. 'Hey Tristin, what do you want?' Tristin smiled 'nothing, just the pleasure of being around you!' Rory shook her head 'djeez tris I have better things to do then that!' and she walked away towards her next class.
But Tristin didn't give up and sat behind her in class... 'you know mary, we better get start practising our kiss for the grease musical that we're going to do' Rory didn't react on what he was saying so he continued 'I won't mind kissing you, and maybe you'll find it pleasant too?'
She turned towards him 'Do you mind? I'm trying to pay attention here!' and she turned away. Tristin sighed and didn't say anything anymore for the rest of the time they were in class.
Later that day they had to be at the meeting for the school play. But Rory had to stay with Mr. Medina to talk about the class so she was a little late... she found only Tristin sitting in the room...
'Well well who do we got here... little Mary' Rory looked around the room while Tristin got up and walked towards her. 'where is everyone' she asked stunned. 'gone, they left I think 5 minutes ago, the meeting was over so...'
'So, Mary, shall we practise our kiss?' Tristin leaned towards him, but she pushed him away 'Tristin!! Stop!' But he didn't stop and kissed her fully on the lips. She startled pushed him away and ran out of the room. **ow my... ** she thought all the time.
She ran to her car and quickly drove back to Stars Hollow. She went into the house and sat down on the couch in front of the tv... where a show was on where they could win vacation trips if they just made a phone call and left their address...
~A couple of days later~
Rory and jess were happy with each other, Rory had told jess what happened and jess totally understood the fact that it wasn't her fault, Lorelai hadn't asked Luke out yet, because she was waiting for the right moment.
Rory walked towards the mailbox to get the mail. She wasn't really awake yet, she was walking in her pyjama's and walked back inside with the mail... she started going trough the mail when she found a letter addressed to her... she took it and opened it quickly
Dear Miss Gilmore,
I have the great pleasure to announce you that you've won the 'call
and win a trip' contest that you have entered in the beginning of this
week. The trip you've won is sure a wonderful journey.
You're going to have the chance to spend 14 Days in Egypt, Hurghada
enjoying the beach, sun and maybe get some diving experience if you're
in to sports.
This envelope contains a form which you can use to get 4 tickets at
your travelling agents. Yes you're reading this right, you can invite
3 other people to go with you on this fabulous journey!
I hope you'll have a great time
Rory gasped and started jumping around... she ran upstairs and started pushing her until she woke up. 'What? Where's the fire? Rory? What's up?' she quickly sat up and Rory handed her the letter with a big smile... A couple of minutes later they were both jumping around in the house.
'EGYPT!!!! Here we come!!' Rory yelled. Lorelai giggled 'ooh, beware...' Rory poked her. And they started to jump around again.
After a couple of jumping sessions they went back to their rooms to get changed. It was Saturday so they had all the time they needed. After about half an hour they walked into Luke's diner. They sat down at the counters and Luke poured in some coffee for them and then walked off to serve other customers.
'Mom, who are we gonna invite to come with us?' Lorelai thought for a moment. 'well you've won the trip so you can decide... I'll completely agree with your choice.' She smiled and looked at her watch. 'oh crap, I have to go to the inn' she kissed Rory and walked away.
Rory herself paid Luke for the coffee and walked outside to go to the travel agency. There she got her 4 tickets. She was sure she was gonna invite Jess to come cith her to Egypt, but the second person... it was one big mystery for her.
But then it suddenly hit her... Sookie had told her that Lorelai confessed to her that she liked Luke. She had found her 4th person, she hoped he would join them. Jess was easy to convince, but Luke? She thought it was gonna be hard. So she started to walk back to the diner with her 4 tickets.
When she walked in to the diner she saw jess cleaning a table and walked towards him and kissed him 'can I talk to you? I have some news :)' Jess nodded and they walked upstairs and sat down on his bed. 'so what did you wanne tell me?' Rory gave him a ticket.
He stared at the ticket and then looked up to her 'did you buy this? Why?' she smiled 'I didn't buy them.' His eyes widened 'Did you steal them?' she poked him 'no silly! I've won these' he smiled and kissed her 'how many?' '4'
'wow... I mean, wow, this is amazing and you want me to come with you?' he asked. 'of course, I wouldn't want to share it with anybody else, well except for my mom ofcourse' she laughed. 'For whom is the 4th ticket?' he asked. 'I think I wanne give it to Luke, you know...' he nodded 'because of what Sookie told you?' he smiled and Rory nodded.
They walked downstairs and Rory sat down at the counter. 'what do you wanne eat?' Luke asked when he looked up to her. 'eum... I think ... a burger and fries please' he nodded and gave the order to Caesar. When he started noting some thing down Rory took out a ticket and put it on the countertop and pushed it towards him.
He looked at it, then looked up amazed. 'What's that?' Rory giggled 'That's one of the 4 tickets I've won with a contest, it's for a trip to Egypt for 14 days.' Luke looked at it 'Why are you giving me one...??' he asked surprised 'Because I want you to come with me, mom and jess'
She looked at him... 'So are you joining us?' He waited a second, and thought about it... It was difficult for him to close the diner for 2 entire weeks... 'Well....' He started ...
************************** hope you like this chapter :) I've worked on it for probably an entire week, because my inspiration was completely gone ... so hope ya like it, I've choosed Egypt, because that's a country I know a little better then others cuz I visited it for about 6 or 7 times...
I hope you like the story so far, I could really use some suggestions
about how to continue :)
Disclaimer: I don't own any of these characters... only the storyline...
PS: Sorry it took so long to update :)
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Lorelai stormed into the kitchen of the inn 'Sookie!!!' Sookie startled and dropped a knife 'What? What's wrong? Where's the fire?' she started babbling 'There's no fire sook...' lorelai replied 'Then what's wrong??'
Lorelai sighed 'I think I'm in love...' Sookie started smiling 'you are how cute!! And with who? Do I know him???' Lorelai nodded... 'but I don't know how to tell him!!'
'Lor! Who is it?' sookie asked nervously. Lorelai shrugged and whispered 'Luke'. Sookie let out a small shriek of relieve 'FINALLY!' Lorelai was stunned 'what finally?' she asked. And sookie started to explain 'you guys are already crazy about each other for a couple of years but neither of you realised it'
Lorelai was speechless 'I wasn't crazy about him, I just fell for him!' Sookie shook her head 'think think!' Lorelai started to think about it for a moment 'euh... ow yeah... I'm starting to get your point sook...'
~At the bridge~
'Jess, I have to get to the bus-stop... for school' Rory said and kissed him sweetly and then stood up and started to walk away. Jess stopped her 'do you have to go?' she nodded 'I have a meeting about the school play... '. 'ok' he replied and walked with her to the bus-stop and kissed her goodbye.
Rory read a book while she was in the bus and got off the bus when she was at her school... she walked to her locker and put some books in it. When she wanted to close the locker Tristin was standing next to her.
'Hey Mary' he began the conversation. 'Hey Tristin, what do you want?' Tristin smiled 'nothing, just the pleasure of being around you!' Rory shook her head 'djeez tris I have better things to do then that!' and she walked away towards her next class.
But Tristin didn't give up and sat behind her in class... 'you know mary, we better get start practising our kiss for the grease musical that we're going to do' Rory didn't react on what he was saying so he continued 'I won't mind kissing you, and maybe you'll find it pleasant too?'
She turned towards him 'Do you mind? I'm trying to pay attention here!' and she turned away. Tristin sighed and didn't say anything anymore for the rest of the time they were in class.
Later that day they had to be at the meeting for the school play. But Rory had to stay with Mr. Medina to talk about the class so she was a little late... she found only Tristin sitting in the room...
'Well well who do we got here... little Mary' Rory looked around the room while Tristin got up and walked towards her. 'where is everyone' she asked stunned. 'gone, they left I think 5 minutes ago, the meeting was over so...'
'So, Mary, shall we practise our kiss?' Tristin leaned towards him, but she pushed him away 'Tristin!! Stop!' But he didn't stop and kissed her fully on the lips. She startled pushed him away and ran out of the room. **ow my... ** she thought all the time.
She ran to her car and quickly drove back to Stars Hollow. She went into the house and sat down on the couch in front of the tv... where a show was on where they could win vacation trips if they just made a phone call and left their address...
~A couple of days later~
Rory and jess were happy with each other, Rory had told jess what happened and jess totally understood the fact that it wasn't her fault, Lorelai hadn't asked Luke out yet, because she was waiting for the right moment.
Rory walked towards the mailbox to get the mail. She wasn't really awake yet, she was walking in her pyjama's and walked back inside with the mail... she started going trough the mail when she found a letter addressed to her... she took it and opened it quickly
Dear Miss Gilmore,
I have the great pleasure to announce you that you've won the 'call
and win a trip' contest that you have entered in the beginning of this
week. The trip you've won is sure a wonderful journey.
You're going to have the chance to spend 14 Days in Egypt, Hurghada
enjoying the beach, sun and maybe get some diving experience if you're
in to sports.
This envelope contains a form which you can use to get 4 tickets at
your travelling agents. Yes you're reading this right, you can invite
3 other people to go with you on this fabulous journey!
I hope you'll have a great time
Rory gasped and started jumping around... she ran upstairs and started pushing her until she woke up. 'What? Where's the fire? Rory? What's up?' she quickly sat up and Rory handed her the letter with a big smile... A couple of minutes later they were both jumping around in the house.
'EGYPT!!!! Here we come!!' Rory yelled. Lorelai giggled 'ooh, beware...' Rory poked her. And they started to jump around again.
After a couple of jumping sessions they went back to their rooms to get changed. It was Saturday so they had all the time they needed. After about half an hour they walked into Luke's diner. They sat down at the counters and Luke poured in some coffee for them and then walked off to serve other customers.
'Mom, who are we gonna invite to come with us?' Lorelai thought for a moment. 'well you've won the trip so you can decide... I'll completely agree with your choice.' She smiled and looked at her watch. 'oh crap, I have to go to the inn' she kissed Rory and walked away.
Rory herself paid Luke for the coffee and walked outside to go to the travel agency. There she got her 4 tickets. She was sure she was gonna invite Jess to come cith her to Egypt, but the second person... it was one big mystery for her.
But then it suddenly hit her... Sookie had told her that Lorelai confessed to her that she liked Luke. She had found her 4th person, she hoped he would join them. Jess was easy to convince, but Luke? She thought it was gonna be hard. So she started to walk back to the diner with her 4 tickets.
When she walked in to the diner she saw jess cleaning a table and walked towards him and kissed him 'can I talk to you? I have some news :)' Jess nodded and they walked upstairs and sat down on his bed. 'so what did you wanne tell me?' Rory gave him a ticket.
He stared at the ticket and then looked up to her 'did you buy this? Why?' she smiled 'I didn't buy them.' His eyes widened 'Did you steal them?' she poked him 'no silly! I've won these' he smiled and kissed her 'how many?' '4'
'wow... I mean, wow, this is amazing and you want me to come with you?' he asked. 'of course, I wouldn't want to share it with anybody else, well except for my mom ofcourse' she laughed. 'For whom is the 4th ticket?' he asked. 'I think I wanne give it to Luke, you know...' he nodded 'because of what Sookie told you?' he smiled and Rory nodded.
They walked downstairs and Rory sat down at the counter. 'what do you wanne eat?' Luke asked when he looked up to her. 'eum... I think ... a burger and fries please' he nodded and gave the order to Caesar. When he started noting some thing down Rory took out a ticket and put it on the countertop and pushed it towards him.
He looked at it, then looked up amazed. 'What's that?' Rory giggled 'That's one of the 4 tickets I've won with a contest, it's for a trip to Egypt for 14 days.' Luke looked at it 'Why are you giving me one...??' he asked surprised 'Because I want you to come with me, mom and jess'
She looked at him... 'So are you joining us?' He waited a second, and thought about it... It was difficult for him to close the diner for 2 entire weeks... 'Well....' He started ...
************************** hope you like this chapter :) I've worked on it for probably an entire week, because my inspiration was completely gone ... so hope ya like it, I've choosed Egypt, because that's a country I know a little better then others cuz I visited it for about 6 or 7 times...