Pirates of the Caribbean – Feelings Too Deep To Admit To You

By Princess-Pirate

Email: lziceprincessyahoo.co.uk



Summary:
Pirates of the Caribbean turns 21st Century. Will, Lizzie, Jack and the rest of the POTC crew are all College students in my modern day story of their lives. The story tells the tale of what love can do to people if it is kept a secret for too long. It is completely different and is in no way linked to the 16th century movie.

Pairings: Will / Estrella, Jack / Anamaria, James / Elizabeth as well as other characters. Later Will (?) / Elizabeth, James / Estrella.

Disclaimer: All the characters, ships, and places in the Caribbean belong to Walt Disney and producer Jerry Bruckheimer (I wish). Some of the new characters are my own creations and therefore I have some ownership over them. The shopping centre is one in Cape Town, SA and I also don't own that name.

Warning: Rating will go up for blood, gore and suicide. Beware also for plotting and backstabbing galore.

A/N: Please read and let me know what you think. Reviews and ideas on coming chapters are most welcome.

A/N – Introducing:

Amarie, magical elf a.k.a Isabella Gonzales

scarlettxoxo a.k.a Leia Duncan

mellowyellow36 a.k.a. Elina Jones

JohnnyDeppfan0609 a.k.a. Rachel Lewerence

A Sly Fan a.k.a. Marina Rodriguez

Amarie, magical elf a.k.a Amelia McKenzie

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Chapter 15 – When The Water Rises, The Rats Abandon Ship

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Dancing Serpent Club

03:00 AM

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"Hey Brian" Anamaria said as she and Jack went back to the bar after scouting the club from the dance floor for the last two hours.

"Ana. Jack" Brian O'Hara said as he greeted them "What can I get you?"

"A double rum and Appletizer for me mate" Jack said "And you can get a vodka, passion fruit and soda."

"Coming right up" Brian said as he moved to get the drinks.

"Have you seen him yet?" Anamaria asked as she turned to look around the club again.

"No" Jack said as he felt his dagger pressing against his leg. It was well hidden and he knew it would come in handy some day.

"Here you go" Brian said as he placed the drinks on the counter. "No" he said as Jack reached for his wallet "These are on me. Something special for my best customers."

"Thanks mate" Jack said as he took a sip and looked at the dance floor once again.

"You looking for someone Jack?" Brian asked as he looked at his friends and best customers at his club.

"Actually yes" Jack said, "I'm looking for a man. He's about thirty. Wears a black denim and leather jacket. Name's Gibbs."

"That low down scum" Brian said, "If you want him, he's probable out back taking care of some deals. Why are you looking for him?"

"He owes me money?" Jack said as he got up "Thanks mate. We'll be right back. Hold our seats, will you?"

Brian nodded and the two walked towards the back door leading into the alley behind the club.

Jack pushed open the door and sure enough, there was Gibbs talking and handing some white stuff over to a man.

"It's Patrick" Anamaria whispered "One of James' friends."

Jack motioned her to be quiet and they slipped closer.

"Tell James I'm going to go away for a while" Gibbs said and Patrick nodded before heading back to the club.

Jack suddenly moved forward and pinned Gibbs to the wall. "I wouldn't do that if I were you mate" Jack said as he drew his dagger and pressed it to Gibbs' stomach as he struggled.

"What do you want?" he breathed.

"We need some answers," Anamaria said as she appeared next to Jack.

"Where has old Jamesie taken Will and Elizabeth?" Jack asked.

"Who?" Gibbs said but stopped as Jack tightened his grip on the dagger.

"I know you were in on the plan" Jack said, "James and Estrella couldn't do all of this on their own. They had your help to get them away. No I'm going to ask you again. Where did James take out two friends that he kidnapped today?"

"Okay" Gibbs said "But you have to protect me. If James found out he would have me killed. He's very powerful on the streets."

"What do you mean?" Anamaria asked as she stepped even closer.

"He's the main dealer in town" Gibbs said "Your friend saw him selling some items and that's why James wanted him out of the way. He'll kill me if he finds out I told you."

"All right" Anamaria said as she took out her mobile "Pick any country and we'll make sure you disappear. We'll buy you a plane ticket for tonight and give you spending money."

"And if you lied, I'll find you" Jack promised as she looked at Gibbs evilly.

Gibbs nodded. "He took them to a country cottage at the mountain reserve."

"Which one?" Jack asked.

"I swear I don't know" Gibbs said "He made me wait on the dirt road and then swapped cars with me telling me to come back to town and wait till he calls me. That's all I know."

Jack nodded and looked at Anamaria.

She nodded and started making the necessary arrangements.

"Come with us" Jack said, "We'll make sure you get to the airport."

Gibbs nodded and an hour later Jack and Anamaria dropped him at the airport with a plane ticket and enough money to make a new start.

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Country Cabin

03:45 AM

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"Shit" James swore as she threw his phone down "The bloody imbecile isn't answering his phone. I told him to keep it on twenty four hours a day."

"Don't worry" Amelia said as he stretched out on the large couch. "I'll have the job done before you know it and I won't need his help."

Good" James said as he sat down on the chair making space for Estrella to sit next to him.

"Where do we go from here?" she asked.

"Nowhere for now" James said "I want to have some fun with our friends first. But now we need top get some sleep."

Amelia nodded and Estrella showed her to her room before returning to the main bedroom where James was waiting for her.

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Country Cabin

Next Day

10:00 AM

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Elizabeth looked up as Will groaned, fighting his way to consciousness. "That's it love" she said as she took his hand in hers "Open your eyes for me. I need to see your eyes."

Will smiled sleepily and opened his eyes.

"Thank goodness you're awake," Elizabeth said as she hugged him, being careful not to injure him further.

"Where are we?" Will asked as he looked around.

"I don't know" Elizabeth said "I think we're in some cellar but where I have no idea."

"That bastard" Will said and then tried to sit up. He gasped as the movement caused a sharp pain to shoot through his body.

"Easy Will" Elizabeth said as she pushed him back down "You need to stay still. That wound's pretty deep and I've bandaged it as good as I could."

Thanks Lizzie" Will said "I…."

The large door opening pulled him from finishing his sentence.

Elizabeth looked up and glared at James.

"Hello mates" he laughed "It's time to have some fun."

He nodded and two other people came into the room. They didn't see their faces since they wore ski masks. They grabbed Will, whom screamed in pain and dragged him up the stairs.

"We won't be long. Darling" James said as he left and locked the door behind him.

A/N – Well, here's another chappie. I really don't like Gibbs so I mad him a coward form no on. Besides, he suppose to be the funny one but I decided the darker side is better. Sorry about the rum thing but it's my favorite as well – cheers.

I have enough characters for now so thanks to everyone for your input. I'll let you know as soon as I need some more input from your side.

I have one idea and I need your ideas. I see you all hate Norrington now so I need some help on his fate. Please let me know what you think. You don't have to choose one of mine. Let me know if you have one as well and we can post that one too. As you all know I am very open to ideas from my reviewers' opinions. So PLEASE let me know. Even if I choose one I will keep it secret until that chapter is posted – promise. If you want to be secretive about your choice, e-mail me at lz(it's an underscore that doesn't show when I upload)iceprincessyahoo.co.uk.

Here are your choices:

A – Jack kills James and Elizabeth / Ana shoots Estrella.

B – James and Estrella try to flee the country and are caught by the police.

C – James and Estrella flee and is never heard from again.

D – Will kills both of them in self-defense and to protect Elizabeth.

E – The police (Detective Lewerence) shoots one of the kidnappers and the killer.

So let me know!!!!

Bluekrystal1 – Good. So tell me what you want to happen next.

Amarie, magical elf – Well lass, here's your chance to make him die a painful as possible death. Hope you also like your character. She may turn good, but I'm not going to spoil the surprise.