AN: I've been a bum, as usual…hehe. Out on vacation. Ok, I'm a bum, but my lovely reviewers certainly aren't!!! (Gosh, the stupid lines won't work, so I can't separate my stanzas!!!) Oh yeah, this poem is still a sequel to "Him" and "Her", except this is the part where Raine is waiting for Laguna to come back. There will be yet another poem based on Laguna wanting to go back to Raine, but that will come later on. Enjoy!!!
Twisted Discourse- I'm so glad you liked the poem!!! The poem was kind of weird for me to make because I kept having to put the word "Daddy" after each line, and it was getting a bit…well…repetitive for me. I had a little inspiration from that from the song by Pink. Not sure what the title is, but haha, oh well. Thanks for your review!!!
Crescent Pearl-I swear I'm about to name you my constructive criticizer…your reviews really help me think about my poems. Well, I tried to stop with the short stanzas in this poem, not sure if it turned out okay or not, hehe. I really appreciate your reviews!!! Thank you!!!
Sefie Lynne tilmett- Hmm…what can I say…I love you!!! LOL. I love all of my reviews, actually. WOW. You left soooo many reviews!!! I feel so loved. Teardrop Haha! I really enjoyed reading your reviews, lol. I went into my hotmail inbox and BAM! There were a whole bunch of review alerts and I was like, "WHOA." Please take the time to review this poem, too! Thank you so much!!!
Man, I LOVE you guys…and girls! Keep those reviews coming!!!
Disclaimer: Oh sure, I may not own Final Fantasy or Squaresoft…but I've got my reviewers!!! Haha! Eat that!!
The cerulean sky is so clear today;
And the warm air light to the touch.
I sit here next to the window today,
To my heart your picture is clutched.
I wonder where you are right now,
In this dangerous yet beautiful world.
I wonder what you're doing right now,
What adventures have you unfurled?
I stare out at the open field,
The lush green grass and the chocolaty brown of the soil,
Everything I look at reminds me of you
And my emotions start to boil.
I try not to cry sometimes,
When I'm all alone in the night.
But only Hyne knows when I'll be free from this pain
If I will win this endless fight.
Our son will soon set his eyes on the world,
Yet you are still away.
He'll never be able to know his own father…
Do you know how heavy this burden weighs?
This is probably why I tried
To stay away from strangers like you.
Strangers who could capture my heart,
Strangers who could see me right through.
You opened the door to my closed heart once
And set my lonely soul free.
Please hear my heart's cries again,
And come back home to me.
AN: My constant chattering beats drums in my ears. Shut up me. Heehee. Just let me say one more thing…R/R!!!