A/N: Thanks for the reviews guys!! I can't believe that I have this many
reviews, as you may have seen, my other story only has 7 but it has been
out a few months, but this has 5 and I only got it out a few days ago.
Anyway, on with the story!!
Carbulla the great
Carbulla the great weasel paced up and down the lines of ranks, 'My fellow comrades, now is the time to strike Redwall abbey, it is only newly built and will not stand a chance against my score of hordes!!'
A roar of noise, from weasels, stoats, searats, lizards, frogs and pine martens alike followed this statement.
Carbulla surveyed his army, he had in total three-hundred scores of beasts.
Nothing could stand in his path, Carbulla had once been friends with Tsarmina the wildcat, now that she was dead he would tear apart the mouse who did this.
'I'm coming for you Martin!!!' He shouted into the gloom of the forest.
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Near the back of the ranks there were three stoats, they had been there under the rule of Carbulla's father.
They were extremely old and each had a number of scars on their faces.
They were named Neaslepaw, Nosesore and Bootleg.
They were concocting a plan to get rid of Carbulla and place themselves in charge of the army.
'When it is dark and the army is resting, we shall burn his tent and claim that Weaslering and his gang did it, then the army will be leaderless, since we have been here the longest, we will be in control.' Bootleg said.
'The plan is flawless,' chuckled Nosesore.
But what they didn't realise was that Weaslering had overheard them and had quickly gone to Carbulla.
'My lord, Neaslepaw, Nosesore and bootleg are planning to kill you tonight and blame it on me!' Weaslering said.
'Very good Measlering, if this is correct you will be made master of a score of hordes,' Carbulla said.
'It's Weaslering Milord, thank you' said Weaslering grovelling at Carbulla's feet.
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That night three stoats and a weasel had murder in their minds.
As Bootleg was lighting a torch to burn Carbulla's tent down with he heard a rustling in the bushes.
'Quiet! Do you want the whole camp awake?' he hissed at Neaslepaw and Nosesore.
Nosesore and Neaslepaw looked blankly at each other,
'But we weren't rustling the bushes,' said Neaslepaw.
Suddenly Carbulla leaped out, 'No you fools I was the one in the bushes!' and with that he swiftly drew hios great battle axe and sliced off the heads of the stoats.
'Now there will be no more treachery,' he said chuckling as he pushed the bodies into the bushes and went off for a well earned rest, unaware of the bright light behind him coming from the bushes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Alex: Oooh! What is it in the bushes, another time switch?
Feragoh the assasin: You're the one writing it idiot.
Raga Bol: Yeah, matey, get onb with de story, I wants to see what it is.
Alex: (Over the din of baddies in the room) Please review, with the next five reviews the next chapter will be out. I will also be adding all Warriors missed, thanx Lady Storm(A/N: I think that's her name) and deyn a for alerting me to my mistakes!
Carbulla the great
Carbulla the great weasel paced up and down the lines of ranks, 'My fellow comrades, now is the time to strike Redwall abbey, it is only newly built and will not stand a chance against my score of hordes!!'
A roar of noise, from weasels, stoats, searats, lizards, frogs and pine martens alike followed this statement.
Carbulla surveyed his army, he had in total three-hundred scores of beasts.
Nothing could stand in his path, Carbulla had once been friends with Tsarmina the wildcat, now that she was dead he would tear apart the mouse who did this.
'I'm coming for you Martin!!!' He shouted into the gloom of the forest.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Near the back of the ranks there were three stoats, they had been there under the rule of Carbulla's father.
They were extremely old and each had a number of scars on their faces.
They were named Neaslepaw, Nosesore and Bootleg.
They were concocting a plan to get rid of Carbulla and place themselves in charge of the army.
'When it is dark and the army is resting, we shall burn his tent and claim that Weaslering and his gang did it, then the army will be leaderless, since we have been here the longest, we will be in control.' Bootleg said.
'The plan is flawless,' chuckled Nosesore.
But what they didn't realise was that Weaslering had overheard them and had quickly gone to Carbulla.
'My lord, Neaslepaw, Nosesore and bootleg are planning to kill you tonight and blame it on me!' Weaslering said.
'Very good Measlering, if this is correct you will be made master of a score of hordes,' Carbulla said.
'It's Weaslering Milord, thank you' said Weaslering grovelling at Carbulla's feet.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
That night three stoats and a weasel had murder in their minds.
As Bootleg was lighting a torch to burn Carbulla's tent down with he heard a rustling in the bushes.
'Quiet! Do you want the whole camp awake?' he hissed at Neaslepaw and Nosesore.
Nosesore and Neaslepaw looked blankly at each other,
'But we weren't rustling the bushes,' said Neaslepaw.
Suddenly Carbulla leaped out, 'No you fools I was the one in the bushes!' and with that he swiftly drew hios great battle axe and sliced off the heads of the stoats.
'Now there will be no more treachery,' he said chuckling as he pushed the bodies into the bushes and went off for a well earned rest, unaware of the bright light behind him coming from the bushes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Alex: Oooh! What is it in the bushes, another time switch?
Feragoh the assasin: You're the one writing it idiot.
Raga Bol: Yeah, matey, get onb with de story, I wants to see what it is.
Alex: (Over the din of baddies in the room) Please review, with the next five reviews the next chapter will be out. I will also be adding all Warriors missed, thanx Lady Storm(A/N: I think that's her name) and deyn a for alerting me to my mistakes!