Hello again peoples! I forgot the disclaimer last time, so.
Disclaimer: Me no own, you no sue!
Oh, yeah, I've found the perfect pairing for kikyou (she doesn't deserve a capital letter) but I'm not gonna tell you. It'll be in the next chapter for sure. It is my theory she has to take someone to hell for everyone to be happy, and for this all (my story) to be right. Please read authors note on bottom.
As for REVIEWers.CONGRATULATIONS KOUGAS-GIRL! You were my first REVIEWer. I will love you forever!
So, without further ado.
Chappy 1. The things a girl's gotta do to get home
"words" 'thoughts' ************scene change ~~~~~~~~~~~~ time change
"InuYasha, SIT!!! HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU I HAVE TO GO BACK HOME! I HAVE A LIFE! AND I CAN'T STUDY FOR MY MATH TEST HERE WITH ALL THE DEMONS TRYING TO KILL ME FOR THE SHARDS! Do you understand, Inuyasha?" Kagome said the last part so sweetly everyone (Miroku, Sango, and Shippou) except Inuyasha (who was still teaching his friend, ground some new words) fainted anime style.
"WENCH! WHAT'D YA DO THAT FOR!"
"My name is Kagome! KA-GO-ME! Get it right for once! My name is not wench, bitch, girl, shard detector, or anything else you come up with!" By now, the young miko from the future had flames in her eyes. This was the 58th time they'd had this argument before. The others were just standing on the sidelines, a good distance away of course, eating some popcorn Kagome had given them a while back. "You'd think by now you'd be smart enough to know that,'' she said, sitting on the well, prepared to jump off.
But Inu just had to go and open his big mouth, now, didn't he? "You're not going anywhere, stupid girl! We still have shards to collect, and then I can become a full demon. BUT I CAN'T COLLECT THE SHARDS WITHOUT MY BAKA WENCH OF A SHARD DETECTER! Kikyou would never leave during such an important time." He added as an afterthought.
All any but the fighting couple could think was 'uh-oh. He's gonna get it.'
Kagome spoke with deadly calm. "Inuyasha, I'm going home, so why don't you just go SIT and wait for me while I go and SIT with my family and then SIT and soak in my bathtub. And if you don't just SIT here and wait until I come back, meaning if you come get me, I will SIT you to the OTHER SIDE OF THE PLANET!" Without further ado, she jumped into the Bone-Eater's Well and was surrounded by a familiar blue light.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~With Kagome
Kagome relaxed in the bath tub before dinner. She always felt so dirty in the past. She still couldn't understand why people didn't like to take a bath every day. Still, she could understand a little since even when they could find hot springs that still didn't feel as good as a modern-day bath.
Her thoughts began to drift to a certain dog-eared hanyou. 'Argh. I can't believe he's so rude all the time. I know I'm not as good as kikyou was, but I'm trying. I mean, I just found out about all this three years ago (a/n: yes, she's 18 now) and I'm doing much better with my miko powers now. But I guess I just can't compare with his stupid corpse of a dead girlfriend. I wish I could meet some nice guy. Not a pushover like Hojo, but a nice guy that can hold his ground in a fight.'
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~In Sengoku Jidai
The group watched as Kagome jumped to her time after sitting Inuyasha six feet under. Shippou (a/n: squeal at his kawaii-ness), while it was safe, went over to the hanyou and started kicking him and biting his ears. "You stupid inu! I can't believe you made Kagome leave like that! She always gets mad at you and then goes down the well, and then she doesn't come back for a long time." he began to cry.
Sango, feeling pity toward the child kitsune who's mother figure just left, picked Shippou up and carried him to Kirara. The neko transformed and followed Sango's orders of "Take Shippou as far away from InuYasha as you can without it being a danger." They'd gotten into this habit about a year ago to keep Shippou alive.
Miroku turned to InuYasha, who was still under the sit spell, saying, "It would be much less painful, my friend, if you'd just let her go home when she likes." Then he left quickly with Sango. Shortly after, the cry of "HENTAI!" and a crash could be heard, then silence.
Inu got up a while later. He debated on whether to follow or not, but he still hurt from that last round of sits, so he left to go sulk somewhere in a tree.
Little did anyone know, they had been watched.
~*~*~*
AN: Well, what does everyone think? I know it's a little slow but y'see, I have this problem.I can't write quick stories because I have to get character development going and all.So bear with me! If you don't like that, don't read my writing.
Anywho, was I was saying up top, I really, really need to find a title for this. I don't want it to stay 'Need Title' forever.
As always, all kinds of REVIEWs are welcome, even flames, as long as they help, so don't just go saying "I hate it!" Remember, if I don't have flames, I won't be able to roast my marshmallows, but I don't want them to burn! And if anyone wants me to add a glossary at any time, let me know.
I think that's all for now.
Ja Ne!
The anonymous anime mouse
Disclaimer: Me no own, you no sue!
Oh, yeah, I've found the perfect pairing for kikyou (she doesn't deserve a capital letter) but I'm not gonna tell you. It'll be in the next chapter for sure. It is my theory she has to take someone to hell for everyone to be happy, and for this all (my story) to be right. Please read authors note on bottom.
As for REVIEWers.CONGRATULATIONS KOUGAS-GIRL! You were my first REVIEWer. I will love you forever!
So, without further ado.
Chappy 1. The things a girl's gotta do to get home
"words" 'thoughts' ************scene change ~~~~~~~~~~~~ time change
"InuYasha, SIT!!! HOW MANY TIMES DO I HAVE TO TELL YOU I HAVE TO GO BACK HOME! I HAVE A LIFE! AND I CAN'T STUDY FOR MY MATH TEST HERE WITH ALL THE DEMONS TRYING TO KILL ME FOR THE SHARDS! Do you understand, Inuyasha?" Kagome said the last part so sweetly everyone (Miroku, Sango, and Shippou) except Inuyasha (who was still teaching his friend, ground some new words) fainted anime style.
"WENCH! WHAT'D YA DO THAT FOR!"
"My name is Kagome! KA-GO-ME! Get it right for once! My name is not wench, bitch, girl, shard detector, or anything else you come up with!" By now, the young miko from the future had flames in her eyes. This was the 58th time they'd had this argument before. The others were just standing on the sidelines, a good distance away of course, eating some popcorn Kagome had given them a while back. "You'd think by now you'd be smart enough to know that,'' she said, sitting on the well, prepared to jump off.
But Inu just had to go and open his big mouth, now, didn't he? "You're not going anywhere, stupid girl! We still have shards to collect, and then I can become a full demon. BUT I CAN'T COLLECT THE SHARDS WITHOUT MY BAKA WENCH OF A SHARD DETECTER! Kikyou would never leave during such an important time." He added as an afterthought.
All any but the fighting couple could think was 'uh-oh. He's gonna get it.'
Kagome spoke with deadly calm. "Inuyasha, I'm going home, so why don't you just go SIT and wait for me while I go and SIT with my family and then SIT and soak in my bathtub. And if you don't just SIT here and wait until I come back, meaning if you come get me, I will SIT you to the OTHER SIDE OF THE PLANET!" Without further ado, she jumped into the Bone-Eater's Well and was surrounded by a familiar blue light.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~With Kagome
Kagome relaxed in the bath tub before dinner. She always felt so dirty in the past. She still couldn't understand why people didn't like to take a bath every day. Still, she could understand a little since even when they could find hot springs that still didn't feel as good as a modern-day bath.
Her thoughts began to drift to a certain dog-eared hanyou. 'Argh. I can't believe he's so rude all the time. I know I'm not as good as kikyou was, but I'm trying. I mean, I just found out about all this three years ago (a/n: yes, she's 18 now) and I'm doing much better with my miko powers now. But I guess I just can't compare with his stupid corpse of a dead girlfriend. I wish I could meet some nice guy. Not a pushover like Hojo, but a nice guy that can hold his ground in a fight.'
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~In Sengoku Jidai
The group watched as Kagome jumped to her time after sitting Inuyasha six feet under. Shippou (a/n: squeal at his kawaii-ness), while it was safe, went over to the hanyou and started kicking him and biting his ears. "You stupid inu! I can't believe you made Kagome leave like that! She always gets mad at you and then goes down the well, and then she doesn't come back for a long time." he began to cry.
Sango, feeling pity toward the child kitsune who's mother figure just left, picked Shippou up and carried him to Kirara. The neko transformed and followed Sango's orders of "Take Shippou as far away from InuYasha as you can without it being a danger." They'd gotten into this habit about a year ago to keep Shippou alive.
Miroku turned to InuYasha, who was still under the sit spell, saying, "It would be much less painful, my friend, if you'd just let her go home when she likes." Then he left quickly with Sango. Shortly after, the cry of "HENTAI!" and a crash could be heard, then silence.
Inu got up a while later. He debated on whether to follow or not, but he still hurt from that last round of sits, so he left to go sulk somewhere in a tree.
Little did anyone know, they had been watched.
~*~*~*
AN: Well, what does everyone think? I know it's a little slow but y'see, I have this problem.I can't write quick stories because I have to get character development going and all.So bear with me! If you don't like that, don't read my writing.
Anywho, was I was saying up top, I really, really need to find a title for this. I don't want it to stay 'Need Title' forever.
As always, all kinds of REVIEWs are welcome, even flames, as long as they help, so don't just go saying "I hate it!" Remember, if I don't have flames, I won't be able to roast my marshmallows, but I don't want them to burn! And if anyone wants me to add a glossary at any time, let me know.
I think that's all for now.
Ja Ne!
The anonymous anime mouse