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Chappy 3. stalking a clay pot and pushover
"talking" 'thinking' *****scene change ~~~~~time change
Now, of course, just because kikyou said she wouldn't cause anyone harm didn't mean Kagome Higurashi, who had been the subject of several of her assassination attempts, would actually believe her. Who would believe a walking corpse like her anyways?
So when the couple left down the steep shrine steps, she came out from her hiding place by the door and followed them. This part actually wasn't very hard: She could feel the part of her soul that kikyou had stolen from her.
The only problem Kagome had with following kikyou and Hojo was the fact that she couldn't hear what they were saying, and it bugged her like an itch she couldn't scratch, like a really annoying hyper person, like.well, you get the idea. True, it was easier to hide in the city than amongst the trees, because there were so many people to hide behind, but so many people made a lot of noise. SHE COULDN'T EAVESDROP! So it was like hell for her. That was the whole point in following someone. What's the point if you can't hear what they're saying?
She was instantly reminded of how easy it was to hear her dog-eared hanyou friend and his ex talking like lovers. She could get so close, since Inuyasha couldn't concentrate on anyone or anything but his 'innocent and loveable kikyou' (*gag*), though she knew kikyou could feel her through their shared soul.
'At least I'm finally over him.' She thought. After seeing them together so many times, looking like they were so in love, she just couldn't take it any more. Her love for Inuyasha decreased until it remained at a brother- sister level. She didn't regret it at all, either. She reminded Inuyasha too much of kikyou for him to ever really love her and not kikyou. Besides that, now she didn't have to worry about the whole different times thing. Unless she fell for another guy there. She could imagine falling for Inuyasha's wonderfully BEAUTIFUL (in a manly way) older half-brother Sesshoumaru if he weren't such a human-hater. But she had to say, she wished he had Inu's cute little fuzzy dog-ears, then he'd be perfect. But it wasn't like any of that would ever happen.
Kagome sighed and took another sip out of her fruit smoothie and looked around. She was in a rather large café with a bunch of people sitting around, mostly teenagers and young couples. She looked around while waiting for people to stop blocking her view of kikyou and Hojo. She noticed particularly a group with four guys and two girls. (Guess who! ()
The first guy had his hair slicked back with a lot of gel. He wore a green school uniform and his face gave off that 'I'm a punk don't mess with me' looks.
The next guy was taller than the first. Short orange hair, bigger build than the other guy. He was in a blue uniform. Kagome couldn't really tell if he had any intelligence from his looks and stupid voice. He was just one of those guys you could tell wasn't the brightest crayon in the box just by looking at him.
The next guy.oh, she could have fainted from his magnificence. If Sesshoumaru was beautiful for a youkai, then this guy was a god among ningen. From his gorgeous, long, red hair, to his emerald green eyes, and even his pinkish school outfit on his beautiful body was enough to make any girl a little woozy. Perhaps she had stared a little too long, he was starting to look her way.
So she turned back to her smoothie and glanced at the last guy with sideways glances. He was shorter than the others with black hair, black clothes, and a white bandana tied around his forehead. And while the others were laughing at some joke the guy in green just made, most likely about the red-head since he looked rather embarrassed, she couldn't see any humor in his eyes, but was able to miraculously hear a quiet "Hn" in all the commotion. She sensed something from him and the red-head, but couldn't be too sure in this crowd, so she just let it drop.
The last two were girls, but she couldn't see what they really looked like because their backs faced her. Both wore blue sailor uniforms. The one closest to the short guy had blue hair that was held up in a ponytail and the one by the first guy had brown. Other than that, she couldn't tell anything, but she found herself wondering why they were all wearing uniforms. 'Oh, yeah, I came back a day late. It's Monday. School must have just gotten out. That's why Hojo was still in his uniform.'
Finally, she tore her gaze around the group of friends to resume her careful watch over kikyou. Only to find out that the couple sitting at their table wasn't them! She stood and searched frantically from her place. When she realized she couldn't sense the other fragment of her soul, she knew kikyou had convinced Hojo to take them away fast. Just to check she loosened her hold just a little on her miko powers; she hadn't wasted her shard-searching years sitting around on her butt all day; her powers had greatly improved. She still couldn't sense her soul. 'DAMN IT! She knows I can't sense her more than half a mile away because she has so little of my soul!' "Damn it." She cursed aloud. She quickly slammed a five on her table and rushed out of the café.
*With the yyh gang*
Everyone was gathered around a table at one of the best cafés in town to celebrate the completion of their 50th (successful) case. Later, they would go to Kuwabara's house to party.
So, they were all sitting around having a good time, but during a small lapse in jokes, he noticed a girl not two tables away who looked like she was far away. Not literally, but in thought. She broke from her thoughts with a sigh and took a sip of the purplish-red drink and began to look around half-heartedly.
Then her eyes rested first on Yusuke, then Kuwabara, and then finally on him, where her gaze stayed for quite a while until he was tempted to look up at her. When she noticed this, the raven-haired beauty blushed a pretty pink and looked away, but continued gazing at the Spirit Detectives through the corners of her eyes.
"Hey, Kurama, looks like you have another one for your fan club," Yusuke kidded.
"Yusuke!"
"What, Keiko. Pretty much all the girls at school want to be his girlfriend."
"Oh, look, Kurama's blushing!" said Boton in her somewhat accented voice. "Let's stop teasing him."
Meanwhile, Kurama and Hiei watched the girl as she looked startled about something, jump up, and look frantically around. Everyone, except for Keiko, snapped to attention when they felt a sudden burst of something like spirit energy-only purer-that quickly receded.
#Hey, Fox, did you feel that power?#
#Yes. What was it?#
#I'm not sure.#
#Are you going to follow?#
#Hn.# And, quicker than a wink, Hiei was gone, without a trace of ever having been there. (I no. Corny. But oh well.)
"Hey, where'd the shrimp go?" said our favorite baka.
"He went after that girl, baka."
"What'd'ya call me Urameshi(sp?)?"
"You heard me. BAKA." Yusuke gave a smug smile.
"You little-"
"Guys, guys! Please, stop fighting," said the peacemaker, Keiko.
Kurama and Boton sweatdropped. "Kurama, you don't think she's a danger, do you?"
"I'm not sure. Hiei might be able to tell us when he gets back. In the meantime, we should probably report this to Koenma. Whatever kind of energy she has, it isn't spirit energy."
"Yes, I believe you're right. Let's go then."
So the remaining part of the group followed Boton to an alley where she opened the portal to Reikai (spirit world), Kuwabara and Yusuke arguing all the way.
***End Chappy***
Wow, that was my longest chappy yet. What do you guys think? Finally got the yyh group in here! Yay! And how did everyone like my Kurama description? Yes, he is a god in my book. Just wait till I get to Youko.hope I didn't spoil anything there.
Anywho, I know I said I'd get the results of your voting on Friday, but I forgot I have this girl scout thing I have to do, so I'll have chappy 6 up on Sunday, when I get back. Sry. Anywho, I might update one more time during the week if I don't get too much homework.
Here's how the title stuff is going. I took some stuff off that I made up cuz I wanted to narrow stuff down to the top 3.
Stupid Inuyasha: *
A Girl's Job: *
Red Flowers:
I also had a good idea(in my opinion) as to what to do for pairings. This is a list of the final pairings.
Kur/youko/kag
Kikyou/hojo
Yus/kei
Kuw/yuk
San/Hiei
Mir/Megumi(kenshin)
Kao/ken(kenshin)
Notice anything missing. Yes, poor Inuyasha! Who should he be with? Should he have someone at all? REVIEW and give your opinion, as always. I'm not rushing or anything cuz it's not too imperative right now.
About Miroku, Sango, and Hiei: Okay, I was really confused about what to do with these three in the beginning, but since I think Sango isn't the kind of girl who would fall in love with someone who gropes her all the time (not that I'm against this pairing!) and she and Hiei have some things in common (both lost family, have 1 member that doesn't really know them) I think they make a cute couple. And besides, I would have done a separate one for San/Mir, but I had an awesome (may be exaggeration) idea about Miroku and Megumi (the doctor lady from Kenshin.)
NOTES TO REVIEWERS:
Xianghua: I bet you're happy about this pairing. You're welcome ^_^
SerinintyRules: Thank you so much for voting. You were my first, and I really needed help to clear up my thoughts. I'm sorry about it not being San/Mir, but I hope you can understand from my above note. And thanx for the site, too, it was really helpful. I even bookmarked it^_^.
Kurama's gf the punk kagome: thanx so much for the title suggestion. I liked it. Now if my REVIEWers would just vote.
Hiei is mine forever: thanx for the compliment, it means a lot to a beginning writer such as myself. AND IT INSPIRES ME TO WRITE CHAPPYS FASTER (*HINTHINT*) ^_^. Next time you review, could you give me some good kkur/youko/kag fics, or e-mail them to me. That's my favorite pairing.
AND FOR EVERYONE ELSE THAT HAS REVIEWED THANX SO MUCH FOR YOUR SUPPORT. YOU'RE ALL SO WONDERFUL TO ME. NOW ONEGAI GO AND VOTE FOR THE TITLE.
Ja Ne!
The anonymous anime mouse
Chappy 3. stalking a clay pot and pushover
"talking" 'thinking' *****scene change ~~~~~time change
Now, of course, just because kikyou said she wouldn't cause anyone harm didn't mean Kagome Higurashi, who had been the subject of several of her assassination attempts, would actually believe her. Who would believe a walking corpse like her anyways?
So when the couple left down the steep shrine steps, she came out from her hiding place by the door and followed them. This part actually wasn't very hard: She could feel the part of her soul that kikyou had stolen from her.
The only problem Kagome had with following kikyou and Hojo was the fact that she couldn't hear what they were saying, and it bugged her like an itch she couldn't scratch, like a really annoying hyper person, like.well, you get the idea. True, it was easier to hide in the city than amongst the trees, because there were so many people to hide behind, but so many people made a lot of noise. SHE COULDN'T EAVESDROP! So it was like hell for her. That was the whole point in following someone. What's the point if you can't hear what they're saying?
She was instantly reminded of how easy it was to hear her dog-eared hanyou friend and his ex talking like lovers. She could get so close, since Inuyasha couldn't concentrate on anyone or anything but his 'innocent and loveable kikyou' (*gag*), though she knew kikyou could feel her through their shared soul.
'At least I'm finally over him.' She thought. After seeing them together so many times, looking like they were so in love, she just couldn't take it any more. Her love for Inuyasha decreased until it remained at a brother- sister level. She didn't regret it at all, either. She reminded Inuyasha too much of kikyou for him to ever really love her and not kikyou. Besides that, now she didn't have to worry about the whole different times thing. Unless she fell for another guy there. She could imagine falling for Inuyasha's wonderfully BEAUTIFUL (in a manly way) older half-brother Sesshoumaru if he weren't such a human-hater. But she had to say, she wished he had Inu's cute little fuzzy dog-ears, then he'd be perfect. But it wasn't like any of that would ever happen.
Kagome sighed and took another sip out of her fruit smoothie and looked around. She was in a rather large café with a bunch of people sitting around, mostly teenagers and young couples. She looked around while waiting for people to stop blocking her view of kikyou and Hojo. She noticed particularly a group with four guys and two girls. (Guess who! ()
The first guy had his hair slicked back with a lot of gel. He wore a green school uniform and his face gave off that 'I'm a punk don't mess with me' looks.
The next guy was taller than the first. Short orange hair, bigger build than the other guy. He was in a blue uniform. Kagome couldn't really tell if he had any intelligence from his looks and stupid voice. He was just one of those guys you could tell wasn't the brightest crayon in the box just by looking at him.
The next guy.oh, she could have fainted from his magnificence. If Sesshoumaru was beautiful for a youkai, then this guy was a god among ningen. From his gorgeous, long, red hair, to his emerald green eyes, and even his pinkish school outfit on his beautiful body was enough to make any girl a little woozy. Perhaps she had stared a little too long, he was starting to look her way.
So she turned back to her smoothie and glanced at the last guy with sideways glances. He was shorter than the others with black hair, black clothes, and a white bandana tied around his forehead. And while the others were laughing at some joke the guy in green just made, most likely about the red-head since he looked rather embarrassed, she couldn't see any humor in his eyes, but was able to miraculously hear a quiet "Hn" in all the commotion. She sensed something from him and the red-head, but couldn't be too sure in this crowd, so she just let it drop.
The last two were girls, but she couldn't see what they really looked like because their backs faced her. Both wore blue sailor uniforms. The one closest to the short guy had blue hair that was held up in a ponytail and the one by the first guy had brown. Other than that, she couldn't tell anything, but she found herself wondering why they were all wearing uniforms. 'Oh, yeah, I came back a day late. It's Monday. School must have just gotten out. That's why Hojo was still in his uniform.'
Finally, she tore her gaze around the group of friends to resume her careful watch over kikyou. Only to find out that the couple sitting at their table wasn't them! She stood and searched frantically from her place. When she realized she couldn't sense the other fragment of her soul, she knew kikyou had convinced Hojo to take them away fast. Just to check she loosened her hold just a little on her miko powers; she hadn't wasted her shard-searching years sitting around on her butt all day; her powers had greatly improved. She still couldn't sense her soul. 'DAMN IT! She knows I can't sense her more than half a mile away because she has so little of my soul!' "Damn it." She cursed aloud. She quickly slammed a five on her table and rushed out of the café.
*With the yyh gang*
Everyone was gathered around a table at one of the best cafés in town to celebrate the completion of their 50th (successful) case. Later, they would go to Kuwabara's house to party.
So, they were all sitting around having a good time, but during a small lapse in jokes, he noticed a girl not two tables away who looked like she was far away. Not literally, but in thought. She broke from her thoughts with a sigh and took a sip of the purplish-red drink and began to look around half-heartedly.
Then her eyes rested first on Yusuke, then Kuwabara, and then finally on him, where her gaze stayed for quite a while until he was tempted to look up at her. When she noticed this, the raven-haired beauty blushed a pretty pink and looked away, but continued gazing at the Spirit Detectives through the corners of her eyes.
"Hey, Kurama, looks like you have another one for your fan club," Yusuke kidded.
"Yusuke!"
"What, Keiko. Pretty much all the girls at school want to be his girlfriend."
"Oh, look, Kurama's blushing!" said Boton in her somewhat accented voice. "Let's stop teasing him."
Meanwhile, Kurama and Hiei watched the girl as she looked startled about something, jump up, and look frantically around. Everyone, except for Keiko, snapped to attention when they felt a sudden burst of something like spirit energy-only purer-that quickly receded.
#Hey, Fox, did you feel that power?#
#Yes. What was it?#
#I'm not sure.#
#Are you going to follow?#
#Hn.# And, quicker than a wink, Hiei was gone, without a trace of ever having been there. (I no. Corny. But oh well.)
"Hey, where'd the shrimp go?" said our favorite baka.
"He went after that girl, baka."
"What'd'ya call me Urameshi(sp?)?"
"You heard me. BAKA." Yusuke gave a smug smile.
"You little-"
"Guys, guys! Please, stop fighting," said the peacemaker, Keiko.
Kurama and Boton sweatdropped. "Kurama, you don't think she's a danger, do you?"
"I'm not sure. Hiei might be able to tell us when he gets back. In the meantime, we should probably report this to Koenma. Whatever kind of energy she has, it isn't spirit energy."
"Yes, I believe you're right. Let's go then."
So the remaining part of the group followed Boton to an alley where she opened the portal to Reikai (spirit world), Kuwabara and Yusuke arguing all the way.
***End Chappy***
Wow, that was my longest chappy yet. What do you guys think? Finally got the yyh group in here! Yay! And how did everyone like my Kurama description? Yes, he is a god in my book. Just wait till I get to Youko.hope I didn't spoil anything there.
Anywho, I know I said I'd get the results of your voting on Friday, but I forgot I have this girl scout thing I have to do, so I'll have chappy 6 up on Sunday, when I get back. Sry. Anywho, I might update one more time during the week if I don't get too much homework.
Here's how the title stuff is going. I took some stuff off that I made up cuz I wanted to narrow stuff down to the top 3.
Stupid Inuyasha: *
A Girl's Job: *
Red Flowers:
I also had a good idea(in my opinion) as to what to do for pairings. This is a list of the final pairings.
Kur/youko/kag
Kikyou/hojo
Yus/kei
Kuw/yuk
San/Hiei
Mir/Megumi(kenshin)
Kao/ken(kenshin)
Notice anything missing. Yes, poor Inuyasha! Who should he be with? Should he have someone at all? REVIEW and give your opinion, as always. I'm not rushing or anything cuz it's not too imperative right now.
About Miroku, Sango, and Hiei: Okay, I was really confused about what to do with these three in the beginning, but since I think Sango isn't the kind of girl who would fall in love with someone who gropes her all the time (not that I'm against this pairing!) and she and Hiei have some things in common (both lost family, have 1 member that doesn't really know them) I think they make a cute couple. And besides, I would have done a separate one for San/Mir, but I had an awesome (may be exaggeration) idea about Miroku and Megumi (the doctor lady from Kenshin.)
NOTES TO REVIEWERS:
Xianghua: I bet you're happy about this pairing. You're welcome ^_^
SerinintyRules: Thank you so much for voting. You were my first, and I really needed help to clear up my thoughts. I'm sorry about it not being San/Mir, but I hope you can understand from my above note. And thanx for the site, too, it was really helpful. I even bookmarked it^_^.
Kurama's gf the punk kagome: thanx so much for the title suggestion. I liked it. Now if my REVIEWers would just vote.
Hiei is mine forever: thanx for the compliment, it means a lot to a beginning writer such as myself. AND IT INSPIRES ME TO WRITE CHAPPYS FASTER (*HINTHINT*) ^_^. Next time you review, could you give me some good kkur/youko/kag fics, or e-mail them to me. That's my favorite pairing.
AND FOR EVERYONE ELSE THAT HAS REVIEWED THANX SO MUCH FOR YOUR SUPPORT. YOU'RE ALL SO WONDERFUL TO ME. NOW ONEGAI GO AND VOTE FOR THE TITLE.
Ja Ne!
The anonymous anime mouse