Hello, everyone!
Sorry I was behind my promised deadline by, like, FOUR DAYS but the thing is, I know what I want to write, just not how to write it. I am writing this as I go, after all. And my teachers are giving me way too much homework.
THE TITLE IS NOW 'RED FLOWERS' in case no one noticed. At first it was a tie between the two, but then I did the 'eeny, meeny, miny, mo' thing, and it landed on red flowers, soooo
I'm so happy my story is being REVIEWed. Anywho, REVIEWer responses are at the bottom.
Disclaimer: Me no own, you no sue.
Chappy 6: A new school pt. 2
"talking" 'thinking' ****scene change ~~~~time change (a/n most of the time)
Kagome and Keiko merrily made their way to where Keiko sat with her friends every day. In the short morning they had spent together, they were already chatting like old friends. But even hearing how strange her friends were didn't prepare Kag for the shock.
Of course, she should have realized Keiko was one of the girls from her hair style and uniform, but everyone has their blonde moments. (sorry to all blonds. I'm one too, though! ^_^).
There, right in front of her, were the guys from yesterday. Three of them anyways. She really wished it was the tall orange haired guy that was missing and not the shorter guy. This one didn't look like he could hold an intelligent conversation for even a second. But the handsome red-head more than made up with his stupidity with his stunning looks.
She noticed she was staring, yet again, when Keiko interrupted. "Kagome, I'd like you to meet my friends. This is Yusuke." She pointed to the guy with gelled hair and a green uniform. "This is Kuwabara." She pointed to the idiot. "This is Shuiichi." Kagome took special note of him. "And this is Boton." The girl with blue hair and eyes full of happiness smiled and waved at Kagome. "Everyone, I'd like you to meet Higurashi, Kagome."
While everyone said a polite 'hello' or 'yo' everyone's favorite baka exclaimed, "Hey, you're the girl from the café!"
Yusuke hit him over the head. "Duh, Kuwabara. You just figured that out?"
"You tryin' t'start somethin', Urameshi?!"
During this, the rest of the group had opened a space for Kagome, so she sat between Boton and Shuiichi. By this time, the fight between the two rivals had gotten ugly, even uglier than Kuwabara (couldn't resist^_^;) "Hey, shouldn't we break up the fight?"
"No, it should all be over with soon enough," exclaimed the ever-happy Boton. Coincidently, just as she said this, Yusuke knocked Kuwabara out to the point where a vulture was ten times more beautiful than the baka.
"So this happens all the time?"
"Ehehe." Sweatdrops all around.
(a/n: okay, the rest isn't interesting enough, so I'm not gonna waste my time typing it. If you must know, it goes something like this: kag talks bout herself and non-sengoku jidai life, they go to class.)
******~~~End of school
"So I guess we'll see you tomorrow, then, Kagome?" asked Keiko. Kagome lived in the opposite direction of the majority of the group.
"Yeah, see you guys around." The rest of the group said their goodbyes and left.
Kagome sighed. 'Well, my first day of school went better than I hoped.' She soon arrived at the bottom of the steep steps to her family's shrine. Above her, she heard voices: Two that never seemed to be apart. Arriving at the summit of the steps, she spotted Kikyou and Hojo. Although she still didn't trust kikyou not to try to harm her, Kagome had, over the years, built up a good sixth sense of who and who not to trust, and somehow she believed she wouldn't cause others harm. Besides, Kag had a feeling her incarnation had certain feelings for a certain pushover.
If all else failed, Kag needed only to remind herself of one thing: while kikyou was here, she couldn't drag Inuyasha to hell with her. Of course, it came with a sacrifice from Kagome. To keep kikyou from taking souls, Kag had to give her some of her own, so that kikyou had a third of it. A part of her wondered why she didn't try to kill kikyou. Then their problems would be over. But, in less than a week, kikyou was beginning to change, become a better person, become happier. And Kagome couldn't take away anyone's happiness (except people she really didn't like, such as Naraku). Besides, Hojo was head over heals, and Kagome wanted him off her back.
So she put up with the walking corpse. Speaking of corpses, she barely spared her reincarnation a glance as she walked into the house. "Hey, mom!"
"Oh, Kagome, you're back! I'm in the kitchen. How was school?" Kagome made her way into the kitchen where her mom was putting on water for tea.
"It was alright, I guess. I'm going to Grandma's place now, though."
"Okay, just be back by dinner."
"I will."
CH. END
Sorry it's short, but my brain's fried: a result of too much homework! Tell me in your REVIEWs if I said, spelled, etc. anything wrong. I'm too lazy to check over this right now. ^_^;
WHEN CERTAIN CHARACTERS/GROUPS ARE COMING INTO PLOT LINE:
Okay, a lot of you are wondering when kenshin and friends is going to come into the plot line. As I've said before, I have to have a lot of character development in my stories (so don't expect really any action at the moment), so since yyh just came in and all, kenshin probably won't be there until around chappy 15, I'm guessing.
Kag's going into the past in the chappy after the next chappy (I think), so that's when we get to see the relationships there.
Kuro honoo: That's actually what I was gonna have happen before(have inu look for kag to apologize or something), but then, it kinda came in a dream a pretty funny way to get meg and mir together. I might use that for future stories though.
Xianghua: you're very welcome. I thought you'd like the san/hiei thing. Sango's coming in next chappy.
Kawaiikitsunes: thanx for the vote!
SilentDark: I'm so happy I'm the first! Yay. I win.one imaginary cookie^_^; Y'know, we really think the same with the hojo/kik thing. They're the ones messing with every1's love life, get rid of them. I was also thinking about putting inu and boton together, but then, inu shouldn't date dead people. No one should date dead people. So I'll probably have to make up some hanyou. Any suggestions?
Shinigami Clara: If you were talking about the cliffy, sorry but it wasn't that bad anyways. If you were talking about me not updating for, like, a week, then let me just say "I HATE MY TEACHERS!" *deep breaths* CONGRATULATIONS! You were my first flame. Kinda. You win a year's supply of imaginary cookies, any kind you like. Yum! ^___^
Fawn the panther: just a little too late to vote on pairings, except for inu. Oh yeah, I read your profile (I do things like this a lot when I'm bored) and it's Rurouni Kenshin and YuYu Hakusho.
Sorry I was behind my promised deadline by, like, FOUR DAYS but the thing is, I know what I want to write, just not how to write it. I am writing this as I go, after all. And my teachers are giving me way too much homework.
THE TITLE IS NOW 'RED FLOWERS' in case no one noticed. At first it was a tie between the two, but then I did the 'eeny, meeny, miny, mo' thing, and it landed on red flowers, soooo
I'm so happy my story is being REVIEWed. Anywho, REVIEWer responses are at the bottom.
Disclaimer: Me no own, you no sue.
Chappy 6: A new school pt. 2
"talking" 'thinking' ****scene change ~~~~time change (a/n most of the time)
Kagome and Keiko merrily made their way to where Keiko sat with her friends every day. In the short morning they had spent together, they were already chatting like old friends. But even hearing how strange her friends were didn't prepare Kag for the shock.
Of course, she should have realized Keiko was one of the girls from her hair style and uniform, but everyone has their blonde moments. (sorry to all blonds. I'm one too, though! ^_^).
There, right in front of her, were the guys from yesterday. Three of them anyways. She really wished it was the tall orange haired guy that was missing and not the shorter guy. This one didn't look like he could hold an intelligent conversation for even a second. But the handsome red-head more than made up with his stupidity with his stunning looks.
She noticed she was staring, yet again, when Keiko interrupted. "Kagome, I'd like you to meet my friends. This is Yusuke." She pointed to the guy with gelled hair and a green uniform. "This is Kuwabara." She pointed to the idiot. "This is Shuiichi." Kagome took special note of him. "And this is Boton." The girl with blue hair and eyes full of happiness smiled and waved at Kagome. "Everyone, I'd like you to meet Higurashi, Kagome."
While everyone said a polite 'hello' or 'yo' everyone's favorite baka exclaimed, "Hey, you're the girl from the café!"
Yusuke hit him over the head. "Duh, Kuwabara. You just figured that out?"
"You tryin' t'start somethin', Urameshi?!"
During this, the rest of the group had opened a space for Kagome, so she sat between Boton and Shuiichi. By this time, the fight between the two rivals had gotten ugly, even uglier than Kuwabara (couldn't resist^_^;) "Hey, shouldn't we break up the fight?"
"No, it should all be over with soon enough," exclaimed the ever-happy Boton. Coincidently, just as she said this, Yusuke knocked Kuwabara out to the point where a vulture was ten times more beautiful than the baka.
"So this happens all the time?"
"Ehehe." Sweatdrops all around.
(a/n: okay, the rest isn't interesting enough, so I'm not gonna waste my time typing it. If you must know, it goes something like this: kag talks bout herself and non-sengoku jidai life, they go to class.)
******~~~End of school
"So I guess we'll see you tomorrow, then, Kagome?" asked Keiko. Kagome lived in the opposite direction of the majority of the group.
"Yeah, see you guys around." The rest of the group said their goodbyes and left.
Kagome sighed. 'Well, my first day of school went better than I hoped.' She soon arrived at the bottom of the steep steps to her family's shrine. Above her, she heard voices: Two that never seemed to be apart. Arriving at the summit of the steps, she spotted Kikyou and Hojo. Although she still didn't trust kikyou not to try to harm her, Kagome had, over the years, built up a good sixth sense of who and who not to trust, and somehow she believed she wouldn't cause others harm. Besides, Kag had a feeling her incarnation had certain feelings for a certain pushover.
If all else failed, Kag needed only to remind herself of one thing: while kikyou was here, she couldn't drag Inuyasha to hell with her. Of course, it came with a sacrifice from Kagome. To keep kikyou from taking souls, Kag had to give her some of her own, so that kikyou had a third of it. A part of her wondered why she didn't try to kill kikyou. Then their problems would be over. But, in less than a week, kikyou was beginning to change, become a better person, become happier. And Kagome couldn't take away anyone's happiness (except people she really didn't like, such as Naraku). Besides, Hojo was head over heals, and Kagome wanted him off her back.
So she put up with the walking corpse. Speaking of corpses, she barely spared her reincarnation a glance as she walked into the house. "Hey, mom!"
"Oh, Kagome, you're back! I'm in the kitchen. How was school?" Kagome made her way into the kitchen where her mom was putting on water for tea.
"It was alright, I guess. I'm going to Grandma's place now, though."
"Okay, just be back by dinner."
"I will."
CH. END
Sorry it's short, but my brain's fried: a result of too much homework! Tell me in your REVIEWs if I said, spelled, etc. anything wrong. I'm too lazy to check over this right now. ^_^;
WHEN CERTAIN CHARACTERS/GROUPS ARE COMING INTO PLOT LINE:
Okay, a lot of you are wondering when kenshin and friends is going to come into the plot line. As I've said before, I have to have a lot of character development in my stories (so don't expect really any action at the moment), so since yyh just came in and all, kenshin probably won't be there until around chappy 15, I'm guessing.
Kag's going into the past in the chappy after the next chappy (I think), so that's when we get to see the relationships there.
Kuro honoo: That's actually what I was gonna have happen before(have inu look for kag to apologize or something), but then, it kinda came in a dream a pretty funny way to get meg and mir together. I might use that for future stories though.
Xianghua: you're very welcome. I thought you'd like the san/hiei thing. Sango's coming in next chappy.
Kawaiikitsunes: thanx for the vote!
SilentDark: I'm so happy I'm the first! Yay. I win.one imaginary cookie^_^; Y'know, we really think the same with the hojo/kik thing. They're the ones messing with every1's love life, get rid of them. I was also thinking about putting inu and boton together, but then, inu shouldn't date dead people. No one should date dead people. So I'll probably have to make up some hanyou. Any suggestions?
Shinigami Clara: If you were talking about the cliffy, sorry but it wasn't that bad anyways. If you were talking about me not updating for, like, a week, then let me just say "I HATE MY TEACHERS!" *deep breaths* CONGRATULATIONS! You were my first flame. Kinda. You win a year's supply of imaginary cookies, any kind you like. Yum! ^___^
Fawn the panther: just a little too late to vote on pairings, except for inu. Oh yeah, I read your profile (I do things like this a lot when I'm bored) and it's Rurouni Kenshin and YuYu Hakusho.
