The Longest Day
Part 2
Note- thanks for the reviews they made me really happy so I decided to rush and write this fast more reviews would rock thanks for my first review Shadowdog I hope u like this next part
..."bang"...
Carter sat there stunned and shocked as he watched the man by the parked police car jump back from the sound of the bullet hitting the windshield. "Next time maybe I'll aim to kill doc" Carter stared around at the now empty street praying that someone would help him. "Get out of the car Now!" Carter opened his door and stepped out and watched in disbelief as Jay placed the gun to his temple. Jay shoved him into the back seat and warned him about the consequences of screaming. "You say one damn word doc and I will not hesitate to kill you understand" Carter only nodded scared to say that one word. "well how about this you can talk when spoken to ok" Carter still uncertain nodded his head to show his understanding. "trying to be funny doc well I don't like that crap" Before Carter could react he felt a sharp blow to his back as Jay slammed the breaks throwing Carter into his seat.
Jay continued to drive and talk but Carter couldn't concentrate on anything but the pain running through his back and causing his head to pound with the beat of his heart.
They were in the car for a little more then half of an hour when Carter realized that he had no idea of where he was being taken or the reason for it. He looked around hoping to see someone or something familiar. Jay noticed Carter's wondering eyes and look of confusion. "So doc what's on your mind?" he said it in a ridiculing way making Carter hesitate answering him. "Answer me doc I don't like being ignored" he said while showing off his gun to Carter. "I....I was wondering where we are going... that's all" Jay watched Carter through the rear view mirror and looked at him innocently "well we are going to a party with some old friends of mine, is that ok with you doc?" Carter sat still not caring to answer "don't worry doc we will take really good care of you, don't you trust me?" Carter didn't realize the anger building up inside of him and that his expression showed it. "What's wrong doc got a problem?" Carter realized that he was getting angry and dropped his guard as he fought with himself to relax. "Don't call me doc" is what he yearned to scream but he just sat there letting all his anger boil up inside.
They stopped at what looked like an old motel. Jay got out of the jeep "get out!" he screamed at Carter. Carter moved as quickly as he could and got out of the vehicle. Once out Jay grabbed his arm and twisted it painfully behind his back causing Carter to wince in pain. Jay then realized that he had left the gun in the jeep so he decided to get it before Carter could realize it was missing. He roughly slammed Carter against the side of the jeep causing him to crumple to the ground in pain. Jay quickly retrieved his gun and ordered Carter to get up. "Get up doc this is just the beginning"
Carter managed to get to his feet using his rage to drive him to prove that he could beat this. Jay forced the gun the Carter's back and pushed him into the motel's lobby and down a set of stairs leading to a large basement where three other men stared at Carter then at Jay.
One of the men stood up "hey Jay whose your pal here?" "Chuck this is my very good friend Dr. Carter say hi doc" carter shifted his feet uneasily not knowing what to do. Another man rose and stated "so Carter is it I am Sal and I am very glad to meet you" the evil glint in his tone caused Carter to push back. "Wait doc stay it wouldn't be fun without you" hissed the third man sitting in the dark corner "My names Ted but hey you're a friend of a friend call me Snake" Carter shifted his eyes between all of them scared of what the future held for him.
Jay pulled Carter back and pushed him up against the wall "These are my friends now don't be rude" just then another man grabbed Carter and they handcuffed him to a pipe near the floor. Carter sat there watching them from his corner praying for it all to be a dream.
...Back at County...
"See you later Peter have a nice evening" Elizabeth said as she passed Dr. Benton leaving to return home. Peter went out to the parking lot and got into his car. On his ride home he noticed police swarming what seemed to be a crime scene a few blocks from County. Not wanting to take a longer route home he decided to take his chances and headed in the direction of the sirens. As he passed he asked what had happened and as the cop explained the happenings of what had occurred according to a witness something caught Benton's eye.
He opened his door and walked a couple feet before bending down to pick up what looked like a leather wallet with the initials JTC III upon opening it he realized there was no ID but within a second he noticed a card on the ground someone's driver's license upon grabbing it he realized what he already knew. He rushed to the cop he had been talking to only a minute before and explain what he had found.
Full of fear Benton reached for his phone and called County with the hopes that Carter would be there although Benton hadn't seen his car upon leaving. Mark answered the phone because Jerry hadn't returned from his snack break. "Hello" "Hey Mark is Carter there?" "No he left some time ago" with that Benton cursed under his breath "I'll call back but I have to go" Benton hung up the phone and called Carters house but there was no answer. He then got back into his car and called County again to explain the situation.
Benton decided maybe if he beeped Carter he would get an answer but he had little hope. Benton vowed to himself to find Carter whether he was in trouble or not in fear of losing a person he considered his best friend.
...Back to the motel...
Carter's pager went off causing all the men to stare down at him threateningly. They grabbed it from his belt and read the number. They decided to call it for fun. "Hello" Benton answered his phone "Hey there who is this?" "Dr. Benton, who's this?" "Just a friend of the docs or as you call him Carter" "You son of a ..." Benton was cut off "Now now Dr. B, its ok if I call you that right because remember who has the gun" "What do you want?" "Just to have some fun" Benton glanced at his phone reading the number it displayed and writing it down on his hand. "Click" and the conversation was over
Note- I wrote as much as I could hope it was good I am just making this all up as I go, please review and any comments would help too thanks.
Note- thanks for the reviews they made me really happy so I decided to rush and write this fast more reviews would rock thanks for my first review Shadowdog I hope u like this next part
..."bang"...
Carter sat there stunned and shocked as he watched the man by the parked police car jump back from the sound of the bullet hitting the windshield. "Next time maybe I'll aim to kill doc" Carter stared around at the now empty street praying that someone would help him. "Get out of the car Now!" Carter opened his door and stepped out and watched in disbelief as Jay placed the gun to his temple. Jay shoved him into the back seat and warned him about the consequences of screaming. "You say one damn word doc and I will not hesitate to kill you understand" Carter only nodded scared to say that one word. "well how about this you can talk when spoken to ok" Carter still uncertain nodded his head to show his understanding. "trying to be funny doc well I don't like that crap" Before Carter could react he felt a sharp blow to his back as Jay slammed the breaks throwing Carter into his seat.
Jay continued to drive and talk but Carter couldn't concentrate on anything but the pain running through his back and causing his head to pound with the beat of his heart.
They were in the car for a little more then half of an hour when Carter realized that he had no idea of where he was being taken or the reason for it. He looked around hoping to see someone or something familiar. Jay noticed Carter's wondering eyes and look of confusion. "So doc what's on your mind?" he said it in a ridiculing way making Carter hesitate answering him. "Answer me doc I don't like being ignored" he said while showing off his gun to Carter. "I....I was wondering where we are going... that's all" Jay watched Carter through the rear view mirror and looked at him innocently "well we are going to a party with some old friends of mine, is that ok with you doc?" Carter sat still not caring to answer "don't worry doc we will take really good care of you, don't you trust me?" Carter didn't realize the anger building up inside of him and that his expression showed it. "What's wrong doc got a problem?" Carter realized that he was getting angry and dropped his guard as he fought with himself to relax. "Don't call me doc" is what he yearned to scream but he just sat there letting all his anger boil up inside.
They stopped at what looked like an old motel. Jay got out of the jeep "get out!" he screamed at Carter. Carter moved as quickly as he could and got out of the vehicle. Once out Jay grabbed his arm and twisted it painfully behind his back causing Carter to wince in pain. Jay then realized that he had left the gun in the jeep so he decided to get it before Carter could realize it was missing. He roughly slammed Carter against the side of the jeep causing him to crumple to the ground in pain. Jay quickly retrieved his gun and ordered Carter to get up. "Get up doc this is just the beginning"
Carter managed to get to his feet using his rage to drive him to prove that he could beat this. Jay forced the gun the Carter's back and pushed him into the motel's lobby and down a set of stairs leading to a large basement where three other men stared at Carter then at Jay.
One of the men stood up "hey Jay whose your pal here?" "Chuck this is my very good friend Dr. Carter say hi doc" carter shifted his feet uneasily not knowing what to do. Another man rose and stated "so Carter is it I am Sal and I am very glad to meet you" the evil glint in his tone caused Carter to push back. "Wait doc stay it wouldn't be fun without you" hissed the third man sitting in the dark corner "My names Ted but hey you're a friend of a friend call me Snake" Carter shifted his eyes between all of them scared of what the future held for him.
Jay pulled Carter back and pushed him up against the wall "These are my friends now don't be rude" just then another man grabbed Carter and they handcuffed him to a pipe near the floor. Carter sat there watching them from his corner praying for it all to be a dream.
...Back at County...
"See you later Peter have a nice evening" Elizabeth said as she passed Dr. Benton leaving to return home. Peter went out to the parking lot and got into his car. On his ride home he noticed police swarming what seemed to be a crime scene a few blocks from County. Not wanting to take a longer route home he decided to take his chances and headed in the direction of the sirens. As he passed he asked what had happened and as the cop explained the happenings of what had occurred according to a witness something caught Benton's eye.
He opened his door and walked a couple feet before bending down to pick up what looked like a leather wallet with the initials JTC III upon opening it he realized there was no ID but within a second he noticed a card on the ground someone's driver's license upon grabbing it he realized what he already knew. He rushed to the cop he had been talking to only a minute before and explain what he had found.
Full of fear Benton reached for his phone and called County with the hopes that Carter would be there although Benton hadn't seen his car upon leaving. Mark answered the phone because Jerry hadn't returned from his snack break. "Hello" "Hey Mark is Carter there?" "No he left some time ago" with that Benton cursed under his breath "I'll call back but I have to go" Benton hung up the phone and called Carters house but there was no answer. He then got back into his car and called County again to explain the situation.
Benton decided maybe if he beeped Carter he would get an answer but he had little hope. Benton vowed to himself to find Carter whether he was in trouble or not in fear of losing a person he considered his best friend.
...Back to the motel...
Carter's pager went off causing all the men to stare down at him threateningly. They grabbed it from his belt and read the number. They decided to call it for fun. "Hello" Benton answered his phone "Hey there who is this?" "Dr. Benton, who's this?" "Just a friend of the docs or as you call him Carter" "You son of a ..." Benton was cut off "Now now Dr. B, its ok if I call you that right because remember who has the gun" "What do you want?" "Just to have some fun" Benton glanced at his phone reading the number it displayed and writing it down on his hand. "Click" and the conversation was over
Note- I wrote as much as I could hope it was good I am just making this all up as I go, please review and any comments would help too thanks.