The Longest Day
Part 16
Note- You guys want a longer chapter well here you go I am aiming for 1500 to 2000 words so read and so on.
As Jay moved closer to the door he began to struggle as Carter collapsed and he had to carry all of his weight. While he was distracted by Carter Peter saw an opportunity to react.
As Jay stopped to position his arm differently around Carter he didn't realize Peter moving up to him with rage blaring in his eyes. Peter brought his arm back and with full force swung his closed fist and hit Jay square in the mouth causing him to fall over and fumble with his gun.
Jay dropped Carter and he fell to the floor in a heap. Peter fell to his knees and began assessing Carter's injuries. "Come on Carter man can you hear me?" Peter squeezed Carter's hand as he prayed for a response. Carter began to close his hand to show that he was conscious. He opened his eyes to look back a Peter.
"Where is he?" Carter asked in a hardly audible whisper. He saw jay move out of the corner of his eye but he was too late as he watched Peter fall back.
The bullet went through Peter's arm causing no grave damage but either way it hurt. Peter grabbed his arm and looked at the blood then up at Jay as he sat up. By this time the two policemen had moved up and reequipped themselves with their guns which were aimed steadily at Jay. "Mr. Drake put down the weapon and step away from Dr. Carter or we will be forced to shot you"
At that command Jay began to lower his gun aiming it directly at Carter's head. "By the time you get your shot off I will shot as well and kill him so I think that it is your move because as I am sure you can tell I don't give a damn if I die as long as I get revenge. Of course this isn't how I wanted to do this, but hey I work with what I got and right now I have the do and all of you so let me do my job then you can kill me" A wicked smile spread across Jay's lips after he had spoken.
Jay moved in and knelt down beside Carter he glared up at Peter "Hey Dr. B how have you been? Can you do me a favor and back up to join the rest of your friends there" Jay glanced down at Carter then back up at Peter "if you don't do me that favor well then I think that we both understand the consequences don't we" Peter looked at Carter then slowly backed away without taking him eyes off of his friend.
Once Peter made it back to where Mark was standing in shock Mark took control and began to work on Peter's injury. Peter didn't argue because he understood that for the time being there was nothing he could do he was helpless and that feeling was killing him and tearing him apart on the inside. Jay began to laugh menacingly and he waved the gun while still keeping it aimed at Carter's head. "You know I do all of this and what do I get nothing" rage fills Jay's eyes as he grips the gun tighter and presses it to Carter's temple causing him the cringe as the hot metal touched his skin burning him. "They all called me crazy since I was little just because I was different, I mean crazy what a messed up word. They said that I take things to seriously well I say so what that's just determination" Jay ranted as he filled with rage.
The world seemed to become silent for the short time that Jay talked. All the attention in the room was taken by this madman who was slowly cracking up under the pressure. He glared around the room as if seeing into their souls burning them from the inside out. Chills ran through everyone as they watched in horror as this man that they new nothing about took over their lives and forced them to watch the painful scene.
"Stop staring at me, don't you know that's rude? I mean what's so great about this Dr. Carter he only causes pain can't you see that? So someone please enlighten me on the greatness of the doc here make me care" Jay searched the room for someone to answer then lifted his free hand "You" he called out as he pointed at a young med student behind the desk. "Come closer darling. What's your name?"
The young women moved slowly out from behind the admit desk until she came within ten feet of the man she knew as Mr. Drake. She locked eyes with him as she spoke "My name is Abby" she said with her voice trembling move with each word.
Jay looked her up and down scanning every aspect of her into his mind. "So, Abby what can you tell me about the doc that is so great?" he stared up at her intimidating her and causing her to pause before answering. "What can't think of anything?" he replied tilting his head to the side like a puppy dog.
"No" she blurted out as she fixed the words in her head before saying them out loud. "Dr. Carter is a caring and... sweet man... he wants to help people if they let him" Tears ran down her cheeks as she spoke. "He is nice and respected by everyone he gets to know" Jay cut her off.
"Well I think that me and the doc have gotten to know each other well enough and yet I don't respect him, I think he needs to learn to give it up and admit to defeat" Jay said as he looked over Carter with a look of disgust.
Mark Greene stepped forward "If you knew Carter at all you would know that he never gives up no mater how bad the odds may be" This sudden outburst jolted Jay's attention as his eyes landed on Mark "Carter is strong and he works to understand people he doesn't judge them, like you are doing to him. Carter is a great doctor who is good as what he does and works well with patients and staff, one mistake doesn't change that" Mark stood his ground as he felt Peter's hand rest on his shoulder in support. "I don't know who the hell you are, but nothing could give you the right to do this to anyone especially Carter" Mark looked down at Carter catching a quick glimpse of a smile that faded as quickly as it appeared. Jay rolled his head around loosening up his neck "So what you're really saying is why am I doing this?" Mark didn't move as he awaited an answer that he knew everyone wanted to know. Jay rolled his eyes "Well if you haven't gotten it by now, well I am sure you have all heard of me, you know Jay" he laughed slightly but stopped to watch the looks on everyone's faces as the words settled in. "Yeah I am that guy, I know Mr. Drake you see that's what we call an alias everyone with me so far?" he looked around like a teacher awaiting his students to ask questions when none came he continued "Well my name was Jason and of course by now you know my beautiful last name. Well after countless therapy sessions They found that I was well crazy as most would call it and well that name just wouldn't suit my new life, so I changed it to Jason Drake get the picture?" he scanned the room tauntingly as if expecting them to have understood all of this at an earlier time.
Carter listened to Jay an took in every word he said and ran plans through his mind what to say and do to turn the tables. "You're crazy so what? So are a lot of people, live with it move on" with each word Carter felt stronger like he could win. Carter looked up at Jay the same way Jay had looked through the people around him.
Jay griped the gun tightly and pulled carter up to a sitting position beside him. "So what... move on... you act like you understand but you don't you just dismiss my brother like they all did to me as if your better, I needed help but they wouldn't help me because none of them understood and I can't just move on doc can you after seeing the pretty little thing dieing in front of you?"
Carter held his gaze "Lucy was a pure beautiful person who I will never forget and as I move on which I am working at she will be with me, but you can get help, but this act or whatever gets you attention and that's all you want just to be noticed. I have to admit you do it well look at this turn out" Carter moved his hand presenting the room.
Jay sat there and looked at all the people as all of the eyes stayed fixed on him and Carter. "Don't psychoanalyze me doc, I know who I am and I can't just move on, either way this isn't about me it is about you doc and how thanks to you not paying attention to a patient in need my brother is in special little jail for loonies and this is about how you are going to pay" Jay felt himself regain power as carter lowered his eyes to the ground and his head fell slightly.
"I do pay each and everyday for what happened and that pain is worse then anything you can do to me, so come on make me pay for what I couldn't control" Carter watched Jay fidget with the gun as he lost control of the whole situation. "Hey Jay" Carter said in a sad voice. Jay looked at him not knowing what to expect Carter met Jay's eyes with his and open his mouth to speak. In one swift movement Carter released himself from Jay's grip and tackled him as they both fought for the gun.
Note- Well there you have it the longest of all of my chapters so you had better be smiling. It was harder then I thought to think that much, but well worth it so I hope that you enjoyed my story so far and I am unsure if I will be able to get another chapter out this weekend but I will try so either way have a great weekend and rock on.
Note- You guys want a longer chapter well here you go I am aiming for 1500 to 2000 words so read and so on.
As Jay moved closer to the door he began to struggle as Carter collapsed and he had to carry all of his weight. While he was distracted by Carter Peter saw an opportunity to react.
As Jay stopped to position his arm differently around Carter he didn't realize Peter moving up to him with rage blaring in his eyes. Peter brought his arm back and with full force swung his closed fist and hit Jay square in the mouth causing him to fall over and fumble with his gun.
Jay dropped Carter and he fell to the floor in a heap. Peter fell to his knees and began assessing Carter's injuries. "Come on Carter man can you hear me?" Peter squeezed Carter's hand as he prayed for a response. Carter began to close his hand to show that he was conscious. He opened his eyes to look back a Peter.
"Where is he?" Carter asked in a hardly audible whisper. He saw jay move out of the corner of his eye but he was too late as he watched Peter fall back.
The bullet went through Peter's arm causing no grave damage but either way it hurt. Peter grabbed his arm and looked at the blood then up at Jay as he sat up. By this time the two policemen had moved up and reequipped themselves with their guns which were aimed steadily at Jay. "Mr. Drake put down the weapon and step away from Dr. Carter or we will be forced to shot you"
At that command Jay began to lower his gun aiming it directly at Carter's head. "By the time you get your shot off I will shot as well and kill him so I think that it is your move because as I am sure you can tell I don't give a damn if I die as long as I get revenge. Of course this isn't how I wanted to do this, but hey I work with what I got and right now I have the do and all of you so let me do my job then you can kill me" A wicked smile spread across Jay's lips after he had spoken.
Jay moved in and knelt down beside Carter he glared up at Peter "Hey Dr. B how have you been? Can you do me a favor and back up to join the rest of your friends there" Jay glanced down at Carter then back up at Peter "if you don't do me that favor well then I think that we both understand the consequences don't we" Peter looked at Carter then slowly backed away without taking him eyes off of his friend.
Once Peter made it back to where Mark was standing in shock Mark took control and began to work on Peter's injury. Peter didn't argue because he understood that for the time being there was nothing he could do he was helpless and that feeling was killing him and tearing him apart on the inside. Jay began to laugh menacingly and he waved the gun while still keeping it aimed at Carter's head. "You know I do all of this and what do I get nothing" rage fills Jay's eyes as he grips the gun tighter and presses it to Carter's temple causing him the cringe as the hot metal touched his skin burning him. "They all called me crazy since I was little just because I was different, I mean crazy what a messed up word. They said that I take things to seriously well I say so what that's just determination" Jay ranted as he filled with rage.
The world seemed to become silent for the short time that Jay talked. All the attention in the room was taken by this madman who was slowly cracking up under the pressure. He glared around the room as if seeing into their souls burning them from the inside out. Chills ran through everyone as they watched in horror as this man that they new nothing about took over their lives and forced them to watch the painful scene.
"Stop staring at me, don't you know that's rude? I mean what's so great about this Dr. Carter he only causes pain can't you see that? So someone please enlighten me on the greatness of the doc here make me care" Jay searched the room for someone to answer then lifted his free hand "You" he called out as he pointed at a young med student behind the desk. "Come closer darling. What's your name?"
The young women moved slowly out from behind the admit desk until she came within ten feet of the man she knew as Mr. Drake. She locked eyes with him as she spoke "My name is Abby" she said with her voice trembling move with each word.
Jay looked her up and down scanning every aspect of her into his mind. "So, Abby what can you tell me about the doc that is so great?" he stared up at her intimidating her and causing her to pause before answering. "What can't think of anything?" he replied tilting his head to the side like a puppy dog.
"No" she blurted out as she fixed the words in her head before saying them out loud. "Dr. Carter is a caring and... sweet man... he wants to help people if they let him" Tears ran down her cheeks as she spoke. "He is nice and respected by everyone he gets to know" Jay cut her off.
"Well I think that me and the doc have gotten to know each other well enough and yet I don't respect him, I think he needs to learn to give it up and admit to defeat" Jay said as he looked over Carter with a look of disgust.
Mark Greene stepped forward "If you knew Carter at all you would know that he never gives up no mater how bad the odds may be" This sudden outburst jolted Jay's attention as his eyes landed on Mark "Carter is strong and he works to understand people he doesn't judge them, like you are doing to him. Carter is a great doctor who is good as what he does and works well with patients and staff, one mistake doesn't change that" Mark stood his ground as he felt Peter's hand rest on his shoulder in support. "I don't know who the hell you are, but nothing could give you the right to do this to anyone especially Carter" Mark looked down at Carter catching a quick glimpse of a smile that faded as quickly as it appeared. Jay rolled his head around loosening up his neck "So what you're really saying is why am I doing this?" Mark didn't move as he awaited an answer that he knew everyone wanted to know. Jay rolled his eyes "Well if you haven't gotten it by now, well I am sure you have all heard of me, you know Jay" he laughed slightly but stopped to watch the looks on everyone's faces as the words settled in. "Yeah I am that guy, I know Mr. Drake you see that's what we call an alias everyone with me so far?" he looked around like a teacher awaiting his students to ask questions when none came he continued "Well my name was Jason and of course by now you know my beautiful last name. Well after countless therapy sessions They found that I was well crazy as most would call it and well that name just wouldn't suit my new life, so I changed it to Jason Drake get the picture?" he scanned the room tauntingly as if expecting them to have understood all of this at an earlier time.
Carter listened to Jay an took in every word he said and ran plans through his mind what to say and do to turn the tables. "You're crazy so what? So are a lot of people, live with it move on" with each word Carter felt stronger like he could win. Carter looked up at Jay the same way Jay had looked through the people around him.
Jay griped the gun tightly and pulled carter up to a sitting position beside him. "So what... move on... you act like you understand but you don't you just dismiss my brother like they all did to me as if your better, I needed help but they wouldn't help me because none of them understood and I can't just move on doc can you after seeing the pretty little thing dieing in front of you?"
Carter held his gaze "Lucy was a pure beautiful person who I will never forget and as I move on which I am working at she will be with me, but you can get help, but this act or whatever gets you attention and that's all you want just to be noticed. I have to admit you do it well look at this turn out" Carter moved his hand presenting the room.
Jay sat there and looked at all the people as all of the eyes stayed fixed on him and Carter. "Don't psychoanalyze me doc, I know who I am and I can't just move on, either way this isn't about me it is about you doc and how thanks to you not paying attention to a patient in need my brother is in special little jail for loonies and this is about how you are going to pay" Jay felt himself regain power as carter lowered his eyes to the ground and his head fell slightly.
"I do pay each and everyday for what happened and that pain is worse then anything you can do to me, so come on make me pay for what I couldn't control" Carter watched Jay fidget with the gun as he lost control of the whole situation. "Hey Jay" Carter said in a sad voice. Jay looked at him not knowing what to expect Carter met Jay's eyes with his and open his mouth to speak. In one swift movement Carter released himself from Jay's grip and tackled him as they both fought for the gun.
Note- Well there you have it the longest of all of my chapters so you had better be smiling. It was harder then I thought to think that much, but well worth it so I hope that you enjoyed my story so far and I am unsure if I will be able to get another chapter out this weekend but I will try so either way have a great weekend and rock on.