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A/N: I just realized that Fanfiction.net has ignored my formatting and I can't figure out how to fix it! Please bear with me. Each capitalized word is the beginning of a line. Every four lines is a stanza. Sorry to put y'all through that!!! I love my (two) reviewers!!! Thanx for your response. I would love it if more reviewed!!
Achilles was teaching His cousin to fight When suddenly he stopped And looked toward the light
His friend Odysseus Had come to see If he would sail Across the sea
Before he spoke Achilles announced "If Agamemnon had sent you Then it's you I denounce"
Odysseus then spoke He said, "M'lord You are no judge of character I came of my own accord."
Achilles laughed Then sat upon a seat And offered his great friend The choicest meat
However, his friend Though great as he was He declined the Hospitality for his cause
Speaking with great gravity He said to the warrior "There will be a war As I'm sure you have heard from courtier
I want you to fight We need the best Troy has proven To be a test"
As Achilles thought His cousin urged "It would be great To see many armies merged"
Still Achilles Hesitated As he sat on a beach And meditated
As he thought The water stirred Achilles looked up As his vision blurred
A goddess stood before him Beautiful yet old And said, "O my son What is this trouble I am told?
Someone spoke of Troy Someone spoke of war And I say to you: if you go You will exist no more
You will not return Your days have a number Your body will rest In eternal slumber"
Achilles turned And contemplated his fate For he still was Without a mate
Was this great war Worth the cost? Would the cause he fought for Be forever lost?
Well? What does he decide? Review please!!!!!!
A/N: I just realized that Fanfiction.net has ignored my formatting and I can't figure out how to fix it! Please bear with me. Each capitalized word is the beginning of a line. Every four lines is a stanza. Sorry to put y'all through that!!! I love my (two) reviewers!!! Thanx for your response. I would love it if more reviewed!!
Achilles was teaching His cousin to fight When suddenly he stopped And looked toward the light
His friend Odysseus Had come to see If he would sail Across the sea
Before he spoke Achilles announced "If Agamemnon had sent you Then it's you I denounce"
Odysseus then spoke He said, "M'lord You are no judge of character I came of my own accord."
Achilles laughed Then sat upon a seat And offered his great friend The choicest meat
However, his friend Though great as he was He declined the Hospitality for his cause
Speaking with great gravity He said to the warrior "There will be a war As I'm sure you have heard from courtier
I want you to fight We need the best Troy has proven To be a test"
As Achilles thought His cousin urged "It would be great To see many armies merged"
Still Achilles Hesitated As he sat on a beach And meditated
As he thought The water stirred Achilles looked up As his vision blurred
A goddess stood before him Beautiful yet old And said, "O my son What is this trouble I am told?
Someone spoke of Troy Someone spoke of war And I say to you: if you go You will exist no more
You will not return Your days have a number Your body will rest In eternal slumber"
Achilles turned And contemplated his fate For he still was Without a mate
Was this great war Worth the cost? Would the cause he fought for Be forever lost?
Well? What does he decide? Review please!!!!!!