(A/N yes I decided to take some peoples advice and add more to my poems
book thingy I wrote this quickly and I know I probably have many mistakes
but I need a beta reader so this is my little notice wanted: a beta reader
for my poems in this book thingy please!)
I finally know
She sat down
Not knowing what to do
Her red hair
Falling on her face
As the tears poured out
Unbeknownst to her
The sadness she could not bear
Her brothers
Would never understand what she felt
But neither would she
He had showed so much hatred
That had hurt her and others
And now he revealed his true feelings for her
She could not bear it because
She knew he was gone
The blonde man
That she had once loathed
Had finally told her of his love
For her but why did he choose
To tell her this moment when
He passed into the veil
The veil of death
book thingy I wrote this quickly and I know I probably have many mistakes
but I need a beta reader so this is my little notice wanted: a beta reader
for my poems in this book thingy please!)
I finally know
She sat down
Not knowing what to do
Her red hair
Falling on her face
As the tears poured out
Unbeknownst to her
The sadness she could not bear
Her brothers
Would never understand what she felt
But neither would she
He had showed so much hatred
That had hurt her and others
And now he revealed his true feelings for her
She could not bear it because
She knew he was gone
The blonde man
That she had once loathed
Had finally told her of his love
For her but why did he choose
To tell her this moment when
He passed into the veil
The veil of death
