Author's Note: Ok, and on to the show!
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2:00 PM Lyoko's Polar Region
"Jeremy?"
"Ugh..."
"Jeremy..."
"Alieta? I-is that you?"
"Yes, Jeremy, it is. How are you feeling?"
"Like total crap."
"It's your first time. You should at least feel queasy."
"First time? What are talking about Ulreck?"
"Look around."
"Wait... You-you mean... I'm in... Lyoko??"
Indeed he was. As he looked around, he finally got to experience what it was like in Lyoko. But he knew there was going to be trouble. There was no way to know what was coming unless Xana chose to say so. And it was very doubtful he would.
"So, uh, did he activate the life points?'
"Yeah, that and disconnected two of the three scanners."
"WHAT!? Yumi, are you sure??"
"Yep, Alieta check and it's true."
"Crap."
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2:15 PM Control Room
"It has been 1 hour since the sudden attacks from the unknown person named Xana. Reports indicate that almost all military and police personnel has been captured or killed, all military structure and police structure has been destroyed, and many armories and weaponry depots have been destroyed along with the weapons themselves. Reports also indicate that anyone who has attempted to make a stand against these creatures has been critically wounded or killed."
"Ha, ha. My plan is going well. Oh! What is this? Jeremy is awake! Time to begin broadcast number 2!"
Once again, Xana lovely face appeared on all TVs.
"Hello, hello again!
"You have been very good indeed. A few of you were indeed stupid enough to try and stop my armies. Oh well, what a pity. Now then, on to business.
"I want you all to surrender to me and make me your unconditional ruler and leader. You have 15 minutes. In the mean time, watch the coming battle."
And with that, he was finished.
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2:17 PM Lyoko Polar Region
Trudging through the snow plains of the polar region, the team attempt to keep a happy face in spite of a pretty bleak situation.
"So, uh, Jeremy, how do you like Lyoko?"
"Well, it's not bad..."
"You'll get used to it. But..."
"But what Odd?"
"We have company."
Coming from the past behind them, a low rumbling could be heard. Xana, it seemed, wanted to play.
"7... 8... 9... 10 Hornets?!? 3 Cannons??"
"Holy crap, um, well, I can only think of one thing to do..." mumbled Jeremy
"Do tell, what is that?"
"RUN LIKE HELL!"
"Jeremy, I have to hand it to you, good plan!"
As they ran, their enemies began to send a firestorm towards them. The team returned fire and did not stop for anything.
"Come now guys. They just want to play."
"Xana! Thanks a lot!"
"Your quite welcome. Hmm, you are out in the open... Can you say 'reinforcements'?"
"You wouldn't!!"
"Oh, Odd, I would and I WILL!"
"SHIT!"
At that moment, it was pretty obvious that they were not going to have an easy time.
"Alieta! Can't you generate some terrain for us to use?"
"Yeah, sure!"
Alieta when into a trance and focused all her might on making some sort of terrain to use. In just moments, hills began to form all over the plain and everyone ducked behind one.
"All right you virtual freaks! Let's go! Jeremy, let see your new powers in action!" Odd called out.
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Author's note: Okay, I'd say I'm doing well. I'm finally getting reviews and I've got a pretty good idea of the plot.
But I need help. Chapter 4 needs a touch up, as one reviewer said. But, I say it is okay. Why? Read back, it was NOT the team who gave in to Xana's threat against Sissi. No, it was Sissi's FATHER who gave in! The team wouldn't have cared if he killed her!
But anyway, if anybody can find a way to improve that chapter, I will put it in right after the original. Send your version to thesuperdotaol.com and I'll pick the best one (rather, the one I like)
Till next time!
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2:00 PM Lyoko's Polar Region
"Jeremy?"
"Ugh..."
"Jeremy..."
"Alieta? I-is that you?"
"Yes, Jeremy, it is. How are you feeling?"
"Like total crap."
"It's your first time. You should at least feel queasy."
"First time? What are talking about Ulreck?"
"Look around."
"Wait... You-you mean... I'm in... Lyoko??"
Indeed he was. As he looked around, he finally got to experience what it was like in Lyoko. But he knew there was going to be trouble. There was no way to know what was coming unless Xana chose to say so. And it was very doubtful he would.
"So, uh, did he activate the life points?'
"Yeah, that and disconnected two of the three scanners."
"WHAT!? Yumi, are you sure??"
"Yep, Alieta check and it's true."
"Crap."
............................................................................................................
2:15 PM Control Room
"It has been 1 hour since the sudden attacks from the unknown person named Xana. Reports indicate that almost all military and police personnel has been captured or killed, all military structure and police structure has been destroyed, and many armories and weaponry depots have been destroyed along with the weapons themselves. Reports also indicate that anyone who has attempted to make a stand against these creatures has been critically wounded or killed."
"Ha, ha. My plan is going well. Oh! What is this? Jeremy is awake! Time to begin broadcast number 2!"
Once again, Xana lovely face appeared on all TVs.
"Hello, hello again!
"You have been very good indeed. A few of you were indeed stupid enough to try and stop my armies. Oh well, what a pity. Now then, on to business.
"I want you all to surrender to me and make me your unconditional ruler and leader. You have 15 minutes. In the mean time, watch the coming battle."
And with that, he was finished.
............................................................................................................
2:17 PM Lyoko Polar Region
Trudging through the snow plains of the polar region, the team attempt to keep a happy face in spite of a pretty bleak situation.
"So, uh, Jeremy, how do you like Lyoko?"
"Well, it's not bad..."
"You'll get used to it. But..."
"But what Odd?"
"We have company."
Coming from the past behind them, a low rumbling could be heard. Xana, it seemed, wanted to play.
"7... 8... 9... 10 Hornets?!? 3 Cannons??"
"Holy crap, um, well, I can only think of one thing to do..." mumbled Jeremy
"Do tell, what is that?"
"RUN LIKE HELL!"
"Jeremy, I have to hand it to you, good plan!"
As they ran, their enemies began to send a firestorm towards them. The team returned fire and did not stop for anything.
"Come now guys. They just want to play."
"Xana! Thanks a lot!"
"Your quite welcome. Hmm, you are out in the open... Can you say 'reinforcements'?"
"You wouldn't!!"
"Oh, Odd, I would and I WILL!"
"SHIT!"
At that moment, it was pretty obvious that they were not going to have an easy time.
"Alieta! Can't you generate some terrain for us to use?"
"Yeah, sure!"
Alieta when into a trance and focused all her might on making some sort of terrain to use. In just moments, hills began to form all over the plain and everyone ducked behind one.
"All right you virtual freaks! Let's go! Jeremy, let see your new powers in action!" Odd called out.
............................................................................................................
Author's note: Okay, I'd say I'm doing well. I'm finally getting reviews and I've got a pretty good idea of the plot.
But I need help. Chapter 4 needs a touch up, as one reviewer said. But, I say it is okay. Why? Read back, it was NOT the team who gave in to Xana's threat against Sissi. No, it was Sissi's FATHER who gave in! The team wouldn't have cared if he killed her!
But anyway, if anybody can find a way to improve that chapter, I will put it in right after the original. Send your version to thesuperdotaol.com and I'll pick the best one (rather, the one I like)
Till next time!
