Author's Note: I would first like to give out a thanks to a reviewer.
Kohari, thank you for your idea, I think I may do just that on account of
I'm running out of ideas. To anybody who reads this: If you have an
idea that I could use, please tell me. E-mail, review, etc.! Okay, and on
with the show.
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5:20 PM The Elevator
As the team rode up the elevator, everybody was silent. Then, suddenly, the elevator shook violently and knocked everybody to the ground and the lights flickered for a moment. Soon after, the lights went dead, and the elevator suddenly dropped down.
It came to rest between the Control Room and the Scanners.
"Owww!" As the team untangled themselves from each other, Ulreck tried to reactivate the elevator.
As he continued to punch the big red button, nothing happened. "Oh, man, why now?" Ulreck said.
"What is the matter, Ulreck?" Asked Alieta.
"No power to the elevator."
"Well, what do we do now?" said Jeremy.
It was Odd who came up with the plan. "Simple, Jeremy, we climb." And with that he pointed to the shaft access hatch on the ceiling.
Jeremy looked at him with a thoughtful expression, and then he smiled and said "Nice idea."
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Much Later (5:30 PM)
As the team walked out of the factory, it suddenly hit them, where could Xana be?
"So, uh, where do we look for Xana?"
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5:35 PM The Mall
Where in the heck could those kids be?
He checked the school, the around the town, and now he checked the mall. But for some reason, he could not find them. Gary looked around the mall, and noted that Xana had indeed been here. Come to think of it, not only could he not find those kids, he couldn't find a single person ANYWHERE!
As he passed The Electronics Shop Yes, it is an actual shop. My father and grandfather owned it. He decided to check out the old factory. Something about that place nagged him, anyway.
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5:40 PM The Park
"Man, it seems our friend had fun at the mall."
Ulreck was right. Even though the fire fighters were able to put out the fire, there was still smoke billowing out of the store Xana set fire to.
"Looks like we are on the right track, huh?"
"Oh shut up Odd!"
"Will you two quit it? Look!"
Up at the mall parking lot, they saw a Volkswagen beetle pull out and leave the parking lot. But, as soon as it had begun to leave, it stopped. Then, the driver stepped out and began to run toward them.
"HEY! YOU'RE IN DANGER!!!! YOUR FRIEND ISN'T WHO HE SAYS HE IS!!!!!"
"Huh? What do you mean?" Yumi asked once Gary got close enough.
"I'm telling you, your friend isn't who he is!"
"Who?" Asked Jeremy.
He pointed at Jeremy. "He's not Jeremy! He's Xana!"
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Author's Note: Woah, can it be? Jeremy is Xana? What do you think? Is Gary whacked out of his mind, or is he telling the truth? To be continued!
By the way, I bet your sick of these 'Author's Notes', aren't you? See ya!
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5:20 PM The Elevator
As the team rode up the elevator, everybody was silent. Then, suddenly, the elevator shook violently and knocked everybody to the ground and the lights flickered for a moment. Soon after, the lights went dead, and the elevator suddenly dropped down.
It came to rest between the Control Room and the Scanners.
"Owww!" As the team untangled themselves from each other, Ulreck tried to reactivate the elevator.
As he continued to punch the big red button, nothing happened. "Oh, man, why now?" Ulreck said.
"What is the matter, Ulreck?" Asked Alieta.
"No power to the elevator."
"Well, what do we do now?" said Jeremy.
It was Odd who came up with the plan. "Simple, Jeremy, we climb." And with that he pointed to the shaft access hatch on the ceiling.
Jeremy looked at him with a thoughtful expression, and then he smiled and said "Nice idea."
............................................................................................................
Much Later (5:30 PM)
As the team walked out of the factory, it suddenly hit them, where could Xana be?
"So, uh, where do we look for Xana?"
............................................................................................................
5:35 PM The Mall
Where in the heck could those kids be?
He checked the school, the around the town, and now he checked the mall. But for some reason, he could not find them. Gary looked around the mall, and noted that Xana had indeed been here. Come to think of it, not only could he not find those kids, he couldn't find a single person ANYWHERE!
As he passed The Electronics Shop Yes, it is an actual shop. My father and grandfather owned it. He decided to check out the old factory. Something about that place nagged him, anyway.
............................................................................................................
5:40 PM The Park
"Man, it seems our friend had fun at the mall."
Ulreck was right. Even though the fire fighters were able to put out the fire, there was still smoke billowing out of the store Xana set fire to.
"Looks like we are on the right track, huh?"
"Oh shut up Odd!"
"Will you two quit it? Look!"
Up at the mall parking lot, they saw a Volkswagen beetle pull out and leave the parking lot. But, as soon as it had begun to leave, it stopped. Then, the driver stepped out and began to run toward them.
"HEY! YOU'RE IN DANGER!!!! YOUR FRIEND ISN'T WHO HE SAYS HE IS!!!!!"
"Huh? What do you mean?" Yumi asked once Gary got close enough.
"I'm telling you, your friend isn't who he is!"
"Who?" Asked Jeremy.
He pointed at Jeremy. "He's not Jeremy! He's Xana!"
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Author's Note: Woah, can it be? Jeremy is Xana? What do you think? Is Gary whacked out of his mind, or is he telling the truth? To be continued!
By the way, I bet your sick of these 'Author's Notes', aren't you? See ya!