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I GOT 6 REVIEWS IN THREE DAYS, FOR ONE STORY! It's like a record for me!
80433: Thank you for the review! And yes, here is my update!
Siriusblack1007: Thank you also for the review, I thought there had been too many stories with the girl that goes along with Jim, not saying they're bad, but being a girl myself, I decided that there needed to be a singular, female, main character!
Lunachick: I'm glad you like it so much, again, a female main character, and yes she does solar-surf! I hope to keep to the script as much as possible, but change…well, you'll have to read to find out mate.
Ari: Yes, this chapter IS longer!
Captein Amelia: I'm so happy people like this story, it was just a lucky shot in the dark and (luckily) I hit my sister!
Ryou-is-mine: HAHA! You're right! GIRLS RULE!!!
PG-13: For some drug usage, and some possible violence
Author's Note: There is going to be some drug content in this story, I don't think there's going to be any in this chapter though; but it's only there to emphasize the growing pains, troubles, and confrontations that teens go through every day.
ANOTHER! Author's note: I HAVE MY OWN OUTGOING E-MAIL!! Of course now I have 3 profiles too…but I can now return e-mails from my own address!
~Chapter Two~
Jen tugged at the controls of her solar-surfer, waving the sails so that they absorbed more energy and the surfer sped along faster. She jetted along, her short, spunky hair flowing with the wind, her small ponytail twisting from the nape of her neck, the white-blonde streams contrasting against her tanned skin.
She sped straight up the cliff and into the clouds; the wind knocked her around as she fought to keep her position, by now, after her years of experience, she could usually do these tricks without much thought, but with the wind as strong as it was today, the excitement level was up.
The clouds licked at her head, chilling her. After a quick glance around, Jen turned off her engine and snapped the sail shut. Closing her eyes, she took in the speed of her fall and the wind; she fell backwards towards the land. No matter how relaxed her face, she was always tense and ready to act.
At what seemed to be the last possible moment, her eyes snapped open and the sail came up, stopping her decent almost instantaneously. With the wind at her back and her engine roaring, she felt there was nothing she couldn't do. She raced around a sharp turn, Jen let out a loud cry as she missed the sheer stone cliff by a foot. She let out a sharp laugh as her surfer broke apart the alarm that led to one of the planet's many mines.
The machinery loomed from all around but this was her playground. She did a grinder off of one of the large metal pipes and spun off of another. Ahead, the giant mining wheel ground and turned as it refined some few valuable crystals and gems. She let out a dark smile and dug her feet into the foot straps. Timing her approach, she shut down the solar sail while giving the engine a quick boost. Her surfer shot through one of the openings, and she set the sail up again.
She let out a whoop of joy and spun the solar-surfer around in pleasure before switching to a slower speed. As she cruised towards home, Jen heard the familiar sound, of sirens. She slowed as two robo-cops pulled onto her tail.
She grimaced, sighed, then rolled her eyes, " Oh, great."
Back at the Ben Bow, Sarah Hawkins was juggling seven tables of beings, all of who were complaining about the slow service. She turned and grabbed a trey of breakfasts and started towards one of the tables.
" Mrs. Hawkins!" One of the customers, a one-eyed, tentacled widow called out, pointing to her empty glass.
" I know, refill on the purp juice, coming right up Ms. Dunwoody!" She turned to the nearest table and began passing out plates.
" Let's see now, two eclipses, two powdered spheroids," the mother licked her lips at the plate, " And it's a big bowl of Zerrelian Jellyworms, for the big boy!"
The young child let out a whisper of, " Awesome," before stuffing his face.
" Enjoy!" Sarah started out towards another table.
" Sorry Delbert! It's been a madhouse all morning," she said, laying down two bowls that closely resembled dog dishes.
" No problem Sarah," the dog-like scientist replied as she bustled away, then began talking to himself, " Ah, my Alponian chowder with the extra Solarice seed, mmmm, yum!" He scooped up some of the food onto a fork and was about to eat it when a young child hopped up and peeked over the table.
" Hello, how can I help you?" He started out, " Curious little…one." The child blinked its long lashes in hopes of a bite.
" Are your parents around?" He questioned and then leaned over towards her, "What's the matter? Cat got your GAHHH!" He never got to finish his sentence because the young alien's froglike tongue shot out and snatched the food off of his fork. The young creature hopped away as Sarah approached.
" Oh, They're so adorable at that age," Sarah said dreamily as though she remembered some fond memories.
" Oh yes, deplorable-ahhh-adorable," Delbert said, mixing up his words as he folded his napkin, " Speaking of which, how's Jen been doing lately?"
" Much better," Sarah said confidently, " I know she's made some wrong turns but I feel she's really making a turnaround," Sarah finished, picking up a large pile of dishes.
The door swung open.
" Mrs. Hawkins," said the too familiar, metallic voice of a robo-cop.
The dishes clattered to the floor in a broken mess, " Jen!"
" Okay guys, thanks for the lift!" She attempted to walk away.
" Not so fast," one of the cops said as it caught her shoulder to keep her from walking away.
" We caught her solar-surfing in a restricted area. Moving violation, twenty-five, section B, paragraph, um…"
" Six?" Jen finished, rubbing her face.
" Thank you," the cop said dryly.
" Don' mention it," Jen replied.
" Jen!" Sarah complained.
" Due to repeated violations, we have confiscated the vehicle, any further violations will result in one way ticket to Juvenile Hall."
" Yes, of course officers," she turned especially towards Jen, " It won't happen, again."
" We see her type all the time ma'am, wrong choices-"
" Dead enders," the other cop commented.
" Looosers," Jen gave the speaking robot a glare
The cap on top of one of the guards' head shot up in partial salute, " Take care now!"
" Lets motor!" The two robo-cops left, closing the door onto the silence of the whole inn, all watching the mother and daughter. At Sarah's glance though, they turned back to their meals.
" Jen…Jen look at me!" But it was like talking to a tree, Jen just ignored her and started picking up some dirty dishes, " Jen, it's been hard enough keeping this place afloat by myself with out you-"
" Mom, it's no big deal, there was no one around, those cops just won't get off my…"
" Forget it," Jen mumbled under her breath and was cut off by the juice obsessed Ms. Dunwoody.
" Ah Mrs. Hawkins? Ah my juuuice!"
" Yes, I'll be right there, Ms. Dunwoody!" She shouted to the customer, then turned to Jen and spoke in a lower tone before bustling off, " Jen, I just don't want to see you throw away your entire future!"
" Yeah? What future?" Jen mumbled under her breath as she slid past the kitchen door, holding an armful of dirty dishes.
WHEW! 5 pages! I'm so sorry, I had to go to the Titantic exibit yesterday when I was supposed to be finishing some unfinished business! coughevilparentsandsiblingcough
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PS: If anyone has the proper spellings for some of the words or better usage for some things, I don't have the DVD so I can't watch the subtitles, any help is greatly appreciated!