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My Vacation: Erm…rode big roller coasters, IT WAS FUN!!!!!

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I'd like to thank all of you whom have boosted my count to 83!

Queen Sarabi:  HAHA!  FINALLY!  I am good at something!

Janna Hawkins: Yes, we all hate him here, except for my sister, but she's only seen it 1 time, so I rule over her puny mind!

Miss Piratess: Yes, I completely agree.  Jen is awesome!  I designed her after me!  Jen whacks her over the head no, if she was like me she would be laughing in the most serious parts and trying to cut Amelia's head off and making Delbert fetch!

Ryou-is-mine: My dad wants to change Bubbles' name to Tiddlywinks…THAT IS GAY!  IT IS HOMOPHOBIC!  Looks at Corina strangely did you kill somebody?  You broke ur butt?  That sucks…but I'M NOT IN SCHOOL!  Happy happy joi joi!  I think that I'm mentally unstable…well, Niggles confirms that, right?

Treasureplanet-Gurl: THIS SOUNDTRACK RULES!  Okay, so you like it being close to the movie…I got a review from someone else who said that it might be a little too close to it.  Thankee 4 the review!

Ron the Kooshball rocks aka AlexRyder:  Cool penname, in Language terms you're supposed to say pseudonym, but that's annoying!  We have a fuzzy thingy named Fred, he lives somewhere in my sister's room, he's blue!

6 reviews!  Lots of thanks for waiting and stuff!  Everybody can have…bacon and biscuits! 

How come all female Disney main characters are princesses?  All the guys are rugged rebels that are bad turned good…why do the girls have to be Mary-Sues?

I need to find a chart with all the guitar chords on it…I think I saw one at Wal-Mart…

Do not buy your gas and food at Wal-Mart, once they take over all the other stores, because then they will control all prices.  Be smart!

Thank you for listening to that rant…and now…FRANZ FERDINAND ROCKS!

Chapter 15: There is an unexpected twist that it doesn't really make sense to put in the chapter title b/c now you know that there is going to be a twist

            B.E.N., Jen, and Morph used the Longboat to glide down from the ship and to the pirate's camp, only to discover that it was dead empty.  Jen used her new knowledge to tie the longboat up in an impossible knot and they crept back up the hill to B.E.N.'s hut. 

            All of the pirates left, meaning not dead or abandoned, were staring intently at the "back door" that the three had slipped out earlier that evening.  Quickly Morph spotted the Doctor and Amelia tied up in the corner.  Jen gave the map to Morph for safekeeping and he flew up into the rafters, or where the rafters would have been if there had been rafters.

            Jen snuck behind Silver and quickly spotted Amelia and Delbert, tied up.  She started to laugh but caught herself just in time.

            "WEDGIE!!"  Jen gave Silver a very hurtful wedgie and started causing chaos among the pirates.  One, that had no legs and only two arms, swatted herself in the head several times, thinking that a giant bug was biting her head; it was actually B.E.N. trying to find a safe place to hide.

            But still, after a short battle, Jen found herself restrained by the original helmsman and another weird looking thing.  Silver was looking very uncomfortable and finally showed her the map.

            "How did you get that?" she asked.

            He looked surprised, "Well…it just sort of, fell out of the air into me hand."

            Jen sighed and gave Morph a stern look, "Didn't I tell you to hold on to it?"

            The blob giggled and started to whistle.

            "Just admit it Jen.  Ye hate to lose."  She glared.

            Silver turned the map, well…tried to.  He changed his arm into about three different forms before noticing that Jen was laughing.

            "Open it."  Jen took the map and glared at him.  "I'd get busy."

As I glance once upon the foam

She looked to her friends.  B.E.N. was snoring, the Captain was talking to herself about the "Precious" and Delbert was on all fours, scratching his ear.  Only Morph was doing something useful; he was slowly chewing Amelia's ropes, but it really didn't matter because they noticed right away and tied her back up.

            Jen smirked and, without looking down, twirled the map around, it clicked and whirled to a stop, green lights issuing from the middle.  Silver stared, as well as all the crew, when the lights became a path that led out of B.E.N.'s home and into a thick forest not far from the pirates' early camp.

Silver stared out in awe, his eyes closely following the path of the green lights.  He turned back to the pirates, "Tie em up, we'll-"

Jen hastily closed the map, "If you want this, you're taking me too."

Silver laughed softly, "We'll take em all."

40 feet beneath my feet;

The longboat followed the path of the lights, Jen holding the map close in her grip, Silver steering, and the hostages peering ahead.

The coldest calm falls

They all got out upon reaching the forest of strange bamboo.  Silver grinned and breathed deeply, "I smell treasure awaiting!" He slashed away the foliage to see…nothing, nothing but a cliff from which an expanse of emptiness seemed to issue.

Through the molten veins,

The map closed up in her hand, Jen tried desperately to open it again.

"What's going on Jen?"

The girl felt his hot breath beating down on her neck.  "How the hell should I know?  I obviously can't get it open…can't you see that?"

Silver glared, "If I was you, I'd get busy!"

Onus stated out onto the great plain, "I see nothing!  One great big stinking hunk of NOTHING!"

Cooling all the blood to slush,

Another pirate pushed Jen into the ground.  "We should of never listened to this girl!"

Jen felt her head chink into the metal surface of the planet, her hair sank down into a groove.  She scraped away a spot and stared in wonder, ignoring the angry calls at her, such as, "Throw her over cliff!" and slammed the tiny sphere into the groove.

Congeals around the brain,

There was a rumble in the distance and five blue streaks of lightning rushed towards them from different places on the plain.  They all formed together, changing into a giant, triangular shaped door.  From the map emerged a hologram of the golden sphere; all of the pirates stared as the door showed an array of stars.

"The Lagoon Nebula?" Jen said in disbelief.

Silver's brow furrowed, "But that…that's halfway across the galaxy!" Silver murmured.

B.E.N. gripped his head and started to spark, "Big door…opening and closing…Swan Princess…Treasure in the Centrum of the mechanoid…REBOOT!"  Nobody cared as the Robot feel to the ground and started twitching. 

La la la la la, Oh!  40 feet remain!

She reached out to touch the hologram, brushing a small crescent moon. 

Inside the door appeared Montressor Spaceport.  Jen gaped.  "It's taken us a month to get here…" she whispered to no one in particular.  "So that's how Flint did it!  He used the portal to move across the galaxy in a flash!"  She pressed lots of buttons; a new world would appear with each press.  "He used the portal to roam the galaxy, stealing treasure!"

She was knocked aside by Silver, who started pressing even more buttons, "But where'd he stash it all?!"

B.E.N. was still writhing on the ground, "Center…of…the…mechanoid…"

"Center of the mechanoid?" Jen whispered, before screaming out loud, "What if the planet is the mechanoid?  And the treasure is buried in the very middle!"

The pirate crew all sprang up and dug at the surface with whatever the found; all stopped short after the inch of moss.  The surface was solid iron/steel/some kind of metal that they couldn't get through.

Silver growled, "And how in Blue Blazes are we supposed to get there?!"

Jen smiled and reached towards the hologram, "Just open the right door!"  She pressed a sphere with two large rings that crossed diagonally, Treasure Planet.

Salt scales on my drying arms.

The portal now showed a great chasm of bright light, a great, golden light.

Jen started to push her hand through the portal but was pulled back by Silver, who ran into the portal, setting off a small red laser that no one noticed.  The rest of the crew followed and stared in awe at the greatest treasure known.  They had found Flint's Trove.

As Silver wandered around in circles, singing, "Strawberry Fields Forever," to himself.  Jen glanced at him and dove behind a pile of gold, B.E.N. landed behind her awkwardly, but none of the pirates noticed, they were too caught up in their showers of jewels. 

From a short distance away, Onus shouted, "We are going to need a bigger boat!"

Jen and B.E.N. watched as all the pirates wandered off, as she stared around, she noticed an old longboat lying in a mound of gold.

"C'mon B.E.N., we're leaving here, but not empty-handed."

The two crept to the longboat, Jen crawling up first to help her robot friend over the railing.  He fell over with a clank, Jen motioned for him to be quiet, but stopped mid-shush and stared at the skeletal form that slouched against the other side of the boat.

"Captain Flint?" she gaped.

"IN THE FLESH!  Well, except anything that resembles flesh, blood, or organs!  You know," he mused, while pulling at his loose wires, "I can't tell you how frustrating this is!  It's like something nagging at the back of my circuits!  Oh, a mind is a terrible thing to lose!" he wailed.

Jen stared at the back of his head, then turned to study the dead pirate, who had something in his hand.

Burn my back beneath the sun

She pulled his hand apart and studied the metal piece, before turning to stare at B.E.N.'s bald spot.

"B.E.N., I think that I just found your missing piece!" she exclaimed and jammed the piece into the back of his head.  He rambled a little before his eyes changed colors, and he started talking a little deeper.

"Hello?  Well, Jenny, I was just think-thinking!  I HAVE A BRAIN!  OH MAN!  ALL MY MEMORIES ARE COMING BACK!  RIGHT UNTIL FLINT PULLED MY MENORY CIRCUIT SO THAT I COULDN'T TALL ANYBODY ABOUT HIS BOOBY TRAP!"  there was a loud shattering sound as part of the planet fell into the treasure, setting off a chain reaction that threw treasure everywhere and began to melt more.

The pirates looked up in terror and began to stuff their pockets, then run for the portal, less than half that entered would escape.

B.E.N. jumped over the side, "C'mon Jenny!  We gotta go!"  When his friend didn't appear, he clambered back over the rail, landing with a clunk, "Jen?"

Her legs were sticking out from underneath the helm, she stuck her head out, "If I'm not back in five minutes, get the doc and Captain to leave without me.  Got it?"

But I am cold beneath the burning rays.

The robot pulled her out, "I'm not leaving my friend-"

Jen glared and held two sparking wires together, "Unless they look at me like that!  Bye Jen!"  B.E.N. scrambled over the side and towards the portal. 

The girl quickly matched wire to wire, starting up the boat, the engine spluttered before running smoothly, sounding like one of the old motor-boats that tourist sometimes rented at Sapphire Lake, about five miles from the Ben Bow inn.

She pressed several button and the boat lifted up off the now bare surface of the planet.  Morph whirled around her head.

"We are sooooo out of here little dude!" she said to him, before hearing the last voice she ever wanted to hear.

"Jen, aren't you the eight wonder of the universe?"

She pulled a golden sword from beside the wheel, "GET—BACK!"

Silver glared, his eyes holding a bitter darkness, "I like ye lass, but I've come to far to let you stand between me and me treasure."

"Me and my treasure."  She corrected and swung out with the sword, which was met by the cyborg's.  he grunted and threw her to the side, but she scrambled up and caught him on the leg. 

Morph steered them out of reach of the debris as fast as he could, but a stray treasure chest slammed them into a giant purple laser.

Silver grabbed the railing with his arm, but Jen wasn't as lucky, she fell onto a pillar of metal, hitting hard and sliding off, to hold onto a small scripture engraved on the side of the wall.

Looking down, looking down,

Down, down again.

Jen glanced down and gulped, below was a giant cauldron of boiling metal, gold, silver, and the remnants of priceless jewels.

She looked back to the pillar, too far to jump, there was no way she could make it back.  Silver was holding onto the boat.

"Reach for me lass!  Reach!"

She scrabbled to hold on, but her finger-hold disappeared into the wall, she fell down about a foot and gripped tightly to her new block, but I was quickly melting into the wall.  Jan grunted and tried to see Silver, but fumes from the burning metal below wouldn't let her see more than a yard.  She squinted and suddenly her eyes opened wide in surprise, she glanced below, and then back up.

Jen smiled.

Silver stared at the boat, all the jewels, and the treasure that he had been searching for during his entire life.  But then, to the side, the young life whom he had betrayed and yet she had still helped him to get his treasure.

"Oh!  Blast me for a boat!"  Silver took one last look at the Trove and pushed the boat away, turned to help Jen to the pillar.

She was gone.

40 feet remain.

Okay, the song was 40 feet, or 40', by Franz Ferdinand, and they rock!  They kick $$!!  YAH!

Thanks to all my reviewers very much for waiting and reviewing!  I'm thinking 1 or 2 more chapters, so tell me, one long, or two short?

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