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CONGRATS TO BOB!! 4 HIS 1ST PUBLISHED STORY(online)
Queen Sarabi: okay
Ryou-is-mine: Was it a car crash? I'm very glad that ur ok, get your bum pieced together! Here! This is Niggilina, she's very sweet and having a niggle at your side helps you get better quickly!
Janna Hawkins: As long as you update yours!
treasureplanet-gurl: originality? I suppose there's a lot in the later chappies, not so much in the beginning though…SPIDEY 2 COMES OUT REAL SOON!!!
GoddessoftheStarz: welcome to the team! I like to put in…er…Kioic(Key-yo-ic) humor!
As to all the ppl who reviewed other random stories…they are currently on hold, as soon as I finish this story, and there ISNT going to be a sequel, I am going to take a break, go to the mountains, and then start up again.
Corina, I'm dedicating my next ficcy 2 U!
I luv all u guys!
2 or three short chappies(counting the epilogue)
Silver stared down in disbelief, why had she let go? And now he had lost his treasure too, he stared around at the molten metal that was edging up onto the pillar he stood on. The old cyborg sighed, so this was how it was going to end?
His jacket lifted up from the back, pulling him with it into the hot air; he stared upwards and saw the boat that he had pushed away to grab Jen. One of the claws on the bottom was pulling him up and out of harms way.
"Alright down there?"
Silver gasped, could it possibly be…
"Jen?"
"Yup, when you pushed the boat away, Morph here steered it over and I jumped in, didn't take me long to figure out how to use the claws!" She yanked the controls and the boat sped off towards the entrance.
Jen carefully landed the longboat on the Legacy and jumped out onto the deck. She had already let Silver down from the clutches of "The Claw" and they both stood awkwardly on the deck. Delbert was steering near the back while Amelia shouted at him.
From the hold, one of the imprisoned pirates shouted, "We were better off on exploding planet!"
B.E.N. was typing busily on a pop-out keyboard and was shouting the number of seconds left before the planet exploded completely. Jen carefully scooped out a bag of gold and handed it to the pirate, who lightly refused, saying only that he already had his fill.
Considering that he had never steered, Delbert was doing pretty good.
Amelia clutched her broken arm every time they swerved, "THE RIGHT, NO! THE OTHER RIGHT!"
Delbert growled and shouted, "I KNOW I KNOW! WILL YOU JUST LET ME DRIVE?!"
Jen chuckled, but suddenly stared up. Literally tons of debris was narrowly missing the ship, a couple small bits of metal flew through the sail, dropping their speed slightly; every drop meant they had less of a chance to survive.
As the ship maneuvered against the winds and flying objects, Amelia watched in horror as the Doctor was unable to swerve out of the way of one particularly large obstacle; the mizzen mast(third one, closest to the stern(back)) crashed onto the deck.
"Thrusters at 30%!" B.E.N. cried, still typing furiously.
"Thirty percent?" the doctor stated, shocked and started counting on his fingers, "But…that's not even close to enough power needed to get us out of the planet's destruction in time!"
Jen darted behind the boat, and then leapt out, wearing a scraggly pair of cat ears and a mask, "This looks like a job for…Surfer Girl!"
Incredibly, something similar to a solar-surfer engine had fallen near a solar-surfer like board; Jen walked clumsily towards the two, "We gotta turn around!"
Amelia shook her head, "That's just what the fat hobbit would say!"
"There's a portal back there!"
"Jen…" the doctor started, "That 'portal' of yours opens into a RAGING INFERNO!!"
"Yes, but I'm gonna change that, I'm gonna open a different door." Jen was now trying to attach the two useful and strangely placed pieces with a rope; it was quite obvious that the plan wouldn't work.
Silver limped over, "Ye looked like ye needed some help…do ye?"
"What's with all the 'ye's? Oh, yes I do need some help, just a way to attach this!"
The cyborg changed his arm into a welding torch and fused the pieces together, (A/N: FUSE UP!!!) Jen twisted her foot into a conveniently placed groove and turned to her old mentor, "No matter what happens, keep the ship heading straight towards that portal!" They both locked gazes for a second and then the girl took off in a burst of heat, her cat ears flying off.
Silver shouted to the Doctor: "Get this blasted heap turned around!"
Delbert shook his head but did as he was told just like every good little human-dog should do.
Jen twisted the board around, sending the front end shuttling towards the portal, quickly she changed her course as a flying plate of metal barely missed her head. Slowly, but surely, her engine clicked to a stop, the girl only glanced back before using her foot to bring it back up into a roar. She concentrated, if she could just get used to this place! Okay, I'm grinding off of the mining stuff back home…
She glanced back again, the engine wasn't being very cooperative, Jen's foot clicked down onto the small clicky thing(Descriptive, aint I?) but nothing happened, she tried again, the same result, a click, click, click. She started to fall.
"Oh well…" Jen started to click to the Andy Griffith theme, click, click…Silver stared down onto her as she dropped down into an abyss.
"C'mon lass! I just bet twelve doubloons that ye would save all our lives!"
"Fine…but you owe me big time!" Jen stared at the wall, "Ooooooo! Pretty drawings, but I might as well mess 'em up and save all our lives…" She slammed the engine against the wall and then it miraculously snapped on; the ship was now about to go through the portal, Delbert was squinting his eyes as he steered the ship straight into the middle of the planet.
Jen swooped forwards and leaned down, pressing a small crescent moon shape.
The portal opened into the space surrounding Montressor's port. Everybody cheered; the doctor and Captain hugged, stood back for a second, and then regarded each other in a different light.
Jen whooped and fell off her surfer into space.
Alright…Don't kill me, I know I'm late! Reasons? 5 words: website, banned from computer, sister, cell-phone, B-day party…um, yah! I know that's 8 words, but so what?!! Everybody who waited so patiently gets some Godiva chocolate!
One more chappie, so please review and say hi to Bubbles, he's been bummed out lately…