I Need You, James

by Lexi-chan

PG to be safe. James had always fancied Lily, but it always seemed helpless. Instead of trying to grab her attention, he plainly made himself belive that Lily didn't love him. But now, was Lily the one falling for James? COMPLETE

5. Author's Babblings

Author's Notes and Babbles: Thank you so much for all of those reviews!!! I really loved it and it gave me a lot more excitement to write up a new one! Thanks again
Before anything else.... ;)

Akalei 2004-06-29 4 Signed
Pretty good. Your writing style is interesting. Mostly everything is a one-liner. I WOULD suggest writing more paragraphs and writing much longer chapters, though. Please continue! I'd like to see where this is goin. Maybe if you have some time, you could R&R my story, Behind Closed Doors? =)
(I reviewed yer story! =) and thanks for the comment! I would try!)

A Harry and Ginny Dreamer 2004-06-29 4 Signed
This story was splendid! It made me feel sad for Lily though..guess she shouldn't have been so mean to James, eh? Well, I hope the best comes in the end for those two. When will boys and girls understand the true meaning of love? When they get kissed to the one they like, that's when! In my opinion anyway...keep up the good work and please update soon! Your story will be finished in no time! I'm sure of it..unless it really LONG! Well, keep it up! Ashley T. 6/29/04 7:58 AM
(haha! I don't think it's gonna be that long. I'm kinda like ADD..;) Can't sit one time and make very long stories! But I'll try. Thanks for the suggestionz...)

Book Lover990 2004-06-29 4 Anonymous
It wasnt good, it was great! I like it and i hope u update soon! O and could u make the chapters a little longer. PLEEZE!
(as I've said, I can try, but I can't make any real promises. but thanks for the suggestion)

Underworld Ruler 0507 2004-06-29 2 Signed
Hey there! I like this story! I like Lily and James fics... haha! anyways, i'll proceed to the next chapters... see ya!
(You've been reviwing all my fix!! thanks you so much!!)

mangetsu 2004-06-29 4 Signed
interesting...there really is no need to put quotes in italics though. i like it, please update soon.
(Well, my other stories only had italics and some people said it was confusing, so I tried to add quotation marks so it'll be better ;) )

anonymus 2004-06-29 4 Anonymous
hey i think uve got gr8 potential here i think u should make the chapters longer so as not obore ppl and ya thts it i like the whole lyrics things
(Thanks. I thought of the whole lyrics thing and placed it coz ppl might get confused =). I'll try to make things longer. thanks for reviewing)

So there goes all my babblings and stuffs =) Thank you all for reiwing and I hope you liked the new chapters I would update =) tc ya'll)