She'll Be Coming 'Round
Chapter 4: Solid Home, Divided Town
aquajogger- I'm glad your so interest! I try to update as much as I can whenever I can. I live with my mom and she doesn't have a good *working* computer, so when I'm at my dad's I try to post as much as I can. I tried the longer stories, and though I can write them, it takes longer the update them so I just compress and do what I in short. Ally is only a nickname. ^_^ My real name isn't anything like it, I get Ally or Bama from my homestate, Alabama.
Jason-resno- I SOSOSOSOSO sorry!!! But I can only do what I can. And also, I only have up to chapter 13 written down, and now my mind is BLANK. I'll promise to TRY to get to chapter 13, only if you promise to give me some ideas for chapter 14. And thank you for answering my question, free cookie for you!
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So anyway, blah, blah, blah! Warnings disclaimers. Me, being as evil as I am, feel that if you like sad and depressing stories then go read my other fic Lost Cause. (What I'm really saying is if I don't get more reviews then OPPS did I just hit the delete bottom for "She'll Be Coming Round"? Oh well, to bad!)
Me, evil? Oh, no, no, no, no!
Well, maybe just a little...OK very evil!
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STANDARD WARNING AND DISCLAIMER APPLIES.
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The townsfolk are starting to fight. Some believe we should build a shelter and hide underground like the idiots we are. Some believe that we should get over ourselves and get back to life.
Nobody has noticed how the wind has changed direction. Nobody has noticed that the field crops have all stopped growing. That the dogs no longer chase the cats and that time itself seems to have slowed down. (A/N: Sound familiar?)
Now I'm questioning if this is all the doing's of Duo's "God."
This town, once lively with a good size population, were children played in their yard after dark with no fear, were the only thing that affects it are the car crashes, this beautifully dying town, has become nothing more then a ghost of it's old self...were even the big kids don't like to hang.
Dr. J, that "relative" that I've been staying with, says it's only a matter of time before the town peoples freak themselves out so much that they would have to be put in a hospital.
For once, I can't agree with him.
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PREVIEW FOR UPCOMING CHAPTER # 5!
I talked to Duo yesterday about his adoptive father. He said that all the stuff that has been going on in there is not more then dog shit being thrown in a bucket. I stopped listening halfway through his rant because I saw her. So, she DID remember me after all?
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Ally.
Another note: I'm totally hooked on the first FLCL soundtrack, so follow my advice young ones, go get it!! Number 2,13 and 21 are my favorites!
Chapter 4: Solid Home, Divided Town
aquajogger- I'm glad your so interest! I try to update as much as I can whenever I can. I live with my mom and she doesn't have a good *working* computer, so when I'm at my dad's I try to post as much as I can. I tried the longer stories, and though I can write them, it takes longer the update them so I just compress and do what I in short. Ally is only a nickname. ^_^ My real name isn't anything like it, I get Ally or Bama from my homestate, Alabama.
Jason-resno- I SOSOSOSOSO sorry!!! But I can only do what I can. And also, I only have up to chapter 13 written down, and now my mind is BLANK. I'll promise to TRY to get to chapter 13, only if you promise to give me some ideas for chapter 14. And thank you for answering my question, free cookie for you!
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So anyway, blah, blah, blah! Warnings disclaimers. Me, being as evil as I am, feel that if you like sad and depressing stories then go read my other fic Lost Cause. (What I'm really saying is if I don't get more reviews then OPPS did I just hit the delete bottom for "She'll Be Coming Round"? Oh well, to bad!)
Me, evil? Oh, no, no, no, no!
Well, maybe just a little...OK very evil!
*
STANDARD WARNING AND DISCLAIMER APPLIES.
****
The townsfolk are starting to fight. Some believe we should build a shelter and hide underground like the idiots we are. Some believe that we should get over ourselves and get back to life.
Nobody has noticed how the wind has changed direction. Nobody has noticed that the field crops have all stopped growing. That the dogs no longer chase the cats and that time itself seems to have slowed down. (A/N: Sound familiar?)
Now I'm questioning if this is all the doing's of Duo's "God."
This town, once lively with a good size population, were children played in their yard after dark with no fear, were the only thing that affects it are the car crashes, this beautifully dying town, has become nothing more then a ghost of it's old self...were even the big kids don't like to hang.
Dr. J, that "relative" that I've been staying with, says it's only a matter of time before the town peoples freak themselves out so much that they would have to be put in a hospital.
For once, I can't agree with him.
****
PREVIEW FOR UPCOMING CHAPTER # 5!
I talked to Duo yesterday about his adoptive father. He said that all the stuff that has been going on in there is not more then dog shit being thrown in a bucket. I stopped listening halfway through his rant because I saw her. So, she DID remember me after all?
***
Ally.
Another note: I'm totally hooked on the first FLCL soundtrack, so follow my advice young ones, go get it!! Number 2,13 and 21 are my favorites!