**A/N … I dunno why I'm updating early, I shouldn't be until Friday, that's a whole week early. I think it's because I'm incredibly bored, it's a Saturday night and I want to feel like I'm doing something productive. Of all the chapter to update early, I bet if I wait I can get more reviews on chapter eight… meh, oh well. Anywho… here's that chapter that everyone (especially paper cut) have been asking for. Too if Ren died or not… well I guess you'll find out soon enough. Right well I'll save the rest of what I have to say for the end**

An Unexpected Visit

Joey, along with Mokuba, Tea, Tristan, Mai and Yugi, sat anxiously in the waiting room at the hospital. Serenity had been rushed in as an emergency case, but they still had no news on her. Tea had performed CPR on her while they had waited for the ambulance, but she couldn't get her heart to beat on it's own. The ambulance had taken over and rushed her out of the Kaiba mansion before most of the people that had been looking for her even got there. No one even knew if she was alive right now. It had only been about fifteen minutes, but it seemed like hours. Joey got up and began hounding every doctor that walked past with one question: 'Is she alive?'. No one knew the answer. Mai finally managed to pull Joey's hands off the neckline of one doctor's jacket and pull him back to the couch where she wrapped her arms around him and they sat until a nurse finally came and talked to them.

"We've managed to get her heart beating again, and everything else seemed to come back to life with it. She's stabilized, and she should live, but I'm afraid we can't allow visitors for at least another 48 hours. You should all go home and get some rest," She then turned to Joey. "We'll call you if anything else happens." She rested one hand on his shoulder and smiled encouragingly. "She'll be fine."

"What was wrong with her?" Mokuba asked as the nurse turned to leave.

"We haven't been able to determine all of the problems yet, but she seems to have hypothermia. We'll need to talk to her before we can confirm anything else, but the doctor also believes its some sort of depression because nothing else really seems to be wrong with her. It's almost as if she'd given up because her hypothermia wasn't far enough along that it should have killed her. We'll have a more detailed analysis for you soon in the future. Until then, go home and get some sleep," the nurse told him.

Everyone else got up and left, leaving Mokuba sitting alone on the couch, his eyes red from lack of sleep. He just didn't understand what was wrong with Serenity, he just didn't understand. For like the millionth time he tried to think up why she might be doing what she was doing. He didn't want to believe that she's somehow gone insane, and it certainly didn't seem that way. He agreed with the doctors, it was some sort of depression and it had started that night.

Mokuba was startled when a hand suddenly gripped his shoulder. He looked up to see Joey's rather blotchy face. "You coming?" Joey asked. Mokuba looked down at the ground before nodding. It didn't seem right for him to go home, if something went on he'd never find out. No one would call him; he'd actually planned to stay at the hospital and demand updates every two hours. But the nurse had specifically said they'd call Joey if anything happened. It seemed like a good idea, so he nodded and slowly stood up. He followed Joey to the elevator, his feet dragging as he looked at the ground. More than once he nearly collided with some fast moving medical person. Most of the ride down the eleven floors of the hospital was silent.

Until Joey finally spoke, "Do you know what's wrong with my sister?" he asked, his voice hoarse, like he had a soar throat.

Mokuba shook his head, "No, and she won't talk to me long enough for me to find out. I did find out why she's avoiding me though."

"Why?" Joey demanded, a bit more roughly than he'd intended.

Mokuba felt like a complete idiot as he replied, "She's afraid I won't love her anymore…"

"So she did something?" Joey asked.

"I guess so…" Mokuba said slowly. "I don't really understand. She was going to tell me yesterday afternoon, but ended up running away instead. Apparently it really bothers her and I just can't figure out what happen!" Mokuba shouted angrily, slamming his fist against the wall.

Joey quickly pushed the close door button when they reached the bottom and sent them up to the eighteenth floor and turned back to Mokuba. "She was with your brother, in that hotel right?"

Mokuba just nodded, unsure of where this was all going.

"That bastard!" Joey shouted angrily. Mokuba looked up, surprised as Joey pushed all the buttons on the elevator. He wanted off and he wanted off now. He was going to kick the shit out of Kaiba, and should God be on his side he'd kill him.

"What?" Mokuba demanded.

"I can't believe you haven't figured it out," Joey said shaking his head angrily. "I don't suppose you ever thought that maybe Kaiba did something to her and she was either unwilling so she wanted to stay away from you because you lead to your brother or maybe it's just that. Maybe she was willing and now she thinks she doesn't deserve you and she's driving herself insane because she wants you!"

Mokuba was suddenly very angry, first because Joey had the nerve to suggest his brother would betray him and then because it could easily have been true. The more Mokuba thought about it the more it all made sense. Mokuba dashed out of the elevator when it stopped and made a mad dash for the stairs and dialed the number to him house.

"Kaiba residence," the voice on the other line said.

"This is Mokuba, I want a car at the Domino District hospital as soon as possible," he instructed.

"A car is on it's way Master Kaiba," the lady said and hung up.

Joey was only several steps behind him, though he fell behind as they went down the twelve flights of stairs. He was angry, yes, but not nearly as angry as Mokuba. The fact that not only would his brother betray him, but then that he would lie to him made him sick. Seto could have helped Serenity the entire time, and what really made Mokuba mad was not that fact that he didn't but that fact that now, even after she'd died and been brought back to life that Seto probably still didn't care!

Mokuba passed back and forth in front of the building waiting for his ride. He was breathing heavily, his face red, and his hands clenched tightly. Mokuba was ready to kill, he didn't care if it was his brother. What his brother had done to Serenity was completely wrong, all along he could have helped her and he didn't. He let her get so sick that she died. That was probably the only thing that was going to keep Mokuba from killing his brother, the fact that Serenity was alive now. Not exactly well, but alive, and in a state to get better.

Mokuba stopped pacing and stood in front of Joey. "I'm coming with you," Joey said.

"No," Mokuba shook his head. "Not only will my brother not listen if you're around he'll deny it. He'll deny it anyway, but at least he'll listen to me. You can have your chance at him later Joey. I'll make sure of that."

"She's my little sister!" Joey argued.

"What good is that fact that she's your little sister going to do when my brother beats the shit out of you?" Mokuba demanded. "He won't hurt me, not seriously anyway and if he does it'll only be to try and knock some sense into me. I know I'm going to be crazy when I see him, I'm going to try and kill him. Lucky for him he's stronger than I am," Mokuba said. "Don't worry Joey, I'll make sure to get at least one half-decent hit in for you," Joey nodded as the car drove up. Mokuba jumped in and sent the driver speeding back towards the Kaiba mansion. His brother was going to die.

Mokuba stared out the window as they sped past the lights. The city was still asleep, only the odd dog bark and maybe a siren or two could be heard. Nothing worth being awake for. Mokuba didn't want to admit Serenity's depression was because of his brother. He never would have considered his brother to be that evil. Mokuba knew he was harsh, and somewhat cold hearted but he never would have considered his brother of doing this to Serenity. His trust in his brother was his own undoing. It was the one possibility he never would have thought of. He had trusted his brother when he had retold the details of the night. He'd had no reason not to, never before had his brother lied to him when it had really mattered. Yet he did this time, he realized that perhaps Serenity had asked him not to tell but that was out of line. Mokuba had a right to know.

Though the more Mokuba thought about it he wondered what his reaction would have been in a different situation, say if Serenity had actually told him. He wasn't sure if he'd get mad, he understood that she had been emotionally overwhelmed that evening, so he would have understood that her emotions would control her but his brother was a different story. It took a lot more than being shot at to send Seto over the edge. It would probably still be as it was. He would probably be completely forgiving to Serenity and probably still want to tear Seto's throat out.

Mokuba didn't hesitate at all when they pulled up in front of his house. He jumped out of the car and went running through the front door and bounced up the stairs three at a time until he had reached Seto's office. He swung the door open and slammed it behind him. Kaiba looked up, slightly startled that anyone would dare enter his office without knocking. But one look at his brothers face he knew he was angry. He knew he'd found out.

"You fucking bastard!" Mokuba yelled slamming both his fists on Kaiba desk, sending most of his papers flying.

Kaiba watched his work fall to the floor and then looked back up at his brother, his expression was not happy. But he didn't say anything, he wasn't going to offer any explanation, or give any argument, his answers where going to be yes and no. He assumed that would cause him the least of grief and probably send Mokuba storming out of his office soon enough. Mokuba had a temper that shouldn't ought to be reckoned with, but Kaiba knew he could handle any move Mokuba threw at him. Despite Mokuba's muscley arms Kaiba still always held the upper hand when it came to a hand to hand combat, and considering that the first thing Mokuba had done when he had entered the room hadn't been hit him, it was obvious Mokuba knew this too.

"What did you do to Serenity?" Mokuba demanded. Mokuba already knew he wouldn't answer. He wasn't overly sure why he'd asked in the first place. He quickly moved onto a different question. "Did you kiss her?"

"Yes," Seto answered calmly.

"Did you touch her?" he asked angrily.

"Define touch," Kaiba said.

"YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN!" Mokuba burst.

"Then no," Kaiba said.

"Are you lying to me again?" Mokuba said, breathing deeply.

"No,"

"Why didn't you tell me?" he demanded.

"Would you have wanted to know?" Kaiba challenged.

"CONSIDERING SERENITY WAS PRACTICALLY FADING AWAY TO NOTHING, YES!" Mokuba hollered.

"Yes well, that wasn't my fault. She didn't want you to know," Kaiba replied, still challenging his brothers glare.

"Tell me this brother, you're supposed to be smart aren't you?"

"Yes," Kaiba answered, unsure where this conversation was going.

"THEN WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME?"

Kaiba was beginning to get annoyed. "I just told you, she didn't want you to know!"

"She died because you didn't tell me Seto, she died!" Mokuba screamed. Neglecting to mention the fact that they'd managed to save her.

Even that surprised Kaiba, he could no longer act as if it was no big deal, because now it was. He was somewhat surprised his brother wasn't holding a knife to his throat. Kaiba said nothing, he would portray no emotion. He would not pretend he cared, because he didn't really, though he was feeling regret for his actions now. He actually wanted to take them back, he'd do anything to take them back. To rewind time and tell his little brother before it had been too late. He had never expected her to die. He'd assumed that she'd either get over it or eventually break down and tell Mokuba. Seto Kaiba wasn't one willing to admit he had made a mistake but this time he would have yelled it out for the world to know. His brother would never forgive him. Not this time, of all the bad things he had done before, his brother had gotten over it, but this time he wouldn't. He would leave, and Seto would never hear from his younger brother again. The only person he had ever cared about.

Kaiba could almost relate to his little brother this time. Mokuba may as well have been dead to him now too. He'd lost someone important to him now too. The only difference was, with a bit of effort and several million kind words he might be able to fix his problem, but even Seto Kaiba, famous for the ability to portray no emotion could not hide his guilt from his little brother.

"Not so fucking cocky anymore are you brother," Mokuba demanded. The last word was forced, and said with a sort of sneer, like he was ashamed of it. Kaiba didn't blame him in the slightest, he'd be ashamed of him too.

"She- she died?" Kaiba asked, his voice shaky and unsure.

"Yes," Mokuba said, he was having fun torturing his evil older brother. Kaiba took in a short breath and held it until his brother finished his sentence. "Watch your back, Seto, Joey's gonna kill you," and with that Mokuba left the room.

Kaiba was left by himself, with confused thoughts. Normally Joey wouldn't be much of a threat to him, but if he'd killed one of his friends he was a serious threat. A pissed off Joey would be a serious threat to anyone if he didn't knock himself out on a wall first. Kaiba still didn't know they were brother and sister, and if he did he'd probably be leaving town because he did know how Joey felt about his sister. Kaiba was incredibly lucky they'd managed to save her, because Joey would kill him, he had no doubts about that.

Mokuba left the room feeling rather good with himself. He'd wait until Seto made some attempt to make some sort of an apology to all of Serenity's friends, then he could find out and they'd probably all get a lot of money too. He was fairly sure Seto would make some move at an apology. He wasn't that cruel, and when you kill someone's loved one, it's only common sense that you apologize, it doesn't mean much, but it's the nice thing to do. Seto wasn't nice, but this was beyond his meanness. Mokuba stopped for a moment. Considering he'd done this in the first place, maybe it wasn't.

But that thought left his mind quickly when he heard a huge bang from Seto's office. For a moment he thought it was a gunshot, but then he heard glass shatter and knew it was just Seto's fist making contact with the wall. He heard several other loud crashed, as several other objects became close friends with the wall. Including his laptop. Mokuba laughed, he'd be regretting that when he found out she was still alive. Mokuba walked down the stairs feeling particularly smug with himself and instructed the driver to take him to Joey's house.

"Are you smiling?" Mai demanded when she opened the door.

"No, I'm smirking," Mokuba said, entering the small apartment and walking down the short hallway to the living room where everyone was sitting.

"Did you kill him?" Joey demanded.

"No," Mokuba said still smirking.

"Then what you do?" Joey asked.

"I told him she's dead," Mokuba explained.

Everyone just blinked for a few moments until Joey let out a long 'oh' of understanding. "What did he say to that?"

"I don't know," Mokuba answered. "I told him to watch his back because you were going to kill him and left. I heard several things smash against the wall as I walked down the stairs though. He obviously wasn't overly impressed."

"Ha, ha!!" Joey said jumping into the air.

"I don't quite get it…" Tristan said slowly.

"Even the great Seto Kaiba can't pretend he doesn't care if he pretty much kills someone," Joey explained. "He'll probably go into some mid life crisis, and then he'll probably give us a lot of money and then he'll probably demand it back when he finds out she's alive. But at least we'll have the satisfaction of wrenching an apology out of him. I'm still going to kick the shit out of him, but at least this way I'm slightly satisfied. Though no amount of money will ever make me forgive him for what he's done to my sister."

"Yes well, no amount of money will ever get him over his damaged pride either," Mokuba stated.

Mokuba's smugness, and Joey's weird sort of happiness didn't last for long when the phone rang again saying Serenity's heart had stopped on them again. They needed Joey's permission to put her on life support and they needed it right away.

"Yes!" Joey shrieked. "Yes, do whatever you have to do! Save my little sister!" Joey sobbed.

"Oh no," Mai said. It obviously wasn't good news.

Mokuba chewed on his bottom lip, his hands clenched so tight that his knuckles turned white as they waited for Joey to get off the phone. When the nurse on the other line finally hung up Joey threw the phone across the room and turned to face everyone. He head was down and tears could be seen falling from his face. He said nothing until he finally looked up at Mokuba.

"Go!" he shouted. For some reason he found it difficult to accept that his little sister was dying because she couldn't stand living without another man.

"Mokuba, stay where you are," Mai commanded. "Joey, what's wrong? What's happened?"

"Her hearts stopped again, they had to put her on life support," Joey said slowly. Tea gasped and started bawling into Tristan's coat. Yugi curled up into a little ball and didn't say a word while Mai slowly lowered herself onto the couch, tears streaming down her face. Joey however looked back up at Mokuba. "Go see her!" he screamed.

Mokuba didn't need to be told again. He grabbed his jacket and ran out the door. He jumped down each flight of stairs, each which consisting of seven steps. It was a bit of a jump but he did it anyway. Thankfully the hospital was only three blocks away from their apartment. Mokuba ran as fast as he could, nearly being hit twice and causing some poor homeless man to run into a post. As he ran into the hospital he did some slick maneuvering and managed to get himself into the elevator before it closed on him. He pressed the number 11 all the way up and then made a mad dash for Serenity's room.

"I'm sorry sir, you can't go in here," the nurse from before said.

"Do you know why she's dying?" Mokuba demanded.

"We aren't totally sure yet, but we think it's some sort of depression and that's she just giving up on life, there's no other explanation," the woman said sadly.

"Do you know why she's giving up on life?" Mokuba asked. The nurse simply shook her head. "It's because my brother made out with her and then she thought she didn't deserve me anymore and she's been avoiding me, something she didn't want to do. If you'll just let me in there I know I can make her better!" he begged.

"She's not awake sir, there's nothing you can do," the nurse tried to explain. But Mokuba wouldn't listen. He just kept arguing until the nurse finally said he had five minutes. She expected him to go in and just sit and watch her for his five minutes, but he didn't. Mokuba took her hand in his and began urgently saying her name. The nurse shook her head and walked away. "Foolish boy," she mumbled.

Mokuba laid his head on the side of the bed. He didn't know what to do. She was dying and there was nothing he could do. Mokuba heard his name called but didn't move. He assumed it was the stupid nurse again, but then he felt a slight tap on his head. He lifted it, but he couldn't believe his eyes. It was Serenity.

"Mokuba," she whispered. Mokuba blinked, even he was surprised. Her heart had stopped twice, and she was now on life support yet she'd woken up.

"Serenity," he said, hardly believe his eyes. "You're awake.

She smiled and nodded. She looked around herself and frowned. "I'm sick…" she said, not really a question, but kind of.

Mokuba nodded. "You're hearts stopped twice," he told her.

"Oh no!" she exclaimed. "I'm dying!" she wrapped her arms around his neck. "Don't let me die," she cried. "Please don't let me die Mokuba."

"You won't if you decide not to," Mokuba explained to her. "The doctors say there's nothing wrong with you. You had hypothermia, but it's gone now. All you have to do is want to survive, Ren, that's all."

"I do… but, you won't love me…" she said, chewing on her bottom lip.

"Yes I will," he assured her. "I already know Ren, my brother told me, and I don't care!"

"You, you don't?" Serenity asked.

"No, I don't," Mokuba said. "All I care about is you."

Serenity smiled, and then faded from view. Mokuba didn't understand what was happening until he found himself staring at the floor again. He quickly raised his head just in time to see her start breathing whole-heartily again. She sighed deeply and even moved her arm. Mokuba didn't understand what had just happened but it seemed he'd gotten through to her. Mokuba started laughing as the nurse walked back into the room.

"Look!" he shouted. "Look she's breathing on her own again!" Mokuba pointed as she sighed again.

The nurse squinted, but agreed. It seemed that she was indeed. The nurse also watched as Serenity's right hand moved from her side towards the bar where she began clutching it. She stepped over to the intercom and spoke into it. "Doctor, I think you'd better come see this," she said, still unsure if what she was seeing was really real.

"What? What is it?" a doctor said as he dashed into the room. The nurse pointed at Serenity who had now opened her mouth and was breathing deeply. "My good gosh, isn't this the girl I just hooked up to life support?" the doctor demanded.

The nurse nodded. "I let this boy see her for five minutes and went to get some coffee. When I came back she was breathing on her own, I even watched and she moved her hand and clutched onto the bar."

The doctor wasn't convinced. He walked over and began checking her out. He first took her pulse, which was now beating steadily and healthily. He listened to her heart, with was beating regularly. He took her temperature which was still slightly high but was quickly returning to it's normal amount. He opened her eyelids and was fairly surprised when she pulled her hand up and knocked him away.

"Piss off, Joey," she mumbled and rolled over.

"Well, I'll be darned," the doctor said, backing away and watching as Serenity's skin slowly turned from white to pink. "This is what we call a healing crisis. You never know when it's coming and you can't explain why it happens. Unhook her from the LS machine, Carla. She should be awake right away. Call her brother and let him know. We'll have to keep her here for at least a week, but she should be as good as new within the next 2-3 days."

"Can I stay in here?" Mokuba asked. "Until she wakes up?"

The nurse nodded, smiling warmly at him and heading to detach her from most of the machines.

~*~*~*~*~*~*~

"He did it!" Joey shouted as he dropped the phone again.

"Did what?" Yugi demanded as Joey pulled Mai into his arms.

"She's alive! They've taken her off live support. She's even moving! The nurse said she should be awake within the hour. Let's go see her!" Joey shouted happily.

Everyone cheered and bounced happily as they gathered up their things and headed for the hospital. It had been a tense night. No one knew how Mokuba had gotten through to her, according to the nurse she'd just suddenly gotten better. Apparently it was a healing crisis. But none of them cared, she was alive. They talked and laughed all the way to the hospital. Everyone was trying to slow Joey down, they wanted to give Mokuba at least a few minutes alone with her until they arrived.

~*~*~*~*~*~

Mokuba watched as Serenity's eyes fluttered open, and she squinted in the warm morning sun. She looked around and smiled when she saw Mokuba. "I saw you, in my dream," she told him. "Do you remember it?" she asked. Mokuba nodded. "Did you mean everything you said?" she asked, almost nervously. He nodded again. She smiled and pulled him into her arms. "I love you so much," she whispered into his ear. He pulled away and looked into her sparkling brown eyes. Tears formed in his eyes, she smiled and wiped them away with her thumbs. "Don't cry," she said quietly. Mokuba just shook his head. He was at a loss for words. It was all a miracle, that she was alive, and holding him. She kissed him lightly and then hugged him again. The cords were kind of inconvenient, but they worked around them.

"Hey now, hheeyy now!" Joey said running into the room. "I want a 20 inch distance between you at all times when I'm around. This could take a lot of getting used too."

Serenity and Mokuba laughed. Mokuba moved out of the way so everyone else could see her. Joey held onto her for like ten minutes, until she finally complained that he was squishing her.

"What can you expect?" Joey asked. "You died on me Ren, you sure are pretty damn lucky we've got good doctors in this town or… well I dunno the or to that situation, but I'm sure there is one!"

After every cried, and smiled and laughed Tea was the one who finally got the guts to ask, "What was it like? Dying, I mean?"

Serenity frowned. "I don't know…" she answered. "Everything just went dark, it's just like sleeping, when you're having no dreams. But I saw an angel," she told them. "She was so beautiful. She had long, wavy golden hair. Her skin was so fair and her eyes where ice blue. She wore a long white dress and had two feathery wings attached to her back. And her halo was gold and… and well it was a circle." Everyone laughed and Serenity continued. "She talked to me, she said she was so happy to get to meet me, but that she was sad she wouldn't be there to see the wedding. Then she told me to take care of her baby, and sent me back."

"Take care of her baby… are you sure you're not pregnant??" Joey asked, but he immediately turned to Mokuba who was looking in his locket. He'd pulled out the picture of Seto and was looking at the one beneath it. His mother. He walked over to Serenity and showed it to her.

"That's her!" Serenity said enthusiastically. "Is that your mother?" Serenity asked curiously. Mokuba just nodded. He'd forgotten he had the picture, but Serenity's description had jolted back the memory of when his father had given it to him, only shortly before he had died. Serenity had met his mother, he hadn't even met his mother. His mother had died giving birth to him, she only knew him as her baby. Was it true that angels watched over them? Had it been his mother's doing, giving him the opportunity to speak to Serenity within her mind. Whatever had happened, Mokuba thanked his mother silently in his mind. He wasn't at all surprised when he heard a faint whisper saying You're welcome. Take care of her Mokuba. Mokuba just nodded and replaced the picture of Seto on the other side of the locket, leaving it so he would always see the picture of the mother he never knew.

**A/N Well there you have it, dear old Serenity is alive, what an un-original way of keeping her alive to eh'? (I'm Canadian, can you tell?) But that doesn't really matter, she's alive and that's what counts right? I dunno about this chapter, and this twist with Mokuba's mother… just make sure you remember what she says, that'll come in handy soon enough. Anyway, I was thinking about it and the way things are going now I think this story is gonna end up being like… really, really long. So I have a question… how long is too long?? Like is 30 chapters too long?? I'm actually thinking it'll probably be some where around 40 (40 chapters averaging 7 pages each… woo u do the math). And quite frankly if anything I'd say that's probably low… do you think I should start making the chapters longer? It won't be as many chapters that way, still the same amount of pages, but not as many chapters. Okay so that's the first thing I needed to ask and now I have another…

Do you think I ought to raise the rating?? I really don't think it's R (17 and up) but I don't know if it's only pg.13 either… I haven't got any complaints but I can never be to careful. As of now I really don't think it's anymore than pg-13… there's a few scenes in the coming chapters that are maybe a little bit more mature… dealing with boobs and stuff… the thing I find funny about that is that 90% of the people on this site are girls… and they should all have them so I don't see the big deal!! Lol… anyway I'll quite rambling now and I have a few more questions

I've added and OC (own character) and I want to know if you guys think that's a bbaadd idea… and I need to know like now because she's in the next chapter. Wait, no. the chapter after that (which is written by the way… it just needs to be edited and should I get a lot of reviews maybe you'll get it early too). Because see… I need someone to help getting Serenity in and out of trouble and I figured I either need to add another character that isn't already part of the yu-gi-oh cast or I would have to butcher Kaiba's character down to a pulp… which I really didn't want to do. SO I need to know whether you guys think I should butcher Kaiba (which I will do should everyone tell me too) or if I should add another character, and if you think adding another character will ruin it and make it not such a hot story then I'll have to butcher Kaiba… *sighs* this is such a hard decision.

Okay now then… this one is short… Kaiba or Mokuba guys?? I can work either in, but I wanna know the preference (though I've already decided who it is… I wanna know what you guys think)

Next… is Kaiba being to nice?? I kind of think so in some scenes… I don't know I'm having technical difficulties getting in Kaiba mode these days. In the next chapter I know he is… but he almost had to be… oh he's such a hard character to work with!

Last one… should I send them to Egypt (like the summary said I was going to) or should I just stay in domino and screw around for a few more chapters and turn this story off? If I don't go to Egypt it'll probably only be like… 5 maybe 6 more chapters but I can't think of anyway to get rid of Mokuba if that's what you guys want… I refuse to kill him I'm doing that in my other fic.

Anyway, I already have most of these questioned answer in my head and I just wanna know your opinions and should everyone vote one way and none the other then I may have to change it… thought don't count to highly on it. But yah, thankz to everyone for them lovely reviews and I hope you like this chapter!!**