Chapter 3
Money I don't own warcraft or any of the people in it except my own Well I got my first person to review and it was a flame. But that what's you get when its your first fan fic. But I do need the help and I do put breaks in there I don't know why it comes up as one big block of words it shouldn't but I'll try to fix that as we go. By the cultist I do appreciate your help but before you start shooting off your mouth about grammar learn to spell right first.
As Jack left the hall he had a big problem mercenaries don't fight for loyalty they fight for money, and money wasn't something he really had a lot of. As he made his way to the streets he began thinking of finding a sponsor in the richer section of the city that might help him. But they were always stuck up and didn't really care about the common man.
He then began to walk towards the bank and see how much money he might be able to take out in loan for some mercenaries when a blue arcane light flashed on him. It was Jaina who appeared after a few seconds.
"Well you sure did leave that meeting in a hurry didn't you?" she said teasing him. "Not now Jaina I'm not in the mood." "I just got my biggest idea shot down by some upper class snobs." He finished and kept walking. "Now hold on, I didn't come down here to make fun of you." She said walking after him, "Oh yeah you just wanted to get away from that meeting." Jack shot back. "That and I think your idea has some truth to it." "If our night eleven allies say it is true then I think there is a good chance it is." "Well I don't expect I'm getting any soldiers am I." "No but I can give you credit to hire those men you need." She wrote on some official looking document. "Here take this, it well allow you to take any amount of money that the bank holds." She said, "Wow thanks" Jack said after a few shocked seconds. "Now you better be right about this other wise I just wasted a lot of money on you." "Don't worry I know exactly what I'm doing." "Last time you said that we had the entire base on its highest guard for more then 2 weeks." She stated. "Now please don't bankrupt us with this." She said as she began walking back to the castle." "Ha ha you know me." "That's what I'm afraid of" she said under her breath.
After Jack got over at how much money he could have now he went strait to the bank. "Hello there sir how may I help u today." Said the clerk at the front desk.
"Hello yes I would like to take out 500,000 pieces of gold please." He said very coolly. "Yes sir.......wait a minute how much did you say?!" "500,000" Jack said again. "Well I would like to see at least some papers before I hand that much over to you." "No one on this entire island his that much money not even the people on the north side of town." "Is this some sort of a robbery?" "Am I being robbed?!" Before the man called the guards or did something rash Jack showed him the slip of paper that Jaina gave him. "You were saying?" Jack said. "Hmmmm by order of Jaina Proudmoore this slip of paper gives the man Jack the right to withdraw as much money he wishes from the royal bank account." "Well alright I suppose but how well you carry this much?" "PEASANTS!!!" Jack yelled. At that moment 45 peasants entered the room with wheel barrels to carry the money out. "Yeah I got it covered, just tell your men to put the money in there."
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HAHA chapter 3 is done YEAAAAAAAA.
Please read and review flames are good so are compliments. Don't feel like you have to be mean. But then again from experience it is a lot of fun.
Money I don't own warcraft or any of the people in it except my own Well I got my first person to review and it was a flame. But that what's you get when its your first fan fic. But I do need the help and I do put breaks in there I don't know why it comes up as one big block of words it shouldn't but I'll try to fix that as we go. By the cultist I do appreciate your help but before you start shooting off your mouth about grammar learn to spell right first.
As Jack left the hall he had a big problem mercenaries don't fight for loyalty they fight for money, and money wasn't something he really had a lot of. As he made his way to the streets he began thinking of finding a sponsor in the richer section of the city that might help him. But they were always stuck up and didn't really care about the common man.
He then began to walk towards the bank and see how much money he might be able to take out in loan for some mercenaries when a blue arcane light flashed on him. It was Jaina who appeared after a few seconds.
"Well you sure did leave that meeting in a hurry didn't you?" she said teasing him. "Not now Jaina I'm not in the mood." "I just got my biggest idea shot down by some upper class snobs." He finished and kept walking. "Now hold on, I didn't come down here to make fun of you." She said walking after him, "Oh yeah you just wanted to get away from that meeting." Jack shot back. "That and I think your idea has some truth to it." "If our night eleven allies say it is true then I think there is a good chance it is." "Well I don't expect I'm getting any soldiers am I." "No but I can give you credit to hire those men you need." She wrote on some official looking document. "Here take this, it well allow you to take any amount of money that the bank holds." She said, "Wow thanks" Jack said after a few shocked seconds. "Now you better be right about this other wise I just wasted a lot of money on you." "Don't worry I know exactly what I'm doing." "Last time you said that we had the entire base on its highest guard for more then 2 weeks." She stated. "Now please don't bankrupt us with this." She said as she began walking back to the castle." "Ha ha you know me." "That's what I'm afraid of" she said under her breath.
After Jack got over at how much money he could have now he went strait to the bank. "Hello there sir how may I help u today." Said the clerk at the front desk.
"Hello yes I would like to take out 500,000 pieces of gold please." He said very coolly. "Yes sir.......wait a minute how much did you say?!" "500,000" Jack said again. "Well I would like to see at least some papers before I hand that much over to you." "No one on this entire island his that much money not even the people on the north side of town." "Is this some sort of a robbery?" "Am I being robbed?!" Before the man called the guards or did something rash Jack showed him the slip of paper that Jaina gave him. "You were saying?" Jack said. "Hmmmm by order of Jaina Proudmoore this slip of paper gives the man Jack the right to withdraw as much money he wishes from the royal bank account." "Well alright I suppose but how well you carry this much?" "PEASANTS!!!" Jack yelled. At that moment 45 peasants entered the room with wheel barrels to carry the money out. "Yeah I got it covered, just tell your men to put the money in there."
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HAHA chapter 3 is done YEAAAAAAAA.
Please read and review flames are good so are compliments. Don't feel like you have to be mean. But then again from experience it is a lot of fun.