Disclaimer: Troy story never belonged to me so off it belonged to Homer and the people that made the movie X3
"Our Love"
Chapter three: my name
The next day, Achilles and his men were only look at the war that was going on in front of the walls of Troy. Achilles didn't get a lot of sleep that night. Because of that priestess he was worrying about her all night and couldn't stop thinking about her. After sometime the Greeks lost the battle and ran back to the beach. Priam the king of Troy was kind and told the Greeks that they could come back to get the body of the dead away. Achilles started thinking that maybe the Troy wasn't that bad. But maybe it's because of Briseis.
It was nightfall as Achilles walked too Agamemnon to get Briseis back.
"Were is she?" Achilles asked as he walked in front of Agamemnon.
"With the solders, they lost today so I thought I'll give them something to make them happy" Agamemnon laughed as Achilles ran out and went to find Briseis. 'Damn girl' Achilles thought in his mind.
"What a pretty girl" one men said putting his hand to Briseis back.
"Come near me and I'll kill you" Briseis hissed moving away. Without her knowing Achilles was running over to her.
"girl don't make me hurt you" the solders grabbed her arm.
"she said let her go!" Achilles took the solders arm and killed a couple of the men around her. Briseis was in shock. No matter how strong and unafraid outside, Briseis fell but Achilles had his arm about her waist and picked her up and slowly into his arms he took Briseis back to his tent and put her slowly down onto his bed.
"are you okay?" Achilles kindly asked, as kindly as he could. Briseis didn't say anything. Achilles took a towel and a bowl of water and tried to clean Briseis wounds but she only moved away and Achilles still a man and with a small temper and annoyed put the towel back into the bowl.
"I'm not going to hurt you" Achilles sighed and took some food and turned back to Briseis who slowly started cleaning the wounds on her face herself. Achilles put the food in front of her, sat and looked at her. Briseis looked at Achilles and wonder. Was this the man that was the greatest warrior that even she had heard stories that traveled from Greek to Troy? He seemed to have a heart and was nice to her. Maybe he was not that cold and heartless. Briseis blushed a little when Achilles looked at her, as she was looking at him.
"Briseis" she sighed as she took a fruit and ate it slowly not taking her eyes off him. 'he's different, from all the men I have known all my life' she thought.
Achilles looked at her again.
"what did you say?" he asked confused about her. 'one second ago she was so cold to him and wouldn't say a word now? She was talking to him? Who does this girl think she's talking to?' he thought.
"Briseis is my name" she sighed and thought about how slow he was.
"Briseis is you name ha? What a pretty name" Achilles looked at Briseis. She tried not to blush and looked down at the fruit that was still in her hands.
"its only a name" she said. Achilles looked at her and smiled. Briseis looked up and now she was unsure about what to think of him.
wow so many reviews in one day ,so happy. Was I was talking about my reviews and one more pop up. Ah reviews make my day I have a editor but I don't really have the time to give it to her. I gave her chap 1 and 2 I'll fix them when I have the time k? again thanks for the reviews!
"Our Love"
Chapter three: my name
The next day, Achilles and his men were only look at the war that was going on in front of the walls of Troy. Achilles didn't get a lot of sleep that night. Because of that priestess he was worrying about her all night and couldn't stop thinking about her. After sometime the Greeks lost the battle and ran back to the beach. Priam the king of Troy was kind and told the Greeks that they could come back to get the body of the dead away. Achilles started thinking that maybe the Troy wasn't that bad. But maybe it's because of Briseis.
It was nightfall as Achilles walked too Agamemnon to get Briseis back.
"Were is she?" Achilles asked as he walked in front of Agamemnon.
"With the solders, they lost today so I thought I'll give them something to make them happy" Agamemnon laughed as Achilles ran out and went to find Briseis. 'Damn girl' Achilles thought in his mind.
"What a pretty girl" one men said putting his hand to Briseis back.
"Come near me and I'll kill you" Briseis hissed moving away. Without her knowing Achilles was running over to her.
"girl don't make me hurt you" the solders grabbed her arm.
"she said let her go!" Achilles took the solders arm and killed a couple of the men around her. Briseis was in shock. No matter how strong and unafraid outside, Briseis fell but Achilles had his arm about her waist and picked her up and slowly into his arms he took Briseis back to his tent and put her slowly down onto his bed.
"are you okay?" Achilles kindly asked, as kindly as he could. Briseis didn't say anything. Achilles took a towel and a bowl of water and tried to clean Briseis wounds but she only moved away and Achilles still a man and with a small temper and annoyed put the towel back into the bowl.
"I'm not going to hurt you" Achilles sighed and took some food and turned back to Briseis who slowly started cleaning the wounds on her face herself. Achilles put the food in front of her, sat and looked at her. Briseis looked at Achilles and wonder. Was this the man that was the greatest warrior that even she had heard stories that traveled from Greek to Troy? He seemed to have a heart and was nice to her. Maybe he was not that cold and heartless. Briseis blushed a little when Achilles looked at her, as she was looking at him.
"Briseis" she sighed as she took a fruit and ate it slowly not taking her eyes off him. 'he's different, from all the men I have known all my life' she thought.
Achilles looked at her again.
"what did you say?" he asked confused about her. 'one second ago she was so cold to him and wouldn't say a word now? She was talking to him? Who does this girl think she's talking to?' he thought.
"Briseis is my name" she sighed and thought about how slow he was.
"Briseis is you name ha? What a pretty name" Achilles looked at Briseis. She tried not to blush and looked down at the fruit that was still in her hands.
"its only a name" she said. Achilles looked at her and smiled. Briseis looked up and now she was unsure about what to think of him.
wow so many reviews in one day ,so happy. Was I was talking about my reviews and one more pop up. Ah reviews make my day I have a editor but I don't really have the time to give it to her. I gave her chap 1 and 2 I'll fix them when I have the time k? again thanks for the reviews!