Disclaimer: Troy story never belonged to me so off it belonged to Homer and the people that made the movie X3
"Our Love"
Chapter five: that night
Achilles eyes shot open and looked at Briseis, both eye to eye. Briseis was scared why was her heart beating so fast?
Was it love?
His eyes still looking at her eyes, both unmoving. Briseis couldn't let go of the knife, couldn't take her eyes away and just kill him.
"Do it." Achilles whispered still eye to eye with her.
"What?" Briseis eye widened.
"Do it. Kill me. It doesn't matter if I die today or 50 years from now. We will still die one day." He put his hand to her head and before Briseis knew it, Achilles turned and he was now on top of her. Still looking. Not letting go. Something changed both of them.
It was love.
Slowly still eye-to-eye Achilles moved his hand up Briseis leg and slowly put his lips to her lips. Briseis gave in to Achilles and prayed in her heart that Apollo would forgive her. He then put his hand down to her arm then to her hand. Finally she let go of the knife and she put her hands to his shoulders. Achilles moved the sides of Briseis dress up, still kissing her heatedly. While Briseis' arms wound around Achilles neck, he kept moving his body closer and closer to her.
Both, wishing to never let go.
"Achilles, sir" one of Achilles men came into the tent as Achilles sat in a chair watching the ever-different Briseis sleep. In the past Achilles never watched the women he slept with, but she was different. Maybe he was changing because of Briseis and showing he actually had a heart.
"Shhh" Achilles whispered as he put his fingers to his lips to sign of not to make any further noise. Then slowly moved out of his tent. As Achilles was outside talking with his soldier, Briseis slowly got up feeling the pain in her lower body; thinking about what happened last night. Briseis was no longer a virgin that mean she could and no longer be the priestess of Apollo. But knowing that she loved Achilles and that it was not really rape made her feel better. Briseis got out of the bed she and Achilles had shared the night before and dressed. She stepped out of the tent to a warm morning, the sun shining in her face she saw Achilles talking to someone.
"We will leave for Greece in the morning" Achilles said to his men, Briseis stepped back. What did this mean?
wow I never thought I would get so many reviews! I'm so happy thanks to everyone that reviewed. I was going to make this chapter an R chapter but then I thought: "I dunno how to write R type stories" my editor was going to help me but I was like.. "...oo" yeah if you people really want an R fic review and tell me. I'll talk to me editor about it. Thanks again hey hey this is the 'editor' aka blue ice2 or aka firefly ANYWAYS do u guys want Angelic-Yuki or what ever she calls herself now(dunt kill me) to write some limey/lemons? REVIEW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! bwahahhahaha we shall make her write them cause she is actually really good...but she doesnt know it .-- here she come....I AM invisible
