Disclaimer: Troy story never belonged to me so off it belonged to Homer and the people that made the movie X3

"Our Love"

Chapter seven: have you ever fought in a war?

"My love for you is stronger. If we are apart I don't think I could ever bear it. I never knew of this kind of happiness before I met you" Briseis sighed looking at him. Achilles combed Briseis' brown soft hair, and smiled knowing for the first time a woman had finally made him complete.

"Dearest Briseis, I love you too," Achilles whispered as they fell into sleep.

It was late noon by the time they woke, as they dressed and sat to eat. Achilles' cousin Patroclus walked into the tent.

"Achilles, cousin. I need to talk to you" Patroclus looked at Briseis with cold and dislike in his eyes, then he turned to Achilles with warmer eyes.

"ok Patroclus" Achilles said getting up and walking over to Briseis giving her a kiss and walked out.

So they walked near the sea were no soldier or kings were around.

"why cousin? Why do you want to go back? Is it because of that girl? That slave?" Patroclus hissed out slave like it burned his mouth.

"Briseis is not a slave, She' more then a slave to me" Achilles hissed out, wondering why must Patroclus hate Briseis so much.

'Cousin listen to yourself, your turning into a lovesick bird. Do you not hear what the soldiers or saying about you in the camp? The girl is going to destroy you" Patroclus gasped as he put his hands on Achilles arms looking deep into his eyes.

"I know what I say, Patroclus. But we will leave in the morning, there is no need for us here in Troy and in this war" Achilles sighed patting his cousin's back.

"Cousin I want to fight! You know I can fight well! Can't you let me fight this one time before we leave?" Patroclus asked Achilles letting go of his arms.

"Patroclus let me ask you. Have you ever fought in a war?, ever killed a man?" Achilles asked Patroclus knowing that he was still young and not meant to fight at this time.

"no" Patroclus whispered.

"Do you know how it feel's after killing someone? How it feels like they are praying for your death from the underworld?" Achilles asked, knowing that it was a dark and not the most welcoming feeling. But he still fought and Briseis was the only women that brought Achilles peace for the wrong he had did. Once again Patroclus whispered the same thing.

"you don't so don't think war is a wonderful thing until you had fought in one. A lot of men die and if you do one wrong thing, you could die as well" Achilles sighed before walking off. Leaving Patroclus by the sea, to look out the great waters and think about war and fighting.
hey people thanks for the great reviews! I feel that people really like this story, But as for the two flames =P I have and still is reading The Iliad. Thank you too anon and NightbirdSongbird for the 'nice reviews'. I know how incredibly inaccurate my story is but this is fanfiction if you people have not figured that out =P I have all the right to write whatever I want to. But it seems that my story to you people are rubbish. I'm sorry to NightbirdSongbird if you want to 'spear me' because of this fiction but this is FANFICTION! I'm trying to write what I see and this story has nothing to do with the book. I try to put it in the way I see it and not as the book. I know it is like the movie in many ways but this is my story. I know that patroclus was not Achilles cousin but was in a way he's lover. I understand that. NightbirdSongbird I'm sorry but I found your 'so called review' to be very childish. One more thing, its very hurtful that you use the goddess Athena (or any god or goddess) to 'help' you flame stories about Achilles and Briseis, and no NightbirdSongbird I do not believe this is blasphemy. This is a story based off the movie NOT the book,and as for anon I know you didn't want to be rude but it did sound rude to me, because you called my story rubbish.

Thank you for your comments.

Angelic-Yuki

P.S. I would all so like to say this is my story, I'm a writer and this is my story. I have the right to write what ever I want. I really did find what NightbirdSongbird wrote to be VERY rude and as an author I'm very annoyed by what you wrote and said. THERE I said it. Takes a lot of my back.

And now I give this to my editor and see what she has to say. Because it is her story too and she has ever right to say want she wants to say. (she bites)

ALOOOHAAAAAAA! Well well looks like I got permission to talk a bit here... so I think I will. To those lovely souls that have written feed back: We are both really happy so many of you are enjoying "our love". BUT for those who wrote the flames, I think it is rather disappointing. Here we have a writer that is trying to show others her point of view, how she reads in between the lines/scenes and there you go saying how bad it is. Alright I understand some people will not like the plot line but it would be highly appreciated if you could leave the strange unconstructive comments outside. And to NightbirdSongbird I actually found your review amusing. Thanks for making me laugh at that cough wonderfully written review. But I was wondering why so many other stories featuring this couple has received the EXACT same flame? Running out of ideas are we? If you do not enjoy seeing stories that have Achilles and Briseis as a pair then why don't you just stay away from them? Anyways lets all end this on a happy note!! Enjoy the newest chapter from 'Our Love'. I have to go calm Angelic-Yuki down.