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Kurama's POV
At first, my plan seemed to work so well (Hiei even held my hand, and I did not force him to!!!!) but now, I was beginning to have my doubts. Two weeks had passed from the time our promise ended, and there was not even a word from Hiei. Did he hate me now? Or worse, think of me as a perverted fox who wanted to 'eat him up'. (Well, that was partly true) If I had spoiled our friendship through this, then I would regret for life! What should I do? WHAT SHOULD I DO?! Oh, I want him so much.
Tap. Tap.
What was that sound? It seemed like. a stone thrown against my window. HIEI!! My heart leaped and I jumped to the window and flung it open. A black shadow brushed past me and into the room. Now what should I do? What should I say to him? Oh my god, I had not been so nervous for all my life.
"Um. Hiei, what brings you here?" I stammered as I glance at him. He looked even sexier today, his fair complexion that you want to sink your teeth into, his body so firm and solid, and his eyes red with fire yet so cold. Yummy. Fine, I admit I was a perverted fox, but who won't be in front of such a cute creature?
"Hn. It is too boring watching the borders of Makai."
"Then what are you doing here? There is no possible way that you could think of Ningenkai as an exciting place," I teased. He was not injured too, so why was he here? Could he be looking for.'excitement'? I am perverted. Well, I couldn't help it. I mean, I am a youko.
"Can you give me another challenge?" he said and avoided my eyes, but I could almost feel a tiny blush creeping onto his cheeks. Looks like my plan had worked. But I could not be too overwhelming. Better not scare him away.
"But you are not hurt, so it is not fair for me to let you do things as I wish for two weeks."
"Hn. When have you become so indecisive?" and he jumped out of the window. Now what did he want to do? He couldn't possibly just leave like that, could he? At least I hope not.
Five minutes later, he came back at last, with a bunch of poison ivy around his right arm. POISON IVY?!
"Hiei! What are you doing? Those are poisonous!!" I yelled and pulled the plants off his arm. It stung my hands a bit but I had been around plants for too long to be irritated by those little things.
"Now set the challenge," he said calmly.
"Fine, if that's what you want, but next time don't hurt yourself like that." It really pained me to see him purposely injure himself because of me. I shouldn't have teased him. I focused on the work at hand, but was interrupted when he gently touched my face with his left hand and lifted me to face him. His hand was cold, but not uncomfortable. I leaned in to the touch.
"Just go get what you need to cure me. You know this thing is poisonous, so stay away before you can get anything to protect you." Did he just say that or was I dreaming? HE ACTUALLY CARED FOR ME!!
"It doesn't matter. You know that I can endure pain just as you can." I replied and smiled. I remember myself saying the same thing to him before. I quickly took the first aid kit after removing the poison ivy. Too bad he had already dropped his hand from my cheeks.
"So, do you want the normal treatment or the more-painful-but-heals- better treatment?" I asked with a sly glint in my eyes. I had just the plan for him.
"What do you think I am here for? Baka kitsune." I guess that was a yes.
"Then you have to bear with me for licking you. Not just for the healing process, but for all the two weeks." Hiei seemed to be oblivious to the conditions that apply to the words I had just said, but as long as he didn't object, I could have it my way. I'll think of what I could do later. there are lots of. options.
I summoned the plant necessary and snapped the thick stem to half. Rich and colourless sap oozed out. I unwounded the bandage around his right arm. There were many deep scratches here and there, and the poison was making the blood that flowed out turn bright red. I licked up some of the sap from the plant and met the curious eyes of Hiei. He gave me a slight nod of approval of what I was going to do.
I applied the sap onto his arm using my tongue. This way the injury would not hurt too much because the tongue is way softer on the wounds than your hands. Besides, this was my cute little Hiei, so he deserved something special.
I went along his arm, and soon, I found that the taste of his blood was. special. Most of the blood I tasted before was unpleasant, but Hiei's had an indescribable flavour to it, and it intoxicated me. I closed my eyes and enjoyed the blood, enjoyed Hiei. The skin under my tongue soon felt smooth, and soon, blood ceased to flow.
"You seem to like this, don't you, kitsune?" Hiei's voice broke my thoughts.
"That depends. If you force me to do this to Kuwabara, then I might start brushing my teeth 20 times a day." He gave me a smirk, and I had to use my greatest self-control to keep myself from blushing.
"Do you want some ice cream?" I quickly asked to hide my embarrassment.
'Sweet snow?" I could almost see Hiei's ears perk up as the mention of ice cream. Aww. he looked so cute that way.
"Yes, sweet snow. Wait here and I'll go get some." I rushed downstairs and sped back, not wanting to even spend 1 minute away from my adorable, sexy and hot fire demon.
I banged the door shut once I reached my room. Luckily mother was out that day, or else my private time with Hiei would all be spoiled. I caught him staring at me with one of his brow lifted into the white cloth covering his jagan. Now I really flushed, but that was after I handed him the ice cream, and he was indulged in it immediately.
He started eating at 50 spoons per second, all of his pride and composure forgotten. The ice cream was smeared over his cheeks, but he was too busy to clean it away. What if. I do it for him? That must be yummy. I couldn't help but lick my lips. Well. I think I could help him, since he agreed to let me lick him.
Hiei finished the whole box of ice cream if less than 10 minutes, and he looked at me hopefully for more.
"I'm sorry, Hiei, but you have just eaten the whole week's supply of ice cream, but. would you like me to clean up for you?" the passion darken my orbs, and as ignorant as he could be, he must be blind to not see what I intended to do.
"Anything you want, kitsune. I can't break the." but before he could finish, I was already lapping at the chocolate on his face. Wow. it was so much better than I had imagined. The smooth feeling of his ivory skin, his unique taste mixed with the sweet and cold aroma of ice cream, it was driving all my senses crazy. His pointed chin, his slightly pink lips, I devoured them feverishly, but still keeping tag of myself to not cross the borders. Hiei made a small purring sound, almost urging me to continue.
"Kurama, why are you doing this?" he asked, not disgustedly, but puzzled. "Why did you choose me?"
"Well, isn't it obvious?"
He gazed at me intently, not at all understanding what I meant.
"Hiei, don't think about it now. Just feel."
Kurama's POV
At first, my plan seemed to work so well (Hiei even held my hand, and I did not force him to!!!!) but now, I was beginning to have my doubts. Two weeks had passed from the time our promise ended, and there was not even a word from Hiei. Did he hate me now? Or worse, think of me as a perverted fox who wanted to 'eat him up'. (Well, that was partly true) If I had spoiled our friendship through this, then I would regret for life! What should I do? WHAT SHOULD I DO?! Oh, I want him so much.
Tap. Tap.
What was that sound? It seemed like. a stone thrown against my window. HIEI!! My heart leaped and I jumped to the window and flung it open. A black shadow brushed past me and into the room. Now what should I do? What should I say to him? Oh my god, I had not been so nervous for all my life.
"Um. Hiei, what brings you here?" I stammered as I glance at him. He looked even sexier today, his fair complexion that you want to sink your teeth into, his body so firm and solid, and his eyes red with fire yet so cold. Yummy. Fine, I admit I was a perverted fox, but who won't be in front of such a cute creature?
"Hn. It is too boring watching the borders of Makai."
"Then what are you doing here? There is no possible way that you could think of Ningenkai as an exciting place," I teased. He was not injured too, so why was he here? Could he be looking for.'excitement'? I am perverted. Well, I couldn't help it. I mean, I am a youko.
"Can you give me another challenge?" he said and avoided my eyes, but I could almost feel a tiny blush creeping onto his cheeks. Looks like my plan had worked. But I could not be too overwhelming. Better not scare him away.
"But you are not hurt, so it is not fair for me to let you do things as I wish for two weeks."
"Hn. When have you become so indecisive?" and he jumped out of the window. Now what did he want to do? He couldn't possibly just leave like that, could he? At least I hope not.
Five minutes later, he came back at last, with a bunch of poison ivy around his right arm. POISON IVY?!
"Hiei! What are you doing? Those are poisonous!!" I yelled and pulled the plants off his arm. It stung my hands a bit but I had been around plants for too long to be irritated by those little things.
"Now set the challenge," he said calmly.
"Fine, if that's what you want, but next time don't hurt yourself like that." It really pained me to see him purposely injure himself because of me. I shouldn't have teased him. I focused on the work at hand, but was interrupted when he gently touched my face with his left hand and lifted me to face him. His hand was cold, but not uncomfortable. I leaned in to the touch.
"Just go get what you need to cure me. You know this thing is poisonous, so stay away before you can get anything to protect you." Did he just say that or was I dreaming? HE ACTUALLY CARED FOR ME!!
"It doesn't matter. You know that I can endure pain just as you can." I replied and smiled. I remember myself saying the same thing to him before. I quickly took the first aid kit after removing the poison ivy. Too bad he had already dropped his hand from my cheeks.
"So, do you want the normal treatment or the more-painful-but-heals- better treatment?" I asked with a sly glint in my eyes. I had just the plan for him.
"What do you think I am here for? Baka kitsune." I guess that was a yes.
"Then you have to bear with me for licking you. Not just for the healing process, but for all the two weeks." Hiei seemed to be oblivious to the conditions that apply to the words I had just said, but as long as he didn't object, I could have it my way. I'll think of what I could do later. there are lots of. options.
I summoned the plant necessary and snapped the thick stem to half. Rich and colourless sap oozed out. I unwounded the bandage around his right arm. There were many deep scratches here and there, and the poison was making the blood that flowed out turn bright red. I licked up some of the sap from the plant and met the curious eyes of Hiei. He gave me a slight nod of approval of what I was going to do.
I applied the sap onto his arm using my tongue. This way the injury would not hurt too much because the tongue is way softer on the wounds than your hands. Besides, this was my cute little Hiei, so he deserved something special.
I went along his arm, and soon, I found that the taste of his blood was. special. Most of the blood I tasted before was unpleasant, but Hiei's had an indescribable flavour to it, and it intoxicated me. I closed my eyes and enjoyed the blood, enjoyed Hiei. The skin under my tongue soon felt smooth, and soon, blood ceased to flow.
"You seem to like this, don't you, kitsune?" Hiei's voice broke my thoughts.
"That depends. If you force me to do this to Kuwabara, then I might start brushing my teeth 20 times a day." He gave me a smirk, and I had to use my greatest self-control to keep myself from blushing.
"Do you want some ice cream?" I quickly asked to hide my embarrassment.
'Sweet snow?" I could almost see Hiei's ears perk up as the mention of ice cream. Aww. he looked so cute that way.
"Yes, sweet snow. Wait here and I'll go get some." I rushed downstairs and sped back, not wanting to even spend 1 minute away from my adorable, sexy and hot fire demon.
I banged the door shut once I reached my room. Luckily mother was out that day, or else my private time with Hiei would all be spoiled. I caught him staring at me with one of his brow lifted into the white cloth covering his jagan. Now I really flushed, but that was after I handed him the ice cream, and he was indulged in it immediately.
He started eating at 50 spoons per second, all of his pride and composure forgotten. The ice cream was smeared over his cheeks, but he was too busy to clean it away. What if. I do it for him? That must be yummy. I couldn't help but lick my lips. Well. I think I could help him, since he agreed to let me lick him.
Hiei finished the whole box of ice cream if less than 10 minutes, and he looked at me hopefully for more.
"I'm sorry, Hiei, but you have just eaten the whole week's supply of ice cream, but. would you like me to clean up for you?" the passion darken my orbs, and as ignorant as he could be, he must be blind to not see what I intended to do.
"Anything you want, kitsune. I can't break the." but before he could finish, I was already lapping at the chocolate on his face. Wow. it was so much better than I had imagined. The smooth feeling of his ivory skin, his unique taste mixed with the sweet and cold aroma of ice cream, it was driving all my senses crazy. His pointed chin, his slightly pink lips, I devoured them feverishly, but still keeping tag of myself to not cross the borders. Hiei made a small purring sound, almost urging me to continue.
"Kurama, why are you doing this?" he asked, not disgustedly, but puzzled. "Why did you choose me?"
"Well, isn't it obvious?"
He gazed at me intently, not at all understanding what I meant.
"Hiei, don't think about it now. Just feel."