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Feeling her away around the cave walls, she stumbles over a rock on the save bottom, and fell face forward. Pushing the dirt off of her, she willed herself to proceed and find her friends. "I can do this, I will do this." She told herself, trying to get as much support as possible. Within an instant, Kagome felt some strange rush of power within her, and she knew she could find her way. Inside of her something was radiating out, giving her strength she was lacking. Turning a corner, a little bit of light peeked out at her. The only ray of light seen for miles shone out of a crack in a wall of rocks. Falling to her knees, she sat there, and just wondered what to do, wandered how to do it. "Will I ever get out" She thought with tears streaming down her face. No I cannot give up, not this easily.
Back to Inuyasha
Sitting in his tree, his white hair flying through the open breeze, something is wrong, why aren't I picking up Kagome's scent...
Golden eyes flew open to the thought- ears perked- and all senses became extra sensitive. The world seemed to spin ever more quickly, and every of the heart seemed to shatter a new beginning. "KK..Kagome" He whispered. In shock for only a second, he snapped himself out of it, trying to pick up her scent, he found it blended with another..... "It couldn't be" he though "...Sesshomaru" (spelling? Is it wrong? If so, review and tell the write way- much thanks) his whole body froze at just the thought, his brother, holding Kagome captive, why, why would he do that? Sure he hated me, but why her, what did she ever do? Snarling at the thought, Inuyashsa looked into the sun's glow, swuinting his eyes, he knew he ahd to save her, if his brother were the one who took her captive, then she needs all the help she can get.
The moment before Inuyahsa was about to set off to find her, a curious little kitsune popped into the picture. "Inuaysha" he asksed, with apprehension filling his eyes. "Kagome, I cant find her, I found her scent, but I smell Sesshomaru's scent mixed in with it. Shippo's Eyes flung open and with a whirl, darted off trying to find Kagome. sigh "Inuyasha's face fell hopeless to the idea of a kitsune slowing down his quest. Inuyahsa darted after Shippo.
------------------- back to Kagome------------------------------
"Climbing the wall or rocks, Kagome try pulling one from the bottom, it wouldn't budge. "I cant be stuck... not now, not after I came this far." She thought to herself, her only hope. Peeking through the hole where the only bit of light peered out, Kagome felt like someone was watching her, like someone was behind her. A chill ran up her spine, and as she turned around to see if she was right, a glimmer of silver was the last she saw. Shaking out of the spell, she awoke, tied to a tree. "I should be able to get out of this easily,." She thought. Squirming and trying eveythiong she could think of, she attempted to break free. She finally realized it was hopeless, for it was being held by a binding spell. Kicking a rock nearest her feet, a blur shield arose, and she realized not only was she in a binding spell, but was caught in a shield also.
"Kaa....Kkaaggg... Kagome" Spoke Inuyahsa, almost silently. Kagome's eyes were cleneched for a good 2 minutes, looking up into her silver-haired hanyou's eyes, she found relief, and amazingly,courage.
Shall I write more? ,more reviews and I shall =) READ AND REVIEW R&R R&R R&R
Feeling her away around the cave walls, she stumbles over a rock on the save bottom, and fell face forward. Pushing the dirt off of her, she willed herself to proceed and find her friends. "I can do this, I will do this." She told herself, trying to get as much support as possible. Within an instant, Kagome felt some strange rush of power within her, and she knew she could find her way. Inside of her something was radiating out, giving her strength she was lacking. Turning a corner, a little bit of light peeked out at her. The only ray of light seen for miles shone out of a crack in a wall of rocks. Falling to her knees, she sat there, and just wondered what to do, wandered how to do it. "Will I ever get out" She thought with tears streaming down her face. No I cannot give up, not this easily.
Back to Inuyasha
Sitting in his tree, his white hair flying through the open breeze, something is wrong, why aren't I picking up Kagome's scent...
Golden eyes flew open to the thought- ears perked- and all senses became extra sensitive. The world seemed to spin ever more quickly, and every of the heart seemed to shatter a new beginning. "KK..Kagome" He whispered. In shock for only a second, he snapped himself out of it, trying to pick up her scent, he found it blended with another..... "It couldn't be" he though "...Sesshomaru" (spelling? Is it wrong? If so, review and tell the write way- much thanks) his whole body froze at just the thought, his brother, holding Kagome captive, why, why would he do that? Sure he hated me, but why her, what did she ever do? Snarling at the thought, Inuyashsa looked into the sun's glow, swuinting his eyes, he knew he ahd to save her, if his brother were the one who took her captive, then she needs all the help she can get.
The moment before Inuyahsa was about to set off to find her, a curious little kitsune popped into the picture. "Inuaysha" he asksed, with apprehension filling his eyes. "Kagome, I cant find her, I found her scent, but I smell Sesshomaru's scent mixed in with it. Shippo's Eyes flung open and with a whirl, darted off trying to find Kagome. sigh "Inuyasha's face fell hopeless to the idea of a kitsune slowing down his quest. Inuyahsa darted after Shippo.
------------------- back to Kagome------------------------------
"Climbing the wall or rocks, Kagome try pulling one from the bottom, it wouldn't budge. "I cant be stuck... not now, not after I came this far." She thought to herself, her only hope. Peeking through the hole where the only bit of light peered out, Kagome felt like someone was watching her, like someone was behind her. A chill ran up her spine, and as she turned around to see if she was right, a glimmer of silver was the last she saw. Shaking out of the spell, she awoke, tied to a tree. "I should be able to get out of this easily,." She thought. Squirming and trying eveythiong she could think of, she attempted to break free. She finally realized it was hopeless, for it was being held by a binding spell. Kicking a rock nearest her feet, a blur shield arose, and she realized not only was she in a binding spell, but was caught in a shield also.
"Kaa....Kkaaggg... Kagome" Spoke Inuyahsa, almost silently. Kagome's eyes were cleneched for a good 2 minutes, looking up into her silver-haired hanyou's eyes, she found relief, and amazingly,courage.
Shall I write more? ,more reviews and I shall =) READ AND REVIEW R&R R&R R&R