Tykiei Ichimon Keppan: Jigai Urufu Tsume Tykiei Blood Limit: Suicide Wolf Claw
Urufu houkou bakufuu batsuWolf Howl Blast Strike
KAIJU GUFUU No JUTSURock Tornado
Okay the following is answers to Terimaru's questions on the review.
Dude I don't like you anymore. No not really I am glad you made a lot of valid points I appreciate it. These are the reviews that help me become a better writer.
1st of all JIN IS NOT A GENIUS!!! GET OVER IT! Is he Talented? YES! Is he abnormal? YES! So then is he a genius? NO! His original bloodline is not that strong. I will talk about this in No guts No Glory a lot better than I can now. Jin has been training since he could walk those poor Chuunins as you said we're really weaklings. Chuunin remember is your average ninja. Even though Jin is a Genin he is above average because of training. Are you gonna tell me what happens in MY story? Personally I find that a little funny.
2nd of all I don't want to hear the poor chuunin routine. They were idiots obviously. They didn't use any jutsus because they were stupid and slow. I was going to have Jin get captured but I decided to have a vote on it instead and out of the only three people that reviewed they all thought that Jin should make it to the wave country.
3rd of all don't diss my fight scenes jerk! Enough with the bashing
4th once again chuunin is an average ninja and these guys were below average Chuunins why else would they work for an idiot like Shino? Or who he's working for (I refuse to reveal who is pulling Shino's strings and no it isn't Itatchi)
5th Jin uhhhh In all honesty I forgot about the side effects of the initial lotus but let's just say for now that he ignored them ok?
6th I don't know if Jin is alive or dead that's why you're voting on it.
AHHHHHHH this review is proving that I suck as a writer maybe I should give up and try my hand at psychology wait you have to be smart to do that
Kuwabara: quit your bellyaching
Fine sorry for the delay folks Kuwabara's Pupil is here and he is ready to rock and roll chapter 17 on the house.
Kuwabara: on the house?
Well its free anyways whatever read and ignore my senseless babble.
The Kids of Glory "Revenge is a dish best served cold"-Any Mentor Chapter 17: The Evils of Vengeance
"So be it Kiba!" Naruto said getting in his fighting stance "Let's end this once and for all"
"If you think I am going to sit and watch you're out of your mind." Kai said "Jin is dead and we're just going to sit here and wait? Forget it" Anna had jumped back up onto the bridge behind Kai.
"I agree." Shiro said "Anna, we're counting on you to stay out of this fight"
"Are you crazy? There's no way in hell I am sitting this one out!" Anna said "I am not going to run away from anything. That is my ninja way" Shiro turned to see the fire in his sister's eyes. She meant it there was nothing that would stop her except for one thing.
"I know but we need to get Jin's body," Shiro said "and we're counting on you". Anna stopped for a second and looked back over the bridge. Anna gave her brother a smart salute and jumped back in the water. "So Kai, what do you say we take out these punks once and for all." Shiro said
"Sounds good to me." Kai said "Together, we are unbeatable my friend"
Toyo Rama and Bekken Miko were on their feet. They didn't say a word the just knew what they had to do. Shiro and Kai charged the Renegade-nins. They were about fifty feet away. They continued running until Shiro suddenly stopped and Kai stopped behind him. "Suckers" Kai said as Shiro began making his symbols. "KAIJU GUFUU NO JUTSU (Note 1)" The Kaiju Gufuu was released again. The gigantic boulders began ripping and thrashing around. This time it hit all three of the Renegade-nins. Kiya was knocked unconscious in mid air by a boulder and the other two were getting hammered by the rocks. Shiro let the Kaiju Gufuu go and all three Renegade-nins fell down hard.
Miko and Rama rose but Kiya was out like a light. "Damn them!" Miko said "I'll take out Shiro you take down that Yingchi wimp." Miko withdrew his kendo stick "Are you looking foreword to seeing my favorite technique again?"
Shiro smirked "No I was planning on returning the favor" Shiro said drawing a pair of kunais. "This is for my brother." Shiro aimed a slash at Miko's head but Miko raised his kendo to block the kunai.
"RAIKOU TOUSHIN NO JUTSU (Note 2)" Miko shouted and his sword burst with lighting energy. "I think you remember this technique it's the one that injured your ribs" Miko said this nodding his head in the direction of Shiro's bandages.
"No, you see unlike you I learn from my mistakes." Shiro said "Your chakra can't hold that sword form for very long can it?" Miko didn't answer. He didn't have to. "Tough luck"
Shiro attacked first making a downward slash but Miko raised his kendo stick to block it. Shiro tried to draw back his kunai but it was too late. A kunai would be a conductor of electricity. Shiro was shocked with a 1,000 volts and he fell down hard. Shiro rose to his feet smiling. "What in the hell is so damn funny!" Miko asked "you just got shocked"
"Yeah you could say that." Shiro said holding up his right hand and blue electric sparks surrounded his hand. "Or you could say I absorbed the power of your kendo." Miko looked down at his kendo stick all the chakra was gone and nothing else was happening. "Now were on even ground. EAT THIS!" Shiro through a right handed hook hitting Miko in the cheek knocking him back several feet. The shock of Miko's own chakra was causing him excruciating pain.
Rama and Kai stood in front of one another in their own martial arts stances. They did a quick round of punches and kicks trying to get an advantage of some kind. Kai aimed a high kick but Rama blocked with his forearm. Kai aimed for a sweep but Rama jumped over it. Rama tried to punch Kai twice but Kai dodged both times. They were going so fast that to the average eye they were just a blur. That blur was getting faster.
"Kiba it ends now!" Naruto shouted "You and I finish this once and for all"
"Then quit talking and start fighting" Kiba mocked and disappeared. Kiba reappeared behind Naruto. Naruto turned around completely swinging his right leg hard hitting Kiba's side. Kiba hit the railing of the bridge and fell to his knees. Naruto charged at Kiba and kneed him in the temple. 'When did he get so damn strong' Kiba thought 'he was never this strong. He's making me look like I'm standing still'.
"Kiba!" Naruto shouted "Get up!" Kiba tried to stand back on his feet but he was in so much pain from only a few blows. His right eye was swollen shut already. Kiba was panting the fight between him and Jin had taken more out of him then he expected.
"Well then Naruto finish it already!" Kiba exclaimed "There's no reason to hold back. I am at my limit." Naruto knew he was right but he was waiting for something. He was waiting for Itatchi to show himself.
Naruto hit Kiba several more times in the body. Naruto also wanted to beat the pain he had caused into him. He realized now he wasn't going to kill Kiba. No, that would be the east way out. He was going to force Kiba to live a life of humiliation. He would live a life of pain and regret for his mistake. His betrayal to the leaf. Naruto gave Kiba an uppercut underneath the chin. Kiba flew a foot off of the ground before falling down hard. Naruto picked Kiba up and kneed him in the gut with his right knee. Then he twisted his body around and side kicked him in the chest with his left foot. Kiba was getting hammered. This was the worst beating of his life. Kiba was no push-over either.
Itatchi was watching the battle sway against his favor. Itatchi scowled. 'This is not what I had in mind for the fox-boy' Itatchi thought 'I will have to take care of him and Kiba now'. Itatchi came out from his hiding place and appeared on the bridge. Naruto stopped his brutal assault on Kiba and turned to Itatchi. "So then Itatchi do you really want to mess around with me that much?" Naruto asked "You realize who that boy was, don't you?"
"Yes that was Tykiei Jin no use to me" Itatchi said emotionless "Your power is the only thing I am interested in"
"That boy was under my protection you ass!" Naruto shouted "I made a promise to his father that I would watch out for his family until they could take care of themselves and you desecrated that promise you bastard!"
FLASHBACK (10 years ago)
Tykiei Ken was lying in the middle of the field bleeding through his green flak jacket. A kunai was embedded in his chest. "Naruto…" Ken whispered "Promise…me, Promise me that you'll watch my family" ken began bleeding from the mouth.
"Shut up" Naruto said "you'll be fine Hinata will be here and she'll take care of you just quit talking."
"Naruto you need to accept death of your comrades" Ken said gasping as blood poured from his mouth. "Now shut up and listen. Take care of my family. Promise me Naruto"
"Ken you'll be-" Naruto began but Ken interrupted again.
"Promise me Damn it!" Ken sputtered.
"I promise" Naruto said as Ken's life began to drain away and all that was left of Tykiei Ken was a lifeless corpse. "I promise you Ken no one will ever harm your family it's my oath as Uzamaki Naruto!" END FLASHBACK
"I made that promise" Naruto said as a tear streamed down his cheek "And I will make you pay for your responsibility of Jin's death!" Naruto stopped talking and hit Itatchi hard in the cheek. Itatchi hit the ground and he rose smiling. Itatchi felt the bruise on his cheek and began to chuckle. "If you think that's funny you'll burst out in laughter after this one!"
Naruto launched a barrage of punches but Itatchi dodged every one. Then Itatchi began to make the seals on his hands very fast. Too many seals way too fast for Naruto to tell. Then he stopped on the Dragon. "Burakkumajikku Ryuujin (Note 3)" Were the only words that escaped Itatchi's mouth. A Fireball shaped like a dragon's head left and headed straight for Naruto. Naruto jumped over it and it hit Kiba who was standing behind him. The Fireball inserted itself into Kiba's chest without making any sort of explosion or fire. Itatchi began to chuckle again "When next we meet Naruto you and I will finish this" Itatchi said and left.
"Naruto…" Kiba whispered and Naruto kneeled next to his former comrade "I'm sorry for what I have done"
"You dumbass" Naruto whispered "why did you have to be so stupid you knew Itatchi would do something like this"
"If I could do it over" Kiba began "I would have stayed with my students…they're the only family I have left. Make sure they make it to the chuunin exam Naruto they're ready for it. Get them a teacher better than me"
"Kiba no one could have taught them any better than you" Naruto said "You taught them how to care about something else for once. Goodbye Kiba I will see one day on the other side"
Rama and Kai continued their assault on one another. Kai knew if he didn't do something quick he would be done for. Rama kicked Kai hard in the chest. Kai flew back several feet. Kai drew his palms together and they began to spark with energy. Bluish chakra began to spark around Kai's hands. He drew his palms back and extended them smashing his open palms hard into Toyo Rama's chest shouting "WASHI BATSU! (Note 4)" Rama fell down out like a light. Kai who had already run out of chakra began to walk very uneven and unsteady. Finally Kai collapsed on the bridge.
Anna was still searching for Jin's body. Where could it be? 'Wait is that it!' Anna thought seeing a large shape floating on the surface. Anna began swimming harder than ever trying to reach the body. She was fighting the waves, fatigue, and her own doubt to get there. It was almost as if she didn't want to make it. Like if she didn't see his corpse then he wasn't really dead. But unfortunately she knew better. She knew Jin was gone forever. She suddenly was hit by another huge wave knocking her to shore.
Miko and Shiro were still going at it. Shiro began beating the crap out of Miko with his hands charged with Miko's own chakra. Miko raised his kendo stick and Shiro hit it with his right hand. All of the chakra transferred back into the kendo stick. 'Aw crap this is not good' Shiro thought 'he's going to do that same move on me again.' Miko smiled smugly. Shiro jumped up into the air before Miko could hit him with the kendo. 'I only have one shot at this' Shiro thought 'and it has to be this move. For Jin!' he swung his right leg around aiming for the back of Miko's head "LEAF SPINNING WIND!" at the same time Miko aimed to hit Shiro in the chest. The kick hit Miko in the head rendering him unconscious but the kendo stick hit Shiro in the chest knocking him out as well. -End of chapter 17
It seems as if the showdown at the Bridge is over
Kuwabara: looks like it
There is still some unfinished business such as what will happen to the renegade nins
Kuwabara: that is a valid question
Is Jin still alive?
Kuwabara: maybe
Is Naruto going to make it back to the leaf in time with three injured students
Kuwabara: probably
Do you realize these questions are rhetorical you moron
Kuwabara: yeah but I want to annoy you!
Quickly last chance to vote on if Jin is alive or dead. I honestly don't care and I only got one other vote so its kind of annoying. I am worried that there is only two people reading this story so please review even if you have nothing to say a simple nice job or this is crap will do.
Notes:
1. KAIJU GUFUU No JUTSURock Tornado 2. RAIKOU TOUSHIN NO JUTSULIGHTNING SWORD BLADE 3. burakkumajikku ryuujin black magic dragon king 4. washi batsu Eagle Strike