Chapter 4 now on. I hope you all like it. I haven't done a disclaimer to
any of my stories so this one isn't different. Everyone knows I don't own
it. How could I? I am only in 8th grade.
Chapter 4: Athrun's shocking request
"Let's get this door open Mai we will worry about the ship thing later." Athrun said "Do you know the code." Mai asked "Knowing Creuset, yes." he answered
Enter code: the door opened
"What did you answer?" "Yamato, Kira's last name." "Well that was easy," Mai said "let's go Kira."
""Kira take the Strike, I will get the Aegis, and Mai get the Star." Athrun commanded "Wait my parents. I can't go I will stay here." Mai said "Are you sure?" Kira asked She nodded
"Launching!" they both said "Aagh, the shock!" Kira screamed "Kira I am coming." Athrun yelled Kira passed out.
On the Archangel
"Two mobile suits approaching. It's the Strike and Aegis."
"This is Athrun Zala please respond." "Yes what do you want?" Murrue asked "Please help Kira, something is wrong with him. Let us aboard, I don't want to cause any harm." Athrun said
"Let them aboard. Don't let your guard down at all. It could be a trap." Murrue said
Everyone went to the docking bay. "Come out Athrun Zala. We have the Aegis surrounded." Mwu la Flaga said Athrun came out. "Go help, Kira. He passed out in the Strike." he said
"What happened to him?" Natarle asked "Creuset put this electromagnetic shocker into his skin. It responds when he is off of a ZAFT ship." Athrun said "May I ask why?" Murrue said "Well he attacked Raww." He said
"What??!!" everyone said "Let me see Kira." Murrue said they brought him to her. "Here he is," Kuzzey said "should we wake him up." "No it will hurt less if he is asleep." "I need to know something?" Athrun said "What, Athrun?" Murrue asked "Why did you keep Mai's parents here?" he asked
"Well they were coordinators and they were exposed to top military secrets. Natarle was the one who mostly planned it. You see Mai's parents killed Natarle's, but it was an accident. Well anyway Kira should be fine now." she finished
"You are with ZAFT, right?" Mwu asked "Yes, well I was thinking could I join the Earth Forces?" Athrun asked
Suddenly Kira awoke. "Where am I?" he asked "You're on the Archangel." Murrue answered "Athrun you're here too." "How did I get here and where was I before?" he asked
"You don't remember anything do you?" Athrun asked "No." he replied
"You were on the ZAFT ship. Do you remember Mai?" he asked "Yeah we had to help her do something," Kira said "wait I was on a ZAFT ship."
"Well you attacked Raww le Creuset." "I did what." Kira said "We were all as shocked as you kid." Mwu said "Wait, where is Mai?" Kira asked "She stayed behind with her parents. Murrue may I join?" Athrun asked "Well how do we know it's not a trick." Murrue said "I wouldn't do something like that. I promise." Athrun responded "I-I guess. You will bunk with Kira tonight." Murrue said
"Captain!!" Natarle yelled "It is alright Natarle." Murrue said "Kira we will have to fight against her." Athrun said "Why?" he asked "Well he helped her, now she has to help him." Athrun responded "I'm going to kill him," Kira said "Lt. Flaga next time he comes out he is mine." "Sure kid, but are you up to it?" he asked
"You bet," Kira said "I will make sure he dies, but what about Mai?" "Kira the last time I talked to her, her dream was to go on the ZAFT ship." Murrue stated "So she wants to be there. Damn her!" Kira screamed
"Kira!!" Athrun yelled "What am I supposed to say. You saved her life once, but when I am out there I will show her no mercy." he said "Kira you have changed you weren't like this on Heliopolis." Athrun said
"Ever since I met Mai I felt like we had something, but now she has deceived me!!" Kira said "Kira you should go to your room and rest. Athrun can you watch him." Murrue said "Yes ma'am." Athrun said "We should get you out of that ZAFT uniform before people think you're a terrorist." Murrue finished
"I hope you get used to your new home." Kira said Athrun nodded.
Well that was chapter 4. If you liked it please review. Catch you later.
Chapter 4: Athrun's shocking request
"Let's get this door open Mai we will worry about the ship thing later." Athrun said "Do you know the code." Mai asked "Knowing Creuset, yes." he answered
Enter code: the door opened
"What did you answer?" "Yamato, Kira's last name." "Well that was easy," Mai said "let's go Kira."
""Kira take the Strike, I will get the Aegis, and Mai get the Star." Athrun commanded "Wait my parents. I can't go I will stay here." Mai said "Are you sure?" Kira asked She nodded
"Launching!" they both said "Aagh, the shock!" Kira screamed "Kira I am coming." Athrun yelled Kira passed out.
On the Archangel
"Two mobile suits approaching. It's the Strike and Aegis."
"This is Athrun Zala please respond." "Yes what do you want?" Murrue asked "Please help Kira, something is wrong with him. Let us aboard, I don't want to cause any harm." Athrun said
"Let them aboard. Don't let your guard down at all. It could be a trap." Murrue said
Everyone went to the docking bay. "Come out Athrun Zala. We have the Aegis surrounded." Mwu la Flaga said Athrun came out. "Go help, Kira. He passed out in the Strike." he said
"What happened to him?" Natarle asked "Creuset put this electromagnetic shocker into his skin. It responds when he is off of a ZAFT ship." Athrun said "May I ask why?" Murrue said "Well he attacked Raww." He said
"What??!!" everyone said "Let me see Kira." Murrue said they brought him to her. "Here he is," Kuzzey said "should we wake him up." "No it will hurt less if he is asleep." "I need to know something?" Athrun said "What, Athrun?" Murrue asked "Why did you keep Mai's parents here?" he asked
"Well they were coordinators and they were exposed to top military secrets. Natarle was the one who mostly planned it. You see Mai's parents killed Natarle's, but it was an accident. Well anyway Kira should be fine now." she finished
"You are with ZAFT, right?" Mwu asked "Yes, well I was thinking could I join the Earth Forces?" Athrun asked
Suddenly Kira awoke. "Where am I?" he asked "You're on the Archangel." Murrue answered "Athrun you're here too." "How did I get here and where was I before?" he asked
"You don't remember anything do you?" Athrun asked "No." he replied
"You were on the ZAFT ship. Do you remember Mai?" he asked "Yeah we had to help her do something," Kira said "wait I was on a ZAFT ship."
"Well you attacked Raww le Creuset." "I did what." Kira said "We were all as shocked as you kid." Mwu said "Wait, where is Mai?" Kira asked "She stayed behind with her parents. Murrue may I join?" Athrun asked "Well how do we know it's not a trick." Murrue said "I wouldn't do something like that. I promise." Athrun responded "I-I guess. You will bunk with Kira tonight." Murrue said
"Captain!!" Natarle yelled "It is alright Natarle." Murrue said "Kira we will have to fight against her." Athrun said "Why?" he asked "Well he helped her, now she has to help him." Athrun responded "I'm going to kill him," Kira said "Lt. Flaga next time he comes out he is mine." "Sure kid, but are you up to it?" he asked
"You bet," Kira said "I will make sure he dies, but what about Mai?" "Kira the last time I talked to her, her dream was to go on the ZAFT ship." Murrue stated "So she wants to be there. Damn her!" Kira screamed
"Kira!!" Athrun yelled "What am I supposed to say. You saved her life once, but when I am out there I will show her no mercy." he said "Kira you have changed you weren't like this on Heliopolis." Athrun said
"Ever since I met Mai I felt like we had something, but now she has deceived me!!" Kira said "Kira you should go to your room and rest. Athrun can you watch him." Murrue said "Yes ma'am." Athrun said "We should get you out of that ZAFT uniform before people think you're a terrorist." Murrue finished
"I hope you get used to your new home." Kira said Athrun nodded.
Well that was chapter 4. If you liked it please review. Catch you later.
